读后续写-失业后的温暖来自老教授的礼物讲义-湖北省武汉市常青联合体2023-2024学年高二上学期期中考试英语试卷_第1页
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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。OnaFridayeveninginDecember,twoweeksbeforeChristmas,Ilostmyjob.Ihadn’tseeniting.Iwasexcitedfortheweekend,whenmydaughter,Kristil,then13,andIplannedtogetourChristmastree.ThenIlistenedtomyvoicemail:“We’resorrybutyourworkassignmenthasendedasoftoday.”Myheartsank.Iwasn’tjustasingleparent;Iwastheonlyparent.Thenextdayaswesearchedforourtree,IstruggledtobecheerfulasIeyedeachpricetag.“IseverythingOK?”Kristilasked.“Youseemworried.”“Igotsomebadnewsyesterday,”Itoldher.“Ilostmyjob!”“Ohno,”Kristilsaid.“Well,Ihave$100fromGrandmaIcangiveyou.”“Absolutelynot,”Itoldher.Mondaymorning,IdroppedKristilatschoolandsetoffonmymoneymakingpursuits.Iheadedtothepawnshop(当铺)witharingsetin14karatgoldthatmymotherhadgivenmeadecadeearlier.“BestIcandois$70,”theownersaid.“Thestonesareworthless;we’reonlyinterestedinthegold.”Nextwastheantiquesstore.IsoldsixPreciousMomentsfigurinesfor$150andendedtheday$220richer.Overthenextweek,Ifuriouslyappliedforjobsasmybankaccountgrewsmaller.Ifeltasiftheworldwasclosinginonme.Onaweekendafternoon,IdroppedKristilinawealthygatedmunityforabirthdayparty.Iwatchedasshewentin,surroundedbyallthenicethingswecouldn’tafford.Idrovehomedefeated.Backathome,Iglancedoutofthewindow.Ithadbeensnowingonandoffallmorning.Inoticedaslimwomanwithshortwhitehairstrugglingtoopenhercardooragainstthewind.Asshegotout,IrealizeditwasmyoldprofessorSisterEstherHeffernan.Ihadn’tseenhersincewe’dmetforlunchthreemonthsago.注意:1.

续写词数应为150左右;2.

请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。I’dfirstmetSisterEsther10yearsearlierwhenIwasherstudentatEdgewoodCollege._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________SisterEsthersaid,“IhavegiftsforyouandKristil.”_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意在圣诞节前两周的周五晚上,“我”失业了。“我”是单亲家长,这一消息让“我”心情沉重。周六和13岁的女儿挑选圣诞树时,女儿察觉到“我”的异样,得知情况后想把奶奶给的100美元给“我”,“我”拒绝了。周一“我”当掉母亲给的金戒指、卖掉一些小摆件来维持生计,并在接下来的一周疯狂找工作。周末送女儿去参加派对后,回家时看到曾经的老教授在风中艰难地开车门。几处伏笔及在续写中的回应伏笔:生活的艰难与困境,老教授的出现。回应:老教授可能会给“我”帮助,缓解“我”的经济压力和心理负担。续写要点第一段(I’dfirstmetSisterEsther10yearsearlierwhenIwasherstudentatEdgewoodCollege.)情感线:回忆带来温暖,缓解当下的焦虑。故事线:讲述和老教授相识的经历,她曾对“我”很好,在学业和生活上帮助过“我”。续写示例:I’dfirstmetSisterEsther10yearsearlierwhenIwasherstudentatEdgewoodCollege.Shewasaninspiringteacherwhoalwaysencouragedustopursueourdreams.Shehadakindheartandoftenhelpedstudentsinneed.Irememberedhowshehadguidedmethroughdifficulttimesduringmycollegeyears.Thosememoriesmademefeelabitbetterinthistoughsituation.第二段(SisterEsthersaid,“IhavegiftsforyouandKristil.”)情感线:从惊讶到感动,感受到温暖与希望。故事线:老教授送礼物,礼物对“我”和女儿有帮助,让“我”重拾信心。续写示例:SisterEsthersaid,“IhavegiftsforyouandKristil.”Iwassurprised.Shehandedmeabox.InsideweresomewarmclothesforKristilandacheckformetocoverthebills.Tearswelledupinmyeyes.Herkindnesswaslikealightinthedarkness.Ifelthopeagainandwasdeeplytouchedbyhergenerosity.主旨升华句Inthedarkesttimes,akindactcanbeaguidingstarthatleadsusoutofdespair.(在最黑暗的时刻,一个善举可以成为引领我们走出绝望的指路明星。)Kindnessfromothersislikeawarmfireinthecoldwinteroflife'shardships.(他人的善意就像艰难生活寒冬中的一团温暖的火。)Sometimes,anunexpectedgiftcanrekindlethehopethatwethoughtwaslostforever.(有时,一份意想不到的礼物可以重新点燃我们以为永远失去的希望。)Theloveandcarefromotherscanmakeusbelieveinthegoodnessoftheworldduringtoughtimes.(在艰难时刻,来自他人的爱和关怀能让我们相信世界的美好。)Ahelpinghandindifficultdaysisareminderthattherearestillangelsaroundus.(在困难日子里的一次援手提醒着我们周围仍有天使。)写作示范第一篇第一段:I’dfirstmetSisterEsther10yearsearlierwhenIwasherstudentatEdgewoodCollege.Shewasmorethanjustateachertome.Shewaslikeamentorandafriend.Shealwayshadtimetolistentomyproblemsandofferedvaluableadvice.ShesawpotentialinmewhenIwasstrugglingwithmystudies.Herclasseswerefilledwithinspirationandherpresencealwaysmademefeelsafe.

第二段:SisterEsthersaid,“IhavegiftsforyouandKristil.”Shetookoutabigbagfromthecar.ThereweresomebooksforKristilwhichshehadcarefullyselectedaccordingtoherage.Forme,therewasaletterofremendationwhichshethoughtmighthelpmewithmyjobhunting.Iwasdeeplymoved.Thisunexpectedkindnessgavemestrengthtofacethedifficulties.第二篇第一段:I’dfirstmetSisterEsther10yearsearlierwhenIwasherstudentatEdgewoodCollege.Shetaughtliteratureandherpassionforbookswascontagious.Sheintroducedmetomanygreatworksthatbroadenedmyvision.Duringmycollegedays,shenoticedmyfinancialdifficultiesandoftengavemeextrastudymaterialsforfree.Shewasawarmheartedpersonwholeftadeepmarkonmylife.

第二段:SisterEsthersaid,“IhavegiftsforyouandKristil.”Shepulledouttwowrappedboxes.InoneboxwasabeautifulscarfforKristil.Intheotherwasajobofferletterfromapanysheknew.Theywerelookingforsomeonewithmyskills.Icouldn'tholdbackmytears.Herkindnesswasamiracleinthisdifficulttime.参考答案Paragraph1:Whentheballcametowardsme,Ifroze.

Myteammateswereverytiredandseemedworried.Theopponentsrushedtowardsme.Withoutthinkinganymore,Ifoundcourage,andIkickedtheballwithallmystrength.Theopponen

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