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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。TheebackLauriesatquietlyintheemptydressingroomattheiceskatingrink(溜冰场).Shehadnotbeenskatinginanypetitionsinceherleftkneewasbadlyinjuredinanaccidentsixmonthsago.Asshewaitedforherturntoskate,Lauriewasverynervous.Sheknewthattodaywasaveryimportantdayinhereback.“IfIcanwintoday,”shethought,“IcanskateintheWorldCupnextyearandthenmaybeIcanmakeittotheOlympics.”Lauriewastoldthatshehadatoughpetitionthisyear,andagirlfromConnecticutnamedJinnyJordanwhowasreallystrongineverything.“Sheistheoneyouhavetobeatthisyear,”thecoachsaid.Minuteslater,thedooropenedandLauriesawayoungwomanwhowasaboutherownage.Theyoungwomandumpedsomeofherbelongingsontoachair.Thebagfelltothefloorwithasound.LauriefeltunfortableasshelookedatJinny.“Sothisismypetitor,”thoughtLaurie,“Becauseofher,Imaylosetonight.”“Thiscostume(服装)wasmymom’sidea,”Jinnystartedtheconversation,lookingdownatherred,white,andblueskatingdress.“lookslikeaflag.”Lauriecouldn’tkeepfromsmiling.ShepointedtoJinny’sskatingbag.“Somethingfelloutofyourbag,”Lauriesaid.Jinnylookedattheclothingandequipmentthatlayscatteredonthefloor.Asshebegantogatherherbelongings,thedooropened.“Jinny,”calledsomeone,“You’dbettergivethetapeofyourmusictothesoundengineerrightaway.”“IthoughtIgavehimmymusictapeanhourago,”saidJinny,“Tellhimit’sthegreenboxwithmyinitialswritteninwhiteintherighthandcorner.”“Hesaidyounevergaveittohim.andhe’sgettingangry.”“ThenIdon’tknowwhatIdidwithit,”saidJinny,hurryingout.Laurieknewthatmusicwasnearlyasimportanttotheprogramasskatingitself.Ifshelosthermusictape,shemightaswellforgetaboutskating.Lauriestoodupandwalkedtothechairtodoafewmorekneebends.Paragraph1:Suddenlyshesawsomethingsmallanddarkgreenbehindthelegofthedressingtable._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Feelingrelaxed,Laurieskatedquicklytothecenteroftherinkaftertheannouncerfinallycalledhername.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意:Laurie因左膝受伤六个月未参赛,此次参赛对她的复出至关重要,她的强劲对手是JinnyJordan。在更衣室等待时,Jinny因音乐磁带的事情陷入慌乱,而Laurie发现了可能是Jinny丢失的磁带。五处伏笔及续写回应:伏笔:Laurie左膝受伤且此次比赛对复出意义重大。续写回应:在捡到Jinny的磁带后,她面临艰难抉择,最终归还磁带,这种善良之举为她赢得内心的平静与自信,使她能在比赛中克服受伤阴影,更好地发挥。伏笔:Jinny被教练告知是Laurie必须打败的强劲对手。续写回应:Laurie归还磁带展现出高尚品德,比赛结果不再是唯一关注点,两人在竞争中相互尊重与理解,改变了竞争的敌对氛围。伏笔:音乐对滑冰节目几乎和滑冰本身一样重要,Jinny丢失音乐磁带。续写回应:Laurie捡到磁带并归还,让Jinny能顺利参赛,避免因磁带丢失导致比赛失常,保证了比赛的公平性与完整性。伏笔:Laurie在更衣室看到Jinny时感到紧张不安,认为会因她而输掉比赛。续写回应:归还磁带后,Laurie心态放松,不再被紧张情绪束缚,能以更积极的心态投入比赛,实现自我超越。伏笔:Jinny匆忙出去处理音乐磁带的事情。续写回应:Laurie捡到磁带并归还,解决了Jinny的危机,使Jinny能够专注比赛,也为两人后续在比赛中的友好互动及共同成长奠定基础。续写要点:
第一段:描述Laurie发现磁带后的心理活动,如犹豫是否归还,想到比赛的重要性等。讲述Laurie最终决定归还磁带的行动以及Jinny的反应,如Jinny的感激与惊讶等。第二段:描写Laurie比赛时的状态,如自信、流畅等,可提及她受伤的膝盖并未影响发挥。说明比赛结果或比赛后的氛围,如两人的友好交流、相互认可等。情感线:
Laurie最初等待比赛时是紧张且担忧的,看到Jinny后因将其视为强劲对手而更感不安。捡到磁带后陷入纠结,归还磁带时变得坦然自信。比赛时充满放松与专注,比赛后则收获了喜悦、尊重与友谊,实现了从紧张不安到内心平静、从竞争敌对到友好相处的情感转变。故事线:
Suddenlyshesawsomethingsmallanddarkgreenbehindthelegofthedressingtable.Itwasthemusictape.Lauriepickeditupandhesitated.SheknewhowcrucialthistapewasforJinnyandforthepetition.ButshealsothoughtaboutherownebackandthechancetogototheOlympics.Afteramomentofstruggle,shedecidedtodotherightthing.SherushedoutandfoundJinny.“Hereisyourtape,”Lauriesaid.Jinnywasastonishedandgrateful.“Thankyousomuch.Youarereallykind.”Feelingrelaxed,Laurieskatedquicklytothecenteroftherinkaftertheannouncerfinallycalledhername.Shefeltconfidentandfocused.Despiteherinjuredknee,sheperformedsmoothly,showingallherskills.Theaudiencewasimpressedbyherperformance.Aftertheskate,JinnycametoLaurieandcongratulatedher.“Youwereamazing.I'mgladwecouldpetefairly.”Lauriesmiled.Theybothknewthatthispetitionwasnotjustaboutwinningorlosing,butalsoaboutsportsmanshipandfriendship.主旨升华句:“Truevictoryliesnotonlyinwinningthegame,butalsoinwinningtherespectandfriendshipofpetitors.”(真正的胜利不仅在于赢得比赛,还在于赢得对手的尊重与友谊。)“Inthearenaofpetition,kindnessandintegrityarethejewelsthatshinebrighterthananytrophy.”(在竞争的舞台上,善良与正直是比任何奖杯都更闪耀的宝石。)“Anobleactofsportsmanshipcantransformafiercerivalryintoabeautifulbondofmutualadmiration.”(一次高尚的体育精神之举能将激烈的竞争转化为相互钦佩的美好纽带。)“Whenwechoosekindnessoveradvantage,weopenthedoortoaworldofsharedsuccessandlastingmemories.”(当我们选择善良而非利益时,我们就打开了通往共享成功与持久回忆世界的大门。)“Themarkofatruechampionisnotjustintheirskill,butintheirabilitytoliftothersupevenintheheatofpetition.”(真正冠军的标志不仅在于他们的技能,还在于他们即使在激烈竞争中也能提升他人的能力。)写作示范一:Suddenlyshesawsomethingsmallanddarkgreenbehindthelegofthedressingtable.ItwasJinny'smusictape.Laurie'sheartskippedabeat.Sheknewthiscouldbeherchancetogainanedge.Butthen,sherememberedherownvaluesandthespiritoffairplay.Shequicklymadeuphermind.SherantofindJinnyandhandedherthetape.Jinny'seyeswidenedinsurpriseandrelief.“You'reagoodsport,”shesaid.Feelingrelaxed,Laurieskatedquicklytothecenteroftherinkaftertheannouncerfinallycalledhername.Shewasinazone,hermovementsgracefulandpowerful.Thekneeinjuryseemedtofadeawayasshepouredherheartintotheperformance.Thecrowdcheered.Aftertheskate,JinnyandLauriehugged.“Youdeservedthatgreatskate,”Jinnysaid.Laurierealizedthatthismomentofkindnesshadmadethepetitionmoremeaningfulandhadgivenheranewperspectiveonvictoryanddefeat.写作示范二:Suddenlyshesawsomethingsmallanddarkgreenbehindthelegofthedressingtable.LaurierecognizeditasJinny'stapeimmediately.Shehelditinherhand,tornbetweenselfinterestanddoingtherightthing.Finally,shechosethelatter.ShefoundJinnyandsaid,“Ifoundthis.Youneedit.”Jinnywasspeechlessforamomentandthensaid,“Thankyou.You'reanangel.”Feelingrelaxed,Laurieskatedquicklytothecenteroftherinkaftertheannouncerfinallycalledhername.Shefeltasenseoffreedomontheice.Herjumpswerehighandherspinswereprecise.Sheskatedasifshehadnothingtolose.Whenshefinished,therinkeruptedinapplause.Jinnyskatedoverandsaid,“Webothwontoday.Weshowedwhattruesportsmanshipis.”Laurienodded,knowingthatthisexperiencehadbeenavaluablelessonincharacterandpetition.Onepossibleversion
;Suddenlyshesawsomethingsmallanddarkgreenbehindthelegofthedressingtable.
ShepulleditoutandsawthewhiteInitialsJ.J,inthetoprighthander.“It’sJinny’smusictape!”Sheexclaimed.Laurie’sheartstartedbeatingfast.“AllI’dhavetodoisforgetthatIfoundthis,”shethought.“IfJinnyd
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