读后续写-峡谷绝境与忠诚相伴重获新生之悟讲义-江苏省如皋市2024-2025学年高二上学期教学质量调研(二)英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文Itwasacold,sunnyDecemberdaywhenIsetoutforaruninMoab,Utah,withmydogTaz.Ioftenwentfortrainingrunsbymyselfandhaddonethisparticularroutebefore.Aboutanhourintomyrunalongaremotecanyon(峡谷)trail,Ihitapatchofblackiceandthenfell60feetintothecanyon,landingonaledge(岩脊)aboveasheer(陡峭的)drop.Iwasn’tparalyzed,butIwasingreatpain.Tazhadmanagedtofindhiswaybacktome,sotheremustbeawayoutofthecanyon,butIcouldn’tstandorevencrawl.Ishoutedforhelpandwasintentondraggingmyselftothebottomofthecanyon.Everyinchwasaneffort.Ittookmefivehourstogoaquarterofamile.Eventually,itgotsodarkthatIhadtostaywhereIwasforthenight,nexttoapuddleofwater,Atnightthetemperaturedroppedbelowfreezing.Tazstayedwithme,providingsomewarmth.Thenextmorning,Icouldn’tmoveatall.triedtostaypositive.Iwassuresomebodywouldhearmescreamingforhelp.Thesecondnightinthecanyonseemedevenlongerandcolder.Thepuddleturnedtoice,andIhadtocrackthroughittogetwater.Onthethirdday,Ifeltmyselfgrowingweaker,IwasingtotermswiththefactthatImightdie.Inalastditcheffort,IcalledTazoverandtoldhimtogoandgethelp.TaztookoffthroughthecanyonandIlaytherethinkingaboutmyfamilyandfriends.Therewasmorethatwantedfromlife.注意:1.续写词数应为150个左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Tazreturned,alone.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Afterleavingthehospital,Iwasinawheelchairforthreemonths______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意：“我”在犹他州莫阿布的峡谷跑步时，因踩到黑冰坠入峡谷，落在岩脊上受伤无法行动。“我”试图自救但进展艰难，在峡谷度过寒冷的两晚后，让狗Taz去寻求帮助，此时“我”身体已极度虚弱并开始接受可能死亡的现实。伏笔与回应：伏笔：Taz之前能找到回“我”身边的路，暗示它可能有能力出去求救。回应：Taz确实独自离开去尝试寻找救援，但未成功带回救援人员。伏笔：“我”确定有人会听到求救声，与后文长时间无人救援形成对比，突出困境。回应：多日无人前来救援，“我”陷入绝望。伏笔：“我”在峡谷的艰难处境，如受伤无法行动、寒冷、缺水等，为后文身体极度虚弱及对死亡的恐惧做铺垫。回应：第三天“我”已非常虚弱并做好死亡准备。伏笔：让Taz去求救，为后文它回来以及最终救援到来埋下伏笔。回应：Taz回来虽未带回救援，但它的出现给了“我”希望，最终救援人员也因它而找到“我”。伏笔：提到“我”对家庭和朋友的思念以及对生活还有更多期待，为后文劫后余生的感悟做准备。回应：经历此事后“我”更加珍惜生命与身边人。续写要点：情感线：从Taz独自回来时的失望与绝望，到获救出院后的感恩与珍惜，情感经历巨大转变并得到升华。故事线：Taz独自返回，“我”陷入绝望；后来被救援人员救起送往医院，出院后经历三个月轮椅生活，在此期间对生命有了新感悟并感恩所有。主旨升华句：“Inthefaceofadversity,hopeisthelightthatneverextinguishes.”（在逆境面前，希望是永不熄灭的光。）“Eveninthedarkesthour,thebondwithaloyalfriendcanbeasourceofstrength.”（即使在最黑暗的时刻，与忠诚朋友的纽带也能成为力量的源泉。）“Survivinganeardeathexperiencemakesonecherisheverypreciousmomentoflife.”（经历濒死体验让人珍惜生命的每一个珍贵瞬间。）“Adversityrevealstheresiliencewithinusandthevalueoflife'sblessings.”（逆境揭示了我们内心的韧性以及生命恩赐的价值。）“Whenlifepushesustotheedge,itistheloveandhopethatpullusback.”（当生活把我们逼到绝境时，是爱与希望将我们拉回。）写作示范一：

Tazreturned,alone.MyheartsankasIrealizedhehadn'tfoundanyone.Ifeltawaveofdespairwashoverme.ButTazdidn'tgiveup.Hestayedbymyside,lickingmyfaceasiftoencourageme.Hourslater,Iheardfaintvoices.Tazstartedbarkingfrantically.RescuershadfollowedTaz'stracksandfinallyfoundme.

Afterleavingthehospital,Iwasinawheelchairforthreemonths.Duringthattime,Ireflectedonmyexperience.IwasgratefultobealiveandtohaveTaz.IrealizedhowpreciouslifeisandhowmuchIhadtakenforgranted.Imadeavowtocherisheverymomentwithmylovedonesandtonevergiveuphope,nomatterhowtoughthesituation.写作示范二：

Tazreturned,alone.Disappointmenthitmehard.Ithoughtthiswastheend.ButTaz'spresencestillgavemeaglimmerofhope.Hesnuggleduptome,andIheldontohimtightly.Then,miraculously,ahelicopterappearedinthesky.ItturnedoutthatTaz'sbarkinghadalertedsomehikersinthedistance,whocalledforhelp.

Afterleavingthehospital,Iwasinawheelchairforthreemonths.Iusedthistimetohealbothphysicallyandmentally.Ilearnedthateveninthemostdirecircumstances,thereisalwaysachance.Ibecamemoreappreciativeofthesimplethingsinlifeandtheloyaltyofmyfurryfriend.Thisexperiencetrulytaughtmethevalueofperseveranceandthebeautyoflife.参考答案Tazreturned,alone.Afterleavingthehospital,Iwasinawheelchairforthreemonths.Thephysicaltherapywastough,butIwasdrivenbythememoryofTaz’sunwaveringloyaltyandmyowndesiretolive.Mylegsslowlyregainedstrength,andIlearnedtowalkagain.Tazwasalwaysbymyside,cheeringmeonwithhiswaggingtailandlovingeyes.Ourbondhaddeepenedthroughadversity,andIowedmylifetohim.Fromthatdayon,Icherishedeverymoment,knowingthatlifewaspreciousandthatlovehadthepowertoconquereventhedarkestvalleys.Afterleavingthehospital,Iwasinawheelchairforthreemonths.Itwasalongandarduousrecovery,butitalsogavemeampletimetothink.Irealizedhowfragilelifeisandhowasinglemisstepcanchangeeverything.Iwasnolongertakingmydailylifeforgranted.Istartedtoreachoutmoretomyfamilyandfriends,expressingmyloveandgratitude.Ialsobec