2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习+高中生斯蒂芬妮的生死救援时刻+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习高中生斯蒂芬妮的生死救援时刻1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Stephanie,afreshmanatEastPeoriaHighSchool,hadjustfinishedherseconddayofclasses,filledwithexcitement.Eagertoenjoythewarmafternoon,shedecidedtotakeherbicycleoutforaride.Thewindrushedpasther,refreshingherspiritasshespeddownahill.However,inacrueltwistoffate,disasterstruck.Shesuddenlylostcontrolofherbike.Theworldaroundherseemedtoslowdownasshefeltthebikeslamintotheground.Inahorrifyingmoment,sherealizedthatoneofthebike’shandlegrips（车把）wasmissing,whichleftasharp,exposedmetalpipethatpiercedherrightleg,severedherartery（动脉）andfloodedherbodywithintensepain.4续写原文Panicsetinasshelayontheground,hermindracing.Aseveredarterycancauserapidbloodloss,leadingtounconsciousnessanddeathwithinminutes.Stephaniefeltherselfslippingaway,believingshewouldn’tsurvive.Butinthemidstofheranguish,helpwasontheway.Kupris,whohadbeenworkingonawoodworkingprojectnearby,heardthechaos,droppedhistoolsandrushedoutside.Hisheartracedashedashedalongablock,drivenbyadesperatedesiretoassist.Followingatrailofbloodthatpaintedadistinctcontrastagainstthepavement,hefeltasurgeoffearandconcern.Whenhefinallyreachedthescene,thesightthatcameintoviewwasterriblyhorrible.TherelayStephanieontheground,herfacepaleandherbodytwistedinpain,severelyinjured.5续写原文“Thewholethinglookedimpossible,couldn’tbereal,”Kuprisrecalledlater,stillshakingwithfright.Hesawaseverewoundonherupperleg.Bloodwaspouringoutofthecut.Hecalledherbuttherewasstillnoresponse.Panicsurgedthroughhimasherealizedheneededtoactquickly—everysecondcounted.6段首句Paragraph1：“WhatshouldIdo?”echoedinKupris’shead.Paragraph2：Luckily,Stephanieopenedhereyes.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9文章讲述了布东皮奥里亚高中新生斯蒂芬妮在骑车下坡时，因车把缺失致动脉被割破，大量失血倒地濒死。正在附近做木工活的库普里斯听到声响赶来，面对惨状，他强压内心恐慌，用所学急救知识用衬衫扎紧伤口上方止血，并拨打911。幸运的是，斯蒂芬妮苏醒过来，库普里斯安慰她直到救护车到来。最终，斯蒂芬妮被送往医院，库普里斯因其英勇行为成为社区英雄，得到斯蒂芬妮家人的感谢。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1：“WhatshouldIdo?”echoedinKupris’shead.“我该怎么办？”在库普里斯脑海中回响。他努力让自己镇定下来，回忆起曾学过的急救知识。他迅速脱下自己的衬衫，紧紧地扎在斯蒂芬妮腿上伤口的上方，试图减缓出血速度。接着，他掏出手机，手指颤抖着拨打911，大声向接线员说明情况和所在位置，声音因紧张而有些沙哑。在等待救护车的过程中，他不停地和昏迷的斯蒂芬妮说话，尽管内心充满恐惧，但仍努力让自己的声音保持镇定，希望能给予她一些精神上的支撑。11续写思路分析Para2：Luckily,Stephanieopenedhereyes.幸运的是，斯蒂芬妮睁开了眼睛。她眼神迷茫，脸上满是痛苦的神情。库普里斯见状，心中既欣喜又担忧，他轻声安慰斯蒂芬妮，告诉她救援马上就到，让她不要害怕。这时，远处传来救护车的鸣笛声，库普里斯急忙起身挥手示意。当医护人员将斯蒂芬妮抬上担架时，他才松了一口气，瘫坐在地上，回想起刚才惊心动魄的一幕，心中五味杂陈。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现“WhatshouldIdo?”echoedinKupris’shead.Withgreateffort,hemanagedtocalmhimselfdown,recallingthefirstaidknowledgehehadacquiredbefore.Swiftly,heremovedhisshirtandtightlybounditabovethewoundonStephanie’sleg,attemptingtoslowdownthebleeding.Then,takingouthisphone,hedialed911withtremblingfingers,shoutingthesituationandlocationtotheoperator,hisvoicehoarseduetonervousness.Whilewaitingfortheambulance,hekepttalkingtotheunconsciousStephanie,strivingtomaintainacalmtonedespitehisinnerfear,hopingtoofferhersomespiritualsupport.14范文呈现Luckily,Stephanieopenedhereyes.Shelookeddisorientedandwasingreatpain.Uponseeingthis,Kuprisfeltamixtureofjoyandworry.Hesoftlycomfortedher,assuringherthathelpwasonthewayandthatsheshouldnotbeafraid.Atthatmoment,thesirenoftheambulancewasheardinthedistance.Kuprisquicklystoodupandwavedtosignalitsarrival.WhentheparamedicscarriedStephanieontothestretcher,hefinallyletoutasighofreliefandslumpedtotheground,hismindfilledwithmixedemotionsasherecalledthethrillingscenejustnow.15升级版范文呈现Inthefaceofsuchadiresituation,“WhatshouldIdo?”incessantlyreverberatedwithinKupris’smind.Witheveryounceofhiswillpower,hemanagedtosteadyhisnervesandsummonedthefirstaidknowledgethathadbeentuckedawayinhismemory.Withoutamoment’shesitation,heyankedoffhisshirtanddeftlytieditjustabovetheghastlywoundonStephanie’sleg,thecrimsonbloodseeminglydefyinghiseffortstostemitsflow.Meanwhile,histremblinghandsfumbledforhisphoneandhedialed911,shoutingthedetailsoftheemergencyandtheirpreciselocation,hisvoicecrackingunderthestrainofanxiety.Asheawaitedtheambulance,hemurmuredwordsofcomforttotheunconsciousStephanie,hisvoicequiveringbutresolute,asifbysheerforceofwillhecouldkeephertetheredtolife.16升级版范文呈现Fortunately,Stephanie’seyelidsflutteredopen.Hergazewasunfocusedandherfacecontortedinagony.Kupris,hisheartleapingwithaglimmerofhope,yetstillweigheddownbyconcern,murmuredsoothingwordstoher,assuringherthatrescuewasimminentandthatshewasnotalone.Justthen,theshrillsirenoftheapproachingambulancepiercedtheair.Kuprissprangtohisfeetandfranticallywavedtoguideitin.AstheparamedicscarefullyloadedStephanieontothestretcher,hesankto