续写积累1归还手机讲义-高三上学期英语二轮复习专项

续写积累：单词、词组、句型、实战（归还）DAY1情感细节描写：紧张、焦虑单词： panicn．/v.恐慌；uneasen．不安；tenseadj.紧张的→tensionn．紧张；压力；nervousadj.紧张的→nervousnessn．紧张；scarevt.使恐惧；使害怕→scaredadj.害怕的→scaryadj.恐怖的；吓人的；terrifyvt.使恐惧；恐吓→terrifyingadj.极其可怕的；骇人听闻的→terrifiedadj.非常害怕的；极度惊恐的词组：beonpinsandneedles如坐针毡；(have)butterfliesinone’sstomach忐忑不安；likeantsonahotpan像热锅上的蚂蚁；beseized/overewithpanic/fear惊慌失措；one’sheartinone’smouth心提到嗓子眼；one’sheartraces/beats/poundswildly/violentlywithfear吓得心怦怦跳；pacerestlesslyupanddown不安地踱来踱去；handsshake手发抖；palmssweat手心出汗；feelone’sthroattightandone’smouthdry感到喉咙发紧，嘴发干句型： Allstudentswerewaitingfortheirfirstexaminationresultsanxiously，beingonpinsandneedles.(比喻句)所有学生都焦急地等待着他们第一次考试的结果，如坐针毡。Whenhethoughtthathewouldbefacedwithpletelynewsurroundings，afloodoffearwelledupinhim.(无灵主语句)想到他将面临全新的环境，一阵恐惧涌上了他的心头。Ifeltsoscared/nervousthatmythroattightenedandmykneesweak.我感到很害怕/紧张，嗓子发紧，膝盖发软。4.Iknowhedidn’tbelieveme，andeverytimehelookedmyway，myheartstartedpoundingwildly.我知道他不相信我，每次他朝我看的时候，我的心就开始狂跳。Herstomachwasgrippedwithanxiety，likeavolcanoeruptinginsideher.(比喻句)她的胃因为焦虑而痉挛，就像一座火山在她体内喷发一样。6.Hisheartbeat/raced/poundedwildlyandhislegstrembled.他的心狂跳着，双腿发抖。相关续写实战：Oneafternoonafterschool,Maryandherbrother.Keith,wereeatingatacafeneartheirhome.Thatafternoon,theyhadtosharetheirtablewithanotherperson.Thatpersonwasayoungladyinhertwenties.Aftereating,shewenttotherestroom.Withoutrealizing,shehadleftherhandphoneonthetable.Fiveminuteslater,shecameoutandwalkedoutofthecafewithoutlookingback.Marysawthehandphoneonthetable.ShequicklytoldKeith,"Keith,thegirlleftherhandphonebehind."Keithlookedatthehandphone.Ittookhisbreathaway.Itwasoneofthelatestmodelsonthemarket.Keithhadalwayswantedahandphone.Buthisparentshadtoldhim,"Youdon'tneedone.Youcanalwaysusethehousephone."Hestaredatitforsomeminutes.Thenhesaidslowly,pausingoneveryword,"Iwanttotakethehandphone."Marycouldnotbelieveherears.Shemerelystaredatherbrother."Youcan't!Whatiftheownerestolookforit?"Havingmadethedecision,Keithquicklygrabbedthehandphoneandputitinhisschoolbag.Then，hetookMary'shandandledheroutofthecafequickly.Oncebackhome,Keithlockedhishousedoorwithtremblinghands.Insidehisroom,hetookoutthebeauty.Oh,helikeditsomuch.Nowhehadhisownhandphone.Soon,hewaspolishingithappily.ButMarytoldhim,"Keith,youcannotkeepthehandphone.WhatwillyoutellFatheraboutthis?Hewillaskyouhowyougotthehandphone."Keithsaidquickly,"Iwillsayafriendlentittome."Marysaid,"Nowyouarelyingtoo."Ohdear!WhenhadKeithturnedsodishonest?ThenMarysawahousephonenumberontheplasticcoverofthehandphone."Thisisthegirl'sphonenumber.Whydon'twejustcallthisnumber?Wewilltalktoherandaskhertoeandtakebackherhandphone."Shewastryingtotalksomesenseintohim.Thatnight,Keithturnedoverinbedfromtimetotime.____________Marywasveryhappytohearthat._____________________________【文本解析】Mary和她的弟弟Keith在餐馆就餐时,看到了一个被忘在餐桌上的,此时机主已经离开。Keith一直想要一部,便不听Mary的劝说。将带回了家,并准备撒谎说是朋友借给他的。Mary看到了机主的联系,想说服Keith和机主联系......【写作指导】续写思路:根据续写第一段的首句"ThatnightKeithturnedoverinbedfromtimetotime"可确定第一段的写作思路弟弟Keith为何难以入睡?他想到了什么?对拿走机主的事,是否感到愧疚?最后他是否做出了归还的决定?根据续写第二段的首句"Marywasveryhappytohearthat"可确定第二段的写作思路姐姐Mary为何高兴?他们联系上机主了吗?机主有何反应?他们是怎样归还的?通过这件事,他们有何感受?其实，这就是Keith思想斗争的过程，就是青少年自我成长的过程。【下水作文】Thatnight,Keithturnedoverinbedfromtimetotime.Helaywakefully,andhisstomachwasemptybuthismindwasfull.Keithwascrazyaboutthelatesthandphoneallthetime,evenindreams.Heturnedonthelightandrosefromthebed,sittingfrozen.Afterawhile,givingaheavysigh,hiseyesfellonatreasuredphoto,onwhichheandMaryallworebright,innocentsmiles.Suddenly,whatMayhadsaidsprangintohismind.Determinedtogivebackthehandphone,hefeltrelaxedandtriedtotellMaryinthefollowingdaymorning.Marywasveryhappytohearthat.Andimmediatelytheytogethermadeacalltotheowner.Soontheyoungladycametovisittheirhousewithabunchofflowers.Sheexpressedhergreatgratitudefromthebottomofherheart.Col