专题08 书面表达热点话题10篇-2023年中考英语逆袭冲刺名校模拟真题特快专递（云南专用）

2023中考英语逆袭冲刺名校模拟真题特快专递（云南专用）第二期专题08书面表达热点话题10篇一、话题作文1．（2023·云南昆明·昆明市第三中学校考二模）ThePersonWhoHelpsMeGrowup提示：茫茫人海中，总有一些或熟悉或陌生的身影出现在你成长的时光故事里，为你指点迷津，助你健康成长。请以“ThePersonWhoHelpsMeGrowup”为题，用英语写一篇短文，记叙一位帮助你成长的人的故事，并谈谈你的感受。要求：1.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；2.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；3.书面表达必须写在答题卡上，如在本卷上作答，一律不得分。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：ThePersonWhoHelpsMeGrowup

Duringthepastthreeyears,whenIgotintotrouble,manypeoplewouldliketogavemeahand.Lindaisoneofthem.Letmetellyousomethingabouther.

WhenIalmostwantedtogiveuplearningEnglish,ImetLinda,agirlfrommystudygroup.Shetoldmethateveryonemeetstroubles,butweshouldnevergiveupeasily.Instead,weshouldfindoutasuitablewayandthenworkhard.Withherhelp,Iadjustedmyattitudeandwordedharderthanbefore.Finally,ImadegreatprogressinEnglish.Now,IamanEnglishloverandIwon’tgiveupanythingeasily.

IamthankfultohaveafriendlikeLinda.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇话题作文，围绕“帮助自己成长的人”展开；②时态：一般过去时为主；③提示：本文写作要点已经给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，并适当补充发挥，注意语句的通顺，使用正确的词汇和句型，使得行文连贯有逻辑。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图，介绍背景，以“让我告诉你一些关于她的事情”引出下文；第二步，介绍发生的故事，注意时态应以过去时为主，突出对自己的帮助和自己的成长；第三步，结尾总结，表达自己的感受。[亮点词汇]①getintotrouble陷入困境②givesbahand帮助某人③giveup放弃④withone’shelp在某人的帮助下[高分句型]①Duringthepastthreeyears,whenIgotintotrouble,manypeoplewouldliketogavemeahand.（when引导的时间状语从句）②Shetoldmethateveryonemeetstroubles,butweshouldnevergiveupeasily.（宾语从句）2．（2023·云南昆明·统考二模）在三年的初中生活中，一定有那么一个人或一件事，就像一缕阳光，照进你的心灵，照亮你的前路。请以“SunshineinMyLife”为题，用英语写一篇短文，叙述给你带来温暖或希望的一件事或一个人。要求：1.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；2.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；3.请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。SunshineinMyLife______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：SunshineinMyLife

Duringthepastthreeyears,Imetsomanywarm-heartedpeople.TheygavemeahandwhenIgotintotrouble,especiallymygoodfriendLinda.Letmetellyousomethingabouther.

BecauseofmypoorEnglish,Lindabecamemypartnerinourstudygroup.Everydayafterschool,shewouldstaywithmetohelpmepracticeEnglish.IfIhavesomequestions,shewouldlendmehernotebookandexplainpatiently.Littlebylittle,ImadeprogressinEnglish.NowIamconfidentinlearningEnglish.

Iamhappytohaveafriendlikeher.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇话题作文，围绕“生活中的阳光”来展开，介绍温暖自己的人或事情；②时态：一般过去时；③提示，要点提示已经给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，并适当补充发挥，注意语句的通顺，使用正确的词汇和句型，使得行文连贯有逻辑。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图，介绍背景，以“让我告诉你一些关于她的事情”引出下文；第二步，具体阐述所发生的事情，注意时态应以过去时为主，且注意与主题相关；第三步，结尾总结，表明自己的感受。[亮点词汇]①warm-hearted热心肠的②becauseof由于③littlebylittle逐渐地④makeprogress取得进步[高分句型]①BecauseofmypoorEnglish,Lindabecamemypartnerinourstudygroup.（短语becauseof做原因状语）②IfIhavesomequestions,shewouldlendmehernotebookandexplainpatiently.（if引导的条件状语从句）3．（2023·云南·模拟预测）MakeaChange提示：世界是美好的，但很多时候总有些事情不如人意。如果你想改变世界，就先改变自己。请以“MakeaChange”为题写一篇英语短文，叙述你做出的一次改变以及你的感悟。要求：1.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；2.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；3.请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MakeaChangeItisimportantforustomakeachangewhenthingsdon’tfitus,sothatwecangetbetterandbetter.IstillrememberedwhathadhappenedonthedayofanEnglishspeechcontest.Beforegettingonthestage,everyonewassonervousthattheykeptmumblingtheirspeechestogetthemselveswell-prepared.ButIfeltveryconfidentsinceIhadwonmanyawardsinsuchcontestsbefore.Ididn’tdoanythingandjustwaitedonmyseat.However,whenitwasmyturntogivethespeech,mymindsuddenlywentblankandItotallyforgotwhatIwasgoingtosay.Theterribleexperiencemademerealizesomething.Fromthatdayon,Imadeachange.IknowundernocircumstancesshouldIbeoverconfident.Practicemakesperfectandbeinghumbleandhungryisalwaysthebestpolicy.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；

②时态：叙事部分时态为“一般过去时”；感悟部分时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点给出了两个，叙述经历以及谈谈感悟，注意叙事部分是写作重心，且要突出变化。

[写作步骤]第一步，引出“变化”这个主题；第二步，描写自己的经历，突出前后的变化；第三步，文章结尾，谈谈自己做出变化的感悟。

[亮点词汇]①getoneselfwell-prepared让自己做好充分准备

②goblank变得空白③fromthatdayon从那天起

[高分句型]①However,whenitwasmyturntogivethespeech,mymindsuddenlywentblankandItotallyforgotwhatIwasgoingtosay.（when引导的时间状语从句及what引导的宾语从句）

②IknowundernocircumstancesshouldIbeoverconfident.（部分倒装句型）③Practicemakesperfectandbeinghumbleandhungryisalwaysthebestpolicy.（运用了谚语“熟能生巧”）4．（2023·云南·模拟预测）Happinessfrom_______提示：幸福源于什么？是老师的教诲、父母的关爱、朋友的关心、自我的突破……不同的人会有不同的感受。请以“Happinessfrom________”为题，用英语写一篇短文，叙述在你生活或学习中，给予过你幸福的人或你经历过的一件令你感到幸福快乐的事。要求：1.请先将题目补全后，再作答；2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；4.请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文HappinessFromHardWorkOurlifeisfullofhappiness.Myhappinesscomesfromhardwork.IcangethappinesseverytimeIworkhard.Lastterm,IwaschosentotakepartintheEnglishSpeechContest.IwasnervouswhenIheardthenews,becauseIwasalwaysafraidofspeakinginpublic.IwonderedifIcouldsucceedandIwantedtogiveup.MyEnglishteachernoticedthat.Shehadalongtalkwithmeandencouragedmetochallengemyself.AfterthatIkeptpracticingeveryday.WhenIgotthefirstprizeinthecontest,Ifelthappyfrommydeepheart.Myhappinessisfromthesuccessthroughmyhardwork.TheharderIwork,themorehappinessIget.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍自己的快乐来自努力学习；第二步，分享自己的经历；第三步，表达感悟。[亮点词汇]①fullof充满②takepartin参加③giveup放弃[高分句型]①IwasnervouswhenIheardthenews,becauseIwasalwaysafraidofspeakinginpublic.（when引导时间状语从句；because引导原因状语从句）②IwonderedifIcouldsucceedandIwantedtogiveup.（if引导宾语从句）5．（2023·云南昆明·统考二模）AWalkwith________提示：生活中，总有人与你结伴而行，给予你关心、勇气……谁曾与你同行？在同行路上发生了什么？请以“AWalkwith________”为题，用英语写一篇短文，分享你的同行经历并谈谈你对这段经历的感受。要求：1.请先将题目补全后，再作答；

2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；

3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；

4.书面表达必须写在答题卡上，如在本卷上作答，一律不得分。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文AWalkwithmyfriendIhaveafriendcalledSamwhomIwalkwithontheroadofgrowth.Wehavebeenfriendsfortwoyears.Afterschool,wealwaystalkaboutthingsthatwearebothinterestedin.Lookingback,Iwasneverboredonthewayhomeafterschoolsincewesharedmanyinterests.Wereachedanagreementtogoforarunintheparkeveryweekend.Byrunning,wegotrelaxed.Sometimes,wespentawholedayreadinginthelibrary.Afterthat,wetalkedaboutwhatweread.Welearnedalotfromeachother.Thetimethatwespenttogetherhaslitupmymiddlelife.I’msohappytohavesuchagoodfriend.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示中的问题：谁曾与你同行？同行路上发生了什么？适当添加细节，并且突出写作要点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图。直接提出与我同行的人是谁；第二步，具体阐述写作内容。主要介绍了同行的经历以及感受；第三步，书写结语。表达我对朋友的感谢。[亮点词汇]①talkabout谈论②beinterestedinsth.对……感兴趣③reachanagreement达成一致④goforarun跑步⑤learn…from…从……学习[高分句型]Thetimethatwespenttogetherhaslitupmymiddlelife.（“that”引导的定语从句）6．（2023·云南曲靖·统考二模）_________MakesMeHappy提示：在你的学习生活中，一定做过很多让自己感到幸福快乐的事，如帮助别人、读书、志愿服务等。请以“___________MakesMeHappy”为题，用英语写一篇短文，讲述你做某件事的经历和感受。要求：1.补全题目，用英语写一篇不少于60词的短文：2.语言流畅，内容连贯，书写规范，卷面整洁：3.文中不能使用你的真实姓名和校名，否则以零分计：4.短文必须写在答题卡上，如在试题卷上作答，一律不得分。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文HelpingOthersMakesMeHappyHelpingothersmakesmehappy.Ienjoyit.Iwenttotheoldpeople’shomewithmyclassmateslastmonth.Wecleanedtheirroomsandreadthemthenewspaper.Wecalledthemgrandpaorgrandma.Someofmyclassmatestalkedwiththemandaskedthemtotellustheirstories.Theirstorieswereveryinteresting.Seeingtheirsmilingfaces,Ifelthappyandproud.Ithinkhelpingothersisagreatthing.Itmakesmeahappypersonanditmakestheworldabetterplace.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，可适当发挥。[写作步骤]第一步，补全题目；第二步，具体阐述你做某件事的经历；第三步，最后表达自己的感受。[亮点词汇]①readsbsth给某人读某事②talkwithsb和某人交谈③asksbtodosth让某人做某事[高分句型]①Seeingtheirsmilingfaces,Ifelthappyandproud.（现在分词作状语）②Ithinkhelpingothersisagreatthing.（省略that的宾语从句）7．（2023·云南·统考三模）提示：在你的生活中，能教你知识的不仅仅是你的父母或老师，身边的朋友、丰富的阅历、有趣的旅行等都可以教会你新的东西。请以“________islikeateacher”为题，写一篇英语短文，谈谈你生活中像老师一样的人或经历。要求：1.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；2.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；3.请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】范例：LifeislikeateacherLifeislikeateacher.Itcangivememorethanknowledge.LetmesharealessonI’velearnedinlifewithyou.Thatwasasunnyday.MyfriendJackandIwenttothenearbyparktoflyakite.Werantogetherwhenthewindstartedtoblow.Buttooursurprise,thekitedidn’tflyashighaswethought.Itkeptfallingdowntothegroundagainandagain.Iwasupsetandwantedtogiveup.Jack,ontheotherhand,thoughtforawhileanddiscussedwithme,thenwetriedagain.Thistime,IranasfastasIcouldinthefront.Jackfollowedmyleadintheback,sendingthekitehigher.Becauseofourefforts,thekitefinallysoaredhighinthesky!Weweresohappyandproudofourselves.ThisisthelessonIhavelearnedfromlife—makingmistakesisOK.Whatmattersmostistothinkandactaftermistakes.Onlythencanyoulearnandmakeprogress.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”，叙述经历时使用过去时；③提示：本文是话题作文，考生应把题目补充完整，以话题为中心，发挥想象，添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，总写。直接叙述生活就像一位老师。它能给你知识。和大家分享你的经历；第二步，具体阐述你的经历；第三步，书写感悟，结束全文。你从经历中获得的启发，犯错误是可以的，最重要的是在错误之后思考和行动。只有这样，你才能学习并取得进步。[亮点词汇]①sharesth.withsb.和某人分享某事②tooursurprise令我们惊讶的是③notas…as…不像……④keepfallingdowntotheground一直摔倒在地⑤becauseof因为，由于⑥(be)proudof为……感到骄傲⑦makeprogress取得进步[高分句型]①LetmesharealessonI’velearnedinlifewithyou.（省略引导词的定语从句）②Werantogetherwhenthewindstartedtoblow.（when引导时间状语从句）③Whatmattersmostistothinkandactaftermistakes.（what引导主语从句）⑤Onlythencanyoulearnandmakeprogress.（倒装句）8．（2023·云南红河·统考一模）IWillRemember________在我们成长的过程中，总会有让我们难以忘怀的人。请以“IWillRemember________”为题，用英语写一篇短文，介绍一位你难以忘怀的人，说说你和他（她）之间发生的事，并且谈谈你的感受。要求:1.将所给题目补充完整，并写一篇短文，词数不少于60个；2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；3.书面表达必须写在答题卡上，如在本卷上作答，一律不得分。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文:IWillRememberMyEnglishTeacherMyEnglishteacherMr.Greenislikemyhero.HenotonlyteachesmeEnglish,butalsocaresformeallthetime.HeisthepersonIwillrememberforever.Istillrememberitwasarainyday.IfoundIdidn’ttakeanumbrellaafterschool.IstoodinfrontoftheschoolgateandthoughtIwouldbeallwetwhenIgothome.Suddenly,Isawafamiliarfigurecomingtowardsme.ItwasMr.Green.Hesawmeandhegavemealiftalthoughhewasbusyandhelivedfarawayfrommyhome.Howkindandwarmheis!IloveMr.GreenandIhopetobethepersonthatheisproudof.AlthoughIwillgraduatesoon,hewillalwaysbeinmyheart.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇话题作文，围绕“会记得某人”来展开，介绍自己难忘的人；②时态：一般过去时；③提示：要点提示已经给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，并适当补充发挥，注意先把题目补充完整，交代人物，注意写作中语句的通顺，使用正确的词汇和句型，使得行文连贯有逻辑。[写作步骤]第一步，补充完整题目，表明自己会记得的人是谁，从而引出下文；第二步，简要介绍人物身份，然后介绍发生的事情，注意时态应以过去式为主，注意语法的正确，突出其为何难忘，可从对自己的影响等角度出发；第三步，结尾总结，强调对人物的难忘，以及自己会积极向上的态度。[亮点词汇]①notonly...butalso不仅……而且②infrontof在……前面③afamiliarfigure一个熟悉的身影④farawayfrom远离[高分句型]①AlthoughIwillgraduatesoon,hewillalwaysbeinmyheart.（although引导的让步状语从句）②HenotonlyteachesmeEnglish,butalsocaresformeallthetime.（并列短语notonly...butalso连接的并列谓语）9．（2023·云南昆明·统考一模）My________Trip提示：读万卷书，行万里路。旅途中，我们经历难忘的事，遇见可爱的人，感受醉人的景....请以“My________Trip”为题，用英语写一篇短文，叙述一次你出游的经历，并谈谈你的感受。要求：1.请先将题目补全后，再作答；2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；4.请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MyUnforgettableTripIhavetravelledalotandIhavemanytravelexperiences.Letmetellyouoneofthemostunforgettableexperiences.Lastsummervacation,IwenttoQingdaobytrain.Theweatherwasfine.Itwasalwayssunny.Ienjoyedthefreshairthere.First,Iwenttotheseaside.Theseawasasblueasthesky.Itwasreallyanenjoyablethingtotakeabathinthesunshineonthebeach.ThenIalsopickedupalotofcolorfulshells.AfterthatItastedthelocalfamousfood.Iatemanythingsthere,suchasfishandprawns.Whatdeliciousfoodtheyare!

Travellingislikeapoem.Weuseourfootprintstofillineverywordandeverysentence.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意在写作时注意时态的使用。介绍自己的经历时要用一般过去时。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图，引出要重点介绍的内容；第二步，具体阐述写作内容。介绍自己的一次旅行经历，可以从时间、交通方式、旅途风景等方面描述；第三步，书写结语。表达此次旅行的收获。[亮点词汇]①mostunforgettableexperiences最难忘的经历②asblueasthesky和天空一样蓝③pickup捡起[高分句型]Whatdeliciousfoodtheyare!（感叹句）10．（2023·云南昆明·统考一模）学校英语专栏正在以“AJoyfrom________”为主题征稿，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，叙述一次让你收获到快乐的经历。要求：1.请先将题目补