专题07 书面表达12篇-2023年中考英语逆袭冲刺名校模拟真题特快专递（深圳专用）-2

2023深圳市中考英语逆袭冲刺名校模拟真题速递第二期专题07书面表达12篇一、书信作文1．（2022·广东深圳·深圳市罗湖中学校考三模）假定你是李华，你在深圳市博物馆网站上看到古代艺术馆面向13~16岁的中学生招募英语解说员，你想成为其中一员。请根据以下内容提示，给该馆负责人张馆长写一封申请信。要点：1.写信意图2.自身优势：①热爱文博事业、热心公益事业②英语好、沟通能力强③……3.希望被录用参考词汇：解说员：commentator文博事业：museumandarchaeologicalissue公益事业：publicwelfareissues要求：1.词数80左右（开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数）；2.要点齐全，可适当发挥；3.条理清晰，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范；4.文中不能出现真实姓名、校名。DearMr.Zhang,I’mLiHua,afifteen-year-oldmiddleschoolstudent.I’mdelightedtoknowfromthewebsitethattheAncientArtGalleryofShenzhenMuseumisrecruitingEnglishcommentators.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply!Yours,LiHua【答案】例文DearMr.Zhang,I’mLiHua,afifteen-year-oldmiddleschoolstudent.I’mdelightedtoknowfromthewebsitethattheAncientArtGalleryofShenzhenMuseumisrecruitingEnglishcommentators.Iaminterestedinthepositionandwillingtoapplyforit.I’mconvincedthatI’mqualifiedfortheposition.Firstandforemost,Iamnotonlykeenonmuseumandarchaeologicalissuesbutalsodevotedtopublicwelfareissues.What’smore,beingfluentinspokenEnglish,IamabletoinstructvisitorsinEnglishwithoutdifficulty.Besides,Iamgoodatcommunicatingwithothers,whichcanbeagreathelpforthevoluntarywork.Lastbutnotleast,IhaveanexperienceinvolunteeringasanEnglishcommentatorinagallery,soIamwell-preparedforthejob.Iwouldappreciateitverymuchifyoucouldtakemyapplicationintoconsideration.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply!Yours,LiHua【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求写一封申请信，说明自己想成为艺术馆的英语解说员；要求包含所有内容提示。2.写作指导：此作文时态用一般现在时；采用第一人称口吻；可采用4段落格式，第一段：说明写信的目的；第二段：阐述自身优势来说明能胜任这份工作；第三段希望自己能够被录用；第四段希望收到回信。2．（2022秋·广东深圳·九年级统考一模）你是英语校报编辑李华。校报收到初一新生Ben的来信，他提出了所面临的两个问题。请你根据以下提示写一封回信，说明Ben的问题，提出你的建议并陈述理由。要点：Ben’sproblemsYouradviceandreasons朋友少，感觉孤单1.参加学校社团(club)——结识更多朋友2.(请你补充)英语单词难记1.多阅读英语故事、新闻，在运用中学单词2.(请你补充)要求：1.80词以上，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数；2.条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确；3.文中不得使用真实的校名与姓名。DearBen,Iamsorrytohearthatyouarehavingtroublegettingusedtolifeinmiddleschool._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文DearBen,Iamsorrytohearthatyouarehavingtroublegettingusedtolifeinmiddleschool.Inyourletteryousaidthatyoualwaysfeltlonelybecauseofhavingfewfriends.Ithinkitisagoodchoicetojoinsomeclubsinyourschool.Inthisway,youcanmakemorefriendswhosharethesameinterestwithyou.Besides,you’dbetterbefriendlytoothers.Smileatothersandyouaresuretogetasmileinreturn.Ontheotherhand,youfounditdifficulttorememberEnglishwords.ReadingmoreEnglishstoriesandnewscanhelpyoulearnEnglishwordsinapracticalway.Inaddition,ifyoucandevelopahabitofkeepinganEnglishdiaryeveryday,itwillbeeasierforyoutoremembermorewords.Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionsuseful.YoursLiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信写作；②时态：时态为一般现在时；③提示：写作时需要针对来信中的两个问题分别给出建议，围绕提示展开，并适当发挥。[写作步骤]第一步，说明回信目的；第二步，具体给出每个问题的建议；第三步，书写结语，表达关心。[亮点词汇]①hadbetter最好②ontheotherhand另一方面③inaddition除此之外[高分句型]①Ithinkitisagoodchoicetojoinsomeclubsinyourschool.（宾语从句）②Inaddition,ifyoucandevelopahabitofkeepinganEnglishdiaryeveryday,itwillbeeasierforyoutoremembermorewords.（条件状语从句）3．（2022秋·广东深圳·九年级统考一模）假如你是某报社的心理辅导老师MissPearl，你刚收到读者Eric的来信。信中说，自上了初三，学习任务很繁重。在学校，一天的绝大多数时间是待在教室学习。放学回到家，父母不让看电视、上网，要求在家学习、做作业。因此，这样的生活让他很苦恼，特写信向你求助。针对Eric的来信，请根据下面的提示和要求，用英语给Eric回信。内容提示：1.上课认真听讲，提高学习效率(learningefficiency)；多向班上的优生请教；2.保证每天必要的放松，如听音乐、跑步等；3.多与父母沟通。要求：1.语言通顺，观点明确，书写工整；2.80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；3.文中不能出现真实的姓名和校名，可适当发挥。DearEric,IrightawayrealizedthatyouneededhelpwhenIreadyourletter.NowIwouldliketosharesomethingaboutyourproblems.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：DearEric,IrightawayrealizedthatyouneededhelpwhenIreadyourletter.NowIwouldliketosharesomethingaboutyourproblems.Duringthelastschoolyearofyourjuniorhighschool,studieshavebeensoheavythatyoucanhardlybreathe.Therefore,reducingstressseemsmoreimportant.Meanwhile,youshouldstudyhard.First,youshouldimprovelearningefficiency.Thatistosay,youmustlistencarefullyinclass.Whenyoufaceproblems,youcanasktheexcellentstudentsforhelp.Inaddition,relaxingyourselfisalsoimportant.Youcanlistentomusicorplaysports.Mostimportantly,youmustcommunicatemorewithyourparents.Inmyopinion,communicationisausefulwaytosolveproblems.Yours,MissPearl【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意结合提示要点进行写作，针对Eric的问题，用英语给Eric回信。可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图。首先介绍一下Eric遇到的问题来引出重点介绍的内容；第二步，具体阐述写作内容。具体介绍Eric在初三遇到的问题以及解决措施；第三步，书写结语。表达“沟通是解决问题的有效方法。”的观点。[亮点词汇]①wouldliketodosth.想要做某事②therefore因此③inaddition此外④asksb.forhelp向某人寻求帮助[高分句型]①Studieshavebeensoheavythatyoucanhardlybreathe.（so…that…引导结果状语从句）②Therefore,reducingstressseemsmoreimportant.（动名词作主语）4．（2022·深圳·统考模拟预测）假定你是李华，端午将至，你想邀请你校外教Mark周六观看龙舟比赛，但Mark不在办公室，请你给他写张留言条。内容包括：1.你到Mark办公室的目的；2.介绍端午节（纪念屈原、吃粽子）及赛龙舟；3.确定出发时间和见面地点。写作要求：1.80词以上，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内；2.条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确；3.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。参考词汇：龙舟比赛dragonboatraceDearMark,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________BestwishesLihua【答案】参考范文：DearMark,Istoppedbyyourofficethisafternoon,butyouweren’tthere.IwasgoingtoaskyouifyouwanttoenjoyadragonboatracewithmesincetheDragonBoatFestivaliscoming.AsatraditionalChinesefestival,theDragonBoatFestivaliscelebratedinmemoryofthedeathofaChinesepoet,QuYuan.Duringthisfestivalpeoplearefondofeatingzongzi,adumplingmadeofricecoveredwithbambooleaves.Inaddition,Chinesepeopleoftenorganizedragonboatraces,whichissaidtoprotectQuYuan’sbody.Theracesareundoubtedlyfantastictowatch.Youcan’tmissit.Iwanttomakesurewhetheryouwanttocheckitoutwithmethisyear.Wecanmeetattheschoolgateat2p.m.onSaturday.Ilookforwardtoyourreply.BestwishesLihua【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。在写作时应承接短文开头。根据内容提示，写一篇英文短文。2.写作指导：本文应以第一人称和第三人称为主；时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时为主。注意按照内容提示的三个方面进行写作。可采用分段的形式，使文章结构清晰。最后保证语言通顺，行文连贯；注意语法正确，无标点和大小写错误。5．（2022·广东深圳·深圳市南山外国语学校校考一模）假定你是李华，上个月你参加了学校举办的郊游活动。请给你的英国朋友Jim写一封电子邮件，介绍有关情况。内容包括：1.活动组织（参加人员、时间、地点）；2.活动过程；3.你的感受。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearJim,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】例文：DearJim,I’mwritingtotellyousomethingaboutmyexperiencelastmonth.Lastweekend,IwentforanoutingattheNorthHillParkalongwithMr.Liandmyclassmates.Wemetattheschoolgateat8:00a.m.andstartedoutat8:30a.m.Wewenttherebybus.Ittookusaboutthirtyminutestogetthere.Thehillwasverybeautifulwithmanyflowers,treesandweed.Thesunwasbrightandtheairwasfresh.Wehadapicnic.Weatemuchfood,suchasmeat,chickenandvegetables.Weplayedgamesafterthepicnic.Wewerealltiredbuthappy.Yours,LiHua【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于书信写作。在写作时应根据题目要求讲述参加学校举办的郊游活动过程，以及自己的感受。2.写作指导：本文时态以一般过去时为主，人称以第一人称为主，讲述郊游活动的过程要叙述完整，条理清晰。二、材料作文6．（2022秋·广东深圳·九年级统考一模）国家将劳动教育纳入中小学国家课程，更加重视青少年的自我管理能力的培养。青少年在成长中应不断提高自我管理能力，以便在生活和学习等方面更好地管理自己。请根据以下提示，以“LearningtoManageOurOwnLives”为题，用英语写一篇短文。【写作要点】列举在生活中自我管理能力薄弱的现象1.学习方面：不会合理安排时间，经常很晚才做完作业；2.生活方面：……（至少补充一点）提出合理化建议1.制定计划，并严格执行；2.……（至少补充一点）号召大家在学习生活中提高自我管理能力【写作要求】1.80—100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；3.可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯；4.标点正确，书面整洁。LearningtoManageOurOwnLivesThesedays,weChineseteenagersoftendependonourparentsinourdailylives.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文LearningtoManageOurOwnLivesThesedays,weChineseteenagersoftendependonourparentsinourdailylives.Inmydailylife,Ihaveapoorsenseoftime,andsometimesIamlazy.Ican’tarrangemytimeproperly.Ioftenfinishmyhomeworklate.Ican’tcookbymyself.Ifmyparentsarenotathome,Icanonlybuyfood.Ican’twashdirtyclothes.SonomatterwhatIdointhefuture,Iwillmakeaplanandcompleteitinstrictaccordancewiththeplan.Atthesametime,taketheinitiativetohelpothersdosomething.Let’simproveourself-managementabilityinlifetogether!Inshort,theearlierwemanageourownlives,thebetteritisforourfuture.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇说明文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”为主；③提示：写作要点已给出，根据要点提示，以“LearningtoManageOurOwnLives”为题，用英语写一篇短文。[写作步骤]第一步，列举在生活中自我管理能力薄弱的现象；第二步，根据自身问题提出合理化建议；第三步，号召大家在学习生活中提高自我管理能力。[亮点词汇]①dependon依靠②bymyself独立完成③Atthesametime同时[高分句型]①Ifmyparentsarenotathome,Icanonlybuyfood.（if引导条件状语从句）②Inshort,theearlierwemanageourownlives,thebetteritisforourfuture.（the+比较级，the+比较级）7．（2022·广东深圳·深圳市龙岗区平湖中学校考三模）初中生活即将过去，回顾初中三年的学校生活，你是否感到满意呢？请根据下面的提示，写一篇英语短文，总结你这三年的学校生活。满意的方面认真努力，养成了良好的习惯；加入了篮球俱乐部，比赛并获奖；……不满意的方面忙于学习，很少跟父母沟通；参加志愿者活动较少；……要求：1.词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；2.要点齐全，可适当发挥；3.不得出现真实姓名和校名；4.条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。Howtimeflies!I’llgraduatefromtheschoolsoon.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Howtimeflies!I’llgraduatefromtheschoolsoon.Thinkbacktothethreeyears,I’velearnedalot.IhavebeenstudyinghardandhavedevelopedgoodstudyhabitssinceIenteredthemiddleschool.Asaresult,Ialwaysgetgoodmarksinmyexams.Ijoinedinthebasketballclub,tookpartinseveralcompetitionsandwonsomeprizes.AndIamalwaysreadytohelpmyclassmateswhentheyareintrouble.What’smore,Iamagoodlistenerwhenmyclassmatestellmetheirunhappyfeelings.SoIhavesomefriends,wehelpeachotherwithstudyandlife.However,Iambusywithmyschoolwork,soIcommunicatelesswithmyparents.Iseldomtookpartinsocialpublicactivitiesbecausetherewasalwaystoomuchhomeworktodo.ButthissummerIamgoingtotakepartinsomesocialpublicactivities.Forexample,I’llvolunteertojoininaclean-upcampaign.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。在写作时应紧接开头继续写作，根据题目要求讲述三年学校生活满意的方面和不满意的方面。2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主，人称以第一人称为主，讲述三年学校生活的满意和不满意的方面，要叙述完整，条理清晰。8．（2022·深圳·统考模拟预测）教育部发布“力争全面实现美育中考”的新闻后，引起很多老师、学生以及家长的关注。上周你班同学就“音乐、美术是否应该纳入初中毕业生学业考试”展开了相关讨论，同学们各抒己见。请你根据下面表格内容，用英语写一篇短文，汇报讨论结果，并谈谈自己的想法。MorechancestostudymusicandartImproveourskillsMoresubjectstoprepareforFeeltoomuchpressureYouropinion(请至少给出两条理由）注意：1.短文内容必须包含表格所提供的要点，可适当发挥；2.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名及地名；3.词数80左右（短文开头已给出，仅供选择使用，不计入总词数）。Lastweek,wediscussedwhetherthehighschoolentranceexamination(中考)shouldincludemusicandart.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】参考范文：Lastweek,wediscussedwhetherthehighschoolentranceexaminationshouldincludemusicandart.Studentshavedifferentopinionsaboutit.Somestudentsthinkitoffersusmorechancestostudymusicandart.Therefore,wewillpaymoreattentiontothem.Meanwhile,itcanimproveourskillsinthearts.However,somestudentsdisagree.Ifmusicandartareintheexam,therewillbemoresubjectstopreparefor,anditrequiresmoretimeandenergy.Sostudentswillhavetoomuchpressure.Inmyview,musicandartshouldbepartofthehighschoolentranceexamination.Asweallknow,artandmusicplayanimportantroleinourlives,whichcanhelpusdevelopourinterestandmakeourlifemorecolorful.Themostimportantthingisthatmusicandartcanhelpusrelax.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于材料作文写作，要求按照所给的要点提示写一篇短文，介绍同学就“音乐、美术是否应该纳入初中毕业生学业考试”展开的相关讨论。注意写作时要点要齐全，同时也可进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥。2.写作指导：本文应该用第一、三人称来叙述；时态采用一般现在时；文章开头已给出，写作时，注意承接上文，根据要点提示具体介绍同学就“音乐、美术是否应该纳入初中毕业生学业考试”进行讨论的结果并谈谈自己的想法；文中一定要包含题干中列出的所有要点；可以运用一些短语和常用句型为文章增添色彩；注意单词书写的准确度，语法运用的准确度，上下文注意连接的流畅度，以及逻辑合理。9．（2023·广东深圳·统考二模）舞狮是中国优秀的传统民间艺术。请你为班级英语角的“人物”版块写一篇短文，介绍一位舞狮（LionDance）技艺传承人——叶天。短文内容包含以下要点：1.叶天的基本信息（男，45岁，佛山人）和学习舞狮的经历（4岁学习舞狮，22岁获得全国舞狮比赛一等奖）；2.他是如何传承舞狮的（到国外表演、教年轻人舞狮，……）；3.你对叶天和舞狮的看法。要求：1.80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数内；2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；3.可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯；4.标点正确，书面整洁。提示词：传承keep...aliveYeTianisamasterofLionDance._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：YeTianisamasterofLionDance.Heis45yearsoldandheisfromFoshan,Guangdong.Whenhewas4,hestartedtolearnLionDance.Heisveryinterestedinitandpracticeshard.Attheageof22,hewonthefirstprizeintheNationalLionDanceCompetition.TohelpkeeptheLionDancealive,heandthedancersgoabroadandperformLionDanceeveryyear.Besides,heteachestheyounginFoshanhowtoperformit.HealsoshootsthevideosofLionDanceanduploadsthemtothewebsitesothatmorepeoplecanknowaboutit.LionDanceisoneofthetraditionalChinesefolkartsthatbringspeoplehappinessduringfestivals.IreallyadmireYeTian.Inmyview,weshouldlearnmoreaboutLionDancefromYeTianandpassitdown.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于材料作文。以班级英语角的“人物”版块写一篇短文，介绍舞狮（LionDance）技艺传承人——叶天。2.写作指导：本文应该用第三人称来叙述故事内容；时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主。文章可以分成三个段落，第一段介绍叶天的基本信息和学习舞狮的经历；第二段描述他如何传承舞狮的；最后一段谈谈叶天和舞狮的看法。10．（2022·广东深圳·校考二模）如今越来越多汽车进入我们的家庭，改善了我们的生活，但同时也带来了很多问题，如塞车和车祸，给家庭和社会带来了极大的危害。多地交通部门提出了“道路千万条，安全第一条”的口号。作为中学生，我们应该怎样做呢?假如你是学生会的干部，请根据以下提示，对学校同学写一篇有关交通安全的倡议书。要点如下：1.外出时要遵守交通规则，比如步行要走人行道，不横穿马路；2.骑自行车时，不能和朋友聊天；3.劝父母不能酒后驾车，也不能开车时使用手机；4.你的其他建议。参考词汇：sidewalk人行道

jaywalk横穿马路注意：1.短文应包括所有要点，可以适当发挥，使文章连贯；2.词数80左右（倡议书的开头已给出，不计入总词数）Dearschoolmates,Withmoreandmorecarscomingintoourfamilies,wearehappythatithasgreatlyimprovedourlives.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Dearschoolmates,Withmoreandmorecarscomingintoourfamilies,wearehappythatithasgreatlyimprovedourlives.Butunluckily,ithasalsobroughtmanyproblems,suchasheavytrafficandtrafficaccidents.Asteenagers,weshouldalwayskeepsafetyinmind.Herearesomeofmysuggestions.Firstofall,weshouldpayattentiontothetrafficruleswhenwegoout.Weshouldwalkonthesidewalk.Whenwecrosszebra-crossing,stopandlookrightandleft,thengoacrosstheroadfast.Don’truntheredlight.Secondly,ifwerideabikewithafriend,it’sdangeroustotalkandrideatthesametime.Moreover,weshouldtellourparentsnottodrinkbeforetheydrive.Anditisnotallowedtouseamobilephonewhiledriving.Lastbutnotleast,wemustalwayswearsafetybeltswhensittinginacar.Withoutbelts,boththedriversandthepassengersmaybebadlyhurtinasuddenaccident.Rememberthatroutesarecountless,safetyisforemost.Wemustobeythetrafficrules.TheStudents’Union【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。围绕“交通安全”写一份倡议书。2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称以第一人称为主。分为三段式：第一段引出主题；第二段介绍都要遵守哪些交通规则；最后一段总结概括。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。11．（2022·广东深圳·校考二模）班级将要举行“读书分享会”，请在读书分享会上介绍你读过的最喜欢的一本书“HarryPotter”，内容要包括以下要点：

1）情节摘要：主要讲述了主人公HarryPotter和他的几位朋友一起历经魔法世界的种种考验，坚持与邪恶做斗争，最终成长为一名优秀的年轻巫师的种种冒险故事。2）你对这本书的评价。3）你推荐这本书的原因：（可从情节、人物、语言、学到了什么几方面谈原因）参考词：evil;wizard;bewellwritten;plot;classicAReviewofJ.K.Rowling’sHarryPotterHello,everyone.MyfavouritebookisJ.K.Rowling’sHarryPotter______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Helloeveryone.MyfavouritebookisJ.K.Rowling’sHarryPotter.ItmainlytalksabouttheadventurousstoriesofHarryPotterandhisfriends.Heexperiencesallkindsofchallengesinthemagicalworld.TheykeepfightingagainsttheevilandeventuallyHarrybecomesanexcellentyoungwizard.Thisbookiswellwrittenandinteresting,soI’mcrazyaboutit.Firstly,theplotofthebookissoattractiveandexcitingthatIcan’twaittoturnthenextpageonceIstartreading.