2025届中考英语复习写作培优册（外研版广西专用）01-一、遣词造句技巧讲练

高分作文标准

了解高分作文标准是写出优秀作文的基础，以下是高分作文的标准：1.写作内容：要点全，能根据要点适当发挥。2.语言表达：句式丰富且灵活，错误极少；语言流畅，表意清楚、连贯。3.逻辑结构：三段式，首尾点题，事例典型；能运用恰当的衔接词来表示顺序和逻辑关系。4.卷面要求：书写工整，卷面整洁。写作步骤

考生可遵循以下步骤写出高分作文：【遣词造句技巧讲练见P2；改错润色技巧讲练见P8】第一部分

书面表达提分讲练一、遣词造句技巧讲练编者按：在进行书面表达试题的解答过程中，考生应当遵循以下原则：1.确保准确性：对于那些对高级词汇或复杂句式运用不够熟练的考生，建议优先使用自己熟悉的词汇和句型，避免因过分追求难度而牺牲了表达的准确性。2.适度提升语言水平：在确保表达无误的基础上，考生可以适当地融入一些高级词汇和高级句型。技巧1

巧用高级表达

在确保正确的前提下,使用高级词汇,可以提升作文档次,以下为初中阶段普通词汇与高级词汇转换表。动词（词组）

普通词汇高级词汇help帮助give…a

hand帮助hope希望expect希望look

forward

to

sth./doing

sth.期待某物/做某事普通词汇高级词汇influence影响make

a

（big）

difference

to对……有（很大）影响know知道understand理解

realize

意识到like喜欢be

interested

in…/have

a

stronginterest

in…

对……（非常）感兴趣fall

in

love

with爱上……续表普通词汇高级词汇meet遇见come

across遇见remember记得keep…in

mind记得/记住……solve处理deal

with处理use使用make

good/full

use

of…/put…to

good

use充分使用……visit参观pay

a

visit

to参观续表普通词汇高级词汇should应该be

supposed

to应该decide

to

do

sth.

决定做某事make

a

decision

to

do

sth.决定做某事make

up

one’s

mind

to

do

sth.下定决心做某事try

to

do

sth.尽力做某事make

every

effort

to

do

sth./spare

no

effort

to

do

sth.不遗余力做某事续表普通词汇高级词汇want

to

do

sth.想要做某事feel

like

doing

sth./would

like

to

do

sth.

想要做某事be

about和……有关be

related

to/have

something

to

do

with和……有关续表形容词

普通词汇高级词汇good/great好的wonderful极佳的

excellent

优秀的bad糟糕的terrible/awful糟糕的rich富有的wealthy富有的important重要的be

of

importance重要的普通词汇高级词汇useful有用的be

of

use有用的many许多（修饰可数名词复数）quite

a

few/plenty

of/a

large

number

of许多much许多（修饰不可数名词）quite

a

little/a

great

deal

of许多续表副词/介词（短语）普通词汇高级词汇firstly

第一，首先first

of

all/to

begin

with/to

start

with

首先secondly

第二，其次besides/what’s

more/in

addition

而且；此外lastly

最后last

but

not

least

最后但同样重要的是not

不……not…at

all

一点都不……普通词汇高级词汇now

现在nowadays

现如今at

present

目前sometimes

有时from

time

to

time/once

in

a

while

有时so

因此therefore

因此

as

a

result

结果续表普通词汇高级词汇suddenly

突然all

of

a

sudden

突然very非常pretty/quite/rather/especially/more

than

非常in

my

opinion

依我看as

for

me/from

my

point

of

view/for

my

part/as

far

as

I’m

concerned

在我看来续表技巧训练1.Lucy

liked

painting

when

she

was

only

five

years

old.（用have

a

strong

interest

in升格句子）_______________________________________________________________________Lucy

had

a

strong

interest

in

painting

when

she

was

only

five

years

old.2.I

have

decided

to

lose

weight

and

keep

healthy.（用make

up

one’s

mind

to

do

sth.升格句子）________________________________________________________I

have

made

up

my

mind

to

lose

weight

and

keep

healthy.3.The

local

clubs

are

trying

to

attract

more

young

people.（用make

every

effort

to

do

sth.升格句子）______________________________________________________________________The

local

clubs

are

making

every

effort

to

attract

more

young

people.4.The

speeches

made

by

Peter

always

attract

many

people.（用a

large

number

of改写句子）___________________________________________________________________The

speeches

made

by

Peter

always

attract

a

large

number

of

people.5.Henry

keeps

exercising

every

morning.

So

he

looks

healthier

and

healthier.（用as

a

result升格句子）_______________________________________________________________________________Henry

keeps

exercising

every

morning.

As

a

result，he

looks

healthier

and

healthier.技巧2

巧用关联词汇

灵活运用关联词汇可以使文章条理清楚、连贯通顺。写作中常用的关联词汇有：1.表示顺序：first（ly）;

second（ly）;

third（ly）;

to

begin

with;

to

start

with;

at

first;

at

last;

in

the

end;

next;

then;

after

that;

finally…2.表示并列：either…or;

neither…nor;

both…and;

not

only…but

also;

as

well

as;

together

with…3.表示递进：besides;

what’s

more;

what’s

worse;

in

addition…4.表示转折：but;

however;

after

all;

unluckily…5.表示对比：while;

on

the

one

hand…，on

the

other

hand;

For

one

thing，…

For

another，…6.表示让步：though;

although;

even

if/though…7.表示总结：in

a

word;

in

short;

all

in

all;

generally

speaking…技巧训练1.Jim

can

play

basketball

well.

He

can

also

play

the

violin

well.（用not

only…but

also…

升格句子）____________________________________________________________________Jim

can

not

only

play

basketball

well

but

also

play

the

violin

well.2.Bicycling

makes

us

healthy.

And

it

doesn’t

pollute

the

air.（用what’s

more升格句子）________________________________________________________________Bicycling

makes

us

healthy.

What’s

more，it

doesn’t

pollute

the

air.3.It

was

raining

hard

outside.

The

young

man

went

to

work

as

usual.（用although升格句子）__________________________________________________________________________Although

it

was

raining

hard

outside，the

young

man

went

to

work

as

usual.4.We

must

study

hard.

We

should

learn

to

relax

ourselves.（用on

the

one

hand，on

the

other

hand升格句子）__________________________________________________________________________________________On

the

one

hand，we

must

study

hard;

on

the

other

hand，we

should

learn

to

relax

ourselves.5.Lucy

kept

on

reading

books.

She

was

busy

in

the

past.（用even

if连接句子）______________________________________________________________Lucy

kept

on

reading

books

even

if

she

was

busy

in

the

past.技巧3

巧用比较等级

在写作中恰当运用形容词和副词的比较等级，可以使文章表达更多样化。除了形容词和副词比较等级的基本用法，以下常用句型也可以为作文增分添彩：比较等级常见句型例句原级比较as+形容词/副词原级+as…

表示“和……一样……”I

am

as

tall

as

my

best

friend

Liz.比较等级常见句型例句比较级the+比较级...，the+比较级...，表示“越……，就越……”The

harder

you

work，the

luckier

you

will

be.比较级+and+比较级/more

and

more+多音节形容词/副词，表示“越来越……”Our

motherland

is

getting

stronger

and

stronger.续表比较等级常见句型例句最高级A+be动词+one

of

the+形容词最高级+可数名词复数，表示“A是最……之一”Mo

Yan

is

one

of

the

greatest

writers

in

the

world.A+be动词+the+序数词+形容词最高级+名词+范围，表示“A是……中第……最……的……”The

Yellow

River

is

the

second

longest

river

in

China.续表技巧训练1.Mike

is

strong.

John

is

strong，too.（用“as+形容词/副词原级+as”升格句子）__________________________Mike

is

as

strong

as

John.2.If

you

exercise

more，you

will

have

fewer

health

problems.（用“the+比较级，the+比较级”升格句子）______________________________________________________________The

more

you

exercise，the

fewer

health

problems

youwill

have.3.The

park

is

getting

beautiful.（用“比较级+and+比较级”升格句子）____________________________________________The

park

is

getting

more

and

more

beautiful.4.The

Three

Gorges

Dam

is

a

famous

wonder

in

China.（用“one

of

the+形容词最高级+可数名词复数”升格句子）__________________________________________________________________The

Three

Gorges

Dam

is

one

of

the

most

famous

wonders

in

China.技巧4

巧用复合句状语从句

在复合句中，用作状语的从句叫状语从句。学生可用适当的连词将两个简单句连接起来，构成一个状语从句。如：

My

brother

is

only

eleven

years

old.

He

can

already

share

housework

on

weekends.→Though

/Although

my

brother

is

only

eleven

years

old，he

can

already

share

housework

on

weekends.

（虽然）我弟弟只有11岁，但他已经能在周末分担家务了。考生在使用状语从句时应注意：1.

根据句意使用正确的引导词（组）；2.

在含有时间状语从句和条件状语从句的复合句中，若主句为一般将来时，从句用一般现在时表将来；①引导时间状语从句的词（组）：when，as，while，after，before，until/till，as

soon

as，whenever等。②引导条件状语从句的词（组）：if，unless，as

long

as，once等。3.

若主句是祈使句或主句中含情态动词，从句用一般现在时表将来。【状语从句具体讲解见课堂精讲册P157】宾语从句

在复合句中，若由一个句子充当宾语，这个句子叫作宾语从句，宾语从句必须是陈述语序，即“连接词+主语+谓语+其他成分”。常见的连接词有从属连词that，whether，if；连接代词what，who，whom，whose，which等；连接副词when，where，how，why等。如：I

believe

that

you

can

achieve

your

dream

by

working

hard.

我相信你可以通过努力实现你的梦想。考生在使用宾语从句时应注意：1.

分析语境及从句的句子成分，使用合适的引导词；2.宾语从句应使用陈述句语序；3.

使用正确的时态。【宾语从句具体讲解见课堂精讲册P155】定语从句

在复合句中，修饰某一名词或代词的从句叫作定语从句。定语从句通常置于它所修饰的名词或代词之后，被定语从句修饰的词叫先行词。两个句子由关系词连接起来，常见引导定语从句的关系词有：1.若先行词为人，且定语从句缺主语或宾语：定语从句由who，whom，that引导，如：My

sister

is

the

girl

who/that

is

standing

under

the

tree.

我姐姐就是站在树下的那个女孩。（先行词是the

girl，指人，定语从句缺少主语，用who/that引导）2.若先行词为物，且定语从句缺主语或宾语：定语从句由that，which引导。如：I

saw

a

tree

that/which

has

many

beautiful

flowers

in

that

village.

我在那个村子里看到了一棵开满漂亮花朵的树。（先行词是a

tree,指物，定语从句缺少主语，用that/which引导）考生在使用定语从句时应注意:1.分析先行词及从句成分，使用正确的关系词；2.

若关系词在定语从句中作主语，需结合先行词判断定语从句谓语动词的单复数；3.

使用正确的时态。【定语从句具体讲解见课堂精讲册P159】技巧训练1.The

girl

was

sad.

She

couldn’t

say

a

word.（用so...that...升格句子）________________________________________________The

girl

was

so

sad

that

she

couldn’t

say

a

word.2.I’ll

visit

my

grandparents.

The

summer

holiday

begins

this

year.（用as

soon

as升格句子）_________________________________________________________________________I’ll

visit

my

grandparents

as

soon

as

the

summer

holiday

begins

this

year.3.Everyone

in

our

team

trains

hard.

We

can

win

the

basketball

match.（用in

order

that升格句子）______________________________________________________________________________Everyone

in

our

team

trains

hard

in

order

that

we

can

win

the

basketball

match.4.How

do

you

learn

English?

I

want

to

know

your

ways

of

learning

it.（用how引导的宾语从句升格句子）______________________________________I

want

to

know

how

you

learn

English.5.Miss

Li

is

my

teacher.

She

has

helped

me

a

lot

during

the

past

three

years.（用who引导的定语从句升格句子）_________________________________________________________________________Miss

Li

is

the

teacher

who

has

helped

me

a

lot

during

the

past

three

years.6.I

like

this

book.

It

was

written

by

Cao

Wenxuan.（用which引导的定语从句升格句子）__________________________________________________I

like

the

book

which

was

written

by

Cao

Wenxuan.7.我希望我的建议可以帮助你与父母保持良好的关系。（汉译英）__________________________________________________________________________________________________I

hope

（that）

my

suggestions/advice

can

help

you

（to）

have

a

good

relationship

with

your

parents.8.他撒谎的原因是他害怕受到惩罚。（汉译英）________________________________________________________________________The

reason

why

he

told

a

lie

was

that

he

was

afraid

of

being

punished.技巧5

增加句式多样性

特殊句式或特殊结构可以丰富文章的句式结构，恰当使用特殊句式可以为书面表达加分。以下为常用的特殊句式/结构：感叹句结构例句What+形容词+不可数名词（+主语+谓语/系动词）What

sweet

water

it

is！结构例句What+a/an+形容词+可数名词单数（+主语+谓语/系动词）What

a

kind

girl

she

is！What+形容词+可数名词复数（+主语+谓语/系动词）What

kind

girls

they

are！How+形容词/副词（+主语+谓语/系动词）How

beautifully

she

dances！How+主语+谓语How

time

flies！续表倒装句

倒装句可以起到强调作用或惊叹作用。在写作中，常用的倒装结构主要有：结构含义例句There

be+主语（人/物）+地点状语/时间状语某地/某时有某人/某物There

is

a

big

playground

in

our

school.Here+动词/be动词+名词这里是/有……Here/There

is

a

photo

of

my

family.There+动词/be动词+名词那里是/有……结构含义例句so+be/助动词/情态动词+主语某人也……Bob

is

tall.

So

am

I.neither+be/助动词/情态动词+主语某人也不……Harry

doesn’t

like

going

shopping.

Neither

do

I.续表结构含义例句only位于句首，强调状语时倒装只有……才……Only

in

this

way

can

we

work

out

the

problem

successfully.续表用it作形式主语或形式宾语的句型it作形式主语1.It

seems

that…

好像/似乎……

如：It

seems

that

there

is

going

to

be

a

heavy

rain.

看来要下大雨了。2.It

takes/took

（sb.）+一段时间+to

do

sth.

做某事花费（某人）……（时间）。如：It

took

me

four

weeks

to

finish

reading

this

book.

读完这本书花了我4个星期。3.It’s+adj.（+for/of

sb.）+to

do

sth.

做某事（对某人来说）是……/（某人）做某事是……如：It’s

difficult

for

me

to

keep

exercising

in

the

morning，but

I

will

try

to

do

it.

对我来说，坚持在早上锻炼是困难的，但是我会尽量坚持。4.It’s+adj.+that

从句

……是……

如：

It’s

exciting

that

Quan

Hongchan

is

coming

to

our

city.

全红婵要来我们城市了，真令人激动。5.It’s

believed/said/reported

that...人们相信/说/据报道……

如：It’s

believed

that

doing

sports

is

good

for

health.人们相信做运动对健康有益。it作形式宾语

find，make，consider，feel等词后接的宾语为从句或动词不定式时，常用it作形式宾语，真正的宾语（从句/动词不定式）后置。如：I

find

it

interesting

to

travel

to

Qinhuangdao.

我觉得去秦皇岛旅游很有趣。技巧训练1.It’s

a

fine

day

today.（用感叹句升格句子）_______________________What

a

fine

day

today!2.Miss

Bai

is

kind

and

caring.（用感叹句升格句子）_________________________________How

kind

and

caring

Miss

Bai

is!3.莉莉不喜欢古典音乐。我也不喜欢。（汉译英）____________________________________________Lily

doesn’t

like

classical

music.

Neither

do

I.4.只有通过多读书，你才能提高阅读速度。（汉译英）_______________________________________________________________Only

by

reading

more

books

can

you

increase

your

reading

speed.5.Amy

helps

her

classmates.

She

considers

it

as

her

duty.（用it作形式宾语升格句子）________________________________________________Amy

considers

it

her

duty

to

help

her

classmates.6.Learning

maths

well

is

difficult

for

me.（用it作形式主语升格句子）________________________________________It

is

difficult

for

me

to

learn

maths

well.7.我觉得利用这个软件学英语很有趣。（汉译英）____________________________________________________I

find

it

interesting

to

learn

English

by

using

this

app.技巧6

巧扩要点扩写原因

用来表示原因的词汇有because，because

of，for，since，as，thanks

to，for

the

reason

that等。如：

I

am

looking

forward

to

the

coming

weekend.

→I

am

looking

forward

to

the

coming

weekend

because/as/for

my

good

friend

will

arrive

in

Beihai

on

Saturday

morning.扩写事例

用来引出例子的短语有for

example，such

as，like…，Let’s

take…for

example等。如：

Playing

basketball

has

many

advantages.

→Playing

basketball

has

many

advantages.

For

example，it

can

make

us

become

healthier.扩写条件

用来表示条件的词汇有if，unless，as

long

as等。如：

You

can

go

shopping

with

us

this

Sunday.

→If

you

want

to

buy

a

nice

present

for

your

sister，you

can

go

shopping

with

us

this

Sunday.扩写目的

用来表示目的的词汇有so

that，in

order

that，in

order

to，so

as

to，动词不定式等。如：

I

have

made

up

my

mind

to

study

hard.

→I

have

made

up

my

mind

to

study

hard

so

that/in

order

that

I

can

realize

my

dream

of

being

a

scientist.扩写结果

用来表示结果的词汇有so，therefore，as

a

result，so…that…等。如：

Helen

wants

to

do

something

nice

for

the

environment.

→Helen

wants

to

do

something

nice

for

the

environment.

Therefore，she

joins

this

club.

so后接句子时，不用逗号。therefore后接句子时，需用逗号隔开。扩写感受

用来表示想法的词汇有in

my

opinion，from

my

point

of

view，as

for

me等。如：

There

are

many

good

ways

to

learn

English

well.

→There

are

many

go