中考英语写作思路-积极心态

中考英语写作思路--积极心态书面表达(共1小题；满分20分)积极的心态对于我们非常重要。假定你是李华，英语课上老师组织了主题为“ThePowerof

PositiveThinking"的讨论和分享。请结合以下要点，通过一件你自己的具体事例，谈一谈积极心态对于你的帮助并分享你对如何调整心态、积极乐观看待事物的建议。要点：1.

一件具体事例2.两点你的建议注意：1.

短文需回答以上全部问题，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2.文中不得出现真实姓名和地名：3.词数80～100。分析：-我们需要一件具体的事例来说明积极心态对于你的帮助-分享你的两点建议：如何调整心态、积极乐观看待事物的建议因为需要说明的内容比较多，因此每个点都很难展开来写，所以都需要精炼每个要点。基础版本：1.引入话题：Asisknown=Asweallknow=Itiswidelyacknowledgedthat(广泛认可的是：)

positivethinkingplaysanimportantpartinourdailylife,especiallywhen

wemeetproblems.评价：遇事不决，就说明我们做这件事情在我们的生活中非常重要。2.你要说明的事情：Once,

=Istillrememberonetimewhen=Whatimpressed（留下...印象）

memostisonetimewhen

...这里需要又一个思路，分成三~四层来写1.你经历了什么事情（总体描述）Itookpartina(n)...competition.(任何比赛或者活动都可以，但是注意能力不够的同学不要标新立异，因为这样可能因为自己英语水平的限制，反而表达有误)2.你遇到了什么困难（制造冲突）ThecompetitorswereverystrongandIwastooeager(渴望)

towin,soIwastoonervoustopreparewell.(competitors的强大是外界的矛盾，你的tooeager是心态的问题)3.你如何解决这问题（体现文章中你所要论述观点的重要性）Luckily,Icalmeddownandbelievedthat-everythingwouldbeOKaslongasItriedmybest.(只要尽全力，一切都会好)-processwasmoreimportantthanresult.

(过程比结果更重要)这里两个观点二选一就可以了，体现了好心态的重要性4.你最后获得了什么结果（有时候可以省略，但是尽量提一下）Intheend,althoughIdidn’tgetthefirstprize,Istillgotasatisfyingresult.

(虽然没有赢，但是还是获得了满意的结果；当然，可以写自己获得了满意的结果，因为你值得)3.分享你的建议：1.引入：Therearetwosuggestionsabouthavingpositivethinking=Twosuggestionsabouthaving

positivethinkingareasfollows,whichcanofferyoupower.(这句话点个题，表示positivethinking能够给你power)2.第一点建议：Foronething,itisagoodidea=itisimportant=itisofgreatimportancetocalmdown/focusonprocess(关注过程)

whenmeetingtheproblem.Becausewecanmakeafullpreparationinsteadoffeelingworriedallthetime.3.第二点建议：Foranother,wearesupposedto/expectedtotrust/believeinourselves.Inthisway，wehavethecouragetofaceanyresultandmakeprogressineverychallenge.(我们能够有勇气面对任何结果，以及在每次挑战中取得进步)4.结尾：再次重申我们要在以后的生活中有积极的思想。Tosumup,lifeisfullofupsanddowns(生活中总是起起落落)

=itisunavoidable/inevitable(不可避免的)

tomeetchallengesinourlife,butpositivethinkingcangiveuspowertogetoverthedifficulties.作文完整版提炼：Asisknown,

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cangiveuspowertogetoverdifficulties.好词好句积累：-positivethinkingplaysanimportantpartinourdailylife-积极思考在我们日常生活中扮演着重要角色-especiallywhenwemeetproblems-尤其是当我们遇到问题时-Twosuggestionsabouthavingpositivethinking-关于保持积极思维的两点建议-focusonprocesswhenmeetingtheproblem-遇到问题时关注过程-makeafullpreparationinsteadoffeelingworriedallthetime-做充分的准备而不是一直担心-believeinourselves-相信自己-havethecouragetofaceanyresult-有勇气面对任何结果-makeprogressineverychallenge-在每一个挑战中取得进步-unavoidabletomeetchallengesinourlife-在生活中遇到挑战是不可避免的-positivethinkingcangiveuspowertogetoverdifficulties-积极思考可以给我们克服困难的力量基础版本2:Positivethinkingisveryimportantinourdailylives,especiallywhenwefaceproblems.Irememberonceduringarunningcompetition,theotherrunnerswereverystrong,and

Iwasso

eagertowinthat

Ibecametoonervoustoprepareproperly.However,once

Icalmeddownandbelievedindoingmybest,Imanagedbetterthanexpected.Eventhough

Ididn'twinfirstplace,Iwasstillhappywithmyperformance（表现）.Herearetwotipsforstayingpositive:First,concentrateon（专注）

theprocesswhenyoufaceaproblem.Thishelpsyoupreparewellandkeepsyoufromworryingtoomuch.Second,believeinyourself.Thisgivesyouthecouragetoacceptanyoutcome（结果）andkeepimprovingwitheachchallenge.Insummary,whilewecan'tavoidchallengesinlife,positivethinkinghelpsusdealwiththemeffectively（有效地）.这个是上面版本的精简版本，也可以作为参考：好词好句积累：-toonervoustoprepareproperly-太紧张，无法适当准备-onceIcalmeddownandbelievedindoingmybest-一旦我冷静下来并相信尽我最大努力-managedbetterthanexpected-表现得比预期好-happywithmyperformance-对我的表现感到满意-concentrateontheprocess-专注于过程-helpsyoupreparewellandkeepsyoufromworryingtoomuch-帮助你准备得很好并防止你过度担心-givesyouthecouragetoacceptanyoutcome-让你有勇气接受任何结果-keepimprovingwitheachchallenge-在每一个挑战中持续进步-wecan'tavoidchallengesinlife-我们无法避免生活中的挑战-positivethinkinghelpsusdealwiththemeffectively-积极思考帮助我们有效地大神版本：Positivethinkingiscrucial（重要的）

inourdailylives,particularly（尤其）

whenweencounter（遇到）

challenges.Ivividlyrecall（生动地回忆）

atimewhenIparticipatedin（参加）

arunningcompetition.Thecompetitorswereformidable=strong（强大的）,andmyeagernesstowinleftmetooanxioustoprepareeffectively.However,bycalmingdownandbelievinginmybesteffort,Imanagedtoovercomemynerves.AlthoughIdidn'twinfirstprize,Iachievedaresultthatsatisfiedme.I'dliketooffertwopiecesofadviceonmaintaining（维持）

apositivemindset（积极的心态）,whichcanempower（给...提供能量）

you.Firstly,it'simportanttofocusontheprocesswhenfacingachallenge.Thisapproach（方法）

allowsforgood

preparation,reducingunnecessaryworry（减少不必要的担心）.Secondly,believinginyourselfisofgreatsignificance.Thisbeliefinstills（注入）

thecouragetoacceptanyoutcomeandcontinuously（持续不断的）

progressthrougheachchallenge.Inconclusion,facingchallengesisaninevitable（不可避免的）

partoflife,butadopting（采用）

apositivemindsetcanprovidethestrength（力量）

toovercometheseobstacles（障碍）=challenges.Herearethekeyphrasesandsentencesfromthetextabouttheimportanceofpositivethinking:好词好句积累：-particularlywhenweencounterchallenges-尤其是当我们遇到挑战时-vividlyrecallatimewhe