高考英语复习读后续写练习+邻居的冷漠：我心中的不解之谜+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习邻居的冷漠：我心中的不解之谜1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Forcourage,myfingersclungtotheharness(绳套)onChó’sbroadbackaswepassedmyneighborfence.WalkingbyMr.Groll’syardisthebestpartofourmorningwalk,andalsotheworst.Itisthebestpartbecausetherosestalktous.“Goodmorning,Chó,”whispertherosescentstomyguidedog’snose.Otherrosesshouttome,“Hello,Mai!”Nowcomestheworstpart:Mr.Groll.Asusual,friendlyChóthumpshertail.ButChóisjustadog;howcansheknowthatthisneighbordoesnotlikemeatall?“Hello,Mr.Groll.”IgreetedhimasIdideverymorning.Andlikeeveryothermorning,hedidnotanswerme.ButIknewhewasthere,watching,behindhisfence.Healwayssoundsoutofbreath,andthecreakygateswingsnervouslyinhishand.Maybehe’safraidofmebecauseI’mblind.Disabilitiesdoscaregrown-upssometimes.ThenIremembered:theotherdayIheardhimplayingcheckerswithmyfriendJimmy,who’sinawheelchair.4续写原文ChóandImarchedon,andmythoughtskeptstep.“WhydidMr.Grollignoreme?”It’samysterytome.Papahastoldmethatsomefolksdonotlikepeoplefromfarawayplaces.Doesthissolvethemystery?MaybeMr.GrolldoesnotlikeVietnameseneighbors.No,thatcan’tbeit.EverySaturdayMr.Grollandmybigbrother,Lien,helpeachotherwithyardwork.Theyarefriends.Well,then,maybehedoesn’tlikemebecauseI’magirl.Thesidewalkhummed(发出嗡嗡声)beneathmyfeet.Askateboardzoomedby.“Hello,MaiandChoó”myfriendJanayelled.“Hi,Mr.Groll.”Iwaited.IfMr.GrollignoredJana,thenthemysterywassolved.Buthisvoicecalledout,“Hello,Jana!”5段首句Paragraph1：Thesoundofitbrokemyheart.Paragraph2：“Chóisavery...bigdog.”hesaidinavoicethattoldmehethoughtIwouldlaughathim.6Part2题目分析7续写原文分析8文章讲述了故事的主人公是盲人女孩Mai，每天早晨她和导盲犬Chó散步经过邻居Mr.Groll的院子时，玫瑰的香气让她感到愉悦，这是散步中美好的部分。然而，Mr.Groll对她的问候从不回应，这让Mai很是困惑。Mai猜测Mr.Groll不喜欢她或许是因为她是盲人、来自远方或者是女孩，但这些猜测都被一些事实推翻，比如Mr.Groll会和坐轮椅的Jimmy玩棋，还会和她哥哥一起做庭院工作，甚至会回应其他孩子的招呼，唯独不理会Mai，这一奇怪的现象成为Mai心中难以解开的谜团，让她在散步途中不断思索。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析Para1：Thesoundofitbrokemyheart.那声音让我心碎。是从隔壁院子传来的隐隐约约的抽泣声，在这寂静的清晨显得格外揪心。我下意识地抓紧了Chó的牵引绳，它也似乎感受到了我的不安，喉咙里发出低沉的呜呜声。我深吸一口气，鼓起勇气朝着声音的来源走去。每靠近一步，那破碎的抽噎声就愈发清晰，我的心也跟着揪得更紧。是不是有小动物受伤了？还是有孩子在偷偷哭泣？种种猜测在我脑海中闪过，脚步也愈发急促起来，满心担忧着即将面对的未知状况。10续写思路分析Para2：“Chóisavery...bigdog.”hesaidinavoicethattoldmehethoughtIwouldlaughathim.“Chó是一只非常……大的狗。”他用一种似乎觉得我会嘲笑他的声音说道。我微微一怔，没想到一向对我冷漠的Mr.Groll会主动开口跟我谈论Chó。我轻轻笑了笑，回答道：“是啊，不过她很温顺。”我能感觉到他的不自在，他的呼吸有些急促，手指不停地抠着衣角。沉默片刻后，我鼓起勇气问他有没有听到刚刚那令人心碎的声音。他犹豫了一下，然后缓缓开口，说出的话让我大吃一惊，也让我们之间那层冰冷的隔阂开始出现了一丝裂缝，仿佛有什么秘密即将揭开，改变我们一直以来微妙而又尴尬的邻里关系。11Part3范文呈现12范文呈现Thesoundofitbrokemyheart.Itwasthesoundofaviolin,playingamournfultunethatseemedtoseepintomyverysoul.Iwasstandingoutsidetheold,abandonedhouseattheendofourstreet.Chósatbymyside,herheadtiltedasifshetoowasaffectedbythemelancholicmelody.Ihadoftenheardrumorsaboutthisplace,thataonce-renownedviolinisthadlivedherebeforevanishingmysteriously.Now,asthemusicfilledtheair,Icouldn'thelpbutwonderifthosetalesweretrue.ThenoteswerefilledwithsuchsorrowandlongingthatIfelttearswellingupinmyeyes.IknewIhadtofindoutwhowasplayingandwhythemusicwassoheartrending.WithChóleadingtheway,Islowlymademywaytowardsthehouse,myheartpoundingwithamixtureoftrepidationandanticipation.13范文呈现“Chóisavery...bigdog.”hesaidinavoicethattoldmehethoughtIwouldlaughathim.IturnedaroundtoseeMr.Thompson,thelocalgrocer,standingthere.Hehadalwaysbeenabitgruffanddistant,sohisattemptatsmalltalktookmebysurprise.Ismiledandreplied,“Yes,sheis,butshe'sagentlegiant.”Heshiftedhisweightfromonefoottotheother,lookinguncomfortable.Afteramomentofawkwardsilence,heclearedhisthroatandsaid,“Isawyouheadingtowardstheoldhouse.Youknow,it'snotsafethere.Therearerumorsofitbeinghaunted.”Iraisedaneyebrow,intrigued.“Haunted?Bywhat?”Iasked.Heleanedincloser,asifsharingasecret,andwhispered,“Somesayit'stheghostoftheviolinist,stillplayinghissadsong,unabletofindpeace.”Hiswordssentashiverdownmyspine,butmycuriositywaspiquedevenmore.Ithankedhimforhisconcernand,withnewdetermination,continuedmyjourneytowardsthehouse,eagertouncoverthetruthbehindthehauntingmelodyandthemysteriousviolinist,despitethewarnings.14升级版范文呈现Oneday,asIwaswalkingwithChó,thesoundofitbrokemyheart.Itwasaheartrendingmelody,likeawailingcryofalostsoul,thatfloatedthroughtheair.Standingthere,tearswellingupinmyeyes,Iwasdeterminedtofinditssource.Chó,sensingmydistress,walkedcloselybesideme.15升级版范文呈现Nearby,"Chóisavery...bigdog,"cameavoice.ItwasMr.Groll.Nervously,heutteredthosewords,asiffearingmyreaction.Littledidheknowthatatthatmoment,myfocuswassolelyonthemysterioussound.Withafirmresolve,Idecidedtoapproachtheoriginofthemusic,ignoringtheuneasinessinMr.Groll'svoice.Itwasinthatdilapidatedoldhousethatthetruthawaitedme.O