九年级下册 英语 第二单元《Lesson 5 Writing》课件

Unit2

Cultureshock

Lesson5Writing

九年级下册—上海教育出版社—英语—第二单元教学目标

LearningObjectives通过这节课学习，你将会：1.掌握感谢邮件的格式；2.学习“表达感谢”的相关词汇与句式结构；3.

学习通过“增加细节”来表达真情实感Pre-writingHaveyouexperiencedcultureshock？Whohelpedyouovercomeit?Whatcanyoudotoshowyourgratitude(感谢)tothem?Doyouoftenjustsay“Thankyou”?Iwanttosharemyexperiencewithyou!IwenttoAustraliaandworkedasavoluntaryteachertwoyearsago.LikeBradLi,Istayedinahostfamily

andexperiencedcultureshock.Ifailedtounderstandthelocalcultureatfirst.Ididn'tgetusedtothefood.Ifeltlonely.Ididn'tunderstandtheEnglishidioms.Iwasmisunderstoodbyothers.Iwanttosharemyexperiencewithyou!Luckily,theyhelpedmealotandtreatedmelikepartoftheirfamily!Iwasdeeplymovedbywhattheyhaddoneforme.Theexperiencewasreallyexcitingandvaluableforme!Feelingverygrateful,Ididsomethingtoshowmygratitude.gave

themahugcookedthemamealboughtthemsomeflowerssentthemsomepresentswrotethemathank-youemailHereismythank-youemailtomyhostfamilyinAustralia.DearMalcolmandEvelyn,Howareyouthesedays?Imissyouverymuch.IstillrememberthedaysIspentwithyou.Youplannedsomanyactivitiestohelpmeovercomethecultureshock.Ifeltgratefultoyouduringmystay.WelcometoGuangzhou.Ihopetohearfromyousoon!YoursLouBradhadasimilarexperiencelikeme.HostfamilyCultureshockGreatmemoriesConclusionHostfamilyCultureshockGreatmemoriesConclusionthelanguagethefoodtheschoolstayedina

smallvillagewereverykindorganizedmanyactivitiesplayedinthesnow,playedbaseballatHalloween,dressedasHarryPotteratThanksgiving,abigdinnerexcitingvaluableHehadagoodrelationshipwithhishostfamily.GreetingNames

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familyClosingYour

nameHowareyou?BodyWhile-writingImagineyouareBrad.Youaregoingtowriteathank-youemailtotheHurstfamily(P28).

Step1Writetheoutlineofthethank-youemail.【划重点】Para.1问候，感谢Para.2回顾，收获Para.3分享，邀请

Step1Writetheoutlineofthethank-youemail.Howareyou?ThankyoufortakingcareofmeduringmystayintheUS.Ifeltlikepartofyourfamily.Ienjoyedplayinginthesnowandhavingparties.IexperiencedthecultureshockintheUS.

IhavetoldmyfriendsinChinaaboutmyvisit.IwouldliketoinviteyoutovisitmeinChinasoon.

Step1Writetheoutlineofthethank-youemail.Step2Learnaboutthewritingskills.Whichexpressionisbetter?1.Thanksforyourdress.2.Ireallylikethebrightyellow

dressyouboughtmeyesterday!Thankyousomuch!Tips:1.Expressauthenticfeelings(真情实感).2.Addmoredetails(细节).Haveatry!Rewritethesentence:Thanksforthedinnertonight!____________________________________________________________________________________________Tips:1.Expressauthenticfeelings(真情实感).2.Addmoredetails(细节).Haveatry!Rewritethesentence:Thanksforthedinnertonight!____________________________________________________________________________________________Perfectdinner!Iliketheroastedchickenandthefreshvegetablesbest.

Youareamasterchef!Thanksforthedinnertonight!通过具体例子roastedchicken和thefreshvegetables来说明为什么个人觉得是perfectdinner，加上amasterchef的评价就很好表达感激之情。Haveatry!Rewritethesentence:Ihadagoodtimeyesterday.____________________________________________________________________________________________Tips:1.Expressauthenticfeelings(真情实感).2.Addmoredetails(细节).Haveatry!Rewritethesentence:Ihadagoodtimeyesterday.____________________________________________________________________________________________除了举例，形容词wonderful和副词happily的使用也很生动。wonderful也可以用fantastic,marvelous等近义词代替，happily可以用cheerfully代替。Whatawonderfulday!Wewentouttobreathethefreshairandlaughedhappilytogether.

Ihadagoodtimeyesterday.Haveatry!Rewritethesentence:Ihopeyoucanvisitmyhometown,Beijing.____________________________________________________________________________________________Tips:1.Expressauthenticfeelings(真情实感).2.Addmoredetails(细节).Haveatry!Rewritethesentence:Ihopeyoucanvisitmyhometown,Beijing.____________________________________________________________________________________________例子theForbiddenCity和

theGreatWall可以让对方了解北京的名胜古迹，加上个人评价amazing会让对方产生好感。Ihopeyoucanvisitmyhometown,Beijing.Therearesomanyplacesofinteresthere,liketheForbiddenCityandtheGreatWall.Theyareamazing!Howareyou?ThankyoufortakingcareofmeduringmystayintheUS.Ifeltlikepartofyourfamily.Ienjoyedplayinginthesnowandhavingparties.IexperiencedthecultureshockintheUS.

IhavetoldmyfriendsinChinaaboutmyvisit.IwouldliketoinviteyoutovisitmeinChinasoon.Step2Learnaboutthewritingskills.1.Expressauthenticfeelings(真情实感).原句：Howareyou?ThankyoufortakingcareofmeduringmystayintheUS.Ifeltlikepartofyourfamily.修改：Howtimeflies!IhavebeenbacktoChinaforamonth.Imissyousomuch!Howareyouthesedays?ThankyoufortakingcareofmeduringmystayintheUS.Ifeltlikepartofyourfamily.Ireallyappreciateit.原句：Ienjoyedplayinginthesnowandhavingparties.IexperiencedthecultureshockintheUS.修改：Ihavemanysweetmemorieswithyou,likeplayinginthesnowandhavingparties.Thetasteofthedeliciousdisheswassogreat!ThoughIexperiencedthecultureshock,suchasthelanguage,thefoodandtheschool,youalwaysgavemecourage.Thankstotheactivitiesyouorganized,Ifeltmorerelaxed.1.Expressauthenticfeelings(真情实感).2.Addmoredetails(细节).原句：IhavetoldmyfriendsinChinaaboutmyvisit.IwouldliketoinviteyoutovisitmeinChinasoon.

修改：IhavetoldmyfriendsinChinaaboutmyvisit.Theyweresocuriousaboutmystay.Iwouldliketoinviteyoutovisitsomeplacesofinterestaroundmycity.I’msureChinesecultureisanothergreatexperienceforyou!Can’twaittoseeyousoon!1.Expressauthenticfeelings(真情实感).2.Addmoredetails(细节).Step3Writethefinalthank-youemail.Pleaseaddyourownideas!请加入自己的想法，完善作文SamplewritingDearMrandMrsHurst,Howtimeflies!IhavebeenbacktoChinaforamonth.Imissyousomuch!Howareyouthesedays?ThankyoufortakingcareofmeduringmystayintheUS.Ifeltlikepartofyourfamily.Ireallyappreciateit.Ihavemanysweetmemorieswithyou,likeplayinginthesnowandhavingparties.Thetasteofthedeliciousdisheswassogreat!ThoughIexperiencedthecultureshock,suchasthelanguage,thefoodandtheschool,youalwaysgavemecourage.Thankstotheactivitiesyouorganized,Ifeltmorerelaxed.IhavetoldmyfriendsinChinaaboutmyvisit.Theyweresocuriousaboutmystay.Iwouldliketoinviteyoutovisitsomeplacesofinterestaroundmycity.I’msureChinesecultureisanothergreatexperienceforyou!Can’twaittoseeyousoon!YoursBradExtensionIamnotsatisfiedwiththeemail.Canyouhelpmeimproveit?DearMalcolmandEvelyn,Howareyouthesedays?Imissyouverymuch.IstillrememberthedaysIspentwithyou.Youplannedsomanyactivitiestohelpmeovercomethecultureshock.Ifeltgratefultoyouduringmystay.WelcometoGuangzhou.Ihopetohearfromyousoon!YoursLouPost-writing

WordBank:关于文化冲击的词汇文化冲击和……不一样在某种程度上感觉孤独适应未能理解让自己被他人理解被误解cultureshockbedifferentfromtoacertaindegreefeellonelygetusedtofailtounderstandmakeoneselfunderstoodbemisunderstoodby...Post-writing

WordBank:如何表达感谢Level1：It’ssokindofyou.

Youarethebest/greatest.Youaresoamazing/fantastic!

Thankyouforyourhelp./Thankyouforhelpingme.Iwanttosaythankyoufromthebottomofmyheart.Level2：Ireallyappreciateyourhelp.Iamtrulygratefultoyouforyourhelp.

I'dliketoexpressmygratitudetoyou.Icouldn’thavedoneitwithoutyou!You’reoneinamillion.

你真是万里挑一。Ican’tthankyouenough.感激不尽。Post-writing

WordBank:如何表达感谢Summary1.Theformatofathank-youemail.2.Twowritingskills:1)Expressauthenticfeelings(真情实感).2)Addmoredetails(细节).3.Someusefulexpressionsofshowinggratitude.Itisimportanttoshowgratitudewhenwereceivehelp.Homework1.Polish(润色)yourthank-youemail/Rewritethefinalthank-youemail.2.Finishtheextensionexercise(选做).Thankyou！Unit2

CultureshockLesson5Writing(答疑)九年级下册—上海教育出版社—英语—第二单元DearMalcolmandEvelyn,Howareyouthesedays?Imissyouverymuch.IstillrememberthedaysIspentwithyou.Youplannedsomanyactivitiestohelpmeovercomethecultureshock.Ifeltgratefultoyouduringmystay.WelcometoGuangzhou.Ihopetohearfromyousoon!YoursLou拓展练习讲解DearMalcolmandEvelyn,Howareyouthesedays?Imissyouverymuch.IstillrememberthedaysIspentwithyou.Youplannedsomanyactivitiestohelpmeovercomethecultureshock.Ifeltgratefultoyouduringmystay.WelcometoGuangzhou.Ihopetohearfromyousoon!YoursLou拓展练习讲解DearMalcolmandEvelyn,Howareyouthesedays?It’salongtimesincewemeteachother.ThetimeinAustraliahasbecomepartofmysweetmemories.Imissyouverymuch.IstillrememberthedaysIspentwithyou.Tohelpmeovercomethecultureshock,youplannedsomanyactivities,suchashavingapicnicbytheseaandvisitingyourneighbours.

Itwasalsoverykindofyoutoinvitemetoyourfamilyparty!

Ifeltgratefultoyouduringmystay.Myfriendsareamazedatmyexperience.IhopeyoucanalsovisitGuangzhou.Youwillenjoylotsofdeliciousfoodshere.TheCBDofGuangzhouiswonderful!Youwillloveit!WelcometoGuangzhou.Ihopetohearfromyousoon!YoursLou写作中的易错点--词性Iwasdeeplymovedbyyour________(kind)and________(friend).Youwillfindthe________(charming)ofthecultureofChina.Youhavegreat_________(interest)inChineseculture.Youare_________(interest)inChinesecul