Unit4+Journey+Across+a+Vast+Land+第二课时 高中英语人教版（2019）选择性必修第二册

Unit4Journeyacrossavastland（第二课时）CONTENTS1.Topic-centeredwriting2.Grammar1.Topic-centeredwriting假设你是李华，你的加拿大笔友Peter写邮件询问你的一次难忘的旅游经历。请你用英语给他回一封邮件，要点包括：1．旅游过程；2．你的感受。注意：1．词数80左右；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearPeter,Howiseverythinggoingwithyou?I’mgladtoshareatrulyfascinatingtravelexperiencethatIhadwithyou.Lastsummerholiday,myparentsandItookatraintoLeshan,SichuanProvince,whichisfamousfortheGiantStoneBuddha.WhatimpressedusmostwastheimmensesizeoftheGiantStoneBuddha.Lookingupatthelargeheadanddownatthelargefeet,IfeltIwassosmallbycontrast.Thenextday,aswastypicalofLeshan,itwasmildandclear.WewentupMountEmei,wherethescenerytookourbreathawaywithitsexceptionalbeauty.Seenfromthetop,therollinghillsandforestslookedmassive.Inadditiontoseeingspectacularmountainpeaks,onehighlightofourtripwasbeingabletoseemanycutewildmonkeys.Atduskwemadeourwayback.Wewerealltired,buttheimpressivesceneryandawesomejourneymadeitallworthwhile.IfIhavetime,IamboundtopayavisittoLeshanagain.I'mlookingforwardtogoingtherewithyounexttime.

Yours,LiHuaAchecklistDoestheessayusethesimplepresentandpasttense?Doesthebeginningmentionthebackgroundinformationandpurposeofwriting?Doesthebodydescribethetravelexperiencelogically?Isthetravelexperienceappealing?Istheconclusionproper?Isthepointclearlystated?Arethereanylinkingwordstomaketheessaymorecoherent?2.Grammar:PastparticiplesVSPresentparticiples1.Seen

fromthetopofthemountain,thescenerywasreallyfascinating.描述物的表语景色被人从山顶上看到过去分词作状语

2.Seeingthesceneryfromthetopofthemountain,Iwasfascinatedbytheautumncolors.描述感情的表语现在分词作状语我从山顶上看风景2.Grammar:PastparticiplesVSPresentparticiplesPastparticiple-edPresentparticiple-ing作表语描述感情：感到……的描述人/物/地点：令人……的作状语与逻辑主语之间的关系是被动的与逻辑主语之间的关系是主动的Grammar:translationpractice1.如果再给一次机会的话，他们会再次游览Vancouver.2.飞往Vancouver的旅行对于李黛玉来讲很令人激动，接着而来的是坐火车旅行。3.当游览一个岛屿的时候，我对岛上的古代艺术作品感到很惊讶。4.从山上下来我累了，而在森林中徒步让我感到神清气爽(refresh).

When/Ifgivenanotherchance,theywillpayavisittoVancouveroncemore.AplanetriptoVancouveristhrillingforLiDaiyu,followedbyatrainone.Whenvisitinganisland,Iwasastonishedattheancientworksofart.Iwastiredcomingdownfromthemountainwhiletakingahikeinaforestmademerefreshed.Grammar:高考链接1.____________(surround)bygreentrees,thefarmislocatedatthefootofthehillnearourschool.2.Butthat’shownatureis——alwaysleavingus__________(astonish).3.InspiredbytheBeltandRoadForumforInternationalCooperation________(hold)inBeijing,CaodecidedtocovertheroutebyhikingasatributetotheancientSilkRoad.4.___________(cover)anareaaboutthreetimesthesizeofYellowstoneNationalPark,theGPNPwillbeoneofthefirstnationalparksinthecountry.

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