高考英语复习读后续写练习+托尼街头奇遇：直面不速之+“猩”+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习托尼街头奇遇：直面不速之“猩”1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Tonywaswalkingdownthestreet.Hewastryingtogettoastorebeforeitclosed,andhewasnotthinkingaboutanythingbutthat.Hehadhisshoppinglistinhandandwasrushingthroughthecrosswalks,tryingtoavoidgettinghitbycars.Arrivingatacrosswalk,Tonystopped,waitingforthegreenlighttocross.Theflashingredhandshowedhimnottowalk,butinfact,hedidconsiderwhethertogothroughtheredlight,astherewerenotmanycars.Still,itdidn’tseemlikeagoodidea,sohecontinuedtowait.Notfaraway,heheardamantalkingonthephone,sayingsomethingaboutanimals.”4续写原文Outofnowhere,agorilla（大猩猩）appearedandheadedovertoTonyonitsfeet.ThereweresomanypeoplearoundthatTonydidn’tnoticeitatfirst,hismindtotallyfocusedonthestore,whichhecouldseefaraway,justablockortwoahead.Anxious,Tonyrecheckedhislist.Ifhedidn’tgeteverythingonthelist,hismotherwouldbeangry.Heoftenforgotsomething,sohewantedtomakesurehediditrightthistime.Justashewascheckinghislistcarefully,hefeltataponhisshoulder.“Pardonme,”Tonysaid,steppingtooneside,incaseithadbeenhisproblem.5续写原文Hefeltanothertap.“Hey,watchyourself.”Tonylookedoverinanger,onlytorealizehiswarningfellondeafears—orrather,hairyones.Hewasnosetonosewithagorilla!Hesteppedback,suddenlyfearful.Thegorillamadeashort,lowsoundandfollowedhim.Tonylookedaroundhimselfindisbelief.Allaroundhimwerepeoplewhowerewatchingwithgreatinterest.Somelookedafraidandwerebackingaway.Somewhisperedbehindtheirhandsandwatchedwithwideeyes.Afewevenhadtheirphonesoutandwererecordingvideosortakingpictures.6段首句Paragraph1：Tony’sheartskippedabeatwhenherealizedthesituation.Paragraph2：Asthegorillawasledaway,Tonyletoutadeepbreathinrelief.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9文章讲述了托尼着急赶在商店关门前去购物，他一门心思赶路，手持购物清单穿梭在街道和人行横道。在一处人行横道等待绿灯时，他虽有闯红灯的念头但最终还是选择等待。此时不远处有人在讲关于动物的电话，接着一只大猩猩突然出现走向他，而托尼因专注于远处的商店起初未察觉。托尼着急购物生怕遗漏物品惹妈妈生气，再次查看清单时大猩猩轻拍他，他转头竟发现是大猩猩，震惊之余又有些害怕，周围人有的害怕后退，有的则在围观拍照录像。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1：Tony’sheartskippedabeatwhenherealizedthesituation.Tony的心脏在看到大猩猩的那一刻仿佛停跳了一拍，他瞪大了眼睛，满脸惊恐地与大猩猩对视着，双脚像是被钉在了地上，无法挪动分毫。周围人们的惊呼声和倒吸冷气的声音仿佛渐渐远去，他的世界里此刻只剩下这只近在咫尺的大猩猩。它那庞大的身躯和强壮的四肢，让Tony真切地感受到了危险的气息。他的大脑飞速运转，却一片空白，不知道该如何应对这突如其来的状况，冷汗不停地从额头冒出，顺着脸颊滑落。11续写思路分析Para2：Asthegorillawasledaway,Tonyletoutadeepbreathinrelief.就在Tony感到绝望之时，动物管理员终于赶到，熟练地用专业工具和手段引导着大猩猩离开。随着大猩猩逐渐远去的身影，Tony紧绷的神经终于放松下来，他长长地呼出一口气，身体也随之微微颤抖。他用手擦了擦额头上的冷汗，环顾四周，看到那些还在指指点点、议论纷纷的人群，心中涌起一股复杂的情绪。他拍了拍自己的胸口，暗自庆幸这场意外终于结束，然后整理了一下被弄乱的衣服，再次看了看手中的购物清单，决定还是先去完成购物任务，只是脚步相比之前放慢了许多，仿佛还未从刚才的惊吓中完全缓过神来。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现Tony'sheartskippedabeatwhenherealizedthesituation.Hiseyeswidenedinsheerhorrorashecamefacetofacewiththegorilla.Theworldaroundhimseemedtofreezeforamoment,withthebustlingstreetsoundsfadingintothebackground.Hecouldfeelhispalmsgettingsweatyandhislegsturningtojelly.Everyinstinctinhisbodyscreamedtorun,butfearheldhimcaptive.Hismindraced,franticallysearchingforawaytoescapeoratleastprotecthimself.Thegorilla'sintensegazeboreintohim,makingitimpossibleforhimtolookaway.Hewasacutelyawareofthedangerhewasin,andthethoughtofwhatmighthappennextsentshiversdownhisspine.14范文呈现Asthegorillawasledaway,Tonyletoutadeepbreathinrelief.Hisshouldersslumpedasthetensiondrainedoutofhisbody.Hewatchedtheanimalbeingescortedoff,stillinadazefromtheencounter.Theonlookers'chatterandtheclickingofcamerasnowseemeddistantandunimportant.Hewipedthesweatfromhisforeheadwiththebackofhishandandtookamomenttocomposehimself.Glancingathisshoppinglist,whichhehadnearlycrumpledinhishandduringthecommotion,herealizedhowclosehehadcometonotonlymissingoutonhisshoppingbutalsofacingapotentiallylife-threateningsituation.Withashakystep,hebegantomakehiswaytowardsthestoreagain,thistimewithanewfoundgratitudefortheordinaryandtheuneventful.15升级版范文呈现Tony'sheartskippedabeatthemomenthegraspedthesituation.Standingthere,petrified,hewasconfrontedbythegorillawhosesheersizeandpresencewereintimidating.Neverhadheexpectedsuchasurrealencounteronhiswaytothestore.Hismindwentblank,withfeargrippinghimtightly.Itwasasiftimestoodstill,thehustleandbustleofthestreetfadingintoinsignificance.16升级版范文呈现Then,tohisgreatrelief,thegorillawasskillfullyledawaybytheanimalhandlers.Withthedangergone,Tonyletoutadeepbreath,hisbodytremblingslightly.Onlythendidhefullyappreciatetheordinarinessoflifethathehado