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阅读下面文章,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一个完整短文,续写词数应为150左右。SeeingthepictureofKellyandIholdingteddybearswithgreatjoy,Icouldn’thelprecallingthesweetmemory.Afewyearsago,beforeChristmas,mydadplacedalargeboxinhisgrocerystoreforpeopletodonatetoysforchildreninneed.Kelly,mybestfriendcameovertohelpwiththewrapping.Knowingthatoureffortswouldbringjoytosomanychildrenduringtheholidayseason,wethoughtitwasarewardingexperience.Asweworked,wesharedmomentsoflaughterandjoy.Afterashortwhile,wehadalmostfinishedwrappingallthetoyswithjustonelittleteddybearleft.Lookingatit,Isaid,“Itisthesweetest!Itremindsmeofmyteddybear.Isoldallmylittlekidstuffatourgaragesalewhenwemoved.ButnowI’mreallymissingit!”Kellycametoseeitandshared.“Ihaveasadteddybearstorytoo.Whenmylittlebrotherwasababy,IlethimplaywithmyRosyBear,butherefusedtogiveherback.Ever.”Afterourchat,weknewbothofushadaspecialstorywithateddybear.Rightthen,mydadenteredtheroomandexclaimed.“Wow,greatwrappingjob!Thekidsaregoingtobethrilledwhenopeningthesepresents.”“Theydefinitelywill.Maybewebothwanttobetheonewhocangettheteddybear.Icanjustimaginehowdelightedakidwouldbetounwrapthissweetteddybear.”saidKelly.Welaughed,gazingattheperfectlywrappedbears.Mymom,joininginthelaughter,suggested,“Whydon’tyougatheratourhousenextSaturdayforacookie-decoratingpartyandexchangeyourChristmasgiftsinadvance?I’llpreparethecookiesforyou.”“Goodidea!Iwillenjoythegreatjoyofunwrappingthegift.”Isaidcheerfully.Hearingwhatwesaid,Kelly’seyeslitup,saying,“Countmein!”“Allright,girls,”saidmydad.“Weneedtodothetoy-loadingworknow.Wehavetodropoffallthesepresentsbeforefiveo’clock!”注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:Thenextweek,Iwastryingtofigureoutaperfectgiftfortheparty.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Finally,thedayofthepartyarrived.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意:几年前圣诞节前,作者和好友Kelly在爸爸的杂货店帮忙包装捐赠给贫困儿童的玩具,剩下一只可爱的泰迪熊,两人都对其有特殊情感且都希望有孩子能得到它。妈妈提议下周六在作者家举办饼干装饰派对并提前交换圣诞礼物,之后作者和爸爸去送玩具,故事在此处展开续写。5处伏笔及续写中的回应伏笔:作者和Kelly都讲述了自己与泰迪熊的故事,且都对剩下的那只泰迪熊有特别的情感,为后续两人准备礼物时可能与泰迪熊相关做铺垫。回应:作者四处寻找与泰迪熊有关的礼物,最终买到一只复古的小熊钥匙链,呼应了前文对泰迪熊的情感,也使故事围绕泰迪熊这一元素展开,情节连贯且主题突出。伏笔:妈妈提议举办派对并交换礼物,引发了作者准备礼物的行动,推动故事发展。回应:作者用心准备礼物,在派对上与Kelly交换,这一情节顺理成章,同时也营造了温馨欢乐的氛围,丰富了故事内容,体现了朋友间的情谊。伏笔:作者提到卖了小时候的东西后想念泰迪熊,暗示她可能对泰迪熊相关物品有渴望,这为她寻找礼物提供了方向。回应:作者买到复古小熊钥匙链,满足了自己对泰迪熊的情感寄托,也让这份礼物更具意义,既符合人物心理,又使故事更加完整,强化了情感线。伏笔:作者和Kelly都期待派对上拆礼物的快乐,表现出她们对这次活动的重视和期待。回应:派对上两人交换礼物时的惊喜和开心,回应了之前的期待,将气氛推向高潮,展现了友谊的美好,使情感线更加丰富和饱满。伏笔:之前包装玩具的欢乐场景,营造了温馨和谐的氛围,为后续派对的欢乐气氛做了铺垫。回应:派对上大家一起装饰饼干、交换礼物,充满欢声笑语,延续了之前的温馨氛围,使整个故事的情感基调保持一致,突出了爱与分享的主题。续写要点情感线:第一段:作者在准备礼物的过程中,心情既兴奋又有些忐忑,兴奋的是即将和Kelly交换礼物,忐忑的是担心自己准备的礼物不够好,同时怀着对童年泰迪熊的怀念之情,努力寻找能让Kelly开心的礼物,这份用心体现了对友谊的珍视。第二段:派对当天,作者起初有些紧张,当看到Kelly时又充满期待,在交换礼物环节,收到Kelly的礼物后,心中满是惊喜和感动,感受到了友谊的深厚和温暖,两人的情谊在这个过程中进一步升温,整个氛围温馨而幸福。故事线:第一段:接下来的一周,我绞尽脑汁想为派对准备一份完美的礼物。我逛了好几家商店,都没有找到合适的。直到有一天,我在一家二手店的角落里发现了一个复古的小熊钥匙链,它看起来和我小时候的泰迪熊有几分相似。我立刻把它买了下来,精心包装好,期待着在派对上给Kelly一个惊喜。我想象着她看到礼物时的表情,心中充满了喜悦和期待。第二段:终于,派对的日子到了。Kelly早早地来到了我家,我们一起开心地装饰饼干。当交换礼物的时刻到来时,我紧张地把礼物递给Kelly,她也笑着递给我一个包装精美的盒子。我打开一看,里面是一只手工缝制的小熊玩偶,和我们之前看到的那只捐赠的泰迪熊一样可爱。Kelly说她知道我想念小时候的泰迪熊,所以特意做了这个送给我。我感动得热泪盈眶,紧紧地抱住了她。这个圣诞节,因为有这份真挚的友谊,变得格外温暖。主旨升华句Truefriendshipislikeawarmfireinthecoldwinter,alwaysbringingcomfortandhappiness,andmakingeveryordinarydayshinewithextraordinarymeaning.(真正的友谊就像寒冬里的一团温暖火焰,总能带来慰藉和幸福,让每一个平凡的日子闪耀出非凡的意义。)Thebeautyofgivingliesnotinthevalueofthegift,butintheloveandthoughtfulnessbehindit.Itistheseintangiblethingsthattrulytouchtheheartandstrengthenthebondoffriendship.(给予的美好不在于礼物的价值,而在于背后的爱和体贴。正是这些无形的东西真正触动心灵,加强了友谊的纽带。)Inthesimpleactofexchanginggifts,wefindtheessenceofChristmas-thespiritoflove,sharing,andthejoyofmakingothershappy,whichisthemostpreciousgiftwecangiveandreceive.(在交换礼物这一简单行为中,我们找到了圣诞节的精髓——爱、分享的精神以及让他人快乐的喜悦,这是我们能给予和收到的最珍贵的礼物。)Sometimes,thethingsweholddearfromourchildhoodcaninspireustocreatenewmemoriesanddeepenourrelationships.Itshowsthatthepastisnotjustamemory,butasourceofinspirationforthepresentandthefuture.(有时,我们童年珍视的东西可以激励我们创造新的回忆并加深人际关系。这表明过去不仅仅是一段记忆,更是现在和未来的灵感源泉。)Thewarmthoffriendshipcanfillthevoidleftbylostchildhoodtreasures.Itteachesusthatwhilethingsmaycomeandgo,theloveandconnectionwesharewithourfriendswillalwaysremain,makingourlivesricherandmoremeaningful.(友谊的温暖可以填补童年失去的珍宝所留下的空白。它教导我们,虽然事物可能来来去去,但我们与朋友分享的爱和联系将永远存在,使我们的生活更加丰富和有意义。)写作示范第一篇Paragraph1:Thenextweek,Iwastryingtofigureoutaperfectgiftfortheparty.Irummagedthroughmyroom,lookingforsomethingspecial.ThenIrememberedthestoryKellytoldaboutherRosyBear.Idecidedtosearchforasimilarteddybearonline.Afterhoursofbrowsing,Ifinallyfoundonethatlookedjustlikeit.Iordereditimmediatelyandwaitedanxiouslyforittoarrive.Whenitcame,Iwrappeditupwithabigredbowandahandwrittennote,expressinghowmuchourfriendshipmeanttomeandhowIhopedthisbearwouldbringhersomecomfortandjoy,justlikethememoriesofherRosyBear.Paragraph2:Finally,thedayofthepartyarrived.Kellywalkedinwithabigsmileonherface,holdingabeautifullywrappedbox.Wespenttheafternoondecoratingcookiesandchattinghappily.Whenitwastimetoexchangegifts,myheartracedwithexcitement.Ihandedhertheteddybear,andhereyeswidenedinsurpriseanddelight.Shethengavemehergift,andinsidewasascrapbookfilledwithpicturesofusandthememorieswehadsharedovertheyears.Aswelookedthroughittogether,tearsofhappinessfilledoureyes.ThisChristmas,throughthesesimplegifts,werealizedthatthemostpreciousthingsinlifearethefriendshipswecherishandthelovewesharewitheachother.第二篇Paragraph1:Thenextweek,Iwastryingtofigureoutaperfectgiftfortheparty.IthoughtaboutallthethingsKellyandIhaddonetogetherandwhatshemightlike.Idecidedtomakeherapersonalizedphotoframewithpicturesofusandthetoyswehadwrapped.Ispentdayscuttingandpastingthephotos,decoratingtheframewithglitterandstickers.Ialsoaddedasmallcharmintheshapeofateddybeartothecorner.Whilemakingit,IthoughtabouthowluckyIwastohavesuchagreatfriend.Icouldn'twaittoseeherreactionwhenshereceivedmygift.Paragraph2:Finally,thedayofthepartyarrived.Thehousewasfilledwiththesmelloffreshlybakedcookies.Kellyarrived,andwehuggedeachothertightly.Aswedecoratedthecookies,welaughedandsharedstories.Whenitwastimetoexchangegifts,Ihandedherthephotoframe.Shegaspedwithdelightandgavemeawarmhug.Thenshegavemehergift,whichwasaknittedscarfinmyfavoritecolor.Shesaidshehadspentweeksmakingitforme.Iwasdeeplytouched.Thatday,aswesattogether,enjoyingthecookiesandourgifts,Iunderstoodthatthebestgiftsaretheonesthatcomefromtheheart,andthatourfriendshipwasthegreatestgiftofall.参考答案

Thenextweek,Iwastryingtofigureoutaperfectgiftfortheparty.HopingtobringgreatjoyandsurprisetoKelly,Isearchedforsomethingunique.Oneday,walkinghomefromschool,Isawitintheshopwindow.ItisateddybearexactlyliketheoneI’dbeenwrapping.Iquicklyran

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