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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Tom,ayoungexplorer,wasknownforhiscourageandloveforadventure.Onesunnyday,filledwithexcitementandcuriosity,hesetforthonajourneyintothedepthsofajungle.However,littledidheknowthatthisexpeditionwouldtesthislimitsandpushhimtotheveryedgeofdespair.AsTomventureddeeperintothejungle,hefoundhimselfsurroundedbygiantsoftheforest,toweringtreesandtheconstantsoundofunknowncreatures.Hourspassedashestruggledthroughtheundergrowth,followingapaththatonlyhisinstincts(本能)knew.Andthen,suddenly,ithithimlikeaboltoflightning:hewaslost.Therealizationmadehimtremblingwithfear,buthewasnotamantogivewaytofear.TheinitialobstaclethatTomfacedwasfindingfood.Thejunglewasfulloflife,yethewascluelessaboutwhichplantsweresafetoeat.Hecautiouslysearchedforsomeeatablefruitsandnuts.Furthermore,withbambooandleaves,hebuiltabasicshelter,prayingitwouldprotecthimfromthedangerouselementsandpotentialpredators,suchaswolvesandlions.Thesubsequentchallengewasnavigation.Tom’scompassbrokedown.Heattemptedtousethesun’spositionashisguide,buttheshadeoverheadmadeitnearlyimpossible.Indesperation,hechosetofollowastream.Journeyingalongthestream,hehadtocrossdangerousvalley,climbsteepcliffsandwalkthroughwaist-deeplands.Hisclothesweretorn,hisfeetwereblistered,andhisspiritwascollapsing.Butheremindedhimselfofhisfamilywaitingforhimathome,whichgavehimthestrengthtopresson.Threedayslater,Tomencounteredalivelygroupofmonkeys,theireyeswidewithcuriosityastheyinspectedthisunusualintruder(不速之客).AflashofinspirationsparkedinTom’sthoughtsandhestartedtocopytheiractions,hopinghecouldinteractwiththem.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Tohissurprise,themonkeysrespondedtohimfriendly.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________AsTomsteppedoutofthejungle,hewasgreetedbythesightofasmallvillage.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意:年轻勇敢的探险家汤姆踏上丛林探险之旅,却不幸迷路。他面临着食物短缺、导航工具损坏等诸多困难,先是艰难地寻找可食用的食物并搭建简易庇护所,接着在没有指南针的情况下,沿着溪流前行,途中历经艰险,衣服破损、双脚起泡,精神几近崩溃,但想到家中等待的家人又咬牙坚持。三天后,他遇到一群猴子,试图与它们互动。伏笔及续写中的回应伏笔:汤姆进入丛林后迷路,面临生存困境。回应:猴子友好回应后,带他找到了走出丛林的路,解决了迷路的危机,使他最终能够走出丛林到达村庄,摆脱了困境。伏笔:汤姆的指南针损坏,无法正常导航。回应:猴子凭借对丛林的熟悉,引导他沿着一条隐蔽的小路前行,让他无需依赖指南针也能找到方向,走出复杂的丛林地形。伏笔:汤姆寻找食物困难,不知哪些植物可食用。回应:猴子给他分享了一些丛林中的果实和嫩叶,这些食物不仅解决了他的饥饿问题,还让他了解到一些可食用的丛林资源,补充了能量继续前行。伏笔:汤姆搭建的庇护所简陋,面临自然和野兽的威胁。回应:在与猴子相处的过程中,他学习到一些利用树枝和树叶搭建更坚固庇护所的方法,在后续的行程中保障了自己的安全,抵御了恶劣天气和潜在危险。伏笔:汤姆衣服破损、双脚起泡,身体和精神状态不佳。回应:猴子带他找到了一处有草药的地方,汤姆用草药敷在伤口上缓解了疼痛,并且在猴子的陪伴下,精神上得到了慰藉,重新振作起来,最终成功走出丛林。续写要点情感线:第一段:汤姆从最初的惊喜,到感受到猴子的友好后充满希望,开始信任猴子并跟随它们前行,对走出丛林有了新的期待和信心。第二段:汤姆看到村庄时无比激动和欣慰,回想起丛林中的经历感慨万千,对生命和自然有了更深的敬畏与感恩,内心满是劫后余生的喜悦和对未来生活的珍视。故事线:第一段:猴子友好回应后,带汤姆找到了一些可食用的果实和水源,还引导他沿着一条隐蔽的小路前行,避开了许多危险。汤姆跟着猴子一路前行,途中学习到了它们在丛林中生存的技巧,逐渐恢复了体力和信心。第二段:汤姆怀着激动的心情走向村庄,村民们看到他疲惫不堪的样子,纷纷伸出援手,给予他食物和住所。汤姆休息好后,向村民们讲述了自己的经历,村民们惊叹不已。他决定回家与家人团聚,并将这次难忘的经历铭记于心,日后更加珍惜平凡生活中的美好。主旨升华句Intheharshestofcircumstances,kindnessandconnectioncanemergeasthemostpowerfulforces,leadingusoutofthedarkestvalleysandtowardsthelightofhope.(在最艰难的环境中,善良和联系会成为最强大的力量,引领我们走出最黑暗的山谷,走向希望之光。)Ourjourneythroughlife'sjunglesmaybefraughtwithperil,butitisoftentheunexpectedfriendshipsandactsofnaturethatguideustosafetyandshowusthetruemeaningofsurvival.(我们人生丛林中的旅程可能充满危险,但往往是那些意想不到的友谊和自然的馈赠引导我们走向安全,让我们领悟生存的真正意义。)Whenwefindourselveslostandalone,itisthekindnessofstrangers,eventhoseofthewild,thatcanreignitethesparkofhopeandleadusbacktothewarmthofcivilization.(当我们迷失孤独时,是陌生人的善意,即使是来自野外的善意,也能重燃希望之火,引领我们回到文明的温暖怀抱。)ThetrialsandtribulationsofthejungletaughtTomthatlife'sgreatesttreasuresarenotfoundinconquest,butinthesimpleactsofkindnessandthebondsweformalongtheway.(丛林中的艰难困苦让汤姆明白,生命中最珍贵的东西不是征服,而是在旅途中简单的善举和我们建立的纽带。)Inthefaceofnature'sunforgivingchallenges,Tomdiscoveredthatthehumanspirit,whenpairedwiththecompassionofthewild,hasthepowertoovercomeeventhemostdauntingobstaclesandfinditswayhome.(面对大自然无情的挑战,汤姆发现人类的精神,当与野生动物的同情相结合时,有能力克服最艰巨的障碍并找到回家的路。)写作示范第一篇Tohissurprise,themonkeysrespondedtohimfriendly.Theyledhimtoaclusterofberrybushes,chatteringexcitedlyasifinstructinghimwhichonesweresafetoeat.Tomgratefullyfilledhisstomachwiththesweetberriesandquenchedhisthirstfromanearbystreamthemonkeysguidedhimto.Themonkeysthenmotionedforhimtofollow.Astheyjourneyedthroughthethickfoliage,Tomobservedtheirbehaviorcloselyandlearnedhowtoavoidcertaindangerousplantsandinsects.Withnewfoundenergyandknowledge,hefollowedthemonkeys'lead,trustingthemtoguidehimoutofthetreacherousjungle.AsTomsteppedoutofthejungle,hewasgreetedbythesightofasmallvillage.Reliefwashedoverhimasherealizedhisnightmarewasfinallyover.Thevillagerswereastonishedtoseeawearystrangeremergefromthejungle.Theyofferedhimfoodandshelter,andTomgratefullyaccepted.Asherestedandrecovered,hethoughtabouthisincredibleadventureandtheunlikelyfriendswhohadsavedhislife.Heknewhewouldcarrythisexperiencewithhimforever,areminderofthepowerofkindnessandtheresilienceofthehumanspirit.Fromthatdayon,Tomreturnedhomeachangedman,withanewfoundappreciationforlifeandallitswonders.第二篇Tohissurprise,themonkeysrespondedtohimfriendly.Oneofthemonkeysclimbedupatreeandtosseddownsomecoconuts.Tom,understandingtheirintention,managedtoopenthemanddranktherefreshingjuice.Themonkeysthenledhimalongahiddenpath,awayfromthedangerousareashehadbeenstrugglingthrough.Alongtheway,theyshowedhimhowtousecertainleavestosoothehisblisteredfeet.Tomwasamazedbytheirintelligenceandkindness.Withtheirhelp,hefeltmoreconfidentanddeterminedtomakeitoutofthejunglealive.AsTomsteppedoutofthejungle,hewasgreetedbythesightofasmallvillage.Tearswelledupinhiseyesashesawthesignsofhumanhabitation.Thevillagersgatheredaroundhim,curiousandconcerned.Tomrecountedhisharrowingtale,andthevillagersprovidedhimwithwarmclothesandahotmeal.Hespentafewdaysinthevillage,recuperatingandreflectingonhisjourney.Herealizedthateveninthemostdesperatesituations,thereisalwaysaglimmerofhopeandkindnesstobefound.Thisexperiencehadnotonlytestedhisphysicalandmentalstrengthbutalsodeepenedhisunderstandingofthebondbetweenalllivingbeings.Tomvowedtosharehisstoryandthelessonshelearned,inspiringotherstoembracetheunknownwithcourageandanopenheart.参考答案Tohissurprise,themonkeysrespondedtohimfriendly.Theyseemedintriguedbyhisattemptstocommunicateandevenbroughthimsomefruits,apparentlyasagestureofgoodwill.Tomgratefullyacceptedtheoffering,realizingthatthesemonkeyscouldpotentiallybehislifeline.Overthenextfewdays,hefollowedthemonke
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