（高考英语作文炼句）第36天译文老师笔记

PAGEPAGE11.考虑到从周一到周五的每一天,工作一般会占据一个人超过一半醒着的时间,因此最好能在一家让人感到舒适自在的公司工作.Giventhatworktypicallyoccupiesoverhalfofone's

wakinghours

(1.醒着的时间)everydayfromMondaytoFriday,itisbesttoworkforacompanythatmakesyou

feelathome(2.感到舒适自在).

1-wakinghours

词典释义：waking['weɪ.kɪŋ]

adjective

[beforenoun]

■describesaperiod

oftimeoranexperienceduringwhichyouareawake

清醒的;醒着的•Childrenareinschoolfor15percentoftheir

waking

hours/life

betweenbirthandtheageof16.儿童从出生到16岁,不睡觉时有15%的时间在上学.•Sheseemstospend

every

waking

moment/minute/hour

(=allheravailabletime)atthepiano.她似乎把除睡觉以外的所有时间都花在钢琴上了.

外刊例句：Thereareonlysomany

waking

hours

inaday,andsospendingmoretimedoingonethingmeanslesstime

doingsomethingelse.

()一天的工作时间是有限的,若多花了时间做某事那肯定得少花点时间在另外一件事上.

可供替换的表达：wakingtime

学生错误表达：(1)

Awaketime点评：awake只能做表语,不能做定语,这里应该改为waking

time/hours

2-feelathome

词典释义：be/feel/look/at

home

phrase

tobe

feellookrelaxedandcomfortableinaparticularplaceorsituation

Daniellooksveryathomewiththechildren.

Theydideverythingtheycouldtomakemefeelathome.

外刊例句：

Havingfamiliarartworkaroundhelpsyou

feelathome,andmakesyournew

placelookmorelivedinimmediately.

()摆放点熟悉的艺术品于身旁能让你感到舒适,让新环境迅速焕发生机.

替换表达：feelat

ease/comfortable/relaxed

Q：workforacompany和workina

company在这句里有什么区别?A：workforacompany是指"为一家公司工作”,workinacompany是指"在一家公司工作”.

2.小公司扁平化的组织管理架构和有限的员工人数意味着个人的贡献能更快地被管理层认可.小公司灵活的晋升政策也意味着工作成绩突出的员工在职位和薪水上都会提升很快.The

flatorganisationalstructure

(1.扁平化的组织架构)andlimitedpersonnelbaseofsmallfirmsmeanthatcontributionsmadebyanindividualemployeewillberecognizedmore

promptly

(2.快速的)bymanagement.Theflexiblepromotionpoliciesofsmallfirmsalsomeanthat

high-achieving

(3.成绩突出)staffwillbeabletoadvanceswiftlyinrankandsalary.

1-flatorganisationalstructure

词典释义：flatADJ

形容词

(组织或机构)结构的

Organizational

meansrelatingtothestructureofanorganization.

【搭配模式】：ADJn•Thepolicenowrecognisethatbigorganisationalchanges

areneeded.警方现在意识到需要进行大幅度的机构调整.•...the

organizational

structureofBritishtradeunions.英国工会的组织结构

外刊例句：Thesystemishighlydemocratic.Kochhasanunusually

"flat”organisationalstructure

fora

companyitssize.

()科氏集团公司的管理系统极具民主气息,有着像它这种规模的大公司难得的扁平化组织架构.

可供替换的表达：flatmanagementstructure

学生错误表达：(1)

Flatorganization

structure点评：应该改为固定说法flat

organizationalstructure

2-promptly

词典释义：promptlyUK

['prɒmpt.li]

US

['prɑ：mpt-]

adverb

ADVANCED

■quickly,withoutdelay,oratthearrangedtime

迅速地,立即,依照预定时间地•We'llhavetoleavefairly

promptly

(=ontime)if

wewanttocatchthattrain.如果我们要赶那班火车,就得准时出发.•Wetrytoanswerreaders'lettersas

promptly

(=

quickly)aswecan.我们努力尽快答覆读者来信.•Shepromisedshe'dkeepitsecretand

promptly

(=

immediatelyafter)wentandtoldBen!

她答应了要保密,随后却立即告诉了班!

外刊例句："Theunmaskedsecretagentis

promptly

cutloose,"reportedtheGenoesenewspaperIl

SecoloXIXadaylater."Justlikeinthebestspyfilms."()热那亚报纸SecoloXIX于一日后报道"该暴露的特工迅速脱身了,就像那些顶级谍战片所演示的那样.”

替换表达：fast/quickly

3-high-achieving

词典释义：high-achievingadj(ofaperson)dynamic,

ambitious,andsuccessful

外刊例句：Acrossthecountry,collegeswithricher,

high-achieving

studentsarelikelier

toseeprotestscallingforcontroversialspeakerstobedisinvited.()纵观全国,那些学生家境优越且成绩突出的大学更可能遭受学生抗议邀请富有争议性的演讲者到校访问.

替换表达：staffwithdistinguishedperformance/high-flying/outstanding

3.对于想要到其他地方工作或者想要获得海外工作经验的求职者来说,互联网可能是唯一的一个能获取非本地职位信息并且能快速、省钱地提交申请的途径.Forjob-seekerswhowishto

relocate

(1.搬到其他地方)orwouldliketogain

overseasworkexperience(2.海外工作经验),theInternetmaybetheonlywaytofindinformationaboutrelevantnon-localpositionsandsubmitapplicationsspeedilyand

cost-effectively(3.省钱地).

1-relocate

词典释义：relocateUK

[ˌri：.ləʊ'keɪt]

US

[-'loʊ.keɪt]

verb

intransitive

or

transitive

■to(causeapersonorcompanyto)movetoanewplace

(使)搬迁;(使)迁移;重新安置•Thecompanyhas

relocated

to

Liverpool.这间公司迁到了利物浦.•Mycompany

relocated

me

to

Paris.公司把我调到了巴黎.

外刊例句：SirJeremyHeywood,thecabinetsecretary,isplanningto

relocate

atleast750policyexperts

fromacrossWhitehalltofivekeyBrexitdepartmentswithoutanyextracash

tocoverthecostofreplacingthem.

()内阁秘书长海沃德爵士正计划重新安置至少750名于各政府部门及五大关键"脱欧”部门就职的政治专家,并避免为此产生额外花费.

可供替换的表达：movetoadifferentplace

2-overseasworkexperience

词典释义：overseasUK

[ˌəʊ.və'si：z]

US

[ˌoʊ.vɚ-]

UK

[']

adjective

adverb

IMPROVER

■in,fromortoothercountries

在海外(的);从国外来(的);到国外(的)•Weneedtoopenup

overseas

markets.我们需要开拓海外市场.•Therearealotof

overseas

studentsinCambridge.剑桥有许多外国留学生.•Mybrotherisastudent

overseas.我哥哥在外国留学.•Manymorepeoplego/travel/live/work

overseas

these

days.如今有更多的人出国／出国旅游／在国外生活／在国外工作.

work

experiencenoun

uncountable

■theexperiencethatapersonalreadyhasofworking

工作经验•Pleaselistyoureducationalqualificationsandwork

experience.请列出你接受教育的情况及工作经验.■aperiodoftimeinwhichastudenttemporarilyworksfor

anemployertogetexperience

工作实习期•Manyfirmsunderstandthatgivingworkexperienceto

studentsfromcollegesandschoolswillbenefiteveryoneinthelongterm.很多公司都明白让大学生实习从长远来看会使大家都受惠.

外刊例句：A

numberofotherawardsandscholarshipsexisttofund

overseasworkexperience.()有许多其他奖项和奖学金给学生进行海外工作时提供资金援助.

替换表达：somebodyhasexperienceworkingabroad/foreignworkexperience

学生错误表达：(1)

overseaworkexperience点评：oversea应该改为overseas(2)

experience

overseas点评：应该调整为overseas

workexperience(3)

overseasworking

experience点评：workingexperience应该改为workexperience

3-cost-effectively

词典释义：cost-effective

UK

[ˌkɒst.ɪ'fek.tɪv]

US

[ˌkɑ：st-]

adjective

■Ifanactivityiscost-effective,itisgoodvaluefor

theamountofmoneypaid

有成本效益的;物有所值的;合算的,划算的

•Itwouldn'tbe

cost-effective

tobuyanexpensive

newcomputerwhenallyouwanttodoiswordprocessing.只为做文字处理而买台昂贵的新电脑并不划算.

外刊例句：MrAbe’spolicychangeisdesigned,inpart,tohelp

Japanesefirmsachieveeconomiesofscale,sotheycansupplyJapan’sown

arsenalmore

cost-effectively.()安培的政策改变在一定程度上是为了帮助日本企业实现规模经济,从而让他们可以更低廉地充实日本军备.

替换表达：economically/cheaply

Q：老师你好,除了词性的区别,overseas和oversea在使用上有什么区别么?A：oversea和overseas含义是相同的,但是oversea已经很少有人使用了,所以推荐使用overseas

4.筛选报纸、杂志或者其他印刷媒体上的招聘广告会很慢而且让人沮丧.然而只需要点几下鼠标,用户就能获取符合他们个人标准的工作信息,包括所属行业、工作头衔、地理位置以及薪水范畴.Siftingthrough(1.筛选)employmentadvertisementsinnewspapers,magazinesorotherprintmediacanbeslowand

frustrating(2.令人沮丧).Withjustafewmouseclicks,however,userscanobtainjobinformationthat

matchestheirownpersonalizedcriteria(3.符合他们的个人标准),includingtypeofindustry,jobtitle,geographiclocationand

salaryrange(4.薪水范畴).

1-siftthrough

词典释义：sift[sɪft]

verb

transitive

EXAMINE

检查

■tomakeacloseexamination

ofallthepartsofsomethinginordertofindsomethingortoseparatewhat

isusefulfromwhatisnot

仔细检查;筛查•Thepoliceare

sifting

theevidencevery

carefullytotryandfindtheguiltyperson.员警正在非常仔细地检查证据,试图找出那个罪犯.•Aftermyfather'sdeath,Ihadto

sift

through

allhispapers.父亲去世后,我必须查看整理他的所有档.•Thepolicearetryingto

sift

out

the

genuinewarnings

from

allthehoaxcallstheyhavereceived.警方试图从他们接到的各种恶作剧电话中分辨出真正的报案电话.

外刊例句：InJune2016JPMorganChasedeployedsoftwarethatcan

siftthrough

12,000commercial-loan

contractsinseconds,comparedwiththe360,000hoursitusedtotakelawyers

andloanofficerstoreviewthecontracts.

()摩根大通于2016年6月让能于数秒内检阅好12000份贷款合同的软件投入使用,他以前依靠律师和贷款员来处理,得花360000个小时.

替换表达：examine/gothrough

学生错误表达：(1)

Screen点评：screen是指"筛选(雇员);检查(疾病)”,例如：Allwomenover50willbescreenedforbreastcancer.所有50岁以上的妇女都要作乳癌筛检.Screen用在这里不合适.(2)

filter点评：filter是指"(信息)慢慢出现”,例如：Newsfiltereddowntousduringtheday.白天的时候消息慢慢传到了我们这里.

2-frustrating

词典释义：frustrating

1.ADJ-GRADED

能被表示程度的副词或介词词组修饰的形容词

令人灰心的;使人沮丧的;让人懊恼的

Somethingthatis

frustrating

annoysyouormakesyouangrybecauseyoucannotdoanything

abouttheproblemsitcauses.•Thecurrentsituationisvery

frustrating

forus...当前的情形令我们十分灰心.

•...Itisa

frustrating

anddifficulttimeforPat.对帕特来说,这是一个令人沮丧和颇为艰难的时期.

外刊例句：UnfortunatelyRefuge,althoughitclaimstooffer"moral

andpractical”solutions,isaflawedand

frustrating

work.

()避难所虽然声称能提供"符合道义及实际需求”的解决方案,但它实际上漏洞百出且令人沮丧,这实在是不幸.

替换表达：depressing

3-matchtheirownpersonalizedcriteria

词典释义：

criterionUK

[kraɪ'tɪə.ri.ən]

US

[-'tɪr.i-]

(plural

criteria)

noun

countable

ADVANCED

■astandardbywhichyoujudge,decideaboutordealwith

something

(作出评判、决定或处理的)标准,准则•TheHealthServiceshouldnotbejudgedbyfinancial

criteriaalone.公共医疗卫生服务不应仅仅以财务状况的好坏为标准来评判.

外刊例句：Hesays："Myschooltried,butknewverylittle.Iwasted

timeonapplicationstouniversitiesthatIdidn’teven

matchthecriteria

for.

()他说道："我的学校有试过,但还是知之甚少.我浪费时间在申请那我压根就达不到其标准的大学.”

可供替换的表达：meettheirpersonalstandards

学生错误表达：(1)

suitstheir

standards点评：suittheir

standards这种说法非常少见,可以改为meettheirstandards

4-sal