八年级英语上学期 书面表达解题要点及专项训练（解析版）

专题09书面表达解题要点及专项训练应试策略1.审题目：要切中题意。看到考题后，先不要急于动笔，要仔细看清题目要求的内容。在自己的头脑中构思出一个框架或画面，确定短文的中心思想，不要匆匆下笔，看懂题意，根据图画、图表、提纲或短文提供的资料和信息来审题。审题要审格式、体裁、人物关系、故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等。2.圈要点：防止遗漏要点。要点是给分的一个重要因素。为了防止写作过程中遗漏要点，同学们要充分发挥自己的观察力，把情景中给出的各个要点逐条列出。3.列提纲：为写作做好准备。根据文章要点短文的中心思想将主要句型、关键词记下，形成提纲。4.定基调：定出时态、人称、顺序、开头、结尾。5.写全文：写短文时要做到以下六个方面：(1)避免使用汉语式英语，尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。几种句型可交替使用，以避免重复和呆板。(2)多用简单句型，记事、写人一般都不需要复杂的句型。可适当多使用陈述句、一般疑问句、祈使句和感叹句。不用或少用非谓语或情态动词等较复杂的句型。(3)注意语法、句法知识的灵活运用。1）语态、时态要准确无误。 2）主谓语要一致，主语的人称和数要和谓语一致。3）注意人称代词的宾格形式。 4）注意冠词用法，例如：Heisanhoneststudent.中的an不能写成a。5）注意拼写、标点符号和大小写，例如：receive,believe,fourteen,forty,ninth,restaurant等。(4)描写人物时，要生动具体，例如：1）外表特征：tall,short,fat,thin,strong,weak,ordinary-looking等。2）服饰颜色：red,yellow,blue,white,green,brown,black等。3）内心境界：glad,happy,sad,excited,anxious,interested等。4）感情描写：love,like,hate,feel,laugh,cry,smile,shout等。5）动作描写：come,go,get,have,take,bring,fetch等。(5)上下文要连贯。上下文的连贯性也是评分的一条原则，因此同学们应把写好的句子，根据故事情节，事情发生的先后次序（时间或空间），使用一些表示并列、递进等过渡词进行加工整理，使文章连贯、自然、流畅。同学们应注意下面过渡的用法：1）表示并列关系的：and,aswellas,or…2）表示转折关系的：but,yet,however…3）表示时间关系的：when,while,after,before,then,afterthat…4）表示因果关系的：so,therefore,asaresult…5）表示目的的：inorderto,inorderthat,soasto,sothat…6）表示列举的：forexample,suchas…7）表示总结性的：ingeneral,inall,inaword,generallyspeaking…(6)不会表达，另辟蹊径。中考作文给分是以要点和语言准确度而定，不以文采打分。造句越简单准确越好，造复合句容易出错，容易被扣分，阅卷场上有句话：“错误面前人人平等，文采好不加分”。如遇到个别要点表达不出来或难以表达，可采用变通的办法，化难为易，化繁为简。总之，所造句子要正确、得体、符合英语表达习惯。(6)改病句：认真检查，改正错误。中考作文时，由于时间紧、内容多，同学们出错在所难免。因此，改错这一环节必不可少。中考作文评卷是根据要点、语言准确性、上下文的连贯性来给分，根据错误多少来扣分。因此，中考时花几分钟时间用来检查错误显得尤为重要。检查错误应从以下几个方面入手：1）格式是否有错。2）拼写有无错误。3）语言是否用错。4）时态、语态错误。5）标点错误。6）人称是否用错。注意事项书面表达要特别注意书写工整，卷面整洁。阅卷老师工作量大，时间紧，可想而知。书写是否工整，卷面是否整洁与得分高低直接有关。1.（23-24八年级上·浙江台州·期末）新年将至，校刊开展以“人间烟火抚人心，千丝万缕家乡(Hometown)情”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请你结合自己的生活实际，根据以下提示写一篇英语短文投稿。MyLovelyHometownWhatdoyoulikebestaboutyourhometown?(food,place,…)Whatimprovementdoesyourhometownneed?(environment,traffic(交通)...)Whatcanyoudotomakeitabetterplace?…要求：(1)内容包括所有要点，可适当发挥，要求语句通顺、意思连贯。(2)文中不得出现你的真实姓名、校名。(3)词数：80词（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。MyLovelyHometown___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MyLovelyHometownBeijingismyhometown.ItisthecapitalofChina.Therearemanyplacesofinterestinmyhometown.IliketheSummerPalacebestbecauseIthinkitisverybeautiful.AndIlikeBeijingduckbestanditisdelicious.However,Ithinkmyhometownalsoneedstotakemeasurestoimprovethetraffic.Therearesomanycarsontheroadthatwecan’tgotoschoolquickly.What’smore,theairpollutionisbecomingworseandworse,soitistimetodosomething.Iwillaskmyparentsnottodrivecarssooften.IcanridebikestoschoolandIcanalsocleanuptheparksinmyfreetime.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为一般现在时；③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己的家乡，适当增加细节。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍喜欢家乡的什么；第二步，介绍家乡需要改善什么；第三步，介绍你可以做什么让家乡成为一个更好的地方。[亮点词汇]①thecapitalof……的首都②takemeasures采取措施③cleanup打扫[高分句型]①IliketheSummerPalacebestbecauseIthinkitisverybeautiful.(because引导的原因状语从句)②Therearesomanycarsontheroadthatwecan’tgotoschoolquickly.(so...that引导的结果状语从句)2.（22-23八年级上·浙江金华·期末）假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Lucy发来邮件向你征求学好中文的建议。请根据表格内容给她回复邮件。MyadviceReasonslistentoChinesesongsimprovelistening...readaChinesebookeverymonthbuildupvocabulary;learnaboutChineseculture(文化)...…………注意：(1)短文内容必须包括表格中的所有信息，可以适当发挥；(2)文中不得出现真实姓名和校名等相关信息；(3)词数：80~100；短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearLucy,Gladtohearfromyou.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hopeyou’llhavefunlearningChinese.Yours,LiHua【答案】例文DearLucy,Gladtohearfromyou.Inyourlastletter,youaskedmehowtolearnChinesewell.Hereismyadviceforyou.First,youcanlistentoChinesesongssothatyoucanimproveyourlistening.Second,readaChinesebookeverymonth.ItcanbuildupvocabularyandlearnaboutChineseculture.Third,youcanlistenChinesesongsandwatchTVprograms.Youcanlearnmorenewwordsbythem.Lastbutnotleast,toimproveyourspeakingskills,youcancommunicatewithlocalpeople.Hopeyou’llhavefunlearningChinese.Yours,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。[写作步骤]第一步，引出“向对方提出学好中文”的建议；第二步，根据提示材料，提出自己的建议；第三步，表达希望。[亮点词汇]①buildup建立②communicatewith与……沟通③havefundoingsth乐于做某事[高分句型]①Hereismyadviceforyou.（倒装句）②First,youcanlistentoChinesesongssothatyoucanimproveyourlistening（sothat引导目的状语从句）3.（23-24八年级上·山东潍坊·期末）下面是110热线记录下的一份交通事故报告表，请根据表格中提供的信息，用第三人称将所发生的事故写成一篇短文。提示：AccidentAmotorbikehitacar.Themotorbikewasbroken(损坏).Dateandtime6:30pm,October18thPlaceCambridgeRoadReasonRainyWeatherVictims(受害者)Jim(thedriverofthecar):OK,butfeltafraid.Nick(thedriverofthemotorbike):Hisrightarmwashurt.ActionThepolicearrivedat6:35pmandtookNicktothehospitalnearbyat6:50pm.要求：1.语句通顺，语法正确，可适当发挥；2.不少于80词，首句已给出，不计入总词数。TherewasanaccidentonCambridgeRoadat6:30pmonOctober18th.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文TherewasanaccidentonCambridgeRoadat6:30p.m.onOctober18th.Amotorbikehitacarandthemotorbikewasbroken.That’sbecauseitwasarainyday.Asweknow,rainydaysalwaysbringaccidents.JimwasthedriverofthecarandNick,whoserightarmwashurt,wasthedriverofthemotorbike.WhenJimsawthebrokenmotorbikeandpainfulNick,hewasafraid.Fiveminuteslater,thepolicearrivedandtookNicktothehospitalnearbyat6:50p.m.Asastudent,everyoneofusshouldfollowthetrafficrules.Weshouldpayattentiontothetrafficaroundus,especiallyonrainydays.Becarefulwhileyouarewalkingorridingabikeontheroad.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文为一篇记叙文，为材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；③提示：内容要点已给出，注意不要遗漏，以第三人称将所发生的事故写成一篇短文。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍事故发生的时间及地点；第二步，具体介绍事故发生的起因、经过及结果；第三步，呼吁人们遵守交通规则。[亮点词汇]①trafficrules交通规则②payattentionto注意[高分句型]①That’sbecauseitwasarainyday.（because引导的表语从句）②JimwasthedriverofthecarandNick,whoserightarmwashurt,wasthedriverofthemotorbike.（whose引导的定语从句）③WhenJimsawthebrokenmotorbikeandpainfulNick,hewasafraid.（when引导的时间状语从句）4.（23-24八年级上·海南海口·期末）某英文网站正在开展以“我最喜爱的中国城市”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，介绍你最喜爱的一座中国城市的概况（如：地理位置、人口、气候等）、你喜欢它的原因、最佳游览时间以及注意事项等。提示：1.Whatisyourfavouritecitylike?2.Whydoyoulikeit?3.Whenisthebesttimetovisitit?4....注意：1.包括所给提示内容，并适当增加细节；2.语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯；3.词数100左右。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:MyfavouritecityisHaikou.ItisinthesouthofChinawithapopulationofabout2.9million.It’sasmallbutverybeautifulcity.ThebestthingtodoinHaikouistovisitQilou.YoucanknowalotabouthistoryandcultureofHaikouandatthesametime,youcanenjoydeliciouslocalfoodthere.Haikouisagoodplaceforfoods,soyoumusttryseafoodanddifferentkindsofsnackssuchas,Qingbuliang,Hainannoodlesandsoon.NotfarawayfromQilou,youcanseeZhonglouwhichisthelandmarkbuildinginHaikou.IfyouwalkalongtheseasidenearZhonglou,youcanseemodernbuildings:CenturyBridgeandYundongLibrary.TheweatherinHaikouisfineallyearround.Takeyourswimmingclothesbecauseyoucangoswimminginthesea,eveninDecember.SoyoucancometoHaikouanytimeyoulike.WelcometoHaikou.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明自己最喜欢的城市是海口；第二步，具体介绍该城市是什么样的，为什么喜欢它；第三步，介绍最佳参观时间。[亮点词汇]①inthesouthof在……的南部②atthesametime同时③differentkindsof不同种类的[高分句型]①YoucanknowalotabouthistoryandcultureofHaikouandatthesametime,youcanenjoydeliciouslocalfoodthere.（并列句）②IfyouwalkalongtheseasidenearZhonglou,youcanseemodernbuildings:CenturyBridgeandYundongLibrary.（条件状语从句）5.（23-24八年级上·山东临沂·期末）春晚歌曲《我和2035有个约》里唱到：“奇迹不断地涌现，期待那时再相见，我和2035有个约，约在欢呼雀跃那一天，我亲爱的祖国更加美丽和谐，昂扬屹立新世界。”亲爱的同学们，假如你是李华，请以“MyLifein2035”为题畅想未来生活。请从以下几个方面进行陈述。1.Whatwillyoubein2035?2.Wherewillyoulive?3.Whatwillyoudoinyourfreetime?4.Whatwilltheenvironment,cities,schoolsorotherthingswillbelike?要求：1.文中要包括问题所提到的内容，可适当发挥，词数80左右；2.语言通顺，条理清楚，书写规范；3.文中不要出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MyLifein2035

Itisreallyhardtoimaginewhatmylifewillbelikeintheyear2035.ButI’msureitwillbegreatlydifferentfromwhatitisnow.

Iwillbeacomputerprogrammerandliveinaglasshouse.Allmyworkwillbedoneonlineathome.Iwillhavetworobotsandtheywillhelpmewiththehousework.Theywillcookthemeals,dothecleaningandevenbeabletobemydriver.Inmyfreetime,Iwilltravelallovertheworldbyhigh-speedtrainanditwillbefasterthantheplane.Inordertosavepaperandprotecttheenvironment,Iwillonlyreade-books.Therewillbelesspollutionandmoretrees.Thecitieswillbemorebeautiful.Studentswon’tgotoschool.They’llstudyathomeoncomputers.Peoplewillhavemorefreetimebecausetherewillbefewerthingstodo.

Idon’tthinkmylifein2035isadream.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：一般将来时；③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意不要漏写对环境、城市、学校的畅想，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。[写作步骤]第一步，直切主题。通过说明2035年的生活将不同于现在的生活，引出下文对未来生活的具体描写；第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“职业、住所、空闲活动、环境、城市、学校”等方面畅想未来的生活；第三步，书写结语。表示相信自己对未来生活的畅想不会是梦。[亮点词汇]①bedifferentfrom不同于②helpsb.withsth.在某方面帮助某人③beabletodosth.能够做某事④allovertheworld全世界⑤inorderto为了[高分句型]①ButI’msureitwillbegreatlydifferentfromwhatitisnow.（宾语从句）②Peoplewillhavemorefreetimebecausetherewillbefewerthingstodo.（原因状语从句）③Idon’tthinkmylifein2035isnotadream.（宾语从句）6.（23-24八年级上·河北石家庄·期末）自主学习，是学生打开知识大门的金钥匙。学校英文网站正在开展以“自主学习（autonomouslearning）”为主题的征文活动。假如你李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你寒假期间将如何进行自主学习，以及这样做的原因。提示词语：makeatimetable,ask...forhelp,astrongwill,goal,keeptrying提示问题：·Whatwillyoudotobeanautonomouslearnerthiswintervacation?·Whywillyoustartautonomouslearning?注意：1.语法正确，意思连贯，书写规范，要点齐全，可适当发挥；2.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；3.字数80左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。MyAutonomousLearningPlanforWinterVacationIwillstartautonomouslearningthiswintervacation.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:Iwillstartautonomouslearningthiswintervacation.Firstofall,Iwillmakeavacationplanandputituponthewall.Maybeit’sbetterformetostartwithsmalltasks,likereadingEnglishbooksfor30minuteseveryday.Second,Iwillsetatimetableformydailyactivitiestohelpmemakefulluseoftime.What’smore,ifIhavedifficultiesinlearning,IwillaskmyteachersorfriendsforhelponWeChat.Inordertoimprovemylearningefficiency,Iamgoingtostudywithmyfriendstogether.IbelieveIcanbenefitalotfromautonomouslearning.Itwillnotonlyhelpmetodevelopastrongwill,butalsohelpmetoachievemygoals.Iwillkeeptryingtobeasuccessfulautonomouslearner.【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇记叙文，谈论自己在寒假期间将如何进行自主学习。②时态:本文以“一般将来时”为主。③提示:题目要求根据提示描述谈一下自己在寒假期间将如何进行自主学习，并说明原因。写作时，注意不要遗漏要点，并注意适当增加细节，使文章连贯、通顺。[写作步骤]第一步，开篇点题。（已给出）第二步，根据所给要点，依次讲述自己在寒假期间将如何进行自主学习。第三步，对自主学习的原因进行分析说明。[亮点词汇]①firstofall首先②putup张贴③setatimetable制作时间表[高分句型]①Maybeit’sbetterformetostartwithsmalltasks,likereadingEnglishbooksfor30minuteseveryday（it作形式主语）②Second,Iwillsetatimetableformydailyactivitiestohelpmemakefulluseoftime.（不定式作目的状语）7.（23-24八年级上·北京丰台·期末）假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter想和你交流上学路上安全的问题，请你用英语给他回复一封邮件，谈谈你选择何种交通方式上学及原因，并给出安全出行的建议。提示词语：e-scooter（电动自行车）,underground,dangerous,fast提示问题：●Howdoyouoftengotoschool?●Whydoyougotoschoolinthisway?●Whatadvicecanyougivetokeepsafeontheroad?DearPeter,I’mveryhappytosharesomethingaboutkeepingsafeonthewaytoschoolwithyou.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ifyouwanttoknowmore,befreetoemailme.Yours,LiHua【答案】例文DearPeter,I’mveryhappytosharesomethingaboutkeepingsafeonthewaytoschoolwithyou.Myhomeisfarfromtheschool,soIoftengotoschoolbyunderground.Ittakesabout8minutestogettoschool,becauseitisveryfast.Anditisverysafe.Sometimes,mymothertakesmetoschoolbye-scooter.Andit’sconvenient.Wemustobeythetrafficrulestokeepsafeontheroad.Nomatterwhichwayyouchoosetogotoschool,wemustrealizethesetrafficrulesaregoodtokeepourlivessafe.Accordingtothesetrafficrules,wecanliveasafeandhappylife.Ifyouwanttoknowmore,befreetoemailme.Yours,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：根据所给的提示问题完成写作，介绍自己上学采用的交通方式，并给出原因，以及出行建议，可适当增加细节，注意语句通顺，避免语法和拼写错误。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作目的（已给出）；第二步，介绍自己上学采用的交通方式和原因，并给出出行建议；第三步，书写结语（已给出）。[亮点词汇]①befarfrom离……远②byunderground乘地铁③obeythetrafficrules遵守交通规则[高分句型]①Ittakesabout8minutestogettoschool,becauseitisveryfast.（动词不定式作主语；because引导的原因状语从句）②Nomatterwhichwayyouchoosetogotoschool,wemustrealizethesetrafficrulesaregoodtokeepourlivessafe（nomatterwhich引导的让步状语从句）8.（23-24八年级上·北京朝阳·期末）假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Mike要来北京体验中国文化（Chineseculture），他想向你了解来北京旅游的最佳时间、出行方式以及在京期间能体验中国文化的活动。请根据他的问题回复邮件。提示词语：autumn,comfortable,tea,BeijingOpera提示问题：●WhenisthebesttimetovisitBeijing?●HowdoItravelaroundBeijing?●WhatcanIdotoexperienceChinesecultureinBeijing?DearMike,I’mgladthatyouaregoingtovisitBeijingandexperienceChineseculture.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’mlookingforwardtoseeingyouinBeijing.Yours,LiHua【答案】例文DearMike, I’mgladthatyouaregoingtovisitBeijingandexperienceChineseculture.I’dliketogiveyousomeadvicetohelpyoumakeaperfecttravelplan.IthinkthatthebesttimetovisitBeijingisinautumnbecausetheweatheristhemostcomfortableduringthistimeoftheyear.Itisneithertoohotnortoocold.YoucanvisitBeijingbysubwayorbus.IfyouwanttoknowmoreaboutChineseculture,theQianmenareaisworthvisitingbecausetherearealotofthingstodo.YoucandrinkteaandenjoyBeijingOperainLaoSheTeahouse.Youwillalsohaveachancetotastemanydeliciouslocalfoodsthere.ThePalaceMuseumisagoodplacetovisit,too. I’mlookingforwardtoseeingyouinBeijing.Yours,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是电子邮件；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍参观北京的最佳时间；第二步，介绍环游北京的交通方式；第三步，介绍如何在北京体验中国文化。[亮点词汇]①thebesttimetodosth做某事的最佳时间②beworthdoingsth值得做某事③lookforwardto期待[高分句型]IthinkthebesttimetovisitBeijingisinautumnbecausetheweatheristhemostcomfortableduringthistimeoftheyear.（because引导原因状语从句）9.（23-24八年级上·黑龙江绥化·期末）人们学英语的原因和方法各有不同，请以“MyViews(观点)onLearningEnglish”为题写一篇文章，说说你对学习英语的看法。写作要求：1.不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称或学生的真实姓名。2.语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的标题已经给出，不计入总词数。MyViewsonLearningEnglish___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MyViewsonLearningEnglishNowadays,moreandmorepeoplelearnEnglishwithdifferentreasonsandways.Inmyopinion,learningEnglishgivesusawaytoseetheworld.Wecanlearnnotonlyalanguagebutalsoculturesofdifferentcountries.Soit’snecessaryforustolearnEnglish.AndhowcanweimproveourEnglish?Herearetwosuggestions.Firstofall,listentotheteachersandtakenotescarefullyinclass.Ifyouhaveanyquestions,youcanaskyourteacherforhelpafterclass.Moreover,useyourEnglishmoreoften.TherearemanywaystopracticeyourEnglish,suchastalkingwithyourclassmatesandwritingmoviereviewsinEnglish.Asthesayinggoes,“Practicemakesperfect.”【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：本文主要是介绍你对学习英语的看法，适当增加细节。[写作步骤]第一步，明确提出学习英语的好处；第二步，逐条阐述提高英语的方法建议。[亮点词汇]①inmyopinion依我看来②notonly...butalso…不但……而且……③firstofall首先[高分句型]①Soit’snecessaryforustolearnEnglish.（it作形式主语）②Ifyouhaveanyquestions,youcangoandaskyourteacherafterclass.（if引导的条件状语从句）③Asthesayinggoes,“Practicemakesperfect.”（引用谚语）10.（22-23八年级上·陕西渭南·期末）假如你是李华，你喜欢旅行，你下周一要从家乡去北京旅游。你可以乘飞机、长途汽车或火车。请你分析每个交通方式的优缺点，并给出最佳的旅行方式。请根据以上提示写一篇英语短文。（提示信息：from…to…从……到……，themostcomfortable最舒服的，coach长途汽车）要求：1.参考提示信息，可适当发挥；2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；4,词数：不少于70词。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数。）IamLiHuaandIenjoytravelling.I’mgoingtovisitBeijingnextMonday.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文IamLiHuaandIenjoytravelling.I’mgoingtovisitBeijingnextMonday.Therearethreewaystotravel.Icangotherebyplane,coachortrain.Theplaneisthefastestbutitisthemostexpensiveway.Coachistheslowestandtheleastcomfortableway.Buttravellingbytrainischeaperandfasterthantakingthecoach.Atthesametime,travelingbytrainisthemostcomfortableway,becausewecanenjoythesceneryalongtheroad.SoIwillchoosetogotoBeijingbytrain.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍去北京有三种交通方式；第二步，详细描述三种方式的优缺点。[亮点词汇]①theleastcomfortable最不舒服的②Atthesametime同时③choosetodo选择做[高分句型]Atthesametime,travelingbytrainisthemostcomfortableway,becausewecanenjoythesceneryalongtheroad.（原因状语从句）11.（22-23八年级上·河南南阳·期末）假如你是张丽，你校下周要举行主题为“畅想未来城市”的英语演讲比赛，你对此很感兴趣。请你根据以下提示，以Thecityinthefuture为题写一篇演讲稿，为比赛做准备。写作要求：1)文中须包含上图提示的所有信息，可适当发挥；2)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；3)词数90左右。文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：environment环境ThecityinthefutureHello,everybody!Myname’sZhangLi.Ithinkthecityinthefuturewillbebetter.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________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