读后续写+落选后的嫉妒与友谊修复：心灵的觉醒之旅 讲义 高三上学期期中联考英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。“We’vegotthis,”myfriendAlexlaughedloudlyaswesteppedoffthelibrarysteps.“Absolutely,we’vegotthis,”Iagreed,performingalittlevictorydanceonthesidewalkoncethelibrarydoorhadclosedbehindus.Wehadbothbeennominated(提名)fortheYouthExcellenceProgram,anhonorandachancealmosteverystudentwascrazyabout.Thatweekend,AlexandIsatinmylivingroom,carefullycompletingtheprogramapplication.Weeachaimedtoshowwehadallqualitiestheprogramvalued:academicexcellence,leadership,communityservice,integrity,andcivicresponsibility.Idetailedmydevotiontochallengingcourses,whileAlexdescribedhisvolunteerworkatthelocalfoodbank.Weleftnostoneunturned,fullyconfidentinourjointsuccess.Thefollowingday,wesubmittedourapplicationstotheteacherhopefully.Weekspassed.Thenoneday,Ireceivedaletterabouttheproject.Irushedoutoftheclassroomandopenedit.Ifeltastabofsadnessrightinmyheart:mynamewasnotonthelist.Atthatverymoment,IsawAlexcamejoggingover,wavinghisletterwithabeamingsmile.Itwasclearhehadnewsthatcontrastedwithmyown.Withouthesitation,Iturnedawaytoavoidhim.Iknewhewaseagertosharehisjoy.Perhaps,heevenhadplannedtocelebratethegoodnewstogetherwithme.ButIjustcouldn’tfaceit:

theypickedhimbutrefusedme.Howcouldfatebesounjust?Angeranddespairjustblindedme.Thatafternoon,ontheschoolbus,IsataloneandavoidedeyecontactwithAlex.Whenthebusarrivedatmystreet,Ijustjumpedoff,withoutsayinggoodbyeorsmilingtohim.Ihurriedhome,thrusting(塞)theletterintomymom’shands.Iburiedmyfaceinthecushions,sobbinguncontrollablyaswavesofheartachesweptoverme.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:

Fromthatdayon,Ididn’ttalktoAlex._________________________________Paragraph2:

Finally,Momtalkedwithme,sayingAlexwasn’ttheonetoblame.

___________文章大意：“我”和朋友亚历克斯都被提名参加青年卓越计划，周末一起精心准备申请材料，信心满满。几周后“我”收到未入选的通知，而亚历克斯显然入选了，“我”因嫉妒和失落而避开他，独自伤心难过，甚至对亚历克斯产生怨恨，回家后向妈妈哭诉。五处伏笔及回应：伏笔：两人都被提名且精心准备申请，都认为能成功。回应：结果一人入选一人落选，形成巨大反差，导致“我”心理失衡。伏笔：“我”在收到落选通知时看到亚历克斯跑来且面带笑容。回应：这促使“我”因嫉妒而转身避开他，为后续两人关系的破裂埋下伏笔。伏笔：“我”在公交车上独自避开亚历克斯。回应：续写中两人关系持续僵持，直到妈妈介入。伏笔：“我”回家后把信塞给妈妈并哭诉。回应：妈妈因此与“我”谈心，开导“我”，推动故事发展。伏笔：“我”认为命运不公。回应：妈妈的开导让“我”重新审视自己的想法，认识到不应迁怒于他人。续写要点：第一段：从那以后，我继续冷落亚历克斯。在学校里，我看到他和其他同学说笑，心中的怨恨更甚。他试图找我说话，我都冷漠以对，我们之间的友谊仿佛被一道无形的墙隔开，我沉浸在自己的痛苦和嫉妒中无法自拔。第二段：妈妈告诉我，亚历克斯也很关心我，他的入选是他努力的结果，不应把自己的失败归咎于他。我开始反思自己的行为，意识到自己的狭隘。我决定向亚历克斯道歉，重新修复我们的友谊，也明白要学会正视自己的失败。情感线：开始是落选后的极度失落、嫉妒与愤怒，对亚历克斯产生怨恨而冷漠对待，在妈妈开导后，从自我反思中的愧疚到最后想要修复友谊的释然与成长。故事线：“我”落选后与入选的亚历克斯关系破裂，妈妈与“我”谈心，“我”反思并决定修复友谊，重新面对自己的失败。主旨升华句：Truefriendshipshouldwithstandthetestofbothsuccessandfailure.Jealousyisapoisonthatcancorrodethebondoffriendship,butunderstandingcanhealit.Whenfacedwithsetbacks,weshouldlookinwardratherthanlashoutatothers.Successandfailurearebuttwosidesofthesamecoin;it'sourattitudethatmatters.Arealfriendisnotonewhosharesonlyjoysbutalsostandsbyintimesofsorrowandself-reflection.写作示范一：Paragraph1:Fromthatdayon,Ididn’ttalktoAlex.Inschoolhallways,Ipretendednottoseehim.Hewasalwayswithagroupoffriends,laughingandchatting.EachtimeIwitnessedhishappiness,mybitternessgrew.Hetriedtoapproachmeseveraltimes,butIjustwalkedaway,leavinghimwithapuzzledandhurtlook.Myheartwashardenedbyenvyandself-pity,andIwastrappedinmyowndarkworldofdisappointment.Paragraph2:Finally,Momtalkedwithme,sayingAlexwasn’ttheonetoblame.ShepointedoutthatAlexhadhisowneffortsandmerits,andmyfailurewasnothisfault.Hissuccessshouldbeaninspirationratherthanasourceofresentment.Ilistenedandgraduallyrealizedmymistake.IdecidedtoswallowmyprideandtalktoAlex.Ifoundhiminthelibraryandsaidsorry.Heforgavemeinstantly,andwehugged.Ilearnedthatfriendshipismorepreciousthananycompetitionresult.写作示范二：Paragraph1:Fromthatdayon,Ididn’ttalktoAlex.Ichangedmyseatinclasstobeasfarawayfromhimaspossible.Atrecess,Iavoidedtheplacesheusuallywent.Ievenunfollowedhimonsocialmedia.ThemoreIisolatedmyself,themoreIfeltjustifiedinmyanger.Butdeepdown,asmallvoicewastellingmeIwasbeingunfair.However,Ichosetoignoreitandcontinuedmycoldwarwithhim.Paragraph2:Finally,Momtalkedwithme,sayingAlexwasn’ttheonetoblame.ShetoldmethatAlexhadbeenaskingaboutmeandwasworried.Shesaidthatlifeisfullofcompetitionsandrejections,andweshouldhandlethemwithgrace.Ifeltashamed.Thenextday,IwaitedforAlexattheschoolgate.Whenhearrived,Ilookedhimintheeyeandapologized.Hesmiledandsaidheunderstood.Wewalkedintoschooltogether,ourfriendshipstrongerafterthistrial.参考答案Paragraph1:Fromthatdayon,Ididn’ttalktoAlex.Iburiedmyselfinmystudies,tryingtoforgetaboutthewholething.ButeverytimeIsawhimintheclassroomorinthehallway,apangofpainandjealousyshotthroughme.Istoppedparticipatingingroupactivitiesthathewaspartof.Ourmutualfriendsnoticedthechangeandtriedtointervene,butIwastoostubborntolisten.Iconvincedmyselfthathedidn'tcareaboutmeanymorenowthathehadachievedwhatIhadn't.Paragraph2:Finally,