Unit3OntheMoveDevelopingideasWriting课件高中英语

B2U3OnthemoveOnthemoveicehockey冰球shorttrackspeedskating短道速滑figureskating花样滑冰freestyleskiingskijumping跳台滑雪biathlon现代冬季两项01SportsinWinterOlympicsP3402Readthenoticeandpostandanswerthequestions.P341.Whatkindofstoriesdoesthewebsitewant?2.Whyisthewebsitelookingforstories?3.WhatinformationisincludedinNick’sstory?Thewebsitewantssportslovers'storiesfromallovertheworld.Becauseitwantstoinspireitsreaders.TheinformationincludedinNick’sstoryis:whatkindofsportNickplays,howhegotstartedwiththesport,howhefeltaboutthesport,whathe’sdonetoimprove,andwhathehopestoachieveinthefuture.02Thinkofyourownsportsstoryandmakenotes.P34icehockeyBeingpersuadedbyhisteacher.Loveit!/Fellproud.Practicingwithhislocalteammateseveryevening.Hisultimategoalistobeanicehockyteacherandhelppeoplelearnhocky.本文的语篇类型属于记叙文narration,介绍了作者（Nick）从不会滑冰到加入冰球队并志在夺取全国比赛冠军的故事。02Thinkofyourownsportsstoryandmakenotes.P34Writer’sfeelingHowtostartthesportHowtoimproveHopetoachieveWhatcontributestoNick’ssuccessinhisstory?bravery“Iwasterrifiedofwalkingorskatingonice.”others’help“Myteacherwasgreatandhepersuadedmetotryicehockey.”hardwork“Iwassoonpractisingwithmylocalteamalmosteveryevening.”love“Ilovedit.”teamworkIwassoproudwhenmyteamwontheicehockeycompetition....practisingwithmylocalteam.Wearenowtrainingfornationalcompetitions.02Thinkofyourownsportsstoryandmakenotes.P3402Howtowriteapersonalstories?P3402Nowwriteyourownsportsstory.Usetheexpressionsintheboxtohelpyou.P34作者在文章中先给出自己对所喜爱的运动的感受，然后时间后退到三年前记述如何一步步取得进步。这种记述方式属于倒叙法。倒叙flashback:tostartfromthemiddleoreventheendofthestorywiththeeventthatismostimportantormostlikelytoarousethereader’sinterest,andthengobacktothebeginning.故事重点在写事，而不在写人。但是，故事应以人为主题，讲述发生在人物身上的感人故事。故事应具有激励性，充满正能量，给人以启发，催人奋进，积极向上。语言具有趣味性，耐人寻味，同时，精炼、言简意赅。03Writeasportsstory.P341.文体类型：写一个关于体育运动的故事，属于记叙文范畴。2.要点内容：(1)开始此项运动的原因;(2)对此项运动的感受;(3)将来的打算和目标。[常用词块]1．goforanouting去远足2．inhighspirits情绪高涨3．aclosegame势均力敌的比赛4．goallout全力以赴5．breaktherecord打破记录6．buildupone'sbody增强某人的体质03Writeasportsstory.P34关于体育运动的记叙文文体首段常用句式:Therearemanykindsofinterestingsports,suchasbasketball,football,swimmingandrunning...butthemostIlikeis...WhenIwasalittlechild,myfathertookmeto...Ihavebeena...sinceIwasoldenoughto...That’swhywhen...presentedmewiththeideaofjoining...Idecidedto...关于体育运动的记叙文文体中段常用句式:Ineverthought...Iwillfallinlovewith...AtfirstIonlyregarded...asahobbytoenhancemyphysicalfitness.Then,Ifoundit’sreallyfunandcoolwhenI...SometimesIjustwanttogiveup,butmyfriendsencouragemetocarryon,thenIfeelalotofsatisfaction.关于体育运动的记叙文文体尾段常用句式:Iwassohappyformyachievement,anditprovedthathardworkpaidoff.Notonlybecauseitmakesme...,butalsofor...ithasbrought.Doingphysicalexercisemakesmestrongerandhealthier.That’smypersonalexperience.请用英语写一篇自己所经历的体育故事。内容要点如下：1.我是山东人。2.学校游泳队队员。3.从小就喜欢游泳，在学校里认真学习，放学后认真训练；经过努力取得了一系列的成绩。4.我认为……注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。03Writeasportsstory.第一步：布局谋篇很关键►审题1.确定体裁：本文为记叙文；2.确定中心人称：本文主要为____________；3.确定主题时态：______________________________。►构思第一部分：简要介绍自己。第二部分：________________。第三部分：对体育运动的认识和对未来的期许。

第一人称一般现在时或过去时自己的故事03Writeasportsstory.第二步：核心词汇想周全

1.__________________是……的一员2.__________________赢得一枚金牌3.__________________成为冠军4.__________________获得巨大成就5.__________________失去信心6.__________________建议某人做某事

amemberof...winagoldmedalbecomeachampiongetgreatachievementsloseheartadvisesbtodosth03Writeasportsstory.第三步：由词扩句雏形现1.Iam_________________________________.我是学校游泳队的队员。2.I__________________whenIwasasmallboy.我小的时候喜欢游泳。3.Ihavegot___________________.我已经取得了巨大成就。4.Inever______________.我从来不放弃训练。5.I_______________.我遇到困难。6.Inever_________.我从来不灰心丧气。

amemberofschoolswimmingteamlovedswimminggreatachievementsgiveuptrainingmeetdifficultiesloseheart03Writeasportsstory.第四步：句型升级造亮点

1.将句2改成一个含有since状语从句的句子。__________________________________________________________________2.将句3和句4合并成含有though引导让步状语从句的句子。__________________________________________________________________3.将句5和句6合并成主从复合句。__________________________________________________________________IhavebeenlovingswimmingsinceIwasasmallboy.ThoughIhavegotgreatachievements，Inevergiveuptraining.WheneverImeetdifficulties，Ineverloseheart.03Writeasportsstory.第五步：过渡衔接连成篇

IamfromShandong，amemberoftheschoolswimmingteam.Iam198cminheight.IhavebeenlovingswimmingsinceIwasasmallboy.At7Ibecameamemberoftheschoolswimmingteam.Fiveyearslater，IwonagoldmedalattheCountySwimmingChampionshipandbecameachampionattheNationalSwimmingChampionshipslater.ThoughIhavegotgreatachievements，Inevergiveuptraining.OnedayIinjuredmyarmintraining，someoneadvisedmetoseeadoctor，butIrefused.WheneverImeetdifficulties，Ineverloseheart.Swimmingnotonlybuildsmybodybutalsoshapesmydeterminedcharacter.Idreamofbecominganationalswimmerandtakingpartintheinternationalswimmingeventsonbehalfofourcountry.03Writeasportsstory.04Writeafavoritesport.1.oneofthebestathletesinourcountry2.Heisgoodat...3.Heiseventhemostcapable...intheworld.4.keepthebestrecordof...untilnow.5.Ifindmyselffullofpassioninmyheart.6.Heisthebestexampleofmakingeveryefforttodevelophissportcareerandbreaksomanyrecords.7.Thisspiritisworthytobelearnedbyallofus.8.Withthisambition，hecoulddefeatanydifficulties.9.Facingdifficulties，heneverlosesheart.10.makemoreprogress...【增分表达】MyfavouritesportWhenitcomestomyfavouritesport,whatIwouldliketosayisthatIlikeswimmingbest.IwasoftentakentothepooltopracticeswimmingbymymotherwhenIwasyounger.WheneverIsawmymotherdiveintotheswimmingpool,Icouldn’thelpfollowingherbravely.Gradually,Iwasnotafraidofwaterandlaterbecameinterestedinswimming.Ilikeitnotonlybecauseitmakesmehealthierandstronger,butalsofortheconfidenceandsenseofachievementithasbrought.It’stimetochooseyourownfavouritesports!Makeexerciseapartofyourlifeandstayhealthy!04Writeafavoritesport.I’macrayfootballfanandlikeplayingfootballverymuch.I’vefalleninlovewithfootballsincethefirsttimeIbegantoplayitwithmyclassmatesatseniorschool.Inmyopinion,thefootballgameisfullofexcitementandfreedom.Theplaygroundisbigenoughforyoutokickfreely,evenyoucanuseallyourstrength.IfeelIamreallymyselfontheplayground.Ioftenplayeditwithmyclassmatesontheplaygroundafterclass.Afteragame,everytimeIfeltdynamicandenergetic.Atcollege,Igoonenjoyingthedayswithfootball.Myfootballteamwonthechampiontwice.ThememoryissovaluablethatIoftenmissthedaysandfootballfellows.Aftergraduatingfromcollege,Iwanttobeafootballteacherandteachchildrenhowtoplayfootballbecausefootballbringshappinesstome.Ofcourse,notonlyhappiness,footballalsobringsothermuchtome.04Writeafavoritesport.

I’vebeenasportsnutsinceIwasoldenoughtoholdaball.That’swhywhenmyPEteacherpresentedmewiththeideaofjoiningtheswimmingteamIdecidedtogiveitashotandchallengemyselfabitmore.SoIstartedgoingtoswimmingpracticelastJune.AtfirstIonlyregardedswimmingasahobbytoenhancemyphysicalfitness.ButsoonIfoundIfellinlovewithit.Then,lastweek,Ihadmyfirstswimmingcompetition,inthe100mbreaststroke.Standingtallattheheadofthelanemademefeelbothnervousandexcited.Afterthesoundofthewhistle,Idivedinandbegantoswimwithallmystrength!Finally,Icameinthirdplace.Iwassohappyformyachievement,anditprovedthathardworkpaysoff.Iwillkeeponswimming,perhapsfortherestofmylife.Notonlybecauseitmakesmehealthierandstronger,butalsofortheconfidenceandsenseofachievementithasbrought.04Writeafavoritesport.05小作文

假设你是李华,你的外国朋友Jim对你校的学生活动很感兴趣。近期你校将举行趣味运动会,请你写一封信邀请他参加。内容如下:1.写信目的;2.介绍趣味运动会,包括:运动会举行的目的、时间、地点;此次运动会的项目,如滚轮胎,猜字谜等;注意事项;3.真诚邀请。参考词汇:tyre-pushing滚轮胎。05小作文★精彩开头Recentlyourschoolheldabasketballgamebetweenteachersandstudentstoimprovetherelationshipbetweenus.最近我们学校举办了一场师生篮球赛，目的是改善师生关系。Inordertoencouragethestudentstotakeoutdoorexercise，ourschoolorganizedamountain­climbingonApril10.为了鼓励同学们参加户外锻炼，我们学校于4月10日组织了一次爬山活动。★丰满主体Bathedinthesunshine，wejumpedandcheeredwithjoy.沐浴在阳光里，我们高兴得欢呼雀跃。Themomentwewonthegame，anoldsayinghitmymind—Nopains，nogains.我们一赢得比赛，我就想到了一句古老的谚语“不劳则无获”。Everyoneo