Unit4NaturalDisastersRevisionContinuationWriting课件高中英语人教版

人教版Book1Unit4RevisonAccumulatingCorpusEnhancingContinunationWritingSkillsTeachingobjectives1.TobuildacomprehensivecorpusofEnglishlanguagematerialsthatstudentscandrawuponforinspirationandreferenceintheirwriting;2.Todevelopstudents'abilitytoidentifyandutilizeavarietyoflinguisticfeatures,suchasvocabulary,syntax,andstyle,fromthecollectedcorpustoenhancetheirwriting;3.Toimprovestudents'writingfluencyandcoherencebyintegratingelementsfromthecorpusintotheirownwriting.RevisionVocabularyExpansion1.diev．→______

adj.临终的；垂死的→______

adj.死的→________adj.致命的→______

n．死;死亡2.shockn．震惊;令人震惊的事;休克vt.

(使)震惊→__________

adj.令人震惊的→_________adj.感到震惊的3.wiseadj.明智的→_________

adj.不明智的→_________

adv.明智地→_________

n．智慧；才智4._______

vi.生存；存活vt.幸存；艰难度过→________

n．幸存；生还→_________

n．幸存者；生还者5.________

vt.遭受；蒙受vi.(因疾病、痛苦、悲伤等)受苦→_________

n．受难；苦楚→________

n．患难者；患病者6.longadj.→________

n．长；长度→_________

v．(使)变长7.________

vt.&vi.复活；(使)苏醒→_________n．振兴；复苏8.________v．浮现,出现→_________

adj.新兴的;突现的;紧急的

→___________突发事件，紧急情况dyingdeaddeadlydeathshockingshockedunwisewiselywisdomsurvivesurvivalsurvivorsuffersufferingsuffererlengthlengthenreviverevivalemergeemergentemergency词形变化填空1.Peoplewere_________toseethatthelittlegirlwasoftenbeatenbyherstepmother.

The__________newsshockedallthepeoplearound.

(shock)2.Wemeasuredthe________oftheareaandfounditwasjustthreemeterslongandthus,weneededto__________it.

(length)3.Masteringsomebasicskillswouldgreatlyincreaseyourchancesof_________.Thankstotheswimmingskills，heandhisfriendsucceededin_________theterriblefloodandtheyweretheonlytwo_________.(survive)4.The________diseasehasaffectedmanypeopleandhascausedatleast30________uptonow.

(dead)5.Whenan__________incidentemerges，youcanimmediatelycallthe___________call.

(emerge)6.Thewisemanhasmuch_________andcanhandlevariousmatters_________.(wise)shockedshocking

length

lengthensurvivalsurvivingsurvivorsdeadlydeathsemergentemergencywisdomwisely动词去

e+al构成名词；名词词缀

-alrevive→revival振兴；复兴arrive→

arrivalsurvive→

surviavalremove→removalapprove→approval移走；清除赞成；批准SentencePatternsReview1.得知你由于感染了重病已经返回爱尔兰，我对此感到非常难过。(2020·浙江)

，Iamterriblysorryaboutit.

Learning

that

you

have

returned

to

Ireland

because

you

are

affected

with

a

severe

illness2.Shecouldn'tstandthepain，_________________________________________________________.

(动作描写)

她忍受不了疼痛，以至于用手捂住脸不由自主地抽噎起来。sothatsheburiedherfaceinherhandsandsobbeduncontrollably3.痛苦和绝望击垮了我，我倒在门阶上哭泣。(无灵主语)

,

andIfellsobbingonthedoorstep.Suffering

and

despair

defeated

me________________________________________________________________________________________(brighten).完成早餐后，双胞胎开心起来。Thetwinshavingfinishedbreakfast,theirfacesbrightenedjoy/delight;sadness/sorrow;anger/rage;despair/hopelessness;fear/scare/horror/fright;surprise/astonishment4.生活中总有一些起起伏伏，但是正是苦难让我们更加坚强。

(主旨升华)5.俗话说，成功与失败如影随形。(主旨升华)Asthesayinggoes,successandfailurealwaysgohandinhand.Therearealwayssomeupsanddownsinourlives，butitisthesufferingthatmakesusstronger.

Fivesentencepatterns

提升续写品质的五大句式[句型公式1]

Doing...,主语＋didsth；主语＋didsth,doing...1.

Hugging

meinhiswarmestarms,headded,“Asexpected,youreallycanmakeagoodshot！”

(2023·新高考)2.Davidstoodfirmlyinhisposition,

ignoringanythingaround.

(2022·新高考)[练透句式]1.听到我的好消息，老师衷心地祝贺我。(2023·新高考)2.看到他脸上的微笑，我再也忍不住眼泪了。(2023·新高考)3.她深深地叹了口气，双手掩面，开始绝望地抽泣起来。(情绪描写)Hearingmygreatnews,myteachercongratulatedmesincerely.Seeinghissmileonface,Icouldnolongerholdbackmytears.Shesigheddeeply,buryingherfaceinherhands,andbegan

tosobindespair.[句型公式2]主语＋didsth,done...;Done...,主语＋didsth1.我被他的话打动了，于是我决定在写作上取得更多的进步，以达到他的期望。

(2023·新高考)

2.处在这种竞争的气氛中，他精神高涨，突然感到一种力量。

(2022·新高考)

Struckbyhiswords,Imadeupmymindtomakemoreprogressinwritingsoastoliveuptohisexpectations.

Bathedinacompetitiveatmosphere,hewasinhighspiritsandfeltasuddenstrengthinsidehim.[练透句式]1.由于埋头于功课，他对外面的事情一无所知。2.我被他的精神感动了，我跟着他，一路上为他加油。(2022新高考)3.受热情和鼓励的鼓舞，大卫兴高采烈地加快了步伐。(2022新高考)Buried

in

his

lessons,heknewnothingabouttheoutsideworld.Movedbyhisspirit,Ifollowedhimandcheeredhimupalongtheway.

Inspiredbytheenthusiasmandencouragement,Davidquickenedhispaceinhighspirits.[句型公式3]Havingdone...,主语＋didsth

主语＋didsth,havingdone...1.知道了整个故事后，他给了我一个微笑，并告诉了我他以前在丛林里的经历。2.收到乔的消息后，查理和简扭着身子，紧紧地抓住绳子。Having

knownthewholestory,hegavemeasmileandtoldmehisformerexperiencesinjungle.HavingreceivedJoe'smessage,CharlieandJanetwistedtheirfiguresandclutchedtheropetightly.[练透句式]1.我们在学校门口会合后，一大早就乘出租车去了那里。2.在被说服改变态度之后，我终于做出承诺要好好学习。Havinggatheredattheschoolgate,wetookataxithereearlyinthemorning.Havingbeenpersuadedtochangemyattitude,Ifinallymadeacommitmenttostudyinghard.[句型公式4]房屋已倒,学校被毁,那些遭受洪水侵袭的学生们急需帮助。

Homeslostandschoolsruined,thosestudents

whoaresufferingfromfloodareindesperateneedofhelp.独立主格结构：

doingdone

n./pron.＋todoadj.adv.inhishand状语[练透句式

]1.他低着头，肩膀颤抖着，显然是在努力掩饰自己的失望。2.他慢慢抬起垂下的头，泪水溢满了眼睛。Headdown

andshoulderstrembling

,obviously,hewastryinghardtohidehisdisappointment.Heslowlyraisedhisdroppinghead,tearsfillinghiseyes.[句型公式5]

with复合结构

todo

doingdonewith＋n./pron.＋

adj.

adv.

inhishand

心中充满激情，我发表了一个简短的演讲。

(2023新高考)Withafierymoodinmyheart,Ideliveredmyshortspeech.[练透句式

]1.大卫脸上挂着悲伤的表情，一动不动无助地坐着，头无力地低着。

(2022·新高考)2.我心里突然有一种强烈的感情，我笑了回去。Withasorrowfulexpressionhangingonhisface,Davidsataroundmotionlesslyandhelplessly,hisheaddroopingpowerlessly.Withasuddenstrongemotionalfeelinginmyheart,Ismiledback.Practicemakesperfect.

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