读后续写+巧克力的诱惑：在犯错边缘的觉醒+讲义 高三上学期第一次诊断性测试英语试题

阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Ihavealwaysbeenfondofallsortsofchocolates,especiallybitterbakingchocolate.Mymotherhadpurchasedabarofit,andsomehow,Icouldn’tgetitoutofmymind.Iwasassistingmyfatheronthefarm.Justthen,anideastruckme.Icouldcutoffachunk（厚块）ofthechocolate.Mymotherwouldsurelynoticeit,butbeforeshediscoveredwhohaddoneit,IcouldadmitthatIhadtakenit.Probably,Imightnotevenreceiveaspanking（打屁股）.Iwaiteduntilmymotherwentouttofeedthechickens.Then,ItoldmyfatherthatIwouldgoinsideforsomewater.ItookdownthebarandwasabouttocutitwhenIheardmymothercomingback.Ireactedswiftly,slippingthechocolateintomypocketandrunningout.Beforereturningtohelpmyfather,Iwenttothebarnandhidthechocolatethere.Onmywayout,Icalmeddownabitandcouldthinkmoreclearly.ItoldmyselfthatIhadn’tactuallystolentheentirebarofchocolatebecauseIonlyintendedtotakeasmallpiece.IfIputthewholebarback,Iwouldn’thavedoneanythingwrong.Ialmostdecidedtoputitallback.Butjustthinkingaboutthatchocolatemademytonguealmosttasteitssmoothbitterness.IstartedthinkingthatifIslicedabouthalfaninchofftheendwithasharpknife,mymothermightnevernoticeit.Suddenly,Irememberedwhatmyfatherhadsaidonce—someofthefamilymoneywasminebecauseIhadhelpedearnit.Whywouldn’titbeokaytothinkthatthebarofchocolatehadbeenboughtwithmyownmoney?Thatseemedtofixeverything.1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。ThatnightIcouldn’tsleep,wonderinghowIcouldmakeitsecretly.Bymoonlight,justasIwasabouttocutit,myfathersaid,“Son!”文章大意：“我”痴迷于苦巧克力，母亲买了一块后，“我”在农场帮父亲干活时起了偷切一块的念头。趁母亲喂鸡，“我”取下巧克力欲切时母亲返回，“我”匆忙藏入口袋并转藏于谷仓。之后“我”不断给自己找借口，一会儿想放回整块，一会儿又想切一小半，还认为自己帮家里挣钱有权享用，内心在欲望与道德间挣扎。五处伏笔及续写回应：伏笔1：母亲买了苦巧克力且“我”一直惦记，续写中巧克力成为“我”内心纠结与犯错的诱因。伏笔2：“我”趁母亲喂鸡行动，续写中因母亲突然回来使“我”的偷切计划受阻并开始一系列掩饰行为。伏笔3：“我”把巧克力藏在谷仓，续写中谷仓成为“我”后续继续实施错误计划的地点以及被父亲发现的场景。伏笔4：“我”打算用刀偷切巧克力，续写中在谷仓准备用刀切割时被父亲撞见。伏笔5：“我”认为自己帮家里挣钱有权享用巧克力，续写中父亲针对此观念对“我”进行教育引导。续写要点：

第一段：夜晚，“我”躺在床上，满脑子都是巧克力的美味，计划着等家人都熟睡后偷偷溜去谷仓。想象着巧克力在舌尖融化的美妙感觉，心中既兴奋又害怕，兴奋于能吃到巧克力，害怕被发现。时间一点点过去，终于听到家人均匀的呼吸声，“我”轻手轻脚地起身，向谷仓走去。

第二段：来到谷仓，借着月光找到巧克力，“我”颤抖着拿出小刀。就在刀快要碰到巧克力时，父亲的声音突然响起。父亲看着我，眼中满是失望，他说劳动所得应用于正当之处，偷窃的行为不可取。“我”听后，泪水夺眶而出，意识到自己差点犯下大错。情感线：起初是对巧克力强烈的渴望与期待，夹杂着偷拿的紧张不安。在夜晚准备行动时兴奋与害怕交织。被父亲发现后则是懊悔与羞愧。

故事线：因对巧克力的欲望而计划偷切，夜晚付诸行动，在即将成功偷切时被父亲制止并被教导，从而认识到错误。主旨升华句（英文）：Honestyisthebestpolicy.Weshouldalwaysbetruthfulandresistthetemptationofdishonesty.Oneshouldearnthingsthroughpropermeansratherthanbystealingorcheating.It'sthefoundationofagoodcharacter.Temptationoftenleadsusastray,butourmoralcompassshouldguideusbacktotherightpath.Whenfacingdesires,wemustupholdourintegrityandnotsacrificeourprinciplesformomentarypleasures.Thechoiceswemakeinthefaceoftemptationdefineourtrueselvesandshapeourmoralidentity.写作示范一：ThatnightIcouldn’tsleep,wonderinghowIcouldmakeitsecretly.Thethoughtofthatchocolatebarhauntedme.Itossedandturnedinbed,picturingmyselfslicingoffapieceundetected.Everycreakofthehousemademejump,fearingsomeonehaddiscoveredmyplan.Asthenightworeon,Ifinallymusteredthecourage.Islippedoutofbed,tiptoedthroughthequiethouse,andmademywaytothebarn.Bymoonlight,justasIwasabouttocutit,myfathersaid,“Son!”Hisvoicemademefreeze.Hewalkedoverandgentlytookthechocolateandtheknifefrommyhands.HethenexplainedthatwhileIhadcontributedtothefamily,itdidn'tgivemetherighttotakewhatwasn'tminewithoutpermission.Hiswordshitmehard.IrealizedIhadbeensoblindedbymydesirethatIalmostlostmyintegrity.Iapologized,andfromthatmomenton,IknewIwouldalwaysstrivetobehonest,nomatterhowstrongthetemptation.写作示范二：ThatnightIcouldn’tsleep,wonderinghowIcouldmakeitsecretly.Theimageofthechocolatewaslikeamagnetinmymind.Ilayawake,calculatingtheperfecttimetosneaktothebarn.Myheartracedatthethoughtofgettingcaught,butthecravingwasoverpowering.WhenIwassureeveryonewasasleep,Icreptdownstairsandoutintothechillynightair.Bymoonlight,justasIwasabouttocutit,myfathersaid,“Son!”Ifeltarushofpanicandshame.Myfatherlookedatmewithasolemnexpression.Hetoldmethatstealing,evenasmallpieceofchocolate,wasaslipperyslope.Weshouldbeproudofourworkandearnourrewardsfairly.Hiswordswerelikeawake-upcall.IfelttearswellingupasIunderstoodtheerrorofmyways.Ipromisedmyselfnevertoletgreedovertakemyconscienceagainandtoalwaysabidebytheprinciplesofhonestyandhardwork.【参考范文：】ThatnightIcouldn’tsleep,wonderinghowIcouldmakeitsecretly.ScaredasIwas,Istillgotupandslippedoutintotheyardsecretlywithaknifeinmypocket.ThenIworkedupthecouragetomoveintothebarnandcouldn’twaittotakeoutthechocolateimmediately,withexcitementinmyeyesandnervousness.Bythelightofthemoon,Icautiouslyopenedthepackingpaper,thedelicious