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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。“ljustwantanormalbirthdayparty,"AmytoldBaileyastheywalkedhomefromschool.Amy'sparentslovedtheenvironment,andAmyhappenedtobebornonEarthDay,soalherpartieshadanEarthDaytheme.Amycouldn'tforgetthe“Throw-OutBlowout"whensheturnedseven.Herfriendscomingtothepartyhelpedoutatheryardsaleanddonatedthemoneytocharity.Andwhensheturnedeight,itwasa“TreeSpree",plantingmaples.Lastyear,"ThePrintSprint"!Theycollectednewspaperstorecycle.SoAmyfirmlydecidedtoplanherownpartythisyear.Oneday,asAmyloadedthedishwasher,sheclearedherthroat."I'dliketogotoMazeCraze(疯狂迷宫)instead."“Really?"saidDad,surprised."lguesswecouldtrythat,"saidMom.Withherparents'approval,Amycouldn'twaitforherbirthdayandinvitedlotsofherclosefriends.Theyexpectedthattheywouldhavesomuchfunandwouldn'thavetothinkonebitabouttheEarth.ThefollowingweekendwasrightAmy'sbirthday.AmyandotherfriendsallgatheredintheparkinglotoutsideMazeCraze.Amyappreciatedtheircomingandexcitedlyshoutedout"Nomoreshovels(铲子)!Nocollectingrecyclables!Nothingearthyaboutit!"注意:(1)词数应为120个左右;(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1.Butwhentheytookstepsforward,plasticbottlesrolledacrosstheground.Paragraph2.Arrivinghome,Amycouldn'twaittosharethedaywithherparents.文章大意Amy厌倦了每年生日派对都围绕地球日主题,她希望今年能有一个正常的派对。过去她的生日派对分别有庭院旧货出售捐赠慈善的“Throw-OutBlowout”、种植枫树的“TreeSpree”和收集报纸回收的“ThePrintSprint”等。今年在得到父母同意后,她计划在MazeCraze举办派对,邀请了很多朋友,期待能尽情玩乐,不再与环保相关。然而在到达MazeCraze时,却发现地上满是垃圾,这与她想象中的干净环境不同。伏笔与续写回应伏笔:Amy一直强调想要摆脱地球日主题派对,这与后面在MazeCraze遇到垃圾形成对比。续写中可以通过Amy对垃圾场景的反应以及回家后的感悟来回应这一伏笔。续写要点第一段情感线:从兴奋期待转为失望和些许内疚。故事线:描述朋友们看到满地垃圾后的反应,Amy虽然试图忽略但内心已有触动,带领朋友们进入迷宫,然而垃圾问题依然影响着大家的心情。第二段情感线:从不安到有所领悟和释然。故事线:Amy回家后和父母分享了派对中的垃圾问题,意识到环保责任无处不在,即使想摆脱环保主题派对,也无法摆脱保护环境的责任。主旨升华句"Wecan'tescapefromourresponsibilitytoprotecttheenvironmentnomatterwhereweare.""Theenvironmentisalwaysaroundus,andsoisourdutytokeepitclean.""Evenwhenwetrytoavoidit,thecallofenvironmentalprotectionwillalwaysbethere.""Ourconnectionwiththeenvironmentcan'tbeseveredbyourwilltobefreefromit.""Nomatterwhatwedo,theresponsibilityofsafeguardingtheenvironmentfollowsus."写作示范一Paragraph1Butwhentheytookstepsforward,plasticbottlesrolledacrosstheground.Thesightofthetrashwasshocking.Amy'sfriendsstartedcomplaining,andtheirexcitedchatterdieddown.Amy'sfaceflushedwithembarrassment.Shehadbeensoeagertogetawayfromanythingrelatedtoenvironmentalclean-up,butnowitseemedthattheenvironmentwasdemandingherattentionevenhere.Shequicklybentdowntopickupafewbottles,mutteringanapology.Then,tryingtoregainthefestivemood,shesaid,"Comeon,guys.Let'snotletthisspoilourfun."Buttheshadowofthemesslingeredastheyenteredthemaze.Paragraph2Arrivinghome,Amycouldn'twaittosharethedaywithherparents.AsshetoldthemaboutthetrashoutsideMazeCraze,hereyesfilledwithanewunderstanding."IthoughtIcouldjustforgetabouttheenvironmentforoneday,butitwouldn'tletme,"shesaid.Herparentsnodded,andhermothersaid,"Honey,it'sapartofourlives.Wecan'tturnablindeye."Amyrealizedthatherdesireforanormalpartydidn'tmeanshecouldabandonherenvironmentalresponsibility.Thisbirthdaytaughtherthattheenvironmentwasalwaysinherhands.写作示范二Paragraph1Butwhentheytookstepsforward,plasticbottlesrolledacrosstheground.Therewerealsocolorfulplasticbagsandemptysnackboxes,makingtheplacelooklikeadump.Amy'sheartsank.Herfriendslookedaroundindisbelief.Shehadpromisedthemacarefreedaywithoutanyenvironmentalconcerns,butthiswasfarfromwhatshehadexpected.Afriendjoked,"Lookslikewecan'tescapeEarthDayafterall."Amyforcedasmile,butinsideshefeltapangofguilt.Theymadetheirwaythroughthemesstowardsthemazeentrance,thejoyofthepartydampenedbythelitter.Paragraph2Arrivinghome,Amycouldn'twaittosharethedaywithherparents.Sherecountedthesceneofthetrash-filledarea."Ithoughthavingadifferentpartywouldbeeasy,buttheenvironment'sproblemfoundme,"shesaid.Herfatherreplied,"Itshowsthatwearealwayspartoftheenvironment.Wecan'tseparatefromit."Amyunderstoodthatshehadbeenwrongtothinkshecouldavoidenvironmentalissues.Thisbirthdaywasareminderthatprotectingtheenvironmentwasaninescapableandvitalpartofherlife,andshewouldembraceitwithnewdetermination.参考答案Paragraph1.Butwhentheytookstepsforward,plasticbottlesrolledacrosstheground.Atthesightofthem,Amycouldn'tpretendtherewasnothinghappening,andespeciallywithbreezeoccasionallysweeping,thebottlesrattledonthegroundwhichmadetheirexcitementfadeaway.Withoutanyhesitation,theyimmediatelydevotedthemselvestocleaningthegroundbycollectingtheseplasticbottlestogether.Notforalongtime,theparkinglotwaschangedintoanewplacewherenomoretrashescouldbespotted.SeeingthecleanenvironmenttheyarerelievedtorashtoMazeCrazetoenjoythehappybirthdaytime.(4句)Paragraph2home,Amycouldn'twaittosharethedaywithherArrivingparents.Paragraph2.Arr
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