深圳2020-2024年中考英语真题专题07 书面表达（解析版）

深圳2020-2024年中考英语真题专题07书面表达-教师【五年考情回顾】年份体裁主题内容2024年演讲稿假如你是李华，你的作品在“theBeautyofNature”主题摄影展上获得了一等奖。你的英语老师邀请你在“英语一分钟演讲”上给同学们做分享。2022年演讲稿假定你是李华，你和同学们拍了一个毕业活动视频，打算做成视频日志（vlog），参加主题为“青春飞扬”的国际中学生vlog作品展。请给该视频写一段解说词。2021年新闻报道深圳是一座科技之城、创新之城，为培养学生对科技的兴趣，你的学校上周举办了科技节。假定你是你校英语报的小记者，请你编写一篇新闻报道，介绍这次活动。2020年倡议书深圳市正在争创全国文明城市、假定你是鹏城中学学生会主席，希望同学们为"创文'做出自己的贡献。请你按照所提示的要点，代表学生会写一篇倡议书。1．（2024·广东深圳·中考真题）假如你是李华，你的作品在“theBeautyofNature”主题摄影展上获得了一等奖。你的英语老师邀请你在“英语一分钟演讲”上给同学们做分享。要点如下：1.拍摄的时间，地点，内容；2.选择这张照片的原因；3.参赛感受。Dear________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’sall!ThankYou!【答案】例文：Dearclassmates,MynameisLiHua,whoisinterestedinphotography.HereIwouldliketosharemypicturewithyou.ThepicturewastakenbymeinShenzhenonasunnymorninginApril,whichshowsabeautifulparkwithcolorfulflowersandgreengrass.Ifyouarecarefulenough,youwillalsofindafewbirdsjumpinginthegrassinthepicture.Howcutetheyare!ItissuchanicepicturethatIchoseitforthephotographiccontest.Actually,italsoshowsustheharmonybetweentheanimalsandnature.TakingpartinthiscompetitionmakesmerealizethebeautyofnatureandletusprotectourEarthtogether!That’sall!Thankyou!【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿；②时态：以“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主；③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息，可适当补充细节。[写作步骤]第一步，首先介绍演讲的主题，即介绍自己在摄影展上获得一等奖的照片；第二步，介绍照片拍摄的时间、地点以及内容；第三步，阐述选择这张照片的原因；最后，表达自己的参赛感受。[亮点词汇]①beinterestedin对……感兴趣②wouldliketodosth.想要做某事③harmony和谐④takepartin参加⑤realize意识到[高分句型]①ThepicturewastakenbymeinShenzhenonasunnymorninginApril,whichshowsabeautifulparkwithcolorfulflowersandgreengrass.（which引导定语从句）②Ifyouarecarefulenough,youwillalsofindafewbirdsjumpinginthegrassinthepicture.（If引导条件状语从句）③ItissuchanicepicturethatIchoseitforthephotographiccontest.（sucha/anadj.+名词+that从句）2．（2022·广东深圳·中考真题）假定你是李华，你和同学们拍了一个毕业活动视频，打算做成视频日志（vlog），参加主题为“青春飞扬”的国际中学生vlog作品展。请给该视频写一段解说词。内容包括：1.海边活动：下午：①沙滩排球；②……；晚上：搭帐篷；聚餐和清理垃圾；分享会。2.活动感言。注意：1.词数80左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；2.要点齐全，可适当发挥；3.不得出现真实姓名和校名；4.条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。参考词汇：冲浪surf

帐篷tentHi,everyone!IamLiHua.It’smygreatpleasuretopresentmyvlogtoyou.LastSaturday,wewenttotheseasidetocelebrateourgraduation.Intheafternoon,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Somuchformyvideo.Ihopeyouhaveenjoyedit.Thankyou.【答案】例文Hi,everyone!IamLiHua.lt’smygreatpleasuretopresentmyvlogtoyou.LastSaturday,wewenttotheseasidetocelebrateourgraduation.Intheafternoon,wehadabeachvolleyballgame.Then,weenjoyedthefunofsurfinginthesea.Beforedark,wepickedupthelitteronthebeach.Howmeaningfulitwas!Atnight,weputuptwotentsandhadapicnic.Thefoodcookedbyuswassodelicious.Finally,allofussharedourfeelingsaboutthisfantasticexperience.Notonlycanitpromoteourfriendship,butalsoitleavesusavaluableexperience.Somuchformyvideo.Ihopeyouhaveenjoyedit.Thankyou.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇解说词，属于演讲稿写作；②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；③提示：文章开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，承接短文开头，引出话题；第二步，根据提示的要点介绍在海边的活动，包括下午和晚上的具体活动，要列举具体的事例；第三步，抒发活动带来的感悟并书写结语。[亮点词汇]①pickupthelitter捡垃圾②notonly…butalso…不仅……而且……[高分句型]①Howmeaningfulitwas!（how引导的感叹句）②Thefoodcookedbyuswassodelicious.（过去分词作定语）③Notonlycanitpromoteourfriendship,butalsoitleavesusavaluableexperience.（部分倒装结构）3．（2021·广东深圳·中考真题）深圳是一座科技之城、创新之城，为培养学生对科技的兴趣，你的学校上周举办了科技节。假定你是你校英语报的小记者，请你编写一篇新闻报道，介绍这次活动。要点：1.活动目的2.活动项目：模型制作比赛3.活动亮点：学生发明的服务于校园的机器人：外表、功能4.学生感受提示词：1.科技节sciencefestival

2.实验experimentShenzheniswell-knownasacityoftechnologyandinnovation.Lastweek,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】范文：Shenzheniswell-knownasacityoftechnologyandinnovation.Lastweek,ourschoolheldasciencefestival,whichaimstodevelopstudents’interestinscienceandtechnologyandbroadentheirhorizons.Atthefestival,somestudentstookanactivepartinthemodel-makingcompetition.Manyoftheirrobots,whichwerethehighlightofthefestival,drewpeople’sattention.Theserobotswereintheshapeoflovelyanimals,suchasrabbits,monkeysanddogs.Theyweredoingsomesimpletaskslikesweepingthefloorandthrowingawayrubbish.Besides,someotherstudentscarriedoutscienceexperiments.Thestudentswhowerepresentatthefestivalwereallsurprisedattheexhibitsandgavethemabigaroundofapplause.Ourschoolhopesthatmoreandmorestudentscanlearnscienceandtechnologybettertoserveourcountry.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于新闻报道的写作，在写作时要根据汉语提示的内容，介绍科技节的目的，活动项目以及活动亮点和学生们的感受。2.写作指导：本文应该用第三人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般过去时为主；在介绍内容时，力求语句通顺，内容完整，保证条理清晰，行文连贯。4．（2020·广东深圳·中考真题）深圳市正在争创全国文明城市、假定你是鹏城中学学生会主席，希望同学们为"创文'做出自己的贡献。请你按照所提示的要点，代表学生会写一篇倡议书。环境保护①垃圾分类；②绿色出行公益慈善①志愿服务；②……人际交往①诚信友善；②……要求：1、词数80左右(开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数)；2、要点齐全，可适当发挥；3、条理清晰，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范；4、文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。参考词汇：分类sortout

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贡献contributionDearfriends,Asweknow,ShenzhenisworkinghardtowinthetitleofChina'sNationalCivilizedCity.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.Allinall,Shenzhenisourhome.It'stimetotakeaction.TheStudentUnionJuly20,2020【答案】Dearfriends,Asweknow,ShenzhenisworkinghardtowinthetitleofChina'sNationalCivilizedCity.(引出话题)It'swellknownthatShenzhenisstrivingforoneofthetencivilizedcitiesinChina,andnowitisagoodopportunityforustomakeourowncontributions.(倡议缘由)Firstly,morechangesinourdailylife,suchassortingouttherubbishandtravellinginagreenerway,canbemadetoprotectthecityenvironment.What'smore,tomakeShenzhenalovingcity,wearealsosupposedtohelpthoseinneedbydoingsomevoluntaryworkorraisingdonations.【高分句型一】Lastbutnotleast,getalongwithothersinanhonestandfriendlyway.We'dbetteravoidtalkingaboutothers'privacyifwewanttoshowourrespect.(具体介绍如何做)IstronglybelievethatwewillmakeShenzhenamorecivilizedandbeautifulcitywithourjointefforts.(展望)Allinall,Shenzhenisourhome.It'stimetotakeaction.【高分句型二】(号召)TheStudentUnionJuly20,2020【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于倡议书写作。在写作时应承接短文开头；第一段引出话题；第二段写倡议缘由；第三段具体介绍如何做；第四段进行展望；第五段号召大家行动起来。2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来进行写作；时态采用一般现在时为主，写作时要注意语句通顺，语意连贯，紧扣要点，注意句子之间的连接与过渡，要注意涵盖所给提示。5．（2024·广东深圳·三模）假如你是李华，你校交流生Tom将去中国朋友家做客，发邮件向你询问有关礼仪。请你回复邮件，内容包括：1.提前5—6分钟到；2.带合适的礼物；3.餐桌礼仪：①用餐时，需等长辈先动筷子，②吃饭时避免发出声响，③……要求：1.可适当增加细节，以使语句通顺、条理清楚、意义连贯；2.文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称；3.书写规范，卷面整洁；4.80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：风俗(custom)DearTom,Howareyoudoing?Learning_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】参考范文DearTom,Howareyoudoing?LearningthatyouareabouttopayavisittoaChinesefriendandwonderingabouttheChinesecustoms,Iamwritingtoputforwardsomeadvice.Firstly,trytoarrive5to6minutesearlier,whichiscommoninChinesetraditionalculture.Secondly,bringingsomeappropriategiftsforthehostisakindaction.Thingslikesmallgiftsfromyourhomecountrycanserveasnicegifts.Besides,understandingtablemannersisalsoimportant.WhendiningwithaChinesefamily,remembertowaitfortheelderlytostartthedinnerfirst.Trynottomakeanynoisewheneating.Also,pleaseavoidstickingyourchopsticksintoyourfood,andinstead,laythemonyourdish.Ifyouhaveanyotherproblems,pleasefeelfreetocontactme.Yours,LiHua【详解】【总体分析】①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中餐桌礼仪的介绍要点，适当添加细节，语句连贯，条理清楚，突出重点。【写作步骤】第一步，表明写作意图。借用“交流生汤姆将去中国朋友家做客”来引出重点建议的内容；第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从“时间”“礼物”“餐桌礼仪”三个维度进行阐述，每个部分都包含具体细节，如提前到达5-6分钟、合适的礼物类型以及餐桌上的注意事项。第三步，书写结语。表达“如有问题，随时联系我”。体现了友好和支持的态度。【亮点词汇】①payavisitto拜访；参观②putforward提出③serveas充当【高分句型】①LearningthatyouareabouttopayavisittoaChinesefriendandwonderingabouttheChinesecustoms,Iamwritingtoputforwardsomeadvice.（现在分词作原因状语）②Firstly,trytoarrive5to6minutesearlier,whichiscommoninChinesetraditionalculture.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）③Secondly,bringingsomeappropriategiftsforthehostisakindaction.（动名词短语作主语）④WhendiningwithaChinesefamily,remembertowaitfortheelderlytostartthedinnerfirst.（when引导的时间状语从句）6．（2024·广东深圳·三模）你校英文报打算增加一个栏目“用英语讲好中国故事”（“TellingChina’sStoriesinEnglish”）。你是栏目负责人李华，请给外教Ray写封邮件咨询建议。内容包括：1．介绍栏目意义：弘扬中国文化（自行补充2—3点）；2．询问他的建议；3．表达感谢和期望。栏目

column要求：1．80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内；2．可适当加入细节，以使内容充实，行文连贯；3．文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；4．标点正确，书面整洁。DearRay,MynameisLiHua.Astheleaderofthenewcolumn“TellingChina’sStories”forourschool’sEnglishnewspaper,I’mwritingto_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【答案】例文DearRay,MynameisLiHua.Astheleaderofthenewcolumn“TellingChina’sStories”forourschool’sEnglishnewspaper,I’mwritingtodiscussandseekyourvaluableadvice.OuraimwiththiscolumnistoshareinformativeandengagingstoriesaboutChineseculture.Thereasonswillbeillustratedasfollows.Tobeginwith,thisinitiativeaimstocelebrateandpromoteChineseculture.What’smore,webelieveitwillencouragestudentstodeveloptheirEnglishlanguageskillsthroughstorytelling.Anotherpurposeofitistoenhancestudents’cross-culturalunderstandingandfosteradeeperappreciationforourrichculturalheritage.Besides,itwillalsomakeournewspapermorecomprehensiveandhelpusgainmorepopularity.Givenyourexpertiseinstorytellingandculturalexchange,wehighlyvalueyoursuggestionsoradviceregardingthecontentplan,oranyotheraspectsofthecolumn.Thankyouforyourtime.We’reeagertohearyourthoughtsandexcitedaboutthepossibilityofcooperatingwithyouonthisexcitingproject.YoursSincerely,LiHua.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；②时态：时态为一般现在时；③提示：根据提示内容介绍这个栏目，并向外教咨询建议，适当增加细节。[写作步骤]第一步，点明写作目的；第二步，介绍这个栏目的意义；第三步，询问他的建议；第四步，表达感谢和期望。[亮点词汇]①tobeginwith首先②encouragesb.todosth.鼓励某人做某事③beeagertodosth.迫切要做某事[高分句型]①OuraimwiththiscolumnistoshareinformativeandengagingstoriesaboutChineseculture.(动词不定式作表语)②Givenyourexpertiseinstorytellingandculturalexchange,wehighlyvalueyoursuggestionsoradviceregardingthecontentplan,oranyotheraspectsofthecolumn.(过去分词作状语)7．（2024·广东深圳·三模）假如你是学生李华，你校下周将举办主题为“节俭让你更美丽”的英文演讲比赛活动，请你根据以下提示写一篇英文演讲稿。生活中的浪费现象请简述至少两种。节俭的必要性请列出至少两点。节俭的做法至少两点做法并适当举例说明。要求：1.80词左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数内)；2.文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称；3.可适当增加细节，以使语句通顺、条理清楚、意义连贯；4.书写规范，卷面整洁。SavingmakesyoumorebeautifulDearteachersandfellowstudents,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文SavingmakesyoumorebeautifulDearteachersandfellowstudents,

Asweknow,oneoftoday’shottopicsistosaveresources.However,manypeoplewastefood,water,electricityandsoon.Weoftenseelightsandfansleftonwhenpeopleleavetheroom.Theydon’trealizethebadeffectoftheirbehavior.Itcanmakethembecomemoreselfish.What’smore,itcancausethereductionofenergyandresource.It’stimeforustosay“NO”tounnecessarywaste.Itisverynecessarytosavesomethingtomakeyoumorebeautiful.Hereismyadviceasfollows.

First,weshouldn’tleavethetaponafterusingit.Besides,eatupthefoodweorderintherestaurant,orpacktheleftovers.Furthermore,remembertoturnoffthelightsortheair-conditionersbeforeleavingtheroom.Let’stakeactiontostopwastingresources.Wecanmakeadifference.

Thankyouforlistening!【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是演讲稿；②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格内的提示要点，适当发挥。[写作步骤]第一步：表明写作意图。借用“众所周知，当今的热门话题之一是节约资源”来引出重点介绍的内容。第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——浪费现象、节俭的必要性以及节俭的做法等一一阐述。第三步：书写结语。表达“谢谢您的聆听”的感谢。[亮点词汇]①eatup吃光②turnoff关闭③takeaction采取行动[高分句型]①Besides,eatupthefoodweorderintherestaurant,orpacktheleftovers.(祈使句）②Weoftenseelightsandfansleftonwhenpeopleleavetheroom.(状语从句)8．（2024·广东深圳·三模）假如你是李华，临近中考冲刺阶段，你将向同学们分享如何提高复习效率，请根据以下提示，写一篇发言稿。要点如下：1.制定学习计划；2.养成好习惯:①早睡早起②勤锻炼③……；3.有乐观的态度。……注意：1.词数为80左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.文章不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；4.条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。参考词汇:highschoolentranceexam（中考）It’smyhonortobeheretogiveaspeech.

Thankyouforlistening.【答案】

It’smyhonortobeheretogiveaspeech.

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