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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Itwasabusydayfor20-year-oldJustin.Hishotdogstandintheparkwascrowdedwithmanycustomers.Hewaspoorsohecouldn’taffordtorentacafetosellhotdogs.Suddenly,anoldwomangottohiscounterandaskedhowmuchahotdogwas.“Theyrangefrom$3to$7,”hereplied.“Butthat’satouchexpensive.Iwasjustcurioushowmuchtheycost.Idon’twantany,”shesaidbeforewalkingaway.Justinnoticedshesataloneonabenchacrossfromhisstand.Shekeptlookinginhisdirection,andherealizedshewantedahotdogbutcouldn’taffordone.Hefeltbadforher,sohequicklybakedoneandbroughtittoher.“Iforgottotellyouthatyou’remy50thcustomeroftheday,soyougetafreehotdog!”hesaid.“Oh,isthatso?”theoldladyasked.“Thankyou.I’mEmily,bytheway.”Shetasteditimmediatelyandwasshockedhowdeliciousitwas.“It’sdifferentfromregularhotdogs,”shesaid,takinganotherbite.Justinsaid,“Ilovecooking,soIkeeptryingdifferentthingswithmyfood.Ihavecustomerswaitingforme.Haveawonderfulday,”hehurriedaway.Thenextday,whenEmilyreturned,Justintreatedhertoahotdogagain.Emilyrefusedbecauseshedidn’thavemoney,butheinsisted(坚持).“YourfeedbackmatterstomesoIcanimprovemysauces(酱)andmybusiness!”hesaid.“Oh,you’resuchasweetboy,”Emilysmiledthroughtears.“Thankyou.”Deepdown,EmilyknewJustinwasfeedingherbecauseshecouldn’taffordthehotdog.Shetoldhimitwasn’tneeded.Buthekeptfeedinghereveryday.Oneday,whenEmilywenttotheparkagain,shesaid,“Ikeptacountofthehotdogsyouboughtme,andyou’vealreadyspent$100onme.Sonowit’smyturntohelpyou,boy.Comewithme.”注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。EmilyledJustintoanoldbuildingthatlookedlikeadesertedcafe._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________EmilydecidedtogiveJustintheplacetostarthiscafefreeofrent.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________一、文章大意20岁的贾斯汀在公园经营热狗摊,生活贫困。一位老妇人艾米丽询问热狗价格后因觉得贵而离开,贾斯汀看出她想吃但买不起,便以她是第50位顾客为由免费送她一个。此后每天贾斯汀都坚持请艾米丽吃热狗,称需要她的反馈来改进酱料和生意。一天,艾米丽说贾斯汀已为她花费100美元,要带他去一个地方。二、伏笔及续写回应(一)伏笔贾斯汀对烹饪的热爱和创新:文中提到贾斯汀热爱烹饪且会在食物上尝试不同做法,这为他后续可能在新的场所发挥厨艺特长埋下伏笔。在续写中可以体现他如何利用这个机会进一步展现自己的烹饪才华。艾米丽的感激与内心的想法:艾米丽深知贾斯汀是因为她买不起热狗而一直投喂她,她心怀感激且觉得应该回报。这为她后续带贾斯汀去某个地方并帮助他做铺垫,在续写中要体现她回报的方式和贾斯汀的反应。废弃咖啡馆的出现:艾米丽带贾斯汀来到一个像废弃咖啡馆的老建筑,暗示这里可能会有新的故事发展,也许会成为贾斯汀事业的转折点。(二)续写回应第一段:描述贾斯汀跟随艾米丽来到废弃咖啡馆后的反应和发现,可能包括对咖啡馆环境的观察、对艾米丽意图的猜测等,为下文艾米丽的决定做铺垫。第二段:承接上文,讲述艾米丽决定将这个地方免费租给贾斯汀开咖啡馆,以及贾斯汀的惊喜和感激之情,展现他们之间善良的传递和美好的结局,同时也可以描述贾斯汀对未来的规划和期待。三、续写要点(一)第一段贾斯汀对废弃咖啡馆外观和内部环境的初步印象描写,如破旧程度、空间大小等。他内心的疑惑和猜测,思考艾米丽带他来这里的目的。可以适当加入一些细节,比如咖啡馆内残留的一些物品或痕迹,引发贾斯汀的联想。(二)第二段艾米丽表明要免费给贾斯汀这个地方开咖啡馆的决定和她的理由阐述。贾斯汀的惊喜、激动和感激的表现,包括语言、表情和动作等。对贾斯汀未来在咖啡馆经营的简单展望,如他的计划、梦想以及对艾米丽的感谢承诺等。四、故事线故事以贾斯汀在公园卖热狗为起点,遇到艾米丽后展开善良的互动,贾斯汀每天免费给艾米丽热狗,艾米丽心怀感激。接着艾米丽带贾斯汀到废弃咖啡馆,最终决定免费给他用于开咖啡馆,故事线围绕着善良的给予与回报,以及贾斯汀事业可能的转机展开。五、情感线从贾斯汀对艾米丽的同情和善意,到艾米丽的感激,再到最后艾米丽决定帮助贾斯汀时双方的感动与喜悦,情感线随着故事发展逐渐升温,体现了人与人之间温暖的情感交流和善良的力量。六、主旨升华句(5句英文)Kindnessbegetskindness,andasmallactoflovecanleadtoabeautifulcycleofgivingandreceiving.

(善有善报,一个小小的爱的举动可以引发给予和接受的美好循环。)Whenwereachouttohelpotherswithapureheart,weoftenfindunexpectedblessingsinreturn.

(当我们用一颗纯净的心去帮助别人时,我们常常会得到意想不到的回报。)Thepowerofcompassioncantransformlivesandcreateopportunitieswherethereseemedtobenone.

(同情的力量可以改变生活,在看似没有机会的地方创造机会。)Inaworldfullofhustleandbustle,thesimpleactofsharingandcaringcanmakeahugedifference.

(在一个忙碌的世界里,分享和关心的简单行为可以产生巨大的影响。)Truewealthliesnotinmaterialpossessionsbutinthekindnessweshowandtherelationshipswebuild.

(真正的财富不在于物质财富,而在于我们所表现出的善良和我们所建立的关系。)七、写作示范(一)EmilyledJustintoanoldbuildingthatlookedlikeadesertedcafe.Justin'seyeswidenedashetookinthedilapidatedexterior.Thepaintwaspeelingoffthewalls,andthewindowsweredusty.Astheyentered,hesawtheoldfurniturescatteredaroundandacounterthatseemedtohaveseenbetterdays."Whatisthisplace,Emily?"heasked,hisvoicefilledwithcuriosity.Emilysmiledmysteriouslyandsaid,"Justwaitandsee,boy."Justinwalkedaround,imaginingwhatitcouldbewithalittlebitofwork.Hefeltatingeofexcitementmixedwithuncertainty.EmilydecidedtogiveJustintheplacetostarthiscafefreeofrent.Justinwasstunned.Hecouldn'tbelievehisears."Emily,areyousure?Thisistoomuch,"hesaid,hiseyesshiningwithgratitude.Emilynoddedfirmly."You'vebeensokindtome.Thisismywayofhelpingyou.Ibelieveinyourtalentandyourkindness.Makethisplaceasuccess."JustinhuggedEmilytightly,tearswellingupinhiseyes.Hevowedtomakethebestofthisopportunity.Hestartedplanningimmediately,thinkingaboutthenewmenu,thedecoration,andhowhewouldmakethiscafeawarmandinvitingplace.Heknewthatthiswasachanceofalifetime,andhewasdeterminedtomakeitcount,notjustforhimselfbutalsotorepayEmily'skindness.(二)EmilyledJustintoanoldbuildingthatlookedlikeadesertedcafe.Thedoorcreakedastheypusheditopen.Inside,thesmellofoldwoodandahintofsomethinglongforgottenfilledtheair.Justingazedaroundinamazementattheworn-outtablesandchairs,andthefadedpostersonthewalls."Emily,whyhaveyoubroughtmehere?"heasked,hisheartpoundingwithanticipation.Emilywalkedovertoawindowandwipedawaythedust."Thisplacehaspotential,Justin.Ithinkyoucanseeittoo,"shesaidwithatwinkleinhereye.Justinnoddedslowly,startingtounderstandherintention.EmilydecidedtogiveJustintheplacetostarthiscafefreeofrent.Justinwasspeechlessforamoment,thenahugesmilespreadacrosshisface."Emily,Idon'tknowhowtothankyou.Thisisadreamcometrue,"hesaid,hisvoicecrackingwithemotion.Heimmediatelybeganvisualizinghowhewouldtransformthespace.Hethoughtofthedeliciousaromasofhisspecialhotdogsfillingtheroom,andthehappycustomerschattingandenjoyingtheirmeals.HepromisedEmilythathewouldworkhardandmakethecafeaplaceshewouldbeproudof.Asheleftthatday,hisstepswerelighter,andhisheartwasfullofhopeandgratitude.Heknewthatthiswasthebeginningofanewchapter,andhewasreadytoembraceitwithallhisheart,thankstoEmily'sgenerousgiftofkindness.参考答案EmilyledJustintoanoldbuildingthatlookedlikeadesertedcafe.“Whatisthisplacefor?”Justinasked,confused.“It’snowyours,Justin.Thisisyourcafé,”shesaid,andJustinlookedather,puzzled.“Mycafé?Whatdoyoumean?

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