高三英语写作公开课课件-(共26张)

英班级：高班时间：2020.09语写作Whatmakesagoodwriting?AGoodWriting作文评分标准分数档要点词汇语法交际逻辑21-25覆盖所有要点丰富基本无错得体，满足要求清楚、合理16-20覆盖所有要点基本满足任务要求少许错误基本符合要求清楚、合理11-15漏掉一些要点有限有一些错误但不影响理解基本得体基本清楚6-10漏掉主要要点贫乏错误较多，影响理解不得体混乱1-5未能传达任何信息，写的内容与要求无关要点完整；语言准确且多样；结构清晰；

逻辑连贯交际得体书写美观好作文标准：好作文的写作步骤(写作七步法)审题体裁时态人称要点列提纲结构要点关键词补充细节语言表达准确地道词汇句式连词成句+过渡词逻辑连贯流畅连句成篇润色修正美化句子高级替换定稿审列补表连润定

假定你是李华，暑期在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展，请写一封信申请做志愿者。

内容包括：1.写信目的;

2.个人优势;3.能做的事

注意：1.词数120左右

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯

3.结束语已为你写好

Dearsirormadam,_________________________________________________________________________________________Iamlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Sincerely,LiHua(2019全国1卷)体裁人称时态要求一般现在时120左右

gallery,artcenter应用文（申请信）第一人称AChinesepaintingexhibition其它相关表达：中国画Chinesepaintings,traditionalChineseart,theartworks.字数内容avolunteer,thevoluntaryjob,theposition写作背景:(抓关键词)

美术馆中国画展

志愿者内容要求：1.写信目的;2.个人优势;3.能做的事1、审题自我介绍+写信目的开头正文结尾Para.1Para.2Para.3个人优势+能做的事（具体说明能胜任此工作的理由,3个优势）总结意愿2、列提纲自我介绍+写信目的Para.1+我是李华，是从中国来的一个留学生；得知你们美术馆要举行中国画展，正在招募志愿者；我迫不及待地写信想申请这个工作。补充细节：语言表达：连词成句：IamLiHua,anexchangestudentfromChina.+anexchangestudent;thecomingChinesepaintingexhibition;thelocalgallery;can’twaittodo;applyfortheposition;IHearthatvolunteersareneededforthecomingChinesepaintingexhibitioninthelocalgallery.Ican’twaittoapplyfortheposition.个人优势①+能做的事（中国画展）Para.2因为对中国传统艺术非常感兴趣并且受到过良好训练，所以我非常了解中国画。我不仅可以给游客解说画美在哪里，还可以讲述他们背后的故事。+补充细节：语言表达：连词成句：+traditionalChineseart;IamdeeplyinterestedintraditionalChineseartandIhavereceivedagoodeducationinart,soIhaveagoodknowledgeofChinesepaintings.

bedeeplyinterestedin;haveagoodknowledge/grasp/understanding/commandof;notonly···butalso···;explaintoIcannotonlyexplaintothevisitorsthebeautyofthepaintings,butalsotellthestoriesbehindthem.个人优势②+能做的事（在伦敦的中国人）我的英语很流利，这使得我在与别人交流方面没有障碍。haveagoodknowledge/grasp/understanding/commandof;IhaveagoodcommandofEnglish,soIhavenodifficultycommunicatingwithothers.Para.2+补充细节：语言表达：连词成句：+communicatewithothers;havenotrouble/difficultyindoing个人优势③+能做的事（申请做志愿者）

我非常热情并且有责任心，我相信我完全胜任志愿者工作。enthusiasticandresponsible;Iamenthusiasticandresponsible,soIbelieveIamperfectlyqualifiedforthejobasavolunteer.Para.2+补充细节：语言表达：连词成句：+bequalifiedfor总结具备了以上提到的所有品质(如上所述)，我可以肯定的说，我就是你要找的合适人选。Asismentionedabove；Withallthesequalitiesmentionedabove,IcansaywithcertaintythatIamtherightpersonyouarelookingfor.Para.2+补充细节：语言表达：连词成句：+with；qualities表达感谢和期待回复Para.3如果你能考虑我的申请，我将十分感激。期待你的回复。Iwouldappreciateitif…;Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakemyapplicationintoconsideration.+补充细节：语言表达：连词成句：+takemyapplicationintoconsideration/account/takeaccountof/seriouslyLookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.逻辑角度合适的过渡性词汇⑴排序关系

⑵递进关系⑶举例关系⑷转折关系⑸因果关系⑹归纳总结⑺并列关系first;firstly;second;secondly;lastbutnotleast;atfirst;firstofall;inthefirstplace;atlast;lastofall;foronething;foranotherthing;ontheonehand;ontheotherhand;finallyand;too;aswellas;alongwith;togetherwith;both…and…;notonly…butalso…forexample;forinstance;like;suchas;asfollows;take…asanexample

but;however;while;though;onthecontrarybecause(of);since;owingto;dueto;thanksto;asaresult/consequence(of);thus;thereforeinaword;inshort;tosumup;inconclusion;ingeneral;insummary;onthewhole;inbriefwhat’smore;besides;furthermore;inaddition;additionally;tomakemattersworse;what’sworse;worsestill;6、连句成篇：（使用恰当的连接词使文章流畅）自我介绍+写信目的开头正文结尾Para.1Para.2Para.3个人优势+能做的事（具体说明能胜任此工作的理由,3个优势）总结意愿逻辑角度合适的过渡性词汇⑴排序关系

⑵递进关系⑶举例关系⑷转折关系⑸因果关系⑹归纳总结⑺并列关系first;firstly;second;secondly;lastbutnotleast;atfirst;firstofall;inthefirstplace;atlast;lastofall;foronething;foranotherthing;ontheonehand;ontheotherhand;finallyand;too;aswellas;alongwith;togetherwith;both…and…;notonly…butalso…forexample;forinstance;like;suchas;asfollows;take…asanexample

but;however;while;though;onthecontrarybecause(of);since;owingto;dueto;thanksto;asaresult/consequence(of);thus;thereforeinaword;inshort;tosumup;inconclusion;ingeneral;insummary;onthewhole;inbriefwhat’smore;besides;furthermore;inaddition;additionally;tomakemattersworse;what’sworse;worsestill;6、连句成篇：（使用恰当的连接词）6、连句成篇：DearSirorMadam,IamLiHua,anexchangestudentfromChina.IHearthatvolunteersareneededforthecomingChinesepaintingexhibitioninthelocalgallery.Ican’twaittoapplyfortheposition.

Atfirst,IamdeeplyinterestedintraditionalChineseartandIhavereceivedagoodeducationinart,soIhaveagoodknowledgeofChinesepaintings.Icannotonlyexplaintothevisitorsthebeautyofthepaintings,butalsotellthestoriesbehindthem.Besides,IhaveagoodcommandofEnglish,soIhavenodifficultycommunicatingwithothers.Additionally,Iamenthusiasticandresponsible,soIbelieveIamperfectlyqualifiedforthejobasavolunteer.Withallthesequalitiesmentionedabove,IcansaywithcertaintythatIamtherightpersonyouarelookingfor.

Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakemyapplicationintoconsideration.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.好作文的写作步骤(写作七步法)审题体裁时态人称要点列提纲结构要点关键词补充细节语言表达准确地道词汇句式连词成句+过渡词逻辑连贯流畅连句成篇润色修正美化句子高级替换定稿审列补表连润定二.使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档三.巧用倒装增强句子表现力四.尝试多样化表达方式一.使用较高级词汇与句型使文章增加吸引力①强调句②With短语复合结构③定语从句④名词性从句(主宾表同从句)⑤各种状语从句⑥被动语态7、润色修正方式一.使用较高级词汇与句型使文章增加吸引力（形容词做状语，对谓语动词强调）IamenthusiasticandresponsibleandIbelieveIamperfectlyqualifiedforthejobasavolunteer.Enthusiasticandresponsible,IdoholdthebeliefthatIamperfectlyqualifiedforthejobasavolunteer.

7、润色修正

DeeplyinterestedintraditionalChineseartandhavingreceivedagoodeducationinart,IhaveagoodknowledgeofChinesepaintings.二.使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档IamdeeplyinterestedintraditionalChineseartandhavereceivedagoodeducationinart.IhaveagoodknowledgeofChinesepaintings.7、润色修正Icannotonlyexplaintothevisitorsthebeautyofthepaintings,butalsotellthestoriesbehindthem.三.巧用倒装增强句子表现力NotonlycanIexplaintothevisitorsthebeautyofthepaintings,butalsotellthestoriesbehindthem.7、润色修正IamquitesatisfiedthatIhaveagoodcommandofEnglish,soIhavenodifficultycommunicatingwithothers.四.尝试多样化表达方式(主语从句+表语从句)WhatsatisfiesmemostisthatmygoodcommandofEnglishmakesmehavenodifficultycommunicatingwithothers.7、润色修正DearSirorMadam,IamLiHua,anexchangestudentfromChina.HearingthatvolunteersareneededforthecomingChinesepaintingexhibitioninthelocalgallery.Ican’twaitto

applyfortheposition.

Deeplyinterestedin

traditionalChineseartandhavingreceivedagoodeducationinart,IhaveagoodknowledgeofChinesepaintings.NotonlycanIexplaintothevisitorsthebeautyofthepaintings,butalsotellthestoriesbehindthem.Besides,WhatsatisfiesmemostisthatmygoodcommandofEnglishmakesmehavenodifficultycommunicatingwithothers.Additionally,enthusiasticandresponsible,IdoholdthebeliefthatIamperfectlyqualifiedforthejobasavolunteer.Withallthesequalitiesment