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阅读下面的材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Ahigh-pitchedscreamstoppedLauraDouglasinhertracks.Spinningaroundonthenarrowdirtpath,shethoughtthathercousinCassiewasindanger.Instead,Cassiewasknee-deepinflowersthatcoveredthemeadolikeaquilt.
"Cassie!Youscaredmetodeath!"Laurascolded,hervoiceechoingthroughthemeadow."Iamsorry,"Cassie,absorbedinherphotography,didn'tnoticethethickfogrollingin,consumingthenearbymountains."Notagain!"Lauracomplained,hereyesshiftingtotheapproachingclouds."Wegottago!"
Cassie'sfocusremainedonhercamera,capturingtheshort-livedbeautyofthemoment.Lauratiedaredscarfaroundherhair,"Let'sgobacktothecampsite."Thegirlsquicklyrandownthewindingpath,themeadownowcoveredbyathickfogandasteady,coldrain.Theroadturnedslippery,andtheyhadtomoveslowlytoavoidslidingdown.
"It'sdangerous!Weneedshelternow!"Cassiescreamedafteraloudcrackofthunder,thestorm'sstrengthincreasingrapidly.Laura'skeeneyesfoundasmallcaveintherockface,partlyhiddenbyoverhangingbranches.Itwasn'tmuch,butitofferedachancetoescapetherain.
"Cassie,overhere!"Lauracalledout,hervoicebarelycarryingoverthewind.
Cassie,wetandshaking,stumbledtowardstheplaceofLaura'svoice.Assheapproached,shecouldseetheshelter.Itwasn'tperfect,butitwasbetterthannothing.
"Smartthinking,Laura,"Cassiesaid,herteethchattering(withcoldasshepressedherbackpackclosetoherchest.Thebackpack,atoughandwaterproof1model,hadbeenagiftfromherfather,anexperiencedhikerwhohadinsistedonitsnumerouspocketsandsectionsforemergencysupplies.Littledidtheyknow,hisadvicewouldproveinvaluableonthisday.
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"Checkyourbackpack,"Laurainstructed,hervoicebeinghopeful._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Asnightfell,thestormfinallybegantodiedown.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意:这篇文章讲述了Laura和Cassie在一片花海中探险时遭遇突如其来的暴风雨。Laura听到尖叫声,误以为Cassie遇到危险,却发现Cassie正在专注于摄影。随着雾气和雨水的逼近,两人意识到必须尽快返回营地。在逃跑的过程中,他们遇到了困难,道路变得滑腻,视线也变得模糊。最终,Laura发现了一个可以避雨的小洞穴,两人暂时躲避了暴风雨。几处伏笔以及在续写中的回应:1.Cassie专注于摄影,没有注意到天气变化,这为她们需要迅速逃离埋下了伏笔。2.Laura提到“Notagain!”,暗示这不是她们第一次遇到这种情况,增加了故事的紧张感。3.Cassie的防水背包被提及,预示着这个背包将在后续的故事中发挥重要作用。续写要点(分两段):第一段:Laura建议Cassie检查她的背包,因为里面可能有紧急情况下需要的物资。Cassie按照Laura的指示行动,并找到了一些有用的物品。第二段:随着夜幕降临,暴风雨开始减弱。两人在洞穴中度过了艰难的一夜,但最终安全无恙,并对这次经历有了更深的理解和感悟。感情线:Laura和Cassie之间的表姐妹关系在这次冒险中得到了加深,她们互相依赖,共同面对困难。故事线:故事从两人在花海中的探险开始,经历了突如其来的暴风雨,到找到避难所,最后安全度过难关。主旨升华句(5句英文):1."Inthefaceofadversity,it'sthebondsoffamilythatkeepusstrong."2."Sometimes,themostunexpectedmomentscanteachusthemostvaluablelessons."3."Nature'sbeautycanbeasfleetingasitispowerful."4."Preparednesscanmakeallthedifferencewhentheunexpectedstrikes."5."Thetruetestofcharacterisnothowwefacecalmseas,buthowwenavigatethestorm."参考范文:范文一:"Checkyourbackpack,"Laurainstructed,hervoicebeinghopeful.Cassiequicklyunzippedthemaincompartmentandrummagedthroughthecontents.Tohersurprise,shefoundasmallfirst-aidkit,aflashlight,andacompactemergencyblanket."Dadalwayssaidthispackwouldsaveourlivesoneday,"shemuttered,amixofreliefandgratitudefloodinghervoice.Theyusedtheblankettodryoffandtheflashlighttocheckforanyinjuriesfromtheirscrambletosafety.Asnightfell,thestormfinallybegantodiedown.Thesistershuddledtogether,theirbodiesprovidingwarmthagainstthecold.Thehowlingwindoutsidethecavehadlessened,andtherainhadturnedintoasoftpatter.Theytalkedabouttheirclosecall,andhowtheywouldnevertakethebeautyanddangerofnatureforgrantedagain.Astheydriftedofftosleep,theyknewthatthisadventurewouldbeastorytheywouldshareforyearstocome,atestamenttotheirbondandtheirsurvival.范文二:"Checkyourbackpack,"Laurainstructed,hervoicebeinghopeful.Cassienodded,herhandsshakingslightlyassheunzippedthewaterproofbackpack.Toheramazement,shefoundasmallbutsturdytent,acoupleofenergybars,andamulti-tool."Dad'salwaysright,"shewhispered,asmilebreakingthroughhershivering.Theysetupthetentinsidethecave,creatingacozysanctuaryamidstthechaosoutside.Asnightfell,thestormfinallybegantodiedown.Thecavewasdark,butthesoundoftherainhadsoftenedtoagentlepatter.LauraandCassiesatinthetent,sharingtheenergybarsandsippingwaterfromtheirbottles.Theytalkedabouttheirfears,theirhopes,andtheirloveforadventure.Thestormhadbroughtthemcloser,teachingthemthateveninthedarkestmoments,thereisalwaysaglimmeroflight.Astheylaydowntorest,theyknewthattheyhadnotonlysurvivedthestormbuthadgrownstrongertogether.
Onepossibleversion:"Checkyourbackpack,"Laurainstructed,hervoicebeinghopeful."Wemighthavesomethingthatcanhelpusstartafire."Cassienodded,herfingerstremblingassheunzippedthesidepocketofherbackpack.Shewasrelievedtofindaflashlight,acompactemergencyblanketandasmall,waterproofpouchcontainingwaterproofmatches."Bingo!"sheexclaimed,hervoicefilledwithamixofsurpriseandrelief.Theyquicklysettowork,usingthewaterproofmatchestoigniteasmallfirewiththedryleavesandtwigsLaurahadcollected.Thesurvivalblanketwasspreadout,providingathinlayerofinsulationagainstthecold,dampground.
Asnightfell,thestormfinallybegantodiedown.Thegirls,exhaustedbutdetermined,decidedtomakeamove.Theyknewthetrailwouldberiskyinthedark,bu
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