01.选择性Unit5Revealingnature观察日记

Unit5Nurturingnature单元写作深度指导观察日记单元话题考题展示观察日记【新高考模拟试题】你校英语报开设了“LearningtoObserve”栏目。请用英语写一篇黄豆芽（soybeansprouts)生长观察日记，并向该栏目投稿，内容包括：观察过程你的体会注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。本单元写作项目是描写植物生长过程的观察日记。观察日记多是亲身经历和耳闻目睹的事情，所以要用第一人称来写;日记多是记述发生过的事情，因此常使用一般过去时,但使用时必须灵活掌握。日记应条理清楚,写出真实感。此外,应注意日记的格式，包括日期、星期和天气的书写位置。观察日记篇章结构一般采用三段式结构:第一段:表明写作目的;第二段:为主体部分,记录植物的成长过程;第三段:记录作者的感受。考向分析与应对策略近几年高考对日记的考查较少，但日记也是应用文中比较实用的一种文体。日记书写的注意事项入局如下：(1)日期、星期一般顶格写在正文之前。可以先写星期，后写年月日，也可以先写年月日，后写星期几。(2)天气情况应写在日期和星期的同一行稍靠右之处。表示天气情况常用fine,cloudy,rainy,snowy,windy,stormy,sunny等形容词来表示。(3)正文的内容应该思想健康，积极向上。文章可长可短，开头语应简洁，结尾可适当发表感想。（4）日记或周记的题材广泛，一般来说要求记录一次意义非凡的事件，例如：宣传节约用水活动、帮助父母做家务、现场或在电视上观看一场比赛、毕业前夕制作毕业纪念视频的过程、一次有意义的旅行、一次有意义的志愿者活动或助人为乐的事件等等。(5)日记和周记的写作思路：第一部分，交代事件及发生的时间和场所；第二部分，描写事件的经过及具体细节；第三部分，自己的感受及感想。话题词汇

1.growthconditionsoftheplant植物的生长条件2.aholelargeenough足够大的洞3.puttheearthbackinthehole把土放回洞里4.upto20feetinlength长达20英尺5.selectproperseeds选择合适的种子6.alightapplicationoffertilizer轻施肥料7.species物种8.observation观察9.process过程10.growth生长11.conditions条件，环境12.environment环境13.suitable适合的14.container容器15.sprout发芽话题句式1.Onthefirstday,Iputsomeseedsintoabasin.第一天,我把一些种子放进一个花盆。2.ThenIpouredsomewaterintothebasin,forthisplant..y然后我把一些水倒入花盆，因为这种植物……3.Iplacedthebasinunderthesun.我把花盆放在阳光下。4.Severaldayslater,theyoungplantsbeganogrowoutofthesoftsoil.几天后,幼苗开始从松软的土壤中长出来。5.Iputthebasinintheroomtoavoidthehotsun.我把花盆放到房间里来避开烈日。6.Theseyoungplantsbegantogrowrapidly...这些幼苗开始快速地生长……7.Nowtheyhavegrownintotallplants.现在它们已经长成了高高的植物。8.I'msurprisedat...我对……感到惊讶。III.模版框架观察日记篇章结构一般采用三段式结构:第一段:表明写作目的;第二段:为主体部分,记录植物的成长过程;第三段:记录作者的感受。假设你是李华,英语老师让你观察某种植物的生长过程。请根据你所拍摄的图片写一篇观察日记,记述苗的生长过程,以便在英语课上跟大家分享。内容包括:1.播种方式;2.生长过程;3.生长结果。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。参考词汇:蒜瓣garlicclove;嫩芽tendershoot;蒜苗garlicsprout________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【写作分析】[总体布局]观察日记主题观察植物生长体裁应用文布局第一段播种方式第二段生长过程第三段生长结果人称以第一、三人称为主时态以一般现在和过去时态为主I.用本单元所学单词或短语填空1.________________________肩并肩地,并排地2.________________________出来3._________________________n.根4.________________________n.厘米答案1.sidebyside2.getoutof3.root4.centimetreⅡI.本单元语块、语法运用1.完成句子第一部分:播种方式(1)Icarefullydividedthegarlicbulbsintoclovesandplantedthem________________________(并排地)inaroundplasticbowl,andthepointedends________________________(朝上).第二部分:生长过程(2)Withthegarlic_________________________(生长),therootsgrow________________________(越来越 长). Theroots_________________________(看起来像)thewhitebeardofGrandpa.第三部分:生长结果(4)Thegarlicsproutsaregrowinghigherandhigherdaybyday,andthey________________________(已经长到20厘米左右了).答案(1)sidebyside;facedup(2)growing;longerandlonger(3)looklike(4)havegrowntoabout20centimetres2.句式升级(5)用with的复合结构改写句(1)6)用定语从句合并句(2)和句(3)答案Icarefullydividedthegarlicbulbsintoclovesandplantedthemsidebysideinaroundplasticbowl,withthepointedendsfacingup.Withthegarlicgrowing,therootsgrowlongerandlonger,whichlooklikethewhitebeardofGrandpa.连句成篇January8Icarefullydividedthegarlicbulbsintoclovesandplantedthemsidebysideinaroundplasticbowl,withthepointedendsfacingup.ThenIpouredenoughwaterintothebowlandputitinasunnyplace.Everyday,Iwaterthemontime.January16Manylightgreentendershootsaregettingoutofthecloves.Withthegarlicgrowing,therootsgrowlongerandlonger,whichlooklikethewhitebeardofGrandpa.January24Thegarlicsproutsaregrowinghigherandhigherdaybyday,andtheyhavegrowntoabout20centimetres.Allofthemlookverybeautiful,andarenotlessbeautifulthandaffodils.写作积累实战演练2一、单句翻译1.让我告诉你如何种树。2.以下是我对它们生长的观察。3.给树挖一个足够大的坑，但坑不应该太深。4.在土壤中种植两周后，幼苗的叶子逐渐生长成较大的伞形叶子。5.这朵粉红色的花吸引了几只蜜蜂，它们围着花儿飞舞。6.观看它们的生长过程就像欣赏花朵一样有趣。7.通过观察，我发现亲自观察草莓的生长过长很有趣。Letmetellyouhowtoplantatree.Hereismyobservationoftheirgrowth.Digaholelargeenoughforthetree,buttheholeshouldnotbetoodeep.Theleavesoftheseedlingsgraduallygrowintolargerumbrellashapedleavesaftertheyhavebeenplantedinthesoilfortwoweeks.Thepinkflowerattractsseveralbees,whicharedancingaroundit.Watchingtheirgrowthprocessisasinterestingasenjoyingtheflowers.Throughtheobservation,Ifinditinterestingtowatchthegrowthprocessofstrawberriesinperson.二、语篇翻译Inordertolearnhowsoybeansgrowintosoybeansprouts,Igrewsomebymyself.Andhereismyobservation.Whenhighqualitysoybeanshavebeenkeptincleanwaterfortenhours,theybegintobeesoftandtheircolourbeeslighter.Then,whentheyareputinacontainerandkeptinaplacewherethereisnosunlightforoneday,softsmallbudsstarttoappear.Duringthefollowingthreedays,thebudsgraduallybeelongerandlonger.Onthefourthday,thebudspletelygrowintomaturesoybeansprouts.Watchingthegrowthofsoybeansproutsisapleasure·andIenjoythisprocessofobservation.书面表达假如你是李华,你想研究一下向日葵从种子到植株的生长过程,请根据下面的提示写一篇观察日记:1.你把向日葵种子埋进一个花盆里,浇了些水;2.几天后,盆中长出了幼苗;你把花盆放在屋里,避免阳光暴晒;3.幼苗在茁壮地成长,几天后就长得很高了;4.你对于它的生长很是惊讶。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________OnedayIburiedsomeseedsofsunflowersintoabasin,wheretherewassomerichsoil.Afterpouringsomewaterintothebasin,Ibegantoobserveitwithgreatpatience.Severaldayslater,somegreenshootsgrewoutofthesoil,whichweresolovely.Seeingthatthesoilwasalittledry,Iaddedsomewatertoitagain.Afterseveraldays,theseyoungplantsgrewintosometallplants,whichwereverystrong.IwassurprisedatwhatIsawthatday!Howamazingitistowatchaseedbeeatallplant!【新高考模拟试题】你校英语报开设了“LearningtoObserve”栏目。请用英语写一篇黄豆芽（soybeansprouts)生长观察日记，并向该栏目投稿，内容包括：观察过程你的体会注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Inordertolearnhowsoybeansgrowintosoybeansprouts,Igrewsomebymyself.Andhereismyobservation.Whenhighqualitysoybeanshavebeenkeptincleanwaterfortenhours,theybegintobeesoftandtheircolourbeeslighter.Then,whentheyareputinacontainerandkeptinaplacewherethereisnosunlightforoneday,softsmallbudsstarttoappear.Duringthefollowingthreedays,thebudsgraduallybeelongerandlonger.Onthefourthday,thebudspletelygrowintomaturesoybeansprouts.Watchingthegrowthofsoybeansproutsisapleasure·andIenjoythisprocessofobservation.下午数学考试，你成绩不好，心情郁闷。晚上几个好朋友邀你去歌厅(KTV)唱歌，你们一晚上唱得很尽兴。你用日记的形式记录下你今天的活动及感受。日记须包括以下几个要点：(1)你因数学成绩不佳，心情一直不好。(2)晚上朋友们邀请你去KTV唱歌，这是你第一次去KTV。(3)大家唱得很高兴，而你一直当听众，你觉得你的歌唱得不好，不敢去唱。(4)在大家的鼓励下，你终于拿起麦克风(microphone),唱了一首英文歌曲IBelieveICanFly(5)现在你心情舒畅了，更重要的是你找回了自信。(6)你在日记中对自己说了这样一句话：“……”注意：1.词数：100左右。开头已写好，不计入总词数日记必须包括所有要点，但可以用不同的句式表达。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________