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continuationwritingHaveyouevergrabbedawrongbagWhatifyoumayloseanimportantswimmingcompetitionwithouttherightbagJennyhadaswimmingcompetitioninthemorningandcouldnotsleep.Thisparticularswimmingcompetitionwascrucial(至关重要的)thatshehadmadeitallthewaytothefinalsanddidn'twanttolether____________(teammate)down.___________(sleep)sopoorly,shewas_________(terrible)anxiousaboutthecompetition,___muchthatshecouldn‘teveneatbreakfast.Itfeltasthoughshegotbutterfliesinherstomach(感到非常紧张).Jenny_______(pick)athereggswithaforkandallshecouldthinkaboutwasfacingthecompetition.Jenny’smomsensedherdaughter’sworryandgaveheracomfortingpatontheback(赞许；鼓励).Jennyfeltabitofreliefbutbythetimeshegottotheathleticclub_____theswimmeetwasbeingheld,thatfeelingofcomfort_______________(disappear).Shewenttothelockerroomandopenedhergymbag,onlytofindshehadgrabbedthewrongbag…teammatesHavingsleptterriblysopickedwherehaddisappearedReadforthemainideaBeginningDevelopmentClimaxLaterDevelopment+EndingtobecontinuedReadforthebasicinformationwhoCharacterswhenwhereSettingswhatwhyhowMainplotstense/

Jenny;mother;teammates;coachInthemorningInthelockerroom（衣帽间）JennygrabbedthewrongbagWorryaboutlosingtheimportantcompetition/lettingherteammatesdown.Toonervoustosleepwell/eatbreakfastSimplepast

PlotorganizationcontrastSolution?Jennymother

teammatescoachThemeWithouttherightbag,JennymightlosethecrucialcompetitionThepassageisastorytopraisemother’slove/friendships/team’spower/innerstrength.DrawaMindmap(思维导图)togetherAppearedintheformerarticleforseveraltimes(mostprobably)Jennywasverynervous.Shehadaswimmingcompetitioninthemorningandcouldnotsleep.Shetossedandturnedallnight.Shewasnostrangertocompetition.Infact,shelovedit.Jennywasveryathleticandwasnotonlypartofaswimteam,butasoccerteam,aswell.Sheevenwonasoccerchampionshipwithherteammateslastyear.Butthisparticularswimmingcompetitionwasimportant.Shehadmadeitallthewaytothefinalsanddidn'twanttoletherteammatesdown.Whenheralarmwentoffat6:00am,shehitthesnoozebutton(闹钟的延时按钮)androlledontoherside,wishingshecouldjuststayinbedallday.Havingsleptsopoorly,Jennywasnotatallreadyfortheday.Afterafewminutes,shestretchedherarmsaboveherheadandyawnedbeforethrowinghercoversback（把被子扔回去）andclimbingoutofbed.Shewasterriblyanxiousaboutthecompetition,somuchthatshecouldn'teveneatbreakfast.Itfeltasthoughshegotbutterfliesinherstomach.Jenny'smotherlookedconcerned.“Youhavetoeatsomething,”shesaid.“It'simportanttokeepyourstrengthup.”“Iknow,I'mjustnothungrythismorning,”Jennyreplied,pickingathereggswithafork.Allshecouldthinkaboutwasfacingthecompetition.WhatifsheperformedpoorlyWhatifshedisappointedhercoachandteammatesShewouldn'tbeabletoforgiveherself.Jenny'smomsensedherdaughter'sworryandgaveheracomfortingpatontheback.“You'llbegreat,dear.Justdoyourbest.That'sallthatmatters.”Jennyfeltabitofreliefandappreciatedhermother'skindwords.Mother’swordswereuseful.Butbythetimeshegottotheathleticclubwheretheswimmeetwasbeingheld,thatfeelingofcomforthaddisappeared.Shewenttothelockerroomtoprepareforthecompetition.Echos&ContrastsHintsforeshadowingthelaterdevelopmentsechos&usefulexpressionsJennywasverynervous.Shehadaswimmingcompetitioninthemorningandcouldnotsleep.Shetossedandturnedallnight.Shewasnostrangertocompetition.Infact,shelovedit.Jennywasveryathleticandwasnotonlypartofaswimteam,butasoccerteam,aswell.Sheevenwonasoccerchampionshipwithherteammateslastyear.Butthisparticularswimmingcompetitionwasimportant.Shehadmadeitallthewaytothefinalsanddidn'twanttoletherteammatesdown.Whenheralarmwentoffat6:00am,shehitthesnoozebutton(闹钟的延时按钮)androlledontoherside,wishingshecouldjuststayinbedallday.Havingsleptsopoorly,Jennywasnotatallreadyfortheday.Afterafewminutes,shestretchedherarmsaboveherheadandyawned（打哈欠）beforethrowinghercoversback（把被子扔回去）andclimbingoutofbed.Shewasterriblyanxiousaboutthecompetition,somuchthatshecouldn'teveneatbreakfast.Itfeltasthoughshegotbutterfliesinherstomach.Jenny'smotherlookedconcerned.“Youhavetoeatsomething,”shesaid.“It'simportanttokeepyourstrengthup.”“Iknow,I'mjustnothungrythismorning,”Jennyreplied,pickingathereggswithafork.Allshecouldthinkaboutwasfacingthecompetition.WhatifsheperformedpoorlyWhatifshedisappointedhercoachandteammatesShewouldn'tbeabletoforgiveherself.Jenny'smomsensedherdaughter'sworryandgaveheracomfortingpatontheback.“You'llbegreat,dear.Justdoyourbest.That'sallthatmatters.”Jennyfeltabitofreliefandappreciatedhermother'skindwords.Mother’swordswereuseful.Butbythetimeshegottotheathleticclubwheretheswimmeetwasbeingheld,thatfeelingofcomforthaddisappeared.Shewenttothelockerroomtoprepareforthecompetition.Echos&Contrastsmaybesomesnackswereinthebag.Maybebeforecompetition,shewasstillanxious.Maybelateron,mom’swordsstillworked.Hintsforeshadowingthelaterdevelopments伏笔Para1:Whensheopenedhergymbag,shewasquitesurprisedtoseehersocceruniformandrealizedshehadgrabbedthewrongbag.Para2:Jennyheadedfortheswimmingpoolwithabrightsmile.Q1__________________________________________（与首句衔接）Q2___________________________________________(情节推动1)Q3_______________________________________________(情节推动2)Q4____________________________________________(与第二段首句衔接)Q1__________________________________________（与首句衔接）Q2_____________________________________________(情节推动)Q3_____________________________________________(情节推动2)Q4_____________________________________________(主题点拨)WhatwasJenny’sreaction(反应)DidJennycomeupwithanysolutionsWhocametohelpJennyHowAddanythinginthebagWhatwasJenny’sresponse(gatheruphercourage)HowdidJennyfeelHowdidsheperformedinthecompetitionWhatwastheresultofthecompetition(win)Designtheplot--DiscussionWhatwastheendingPara1:Whensheopenedhergymbag,shewasquitesurprisedtoseehersocceruniformandrealizedshehadgrabbedthewrongbag.WeavethestoryDumbfoundedwithanemptymind,Jennywasradically/thoroughly/completelydraggedintoaswampofdespair.Timefleeting/Timeflyinglikeanarrowandtensionmountingsecondbysecond,theatmosphereinthelockerroombegantofreeze(气氛变得紧张起来),forcingJennytothinkaboutchickeningout.呆滞着，脑袋一片空白，珍妮彻底被拖入了绝望的沼泽(swamp)。目瞪口呆地？dumbfounded时间转瞬即逝(fleet)，紧张感一秒一秒地逐步增加(mount)，更衣室里的气氛开始冻结，迫使珍妮想到了退缩（chickenout）。What’sJenny’sreaction(反应)WeavethestoryHelplessandhopeless,shewasphoning/abouttophonethecoachwhen,suddenly,aknockonthedoorcametoherrescue.Imitateit饶有兴趣且放松的，当我正在享受令人叹为观止的美景时，令人不快的事物出现在我眼前。无助且无望的，她正准备给教练打，突然,一阵敲门声传来，救了她(rescue)。DidJennycomeupwithanysolutionsA

wasdoingsthwhenBdidsth/AwasabouttodosthwhenBdidsthA正在做某事时，B突然…Heartbrokenbutfearless,hedecidedtoturnthisaround.（艺术家卖画）Helplessandhopeless,…Interestedandrelaxed,Iwasenjoyingthebreath-takingsceneryaroundwhensomethingunpleasantcaughtmyeye.WeavethestoryBehindthedoorstoodhermomwiththerightbaginherhands.门后站着她的母亲，手里拿着对的那只包。（with）WhocametohelpJennyHow

人物（惊讶）：让我感到惊讶的是…IttookJennybysurprisethat让珍妮吃惊的是，她的包就在队友/母亲的手中。IttookJennybysurprisethattherightbagwasgrabbedbyherteammate/mother.IttookJennybysurprisethatthebagwasrightthere,tightlygrabbedbyhermother，whowasoutofbreath.(+非谓+定从+details--descriptionformom)Allofasudden/Attheverymoment，thesoundofheavybreathingintruded,Jennythenturnedaround,onlytofindthebagwasrightthere,tightlygrabbedinhermother’shand.Moretoadd:（+时间状语+onlytofind）突然/就在这时，沉重的呼吸声闯了进来(intrude)，珍妮随即转过身来，才发现袋子就在那里，紧紧抓在她母亲的手里。陈思雅TeammatesVersion2(teamspirit):Herteammatesspottedherworryandcastacomfortingglanceather.Theytoldherthatitwastheirjointeffortsthatmadetheteamandtheywouldn’tblamehereventhoughshelostthegame.Swimmingwithallhermight,shewasinthefirstplace.Herteammatesapplaudedandyelledandeventuallyshewonthefirstmedal.AlthoughJennywastooexhaustedtomoveaninch,shefeltmuchproudandpleasedkeepingcalmandconfidentwhenintrouble.Version3(solvebyJenny)："HowcarelessIam!"shewhispered,thensherushedtophonehermam,Fortunately,hermomdidn'tgofarawayandtoldhertherightbagwasonthecar.Gettingthisnews,theheavystoneinJenny’sheartwasputdown.WeavethestoryThemomentJennyopenedthebag,shewasgreetedwithherswimsuitalongwithanotesaying“Youwon’tletanyonedown.--Mom.”WhatwasJenny’sresponse(gatheruphercourage)Shewasshiveringwithdeterminationnow.Feelingextraordinarilyrelaxed,theworryinherheartwasturnedintobubbles!Appreciategreatworksfromourclassmates!Withheartfeltcouragepossessingher,shetookadeepbreath,gatheringupallherstrengthandgoingtoagreatlengthstojump,andthenswim.Para2:Jennyheadedfortheswimmingpoolwithabrightsmile.WeavethestoryHowdidJennyfeel尽管筋疲力尽，我们没有放弃。Fatiguedaswewere,wedidn’tgive

up.Nervousasshewas,shewasnolongerafraidordiscouraged.=Althoughshewasnervous,shewasnolongerafraidordiscouraged.尽管她很紧张，她不再害怕或气馁。Exhaustedasshewas,shestillkeptyellingatthetopofherlungs（扯破喉咙，特别大声地）.尽管筋疲力尽，她仍然拼命呼喊（lung）。WeavethestoryHowdidsheperformedinthecompetitionInasplitofsecond,thestartinggunfiring,shewasthefastestarrowintheair.

Thenextfewminutessawherwavingthearmsswiftlyandcuttingthroughthewatersmoothlylikeaflyingfish.Whenswimming,shefelttheworldoutsidethewaterseemedtohavevanished,withonlyhermom’swordshovering（盘旋；萦绕）inhermind.as+情绪形容词＋as+意象”喜：ashappyasaking;怒：asangryasabull(公牛);asfuriousasaragingstorm哀：assadasahomelessdog累：astiredasthewingsofabirdasfatiguedasanox紧张不安：asnervousasanantonahotpan害怕：sb'sfaceturnedaspaleasasheetMakemoresentencesShewasjustlikeaknife,cuttingthroughthesurfaceofwatertoshowhowsharpshecouldbe.Sheleaptandslipintothewaterl