高中英语外研版选择性必修第一册Unit 3 Period 6　Writing-Writing about a sporting moment

Period6Writing—WritingaboutasportingmomentActivity1Readforsomedetails.1．Whenwasthesportstournamentheld?A．LastSunday. B．LastSaturday.C．Lastweekend. D．LastThursday.答案B2．Howdidtheauthorfeelbeforetheevent?A．Comfortable. B．Calm.C．Intense. D．Upset.答案C3．Fromthepassagewecanknowthat.A．whentheeventstarted，allthepeoplekeptcalmB．theracelastedmorethanoneminuteC．LiChongwonthefirstplaceintheraceD．theauthor’slungswereburst答案CActivity2Readforthestructures.Ⅰ.Fillinthefollowingtable.GeneralintroductionTime：1.lastSaturdayPlace：2.theschoolplaygroundEvent:thefinalof4×100-meterrelayWhatyousawandheardbeforetheeventEveryonewas3.quietand4.still.Theatmosphereense.duringtheeventEveryonewent6.wild!Itwaslikebeinghitbyahugewaveof7.excitement.aftertheeventIthoughtmylungswould8.burst！HowyoufeltItwassowonderfultobepartofthissportingmomentandenjoyits9.speedand10.passion.Ⅱ.Accordingtothepassage，wecanlearnwhenwewriteasportingmomentwecanusethefollowingoutline.(写作模板)Opening：ThefirstpartLastIwenttoat.ItwasanextraordinaryexperienceandsomethingIwillneverforget.Account：ThesecondpartBeforetheraceWhen.Theracewasover.Everyonewasontheirfeet，cheering.Itwassowonderfultobepartofthissportingmomentandenjoy.Activity3Readforsomegoodsentences.1．Pleasefindoutthesentencesusedtodescribewhattheauthorsaw.答案Weallstoodupandstartedcheeringandshouting.Icouldseetherunnersstrainingtorunasfastastheycould，whiletryingnottodroptheirbatonsatthechange.2．Pleasefindoutthesentencesusedtodescribestudents’feelings.答案Whentherunnerssetoff，everyonewentwild!Itwaslikebeinghitbyahugewaveofexcitement.IwasalsocaughtupintheexcitementandcheeredsohardthatIthoughtmylungswouldburst!本单元的写作任务是“描写体育运动时刻”。描述一个体育运动时刻属于记叙文文体，写作时，可以从事件的起因、经过、结果以及感情等方面作简单介绍。文章以第一、第三人称为主，常用一般过去时对过往事件进行描述。篇章结构第一段：介绍比赛项目，举行的时间、地点和参与人物。第二段：详细介绍比赛过程。第三段：抒发自己的感受。常用表达开头段：1．Iwatchedthefinalofthe4×100-meterrelayatthesportsmeetingheldinourschoolonMonday.在周一我们学校举办的运动会上我观看了4×100米接力赛的决赛。2．AsportsmeetingwasheldinourschoolonSeptember15th.9月15日我们学校举行了一场运动会。3．ItwasanexcitingexperiencethatIwouldneverforget.这是一次令人兴奋的经历，我永远不会忘记。4．Whatimpressedmemostis...令我印象最深的是……5．ItisoneofthemostunforgettablemomentsthatIhaveeverexperienced.这是我经历过的最难忘的时刻之一。主体段：1．Hestoodatthestartline，lookingrelaxedandconfident.他站在起跑线上，看上去放松且自信。2．Whentherunnerssetoff，everyonewentwild!当赛跑运动员出发时，每个人都欣喜若狂！3．Weallstoodupandstartedcheeringandshouting.我们都站起来，开始欢呼和尖叫。4．Icouldseetherunnersrunningasfastastheycould.我能看见赛跑运动员在尽可能快地跑。结尾段：1．Ibelievethismomentwillremainapreciousmemoryforallofus.我相信这一时刻将成为我们所有人珍贵的记忆。2．Thoughhedidn’twintherace，hewonouradmiration.虽然他没有赢得比赛，但他赢得了我们的钦佩。3．Notonlydowehavefun，butwelearntotakeprideinourpartners，cheerforthemandhelpthemwhentheyareinneed.我们不仅玩得开心，而且还学会了以我们的同伴为荣，为他们喝彩，在他们需要的时候帮助他们。假如你曾代表你班参加春季运动会4×100米接力比赛，请你用英语写一篇短文，详细描述一下当时参加比赛的情形与赛后的感受。第一步审题谋篇审题写作要求是描写一个运动时刻。写作时应注意下面几点：1．确定文体：这是一篇记叙文，写作中应注意记叙文的常规格式。2．主体时态：文章应以一般过去时为主。3．主体人称：第一人称为主。谋篇第一段：对经历的这次比赛作简单介绍；第二段：详细描述一下赛前、赛中和赛后你所看到和听到的；第三段：描述一下你的感受。第二步遣词造句核心词汇1．接力赛的第一棒thefirstlegoftherelayrace2．起跑线thestartingline3．屏蔽；排除blockout4．接力棒baton5．突然出现；爆发；爆裂burst6．得到回报payoff7．合作；协作teamwork连词成句1．我曾经在我们的春季运动会上跑过4×100米接力赛的第一棒。(firstleg，relay)Ionceranthefirstlegof4×100-meterrelayraceatourspringsportsmeeting.2．枪响了，我几乎把其他的一切都抛在了脑后。(过去完成时，blockout)Thegunsounded，andIalmosthadblockedouteverythingelse.3．我把接力棒传给了第二个选手。(baton)Ipassedthebatontothesecondrunner.4．我听到了疯狂的欢呼和叫喊。Iheardthewildcheeringandshouting.5．因为我沉浸在兴奋之中，我欢呼得很厉害，我想我的肺都要胀破了。(burst)BecauseIwascaughtupintheexcitement，IcheeredsohardthatIthoughtmylungswouldburst.6．多亏了我们的团队合作，我们的努力得到了回报。(teamwork；payoff)Thankstoourteamwork，oureffortspaidoff.第三步句式升级1．用“only＋状语”置于句首合并句3和句4。OnlywhenIpassedthebatontothesecondrunnerdidIhearthewildcheeringandshouting.2．用过去分词作状语改写句5。Caughtupintheexcitement，IcheeredsohardthatIthoughtmylungswouldburst.第四步组句成篇用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇英语短文。参考范文Ionceranthefirstlegof4×100-metrerelayraceatourspringsportsmeeting.Itwasexcitingandunforgettable.Standingonthestartinglineandwaitingforthestartinggun，Icouldalmosthearmyownheartbeating.Thenthegunsounded，andIalmosthadblockedouteverythingelse.Tothisday，Idon’trememberhowIfinishedmylegoftherace.OnlywhenIpassedthebatontothesecondrunnerdidIhearthewildcheeringandshouting.Caughtupintheexcite