2021年云南省丽江市大学英语6级大学英语六级模拟考试(含答案)

2021年云南省丽江市大学英语6级大学英

语六级模拟考试（含答案）

学校:班级:姓名:考号:

一、l.Writing（10题）

1.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteaneye­

witnessaccountofatrafficaccident.Youshouldwriteatleast120words

accordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:

1.假设你在某日某时某地目击了一起车祸，就此写一份见证书。见证书

须包括以下几点

1.车祸发生的时间及地点

2.你所见到的车祸情况

3.你对车祸原因的分析

2.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay

entitledMyViewonOnlineShopping.Youshouldwriteatleast150words

followingtheoutlinegivenbelow:

1.网上购物渐渐成为一种时尚，越来越多的大学生选择网上购物

2.分析大学生网上购物的原因

3.我对此现象的看法

MyViewonOnlineShopping

3.1.目前社会上存在着迷信文凭的现象

2.造成这一现象的原因

3.我对此的观点

4.Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitled

ChangesinFamilyExpenses.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsbasedon

thechartandoutlinegivenbelow.

1.请对图表所给出的信息进行描述

2.请对描述的内容做出原因分析

3.请针对此图表得出合理的结论并对未来进行预测

StatisticsofFamilyExpensesinChina

198519952005

Item

Food&Clothing67%46%20%

Recreation3%7%15%

Education6%13%22%

HeathCare6%10%16%

others18%24%35%

ChangesinFamilyExpenses

5.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay

entitledTheImportanceofCreatingaHealthyInternet.Ybushouldwriteat

least150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.随着社会和经济发展网络成为了每个人必不可少的获取信息的工具

2.但是，在网络上也出现了一些不健康的因素，如垃圾信息、黄色网

站、虚假新闻、网络炒作等

3.我们应采取措施制止这些，并建立一个健康的网络环境

TheImportanceofCreatingaHealthyInternet

6.Directions:forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowritea

compositiononthetopicwhichweighsmore:SchoolBrandorMajor?You

shouldwriteatleast150words,andbaseyourcompositionontheoutline

givenbelowinChinese:

1.人们普遍认为能否上一所名牌大学对一个的将来非常关键

2.但是，也有相当一部分人认为选择一个适合自己的专业才是最重要的

3.你对此的看法是什么？为什么？

7.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowritearesume.You

shouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:

假设你是李明一名应届毕业生，在报纸上看到一则招聘广告，你想要到

登广告的公司供职，请给该公司写一封求职信，内容应简要介绍自己的

情况以及自己的经历等。

8.1.很多大学生从未对父母的养育之恩道过谢

2.请详细说明其中的原因

3.你的算法

Say"Thanks”toParents

9.Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositiononthe

topic“RechoiceofProfessions—ASocialProblem”.Youshouldwriteatleast

150wordsandyoushouldbaseyourcompositionontheoutlinegivenin

Chinesebelow.

1.下岗人员(laid-offpersonnel)面临一个严肃的问题：再就业。

2.下岗人员要改变就业观念，树立坚强信心，重新就业。

3.人们要关心、帮助下岗人员，克服困难，争取胜利，

10.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowritea

compositiononStudyingAbroad.Yourcompositionmustbebasedonthe

outlinegivenbelowinChinese.Yourpartofwritingshouldbenolessthan

150words.Remembertowriteneatlyandyouwillberewardedforthat.

1.有些人认为学生应该呆在自己的国家学习；

2.有些人认为学生应该到美国学习；

3.我的观点。

二、2.ReadingComprehension(SkimmingandScanning)(10题)

11.

Sensitiveteethmayindicateaseriousproblemthatmayneedpromptcareby

adentist.

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12.

Thelowconfidencelevelofconsumersandproducersisoneofthegeneral

factorsofarecession.

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13.ABookThatChangedOurThinking

一ByKarlKrahnke

TheBook

Americain1962wasstillemergingfromthecomfortabledecadeofthe1950s,

atimeinwhichlifegenerallyseemedgoodandmanytechnologicaladvances

oftheprevioustwentyorthirtyyearspromisedahappier,healthier,andsafer

future.Butcloudswereonthehorizon,andmanyofthequestionsanddoubts

thatwouldcharacterizethedecadeofthe1960swerealreadyapparent.One

cloudthatquicklybecameamajorstormtooktheform.ofabookthatwas

publishedin1962,SilentSpring.SilentSpringisoneofafewbooksthathave

changedhistory.

SilentSpringisaboutchemicals,specificallyaboutonetypeofchemical

chlorinatedhydrocarbons—andmorespecificallyaboutonefamousmember

ofthatgroup,DDT.Manypeoplewhohavegrownupsincethe1960shave

notheardofDDT,butbeforeSilentSpring,andforanumberofyearsafter

ward,DDTanditsrelativeswereimportanttoolsinthecivilizedworld'sat

tempttocontrolnaturethroughtheuseoftechnologyandchemicals.DDTis

apowerfulinsecticideandwasusedthroughouttheworldtokillinsectpests

ofallkinds.

DDThadbeendiscoveredin1939andbegantobewidelyusedduringthe

SecondWorldWar.Formanyyearsitseemedtobejustonemoremiraculous

productofmodemscience.DDTwasusedtodestroypopulationsofmany

harmfulinsects,malaria-carryingmosquitoes,lice,andflies.Thereisno

questionthatDDTandsimilarchemicalsdid,andstillaredoing,alotofgood.

Thedangerfrominsect-carrieddiseasessuchasmalariaandyellowfeverhas

beengreatlyreduced,andthelivesofmanypeoplehavebeensavedand

lengthenedbytheiruse.

SilentSpring,however,toldabouttheothersideofDDTanditsrelatives.

Usingcarefullycollectedscientificevidence,theauthorshowedthatDDTand

similarpesticideshadatleasttwodangeroussideeffects.Oneofthesewas

thetendencyofpesticidestokillalloftheinsectsinthelocationwherethey

wereused.Notallinsectsareharmful,however.Manybees,forexample,

perform,necessaryfunctions,suchaspollinatingplantsandevencontrolling

thenumbersofother,moreharmful,insects.Whenusefulinsectsare

eliminated,theresulthasoftenbeengreaterproblemsthanbeforethe

pesticidewasused.Asecondproblemwithchlorinatedhydrocarbonsisthat

theydonotdisappearquickly;theyarestablechemicalsthataccumulatein

thebodiesofinsectsandthebirdsandanimalsthateatthemandcontinueto

doharmwhenandwheretheeffectwasnotintended.Birdsareespecially

affectedbyDDT-typepesticides.Manybirdseatinsectsandwormsasfood,

andthechemicalsthatwereintheinsectscollectintheirbodies,frequently

leadingtotheirdeath.AsSilentSpringdemonstratedsoclearly,the

disappearanceofmanykindsofbirdswasduetothepresenceofpesticidesin

theirfoodsources.

Mostimportantly,SilentSpringbroughttotheworldatlargethebeginningof

anunderstandingofmodernecology.Webegantoseethatthenaturalworld

weliveinismadeupofanumberofplants,insects,andanimals,somegood,

somenotsogood,andthatwecannotencourageoreliminatesomewithout

producingeffectsinmanyothers,andeveninourselves.

SilentSpringisapowerfulbook,beautifullyandsensitivelywritten,andit

carriesastrongmessage.Itisfullofcomplexscientificinformation,butitis

equallyaveryhumanandcaringbook.Itdoesnottrytopresentabalanced

pictureortofindexcusesforthemistakeswemadewithpesticides.Itisan

argumentforanewanddifferentwayoflookingatnatureandourrelation

shipwithnature.Thebook

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14.

In1924CivicClubDinner,sponsoredbyOpportunity,bringingblackwriters

andwhitepublisherstogether,March21.Thiseventisconsideredtheformal

launchingof.

15.

Speakingwillturnintoapleasantexperienceafteryou.

A.graduatefromschool

B.flyanairplanealoneforthefirsttime

C.joininsomegroupsinthecommunity

D.getmorespeakingexperiences

16.Domesaretheenvironment-friendlybuilding.

17.TheBusinessofMediaViolence

In2001,peoplearoundtheworldspentUS$14billiongoingtothemovies.

TheU.S.domesticboxofficealonehitUS$9billion—a75percentincrease

from1991—andtherearehugerevenuesfromhomevideo/DVDsales,rentals

andspin-offmerchandise.Buteventheseprofitsaredwarfedbymusic,the

largestglobalmediasector.In2000,salesreachedUS$37billion,withmusic

consumptionhighamongyoungaudienceseverywhere.Videogamesarenot

farbehind:globalsalesfor2002wereanticipatedtobeUS$31billion.

AnExpandingForeignMarket

Americanmediacorporationsearnatleasthalfoftheirprofitsfromforeign

sales.Andglobalmarketsaregrowingfastasstandardsoflivingarerising

aroundtheworld.SalesofTVs,stereos,VCRsandsatellitedishesare

increasing,andinthelastdecadeortwo,newandexpandingmarketshave

emergedincountriesthathaveabandonedstatecontrolofmediaand

distribution.

Today,U.S.filmsareshowninmorethan150countriesworldwide,andthe

U.S.filmindustryprovidesmostofthepre-recordedvideosandDVDssold

throughouttheworld.Americantelevisionprogramsarebroadcastinover

125internationalmarkets,andMTVcanbeseeninmoreforeignhouseholds

thanAmericanones.

Thisinternationalsuccesshasatremendousimpactnotjustonthe

recipient(愿意接受的)countries,butalsoontheculturalenvironmentofthe

U.S.Tosomeextent,thetailiswaggingthedog:moreandmore,thedemands

andtastesofforeignmarketsareinfluencingwhatpopularproductsgetmade

intheU.S.

ActionSells:FilmandTelevision

Nowhereisthisinfluencemoreevidentthaninthefilmindustry.IntheU.S.

andCanada,moviesratednGH(General)andnPG"(ParentalGuidance)

consistentlybringsinmorerevenuesthanR-ratedfilms.YetthenumberofG

andPGfilmshasdroppedinrecentyears,andthenumberofrestrictedfilms

hasrisen.Two-thirdsofHollywoodfilmsin2001wererated"R".

Filmproducersareunequivocal(不含糊的)aboutwhythisisso:theforeign

marketlikesactionfilms.

Actiontravelswell.Actionmoviesdon'trequirecomplexplotsorcharacters.

Theyrelyonfights,killings,specialeffectsandexplosionstoholdtheir

audiences.And,unlikecomedyordrama—whichdependongoodstories,

sharphumor,andcrediblecharacters,allofwhichareoftenculture-specific一

actionfilmsrequirelittleinthewayofgoodwritingandacting.They're

simple,andthey'reuniversallyunderstood.Totopitoff,thelargelynon-

verbalnatureofthekindoffilmsthatjournalistSharonWaxmanreferstoas

Hshort-on-dialogue,high-on-testosterone"makestheirdubbing（酉己音）or

translationrelativelyinexpensive.

Thereare,ofcourse,exceptionstotherule.ThefilmTitanicmadealmostUS

$2billioninworldwidesalesasof2001—makingitthebiggest-grossing

movieofalltime.TheBritishfilmTheFullMontywasaninternationalhits

andMyBigFatGreekWeddingdebunkedalltheprofitformulasin2002.

Butsuchoffbeatsuccessesarehardtopredict.AflicksuchasDieHardor

Terminatorismuchmoreofasurething.Mostfilmbudgetstodayaverage

US$75-100mil-lion,soHollywoodstudiosdon'tliketotakechances.

AllthismeansenormouspressureontheAmericanmovieindustrytoabandon

complexityinfavourofactionfilms.Theeffectisakindof"dumbing-down"

oftheindustryingeneral.Foreigninvestorsaremuchlesslikelytoinvestin

filmsfocusingonserioussocialthemesorwomen'sissues,oronesthatfeature

minoritycasts.Suchfilms,howeverbrilliant,arenotwherethebigmoneyis.

Worldwideappealdeterminescastingandscript,decisions-andthe

overwhelmingdemandisforwhiteactorsandaction.

Successbreedssuccess,andthesheerubiquity（无处不在）ofthese

productionsandal

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18.

Thegoodpartsofalltheprogramskeepgettingbetterbecauseof.

19.

inyourbodyfunctionstokeepthebalancebetweenthecaloriesyour

bodybumsandthequantityittakesin.

20.

TheconceptofEPRensuresthattakemoreresponsibilitiesfor

managingtheenvironmentalimpactsoftheirproductsthroughouttheirlife.

三、3.ListeningComprehension。0题）

21.（28）

A.Withthehelpofresponsiblesmokers.

B.Withthehelpofhuntersandwoodworkers.

C.Buymoregoodequipments.

D.Addmorefiremenandfireengines.

22.

[B2]

23.听力原文：M:Honey,thebasketballgameisabouttostart.Andcouldyou

bringsomechipsandabowloficecream?And...uh...asliceofpizzafrom

thefridge.

W:Anythingelse?

M:Nope,that'sfornow.Hey,honey,youknow,(22)they'reorganizinga

companybasketballteam,andI'mthinkingofjoining.Whatdoyouthink?

W:Humph?

M:"Humph"?Whatdoyoumean"Humph"?Iwasthestarplayerinhigh

school.

W:Yeah,twenty-fiveyearsago.Look,(23)1justdon'twantyouhavingaheart

attackrunningupanddownthecourt.

M:So,whatareyousuggesting?ShouldIjustabandontheidea?I'mnotthat

outofshape.

W:Well...yououghttoatleasthaveaphysicalcheck-upbeforeyoubegin.I

mean,ithasbeenatleastfiveyearssinceyouplayedatall.

M:Well,okey,but...

W:And(24)youneedtowatchyourdietandcutbackonthefattyfood,lick

icecream.Andyoushouldtryeatingmorefreshfruitsandvegetables.

M:Yeah,you'reprobablyright.

W:And(25)youshouldtakeupalittleweighttrainingtostrengthenyour

musclesorperhapstrycyclingtobuildupyourheartsystem.Oh,andyou

needtogotobedearlyinsteadofwatchingTVhalfthenight.

M:Hey,you'restartingtosoundlikemypersonalfitnessinstructor!

W:No,Ijustloveyou,andIwantyoutobearoundforalong,longtime.

(23)

A.Toplaybasketballwithfriendsfromwork.

B.Totryoutforthecompanybaseballteam.

C.Togetinshapeandcompeteinacyclingrace.

D.Towatchthebasketballgameliveinastadium.

24.

[BIO]

25.(29)

A.BecausemanyarchitectsstudiedwithWright.

B.BecauseWrightstartedthepracticeof^land-scraping".

C.BecauseWrightusedelementsofenvelopebuilding.

0.BecausemostofthehousesWrightbuiltweremadeofstone,

26.(26)

A.Morethan100students.

B.About50students.

C.About200students.

D.8to10students.

27.(32)

A.ThattheBritishwereretreatingtotheCharlesRiver.

B.ThattheBritishwouldattackbysea.

C.ThattheBritishwerewillingtosignadeclarationofindependence.

D.ThattheBritishhadwonthefirsttwobattlesoftheRevolution.

28.(36)

A.Industriesinthepastandatpresent.

B.Changesinthedevelopmentofindustries.

C.Thefreedomofindustriestodayandinthepast.

D.Theprotectionofindustrialworkersandcustomers.

29.听力原文：M:Youdidn'tseemtobeabletositstillforclass.Areyou

expectingsomething?

W:Yes.TmexpectingacalltoseeifIwasacceptedfbrthepositionatCole's.

Icoulddowiththecash.

Q:Whatdoesthewomanmean?

(18)

A.Sheiseagertobeacceptedbytheuniversity.

B.SheiswaitingtoseeifshecouldgetthejobfromCole's.

C.SheisexpectingtoseeifColewouldlendhersomecash.

D.Shehasnoideaaboutwhethershecanaffordtheuniversitytuition.

30.听力原文：Areyouafraid,toraiseyourhandinclass,evenwhenyou

knowtheanswer?Ifyouare,mostpeoplewouldsaythatyouareshy.Ifyou

feelshy,youarenotalone.Nineoutoftenpeopleareatleastalittleshy.But

howevershyyouare,scientificevidenceseemstoshowthatitisn'tyourfault.

Youmayhavebeenbomthatway.

Howdopsychologistsmeasureshyness?Onewayisbyobservation.They

keepdetailedrecordsofpeople'sactions—likehowoftenthesepeoplespeak

toothers,orhowlongittakessomeonetosay"Hello'1toastranger.Another

waytomeasureshynessistoaskpeoplequestions.Thetestonlytakesabout

10minutes.Itasksquestionlike"Doyoulikegoingoutalot?"andnDoyou

havemanyfriends?"Peoplemustanswereither"Yes"or"No”.These

questionscanpredicthowpeopleactuallybehaveinsocialsituations.

Supposethetesttellsyouthatsomeoneisshy.Chancesaregoodthatperson

willactshy.

Whenscientistsmeasureshyness,theyarereallycomparingdegreesof

shyness.Inotherwords,whenresearcherssaypeopleareshy,theyreally

meantheyaremoreshythanothers.

(30)

A.Becausemanypeopledon'tknowhowtobehaveinsocialsituations.

B.Becausemostpeopleareshybynature.

C.Nobodywilllaughatyouforbeingshy.

D.Shynessisdifficulttoovercome.

四、4.ReadingComprehension(ReadinginDepth)(3题)

31.Thebullwasasacredcreatureinthereligionandfolkloreoftheancient

world.Itisnotsurprising,therefore,thatthefinancialmarketsofwestern

Europeshouldbemovedbythoseancientlegendsaboutthecreativepower

ofthebull.Thestockmarketspeculatorstranslatedthatpowerintomoney

andmadeitpartofthespeechoffinancialinvestors.Thebull'sbackwas

strongenoughtocarrythegamblefsgreedformoney.Thereweresomewho

boughtstockbecausetheyexpecteditwouldriseinpriceandgivethema

goodprofit.Thiskindofspeculatorwassooncalleda"bull".

Ontheothersideofthecoinwasthe"bear".Insteadofbuyingastock,then

sellingit,thebeardidtheopposite.Hesoldastockfirst,thenboughtitback

atwhathehopedwouldbealowerprice.Thereishardevidencethat"bull”

wasstockmarketslanginEuropeinthemiddle1700*s.Suchevidencecanbe

foundintheworksofseveral18thcenturyBritishdramatists.Thefamous

ColleyCibber,forexample,describesamanwhoboastsofthemoneyhehas

beenmakingontheLondonExchange."Everyshilling,nhesays,*'outof

stocks,bulls,bearsandbubbles!'*

SamuelFootecallsoneofhischaractersa"merebullandbearbooby:the

patronoflameducks,brokersandfraudulent(欺骗性的)footbankrupts!"

Still,itisgenerallybelievedthat"bear"becamepartofstockmarketslang

longbefore“bull”didso.Theuseof"bear",wearetold,comesfromavery

oldandwell-knownfable.Thisisthestoryofamanwhosoldtheskinofa

bearevenbeforehecaughttheanimal,justassomespeculatorssoldstocks

thattheyhadnotyetbought.Englishfinanciersofthe17thcenturymadefun

ofsuchtradersandcalledthem"breakskinjobbers'1.AsanEnglishdictionary

ofthetimeexplained:"Tosellabearistosellwhatonehasnot."

Thefinancialhistoryofthepast200years,bothinAmericaandEurope,tells

somewildstoriesaboutthebearsandbullsandtheireffortstoinfluencethe

stockmarket.Someoftheirdishonestdeals,tradesandspeculationshave

givenwritersanddramatistsmuchmaterialfortheirplays,novelsandsatires.

Happily,inrecenttimes,thebearsandthebullshavebeenbroughtunder

control.Lawshavebeenpassedtokeepdishonesttradersfromtheexchanges.

Thebearsandthebullsintheirtimehavehadtheirfunandtheirprofits.They

certainlywereawildbreedintheirmoredramaticanddestructivedays,

bringingruintotheexchangesandeconomiesofnations.

Theymakecolorful,excitingreading,buttheyarepartofthepast.Today,

thankGod,thebearsandbullshavebeentamed.Theynowactlikehouse

pets—asseeninthewordsofamodemAmericanpoet,"Iplaywiththebulls

andthebears.',

Whichofthefollowingisthemostsuitabletitleforthispassage?

A.BearsandBulls

B.TheDomesticationofBears

C.PhrasesandAnimals

D.Bullfighting

32.Whatistrueabouttheproposedruleonmercury*?

A.Itwillprohibittheemissionofmercurypollutantstrictly.

B.ItwillhelpU.S.governmentdealwithclimateproblem.

C.ItwillhindertheU.S.Congressfrompassingabillongreenhousegases.

D.Itwillencouragetheproductionofmorepowerfromrenewablesources.

33.

Thepurposeofthepassageistodiscuss.

A.migrationbetweencountries

B.thereasonsofinternationalmigrants

C.migrationinsidethecountry

D.theproblemsofinternationalmigrants

五、5.ErrorCorrection©题）

34.

[S2]

35.ChildrenbornintoaBushmansocietyofSouth

Africaarecompletelydependentlyontheirfamilyfor

food.Whiletheyareveryyoung,theirmother'smilk

willbetheprimarymeanofnourishment（营养）.Later[Si]

theirfathers,uncles,andbrotherswillsupplythemby[S2]

meat,andtheirmothers,auntsandsisterswithwild

plantfoods.Notuntilthechildrenarefiveorsix,

perhapsmoreolder,willtheycontributetothegroup's[S3]

subsistence（生存，口粮）.

Childrenliveinthecampsoftheirparentsuntil

theirmany.Intheinterim（期间）theylearnthe

roleswhichrulestheymustlive.Tosurvive,theymust[S4]

listenwelltotheelderswhohaveexperiencednatureand

theirrewardsandpunishments.[S5]

Thenchildrengrowanddevelop.Theylearnthatis[S6]

thejobofthemalestoprovidethecampwithmeat.

Skillinhuntingisdevelopedbychildren'sgamesandby

watchingandhearingtofathersanduncles.Theyboys[S7]

aslolearnthatitwillbetheirresponsibilityasadults

toprotecttheirgroupsoffthewrongdoingsofother[S8]

groups.

Thechildrenlearnthatthefemalesarethe

gathers.Roots,nuts,berries,stems,andleavesare

collectedandbroughtbackfortheday'smeal.Itisthe

menwhosupplythecampwiththemajorityofthefood.[S9]

Theirgatheringactivitiesaccountupto80percentofthe[S10]

foodbyweight.ElizabethMarshallThomasgivesa

vividdescriptionofthegatheringofBushmanwomenin

hisbookTheharmlessPeople.

[SI]

36.

[S7]

六、6.EirorCorrection。题）

37.

[S9]

38.

[S2]

39.

[S8]

参考答案

l.AnEye-WitnessAccountofaTrafficAccidentLastFridaymorningIwas

standingatthebusstopwaitingforBusNo375.Becauseseverallinespassed

bythestationanditwasrushhourmanypeoplehadgatheredtherebefore

nextbuscamesomeoffthepavementothersonthelawn.Abuspulledinto

thestationatlast.BeforeIrecognizedthenumberofthepackedbuspeople

alreadythrongedforwardandfoughttheirwaytothedoor.SuddenlyIheard

somebodyshout"Help!Help!1*Itwasfromthecrowd.Allthepassengers

lookedtowardthepointwherethesoundcamefrom.Apregnantwomanwas

lyingontheroadnearbythebusdoorbleedingallover.Iwasfrightenedand

dazed.Anambulancecameandtookthewomantohospital.Busescomeand

wentbutIjuststoodtherelostinthought.Probablybecausetimeandtidewait

fornomanpeopleinmodemsocietyarealwaysinahurrylesttheyshouldbe

leftbehindandevendismissed.Therecanneverbepeaceofmind.Thusrises

thenumberoftrafficaccident.Iftherewerelesspressureonpeoplethere

mightbefeweraccidents.AnEye-WitnessAccountofaTrafficAccidentLast

FridaymorningIwasstandingatthebusstopwaitingforBusNo,375.

Becauseseverallinespassedbythestationanditwasrushhour,manypeople

hadgatheredtherebeforenextbuscame,someoffthepavement,otherson

thelawn.Abuspulledintothestationatlast.BeforeIrecognizedthenumber

ofthepackedbus,peoplealreadythrongedforwardandfoughttheirwayto

thedoor.SuddenlyIheardsomebodyshout"Help!Help!MItwasfromthe

crowd.Allthepassengerslookedtowardthepointwherethesoundcamefrom.

Apregnantwomanwaslyingontheroadnearbythebusdoor,bleedingall

over.Iwasfrightenedanddazed.Anambulancecameandtookthewomanto

hospital.Busescomeandwent,butIjuststoodthere,lostinthought.Probably

becausetimeandtidewaitfornoman,peopleinmodemsocietyarealways

inahurry,lesttheyshouldbeleftbehindandevendismissed.Therecannever

bepeaceofmind.Thusrisesthenumberoftrafficaccident.Iftherewereless

pressureonpeopletheremightbefeweraccidents.

2.MyViewonOnlineShopping(l)Intheeraofnetworkonlineshoppinghas

becomeoneofthemodernmeansbywhichpeopledotheirshopping.More

andmorecollegestudentsareenjoyingtheconvenienceandfunthat

netwoMyViewonOnlineShopping(l)Intheeraofnetwork,onlineshopping

hasbecomeoneofthemodemmeansbywhichpeopledotheirshopping.

Moreandmorecollegestudentsareenjoyingtheconvenienceandfunthat

netwo解析：本文是一篇六级作文考试中常见的议论文，要求考生就“大

学生网上购物”展开讨论。题目要求考生首先描述这一现象，其次分析原

因，最后表达自己的看法，是典型的现象解释型作文。

［写作提纲］

一、描述背景，引出现象

1.描述背景：网络时代，网上购物成为一种流行趋势(network,online

shopping,modern)

2.引出现象：大学生选择网上购物，享受其带来的方便和乐趣(college

students,enjoy,convenience,fun)

二、分析原因

1.原因一：网上购物价格便宜，能省钱(lowerprice,savemoney)

2.原因二：网上购物资源丰富，能买到商场里买不到的东西(awealthof

commodityinformation,available,everythingconceivable)

3.原因三：网上购物不用排队,只需点鼠标(insteadofqueuingup,afew

clicksofmouse)

三、“我”的看法：更多人将接受网购，享受到选择多、价位低的好处

(accept,cheapershopping,moreselections)

(l)intheeraof意为“在…时代

(2)过渡句，提出问题。

(3)分析原因的常用表达。

(4)Firstofall,Besides,Moreover,分析网上购物流行的三条原因。

(5)Inotherwords意为“换言之”，进一步解释上文所表达的意思。

⑹常用来引出个人观点。

3.1saDiplomaEverything?Nowadays©thereisawidelyheldbeliefthat

diplomaiseverything.Somepeoplewillgainahigherdiploma②atallcosts

andothersforcetheirchildrentogetahigherdiploma.Thisphenomenoncan

beexplainedbyatleast③tworeasons.④Ontheonehandpeoplebelieve

ahigherdiplomacan©guaranteeaprosperousfuturesuchassuccessful

careersandrespectablepositions.@Ontheotherhandthediplomapeople

hold⑦isattachedtotoomuchimportance.Havingadiplomaisa

preconditionforpeopletodoalmosteverythingforexampletofindajobto

haveadatewithagirl.⑧Inmyopinion⑨itisnodoubtthatdiplomais

importantbecauseitshowsaperson'sacademiclevelandability.Howevera

diplomacannotproveeverything©nomatterhowhighadiplomais.A

higherdiplomacanonlytellothersthattheholderhasreceivedthiskindof

education.Asforwhetherheorsheiscompetentinworkingandwhetherhe

orsheisvirtuousthesestillremainasquestions.IsaDiplomaEverything?

Nowadays©thereisawidelyheldbeliefthatdiplomaiseverything.Some

peoplewillgainahigherdiploma②atallcosts,andothersforcetheir

childrentogetahigherdiploma.Thisphenomenoncanbeexplainedbyat

least③tworeasons.④Ontheonehand,peoplebelieveahigherdiploma

can⑤guaranteeaprosperousfuture,suchassuccessfulcareersand

respectablepositions.@Ontheotherhand,thediplomapeoplehold©is

attachedtotoomuchimportance.Havingadiplomaisapreconditionfbr

peopletodoalmosteverything,forexample,tofindajob,tohaveadatewith

agirl.®Inmyopinion,⑨itisnodoubtthatdiplomaisimportant,because

itshowsaperson'sacademiclevelandability.However,adiplomacannot

proveeverything,©nomatterhowhighadiplomais.Ahigherdiplomacan

onlytellothersthattheholderhasreceivedthiskindofeducation.Asfor

whetherheorsheiscompetentinworkingandwhetherheorsheisvirtuous,

thesestillremainasquestions.解析：①由题目可知这是一篇分析型作

文，需要运用“描述现象一解释原因一提出解决办法''的模式。本文按照

要求可分成二部分。第一段简单介绍目前社会存在的现象；第二段分析

造成这一现象的具体原因；第三段阐述自己对该问题的看法。②在每

段的论述中请注意句式的变化，如定语从句、让步状语从句等；注意衔

接手段的使用，如however,asfor等。

4.ChangesinFamilyExpensesThestatisticfiguresgivenbythistableshow

therearesomefundamentalchangesinfamilyexpensesinChinafrom1985

to2005.TheamountofmoneyspentonfoodandclothinghasdecreChanges

inFamilyExpensesTh