童年的记忆大学英语作文

童年的记忆大学英语作文

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内容，具体内容：孩童时期是我们大学回忆中的一部分，这样美好的记忆,

你有用英语记下来吗？下面是我给大家整理的，供大家参阅！：ChildhoodIs

theMostWonderfulPar...

孩童时期是我们大学回忆中的一部分，这样美好的记忆，你有用英语记

下来吗？下面是我给大家整理的，供大家参阅！

:Chi1dhoodIstheMostWonderfulPartofLife

ThedaybeforeyesterdaywasChildrensDay.WhenIwaswandering

inthestreet,IsawmanyLovelychildrenplayingwiththeirparents.

Thepleasantsceneremindedmeofmyownchildhood.WhenIwasa

littlegirl,IwasfreefromworriesanddidwhateverIliked.I

wasfullofvigorandlearnedalotofthingsfromtheworld.Idid

manyexercisesandwasmuchhealthierthanIamtoday.Inmyopinion,

childhoodisthemostwonderfulpartoflife.

Firstofall,childrenwasdeeplylovedandprotectedbytheir

parents.Theydonotneedtoworryaboutanythingandcandowhatever

theywantto.Ithinkthisisthemostwonderfuladvantageof

childhood.Whenapersongrowsup,heorshewillneverhavethis

kindofadvantageagain,foranadultissupposedtohavereceived

enougheducationandknowwhathe/sheshoulddoandwhatnot.Thus,

adultscanonlydoeverythingtheyshoulddowhethertheylikeit

ornot.Moreover,themoretheylearnabouttheworld,themore

worriestheywillget.Thus,manyadultswishtheywouldbechildren

oncemore.

Secondly,childrencanlearnmuchmorethanadults.Whenbabies

cometothisworld,theyknownothingandhaveagreatthirstfor

knowledge.Itismucheasiertoeducatethemthantoteachadults

justlikeapieceofblankpaperismucheasiertobepaintedon.

Furthermore,childrenlearnbyobservinghowpeoplearoundthemact

andimitatethem.Whileadultsemphasizetoomuchonthewaysof

learning,theydonotlearninbestwaysinmostcases.Obviously,

childrenhavebettermemoriesthanadults.Thiscanalsoexplain

whychildrenlearnmorethings.

Thirdly,childrenarebroughtupunderthegreatcareoftheir

parents.Theyeatallkindsofnutritiousfood,andtheyaretaken

outtodophysicalexercisesregularly.Thus,theyareveryhealthy.

However,adultshavetheirownopinionsonfoodandonlyeattheir

favoritefood.Theydonottakeinallkindsofnutrients.Also,

adultsarebusywiththeirwork.Whentheygobackhome,theyalways

feelverytiredandareunwillingtodoanythingelseexceptsleeping.

Thus,theyhavelittletimetodoexercises.Nowonderadultsare

notsohealthyaschildren.

Iwillalwaysrememberthedaysofmychildhood.HowIwishIcould

beascarefreeandcuriousasachildonceagain,andrelivethose

happydays!

简评

童年的生活没有过多的束缚，无忧无虑;童年的世界多么新奇，点燃了

无限的好奇心和求知欲;孩子们生气勃勃，健康快乐。作者列举了童年的

种种好处，并归纳道：童年是一生中最美好的时光。

文章主题明确，结构整齐，分析有条理。但论证过程中缺少事实论据支

撑，作者如果能够融入一些自己的亲身经历和真情实感，将更容易引起读

者的共鸣，增添文章的可读性。文章语言平实，但语句不够精炼，表达也

欠生动。

（点评教师：辛红叶）

：Childhood

Walkinginthecharmingsunsetglow,hearingthefreshlaughter

waftingfromthefrolicchildrenindistance,Icannothelp

recallingmypastlife.Therosycloudsalluredmymemory;whata

wonderfulchildhoodIhavegot.Childhoodisthemostcolorfultime

inmylifeforitisamemory,amysteryandagift.

Childhoodisapreciousmemory.IstillrememberthatIdinged

tomymotherlisteningtohersingingtherhymesforme;Istill

rememberthatIfoughtwithmyoldfrienddesperatelyjustfora

redcheery;IstillrememberIburstintotearsthefirsttimeIwent

toschoohIstillremember...Mychildhoodisamemorywithout

pressure,competitionandhypocrisy.Itisthemostnaireand

innocentperiodwhichIcannotfindwhenIgrowup.Thevaluable

memoryofmychildhoodoftenglittersinmylifeandmoistensit

withgreatjoys.Childhoodissowonderfulbecauseitcreatesan

unforgettablememory.

Childhoodisalsoacharmingmystery.Ttislikeapaperplane

flyinginthesky.Itis1ikethelonelyboatsailinginthesea,

thoughtheydonotknowwheretheyshouldgo,pleasantsurprises

awaitthemhereandthereontheway.Comparedwiththerigidroutine

lifeofadults,childhoodwasfullofmagic,fulloffantasy.Ihad

thegreatcuriosityaboutallthethingsarounduschildren,which

hasbeenworngraduallybytheadultsociety.Childhoodofferedme

infiniteroomofimagination.Itislikeapieceofwhitepaperwhich

Icanputanycolorontopaintmyownbeautifulpicture.Thispicture

isthemostwonderfuloneIcaneverimaginebecausethechildhood

isfullofmystery.

Childhoodisavaluablegifttoo.Thegiftbroughtmetheability

towalkonthestreet,tospeakwithothers.Thegiftendowedme

withtheinitialknowledgeabouttheworld.ItwasinchildhoodI

wasfascinatedbythestoryofafallingappleandNewtonsdiscovery

ofgravitation.Atthattime,Imademydecisiontodevotemyself

tostudyingsciencewell,sonowIcanwritethiscompositionin

FudanUniversity.

Childhoodisagiftwhichshowsmehowtobecomeagoodperson

andenablesmetoacquirevariousability.Thescenethatmyparents

toldmestorieslike〃KongRongRangLi〃”XuanLiangCiGuoften

emergesinmymind.Theteachingsofchildhood

wi11influenceal1mylife.WhenTamtemptedtodosomethingbad,

whatIlearntinmychildhoodwillpreventmefromventuringsothat

Icouldkeepaclearconscience.Childhoodwaslikeabenignant

teacherinstructingmewhatIdidnotknowandforgivingallmyfault.

Iwillcherishthegiftchildhoodgivesmebecauseiristheguidance

ofmylife.

Asamemory,childhoodremindedmeofthegreatjoysintheold

days.Asamystery,childhoodcreatedmeacolorfulthought.Asa

gift,childhoodflourishedmywholelife.Inmyview,childhoodis

themostwonderfulpartofmylife.

简评

有一首台湾民谣〃童年〃，不知打动过多少人的心扉。一年又一年，不见

了快乐的童年，逝去了快乐的时光.....引起孙越同学深深的追忆。作者

立意新颖，把童年比作快乐的回忆，神秘的经历和天赋的礼物，抒发了对

童年的热爱留恋之情。

可以看出，作者尝试用大量的比喻和描写来表达真情实感，如

“childhoodislikeapaper-planeflyinginthesky,likeapiece

ofwhitepaper〃等描写就包含诗情。但是用外语写好散文谈何容易，本

文不乏词不达意之处，语言也不够精炼，有些描写也许是依据中文思维，

令人费解，如Therosycloudsalluredmymemory和Asamystery,

childhoodcreatedmeacolorfulthought.Asagift,childhood

flourishedmywholelife。另外,正文部分若能增加一些具体的事实和

细节，将更能打动人心。

（点评教师：辛红叶）

：儿童时代

Ialwaysdreamaboutreturningtothepast.Asnanypeoplesay,

childhoodisthehappiestandeasiesttimeinoneslife.Children