Unit3-写作课-名师课件（一）

Firstwealthishealth.

——EmersonHewhohashealthhashope,andhewhohashopehaseverything.ProverbsCanyoutellsomeharmfuleffectsofsmoking?

Ifyouwanttopersuadeafriendorarelativeofyourstogiveupsmoking,whatsuggestionsareyougoingtogivehim/her?1.对…有害beharmfulto/doharmto/havenegativeeffecton2.养成…的坏习惯getinto/form/developthebadhabitofdoingsth.3.对…上瘾be/becomeaddictedto4.身心健康physicalandmentalhealth5.对…有益bebeneficialto/dogoodto6.改掉…的习惯getridofthehabitof…/quitdoingsth.7.身体很差beinpoorhealth8.认为…很重要attachgreatimportanceto9.毫无疑问…Thereisnodoubtthat…10.从长远来看inthelongrun11.在学习和娱乐之间保持平衡keep/strikeabalancebetweenstudyandentertainment12.我建议你…Isuggestthatyou(should)do…13.使情况更糟糕的是Tomakethingsworse,…/Worsestill,…14.下定决心做某事bedeterminedtodo

15.在我看来Inmyopinion/AsfarasIamconcerned

AdvicefromGrandadPara4Theharmfuleffectsofsmokingharmfuleffectsdodamagetoheart&lungsdifficulttobecomepregnantsmellterrible

affectnon-smokers’healththeendsoffingersturnyellowunabletoenjoysportbecomebreathlessRead

HowcanIstopsmoking(Page19)

andanswer:Suggestionsforquittingsmoking:____________________________________________________________________________________PrepareyourselfBedeterminedBreakthehabitRelaxGethelpifyouneeditKeeptryingTopicsentencesupportingevidence1supportingevidence2supportingevidence3supportingevidence4…Conclusion(whennecessary)Discussion

SupposeyouhaveagoodfriendcalledDean,whoisaddictedtoplayingonlinegameslikemanyyoungpeople.Hisstudyissufferinggreatly.

Whatwouldyousaytohiminordertopersuadehimtogiveupplayingonlinegames?Alettertomyfriend现象：据报道70%的高中生学习成绩不好是由于迷上网络游戏。我发现你不久前开始玩游戏，现在发现很难戒掉。危害：1.2.3.……希望：我希望尽快听到你的好消息。建议：1.2.3.……细审题，三确定1.确定体裁：本文为

；2.确定人称：本文的主要人称应该为

；3.确定时态：主要使用

和

。建议信第二人称一般现在时一般将来时巧衔接，顺成文first,firstly,inthefirstplace,firstofall...second,secondly,inthesecondplace,next...third,thirdly,besides,inaddion,futhermore,what‘smore,moreover,inadditionatlast,lastly,finally,inthelastplace,lastbutnotleast...inaword,insummary,tosumup,inshort,inconlcusion...写作高分原则出彩的词语、短语、句式；从句（定语从句、状语从句、4种名词性从句）非谓语特殊句型（倒装句，强调句等）TipsAlettertomyfriendDearDean,Itisreportedthat70%ofthehighschoolstudentssufferfromlowmarksduetoplayingonlinegames.Ifindthatyoustartedtoplaygamesandnowyouarefindingitdifficulttogiveitup.危害：1.2.3.……I’mlookingforwardtohearingyourgoodnewssoon.Yoursincerely,XXX建议：1.2.3.……ChecklistofPeerReviewStructure文章或段落结构GrammaticalMistakes语法错误Coherence衔接DiverseExpressions表达的多样性AlettertomyfriendDearDean,Itisreportedthat70%ofthehighschoolstudentssufferfromlowmarksduetoplayingonlinegames.Ifindthatyoustartedtoplaygamesandnowyouarefindingitdifficulttogiveitup.Youmaynotknowmuchabouttheharmfuleffectsofplayinggames.Infact,itcandoterribledamagetoyoureyesightorthatitiseasierforyoutogetagreatpaininyourneck.Besides,addictedtogames,youcan’tconcentrateonyourlessons.Asaresult,youquicklyfallbehindothers.What’smore,manygamesarefilledwithviolence.Ifyouplaythesegamesoverandoveragain,youmayalsosettledisagreementswithviolenceautomatically,whichmayresultincrime.

Howtostopplayinggames？

Itisnoteasytostopplayinggames,butmillionshavemanagedtoquitandsocanyou.Firstly,listthedisadvantagesofthatbadhabit.Thenputthelisttotheplacewhereyoucanseeiteasily.Secondly,findsomethingfunandgoodtodo,butnotgamingrightaway.Leavemoretimewithyourfriends,moretimetohangoutatabookstore,joinasportteamorsomethingelse.Lastly,makeaneffectivescheduleandfindasupervisor.Heorshewillcheckyourprocessofthetimetableandalsowillgivewarningifyougotoplaygames.

I’mlookingforwardtohearingyourgoodnewssoon.Yoursincerely,