2022届高考英语读后续写精读精炼二十九含答案解析

2022届高考英语读后续写精读精炼（二十九）目录内容PartA读后续写模考经典原文PartB读后续写思路引导PartC写作优秀句式翻译PartD篇章写作润色PartE课后练笔巩固提升.PartA读后续写模考经典原文Ashwiniwaswaitingatthedoorforherchildren,AmitandAnika.Itwasthelastdayoftheirexamsandshehadpreparedtastysnacksforthem.“Mom,youknowRishitfrommyclass?Healwaysdisturbedothersduringtheexamandcopiedfromtherm.'“Hey,letmespeaknow,”Anikasaidandkeptgigglingallthetime.“Mom,oneofthegirlsinmyclasshadpreparedamatchboxinsteadofasoapbox."Thekidscontinuedspeaking,giggling,andenjoyedpizzastilllateevening.Ashwiniwaspleasedtoknowthatherkidssharedeverythingwithher,Ifthekidsfacedanyproblemorhadaninterestingpieceofnews,theyalwaysshareditwiththeirmother.Theywerenotscaredofornervousabouttheirmother.Inthevacation,Ashwini’seldersister,Sunita,visitedtheirplacealongwithhertwokids,PranjalandKanchan.SunitaobservedAshwini'sfriendlybehaviorwithherkidsandopposedit.“Whatisthis,Ashwini?Youneverscoldyourkids.Theyarenotscaredofyou,”Shesaidtoheryoungersister."Sunita,kidsshouldneverbescaredoftheirparents.Theyshouldfeelfreewhentheycommunicatewithparents.""Weren'tweafraidofourparents?Don'tyourememberyouusedtobenervouswhiletalkingtoDad?Yetwehadbettercommunication,”Sunitaargued.“Well,wearenotlivinginthesameage.Weneedtobemoreopen:mindedwithchildrennow.”ButSunitawasnotsatisfiedwithherexplanation.ShecontinuedcomplainingabouthowAshwini'skidsweredependentonhermotherforeverything.“Whydoyouhavetopreparedifferentdisheseachtimewhentheyarehungry?Pranjaldirectlycallsthenearbyhotelandplacesanorder.Youdon'thavetospendtimeonit,”UntilSunitaleft,shehadalmostbrainwashedAshwinibyconstantlyremindingherthatshewasnotbringingupherkidsproperly.WhenSunitaleft,Ashwiniletoutasighofrelief,注意:1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Whentheschoolstartedagain,Ashwini'sattitudetowardsherkidschangedalittlebit,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ashwininoticedthechangeinthekids'behaviorsoonandfounditunbearable,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________PartB 读后续写思路引导本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Ashwini和孩子们无话不谈，Ashwini很高兴知道她的孩子们会和她分享一切，但她的姐姐Sunita却对此表示反对，她抱怨Ashwini的孩子们凡事都要依赖她。姐姐走后，Ashwini开始用严格的态度对待孩子们，这让孩子们渐渐疏远了她，这让Ashwini意识到这不是她想要的，房子显得太安静了，也意识到对孩子来说，时间就是爱。所以她决定为他们准备美味的食物，准备和她的孩子们聊天，分享一切。1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“当学校重新开学时，Ashwini对她孩子的态度有了一点改变。”可知，第一段可描写Ashwini对孩子的态度是如何改变的，以及孩子们对这种改变的反应。②由第二段首句内容“Ashwini注意到孩子们行为上的变化，觉得难以忍受。”可知，第二段可描写Ashwini对孩子的态度变化后，家里发生的变化，以及她最后的感悟。2.续写线索：Ashwini对孩子态度改变——孩子们疏远——孩子们不再依赖Ashwini——Ashwini不再和孩子交谈——Ashwini感悟3.词汇激活行为类开始：start/begin回答：reply/answer独自：oneone’sown/byoneself情绪类安静：quiet/silent美味：tasty/deliciousPartC 写作优秀句式翻译当学校重新开学时，Ashwini对孩子们的态度发生了一点改变。Amit问她母亲一个科学问题。Ashwini说，与其直接回答，Amit，你应该知道如何自己学习。看看你的表兄弟Pranjal和Kanchan是如何独立的。她讲完书后，孩子们张着嘴看着她从那时起，他们完全改变了，在家里变得非常安静。Ashwini很快注意到孩子们行为的变化，发现它无法忍受阿妮卡不再向她妈妈要晚餐了。Amit从来没有问过他母亲任何问题。母亲和孩子们之间没有聊天Ashwini突然意识到这不是她想要的。这所房子显得太安静了。家里的气氛冷得令人难以忍受。Ashwini突然意识到，对孩子们来说，时间就是爱。所以她决定为他们的回归准备美味的食物，并准备好和她的孩子们聊天和分享一切。参考答案：Whentheschoolstartedagain,Ashwini’sattitudetowardsherkidschangedalittlebit.Oneday,Amitaskedhermotherascienceproblem.Insteadofreplyingdirectly,Ashwinisaid,Amit,youshouldknowhowtostudyonyourown.Seehowyourcousins,PranjalandKanchan,areindependent.”Whenshefinished,thekidswatchedherwiththeirmouthsopen.Fromthenon,theychangedcompletelyandbecameveryquietathome.Ashwininoticedthechangeinthekids'behaviorsoonandfounditunbearable.Anikadidnotaskhermotherforeveningsnacksanymore.Amitneveraskedhismotheranyproblem.Therewasnochattingbetweenthemotherandthekids.cither.SuddenlyAshwinirealizeditwasn'twhatshewanted.Thehouseappearedtooquiet.Theatmosphereathomewasunbearablycold.Ashwinisuddenlyrealizedforkids,timeislove.Soshedecidedtopreparetastyfoodfortheirreturnandbereadytochatandshareeverythingwithherchildren.PartD 篇章写作润色Whentheschoolstartedagain,Ashwini’sattitudetowardsherkidschangedalittlebit.Oneday,Amitaskedhermotherascienceproblem.Insteadofreplyingdirectly,Ashwinisaid,Amit,youshouldknowhowtostudyonyourown.Seehowyourcousins,PranjalandKanchan,areindependent.”Whenshefinished,thekidswatchedherwiththeirmouthsopen.Fromthenon,theychangedcompletelyandbecameveryquietathome.Ashwininoticedthechangeinthekids'behaviorsoonandfounditunbearable.Anikadidnotaskhermotherforeveningsnacksanymore.Amitneveraskedhismotheranyproblem.Therewasnochattingbetweenthemotherandthekids.cither.SuddenlyAshwinirealizeditwasn'twhatshewanted.Thehouseappearedtooquiet.Theatmosphereathomewasunbearablycold.Ashwinisuddenlyrealizedforkids,timeislove.Soshedecidedtopreparetastyfoodfortheirreturnandbereadytochatandshareeverythingwithherchildren.PartE 课后练笔巩固提升.Amancamehomefromworklate,tiredandirritated(不耐烦的),tofindhis5-year-oldsonwaitingforhimatthedoor.“Daddy,mayIaskyouaquestion?”“Yeahsure,whatisit?”repliedtheman.“Daddy,howmuchdoyoumakeanhour?”“That’snoneofyourbusiness.Whydoyouasksuchathing?”themansaidangrily.“Ijustwanttoknow.Pleasetellme.Howmuchdoyoumakeanhour?”pleadedthelittleboy.“Ifyoumustknow,Imake$20anhour.”“Oh,”thelittleboyreplied,withhisheaddown.Lookingup,hesaid,“Daddy,mayIpleaseborrow$10?”Thefatherwasangry,“Iftheonlyreasonyouaskedthatisthatyoucanborrowsomemoneytobuyasillytoyorsomeothernonsense,thenyoumarchyourselfstraighttoyourroomandgotobed.Thinkaboutwhyyouarebeingsoselfish.Iworkhardeverydayforsuchchildishbehavior.”Thelittleboyquietlywenttohisroomandshutthedoor.Themansatdownandstartedtogetevenangrieraboutthelittleboy’squestions.“Howdareheasksuchquestionsonlytogetsomemoney?”hethoughttohimself.Afteraboutanhourorso,themancalmeddown,andstartedtothink:Maybetherewassomethinghereallyneededtobuywiththat$10andhereallydidn’taskformoneyveryoften.Themanwenttothedoorofthelittleboy’sroomandopenedthedoor.“Areyouasleep,son?”heasked.“No,daddy,I’mawake,”repliedtheboy.“I’vebeenthinking,maybeIwastoohardonyouearlier,”saidtheman.“IthasbeenalongdayandItookoutmyangeronyou.Here’sthe$10youaskedfor.”Thelittleboysatstraightup,smiling.“Oh.Thankyou,daddy!”heyelled.Then,reachingunderhispillowhepulledoutsomecrumpled(皱巴巴的)bills.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;Paragraph1:Theman,seeingthattheboyalreadyhadmoneystartedtogetangryagain._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Notknowingwhathissonmeant,thefatherjuststoodthere,waitingforhisboy’sexplanation._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考答案：Paragra