Unit4JourneyacrossaVastLandUsingLanguageReadingforWriting课件高中英语人教版选择性

Unit4JourneyAcrossaVastLand

ReadingforWriting

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WhatdoyouknowaboutCanada?CanadamajorcitiesgeographyweathercultureagriculturetransportationlanguageWhatdoyoulearnaboutCanadafromthejourney?Pre-reading

SeeingtheTrueNorthviaRail:TorontoandtheMontrealABSeeing

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ViaRail:VancouverandtheHeartofCanadaSeeingtheTrueNorthviaRail:TorontoandtheMontrealPartReadingandThinkingrecordsthefirstpartofLiDaiyuandhercousin’sjourney.ThispartisthenextlegoftheirtriptoMontreal.Alegofalongjourneyisonepartofit,usuallybetweentwopointswhereyoustop.一段旅程Inthisclass,youwill:readtogettheinformationaboutthejourneyfromTorontotoMontreal;analyzethestructureandlanguagefeaturesofatraveljourney;writeane-mailaboutarailjourneyinTorontoandMontreal.Whatdoesatraveljournalusuallyinclude?Who—peoplewhen—timewhere—placeswhat—scenery/activitieshow—feeling.Readforinformation:Findoutthepeopleandthetravelroute.People:Cities:LiDaiyu,LiuQian,LinFei,Jean-PhilippeToronto(Canada)

Montreal

HalifaxWhatdidtheydoindifferentdestinations?ReadforstructureActivity1

Readforstructure.Readthepassageandsumupthemainpointsofeachpart.Part1：Paras.____

LiDaiyuandLiuQian’sexperiencein_______Part2：Paras.____Theirexperiencein________Part3：Para.__Theirtimespentonthetraintowards_______1－4Toronto5－9Montreal10HalifaxDividethepassageintothreepartsPart1WhatdidtheyseeinToronto

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toseemistycloudsrisingfromthegreatNiagaraFalls.alotofChineseofpeopleastonishedPart2WhatdidtheyseeinMontreal？AtthestationofMontreal:AllthesignsandadvertisementswereinFrenchandmanypeoplespokeEnglishwithanaccent.?Theyweretosee:Howdidtheyfeel?surprisedPart2MontrealWhatdidtheysee?Features:beclosetowaterSt.LawrenceRiverWonderfulsightsandsounds:uniqueQuebeccultureandtraditions.fantasticrestaurantsandclubsgoodcoffee,goodmusichearThecharmoftravellingWhatdidthegirlsseeordoinToronto?thelargestandwealthiestcityinCanada;wentuptheCNTower;sawmistycloudsrisingfromtheNiagaraFalls;

skyscrapersofglassandsteel;

old-fashionedcars;metLinFeiinChinatownCanyoufindwhathasbeenmentionedaboutToronto?LANDMARKOFTORONTOAt553m,theCNTower(theCanadianNationalTower)isthetallestfree-standingstructureinthewesternhemisphereandwasclassifiedasoneoftheSevenWondersoftheModernWorld.Inadditiontospectacularmountainpeaksandforests,onehighlightoftheirtripwasbeingabletoseemanydifferentcreatures....thebluewaterliterallytooktheirbreathawaywithitsexceptionalbeauty.Thebushesandmapletreesoutsidetheirwindowswerered,gold,andorange,andtherewasfrostontheground....Montrealisacitywithwonderfulsightsandsounds.MostofusspeakbothEnglishandFrench,andthecityhasuniqueQuebeccultureandtraditions.Therearefantasticrestaurantsandclubsaround,too.Q3:Howcanwemakethedescriptionofthetravelappealing?languagefeatures?—descriptivelanguageUseaccurateandpicturesqueadjectives...thebluewaterliterallytooktheirbreathawaywithitsexceptionalbeauty.Thetrainthunderedon,throughtherollinghills.Thegirlssawhundredsofskyscrapersofglassandsteel,andold-fashionedcarsrollingby.ThatnightthetrainwasspeedingalongtheStLawrenceRiver.Usevividverbsdescriptivelanguage

accurateandpicturesqueadjectives

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todescribethecharacteristicsorstateofthesubjectortoshowsubjectivefeelingtodescribeactivitiesandactionsDrawonthemapasimplerouteofthegirls’tripacrossCanadaandmakenotesaboutwhatthegirlsdidateachplace.Post-readingDrawonthemapasimplerouteofthegirls'tripacrossCanadaandmakenotesaboutwhatthegirlssaw

ateachplace.JasperLakeLouiseThegreatCanadianPrairieOntarioTorontoMontrealHalifaxVancouvertookaboattothebay;visitanisland;wenthikingsawmassive

forests;thebluewatertooktheirbreathawaywithitsexceptionalbeautysawspectacularmountainsandforests;sawmanydifferentcreatureswentuptheCNTower;sawmistycloudsrisingfromtheNiagaraFalls;sawskyscrapersandold-fashionedcars

rollingby;metLinFeiinChinatownsawalandofforestsandlakes;

sawrollinghills;sawbushesandmapletrees;sawthewidestretchofLakeHuronvisitedcharmingshops;talkedwithayoungmaninarestaurantamazedbytheopencountry;wentthroughtwowheat-growingprovincesEdmontonfreezingcold;oneofthelargestshoppingmallsWriting

TravelJournal

ImaginethatyouareLiDaiyu，andwriteane-mailtoyourparentstoshareyourtripacrossCanada.Don’tforgettousewhatwehavelearntinthisclass.WritingAletteraboutyourjourneyBeginning:BodyEnding:WhatyousawwhatyoudidHowyoufelt:finalthoughtsCarefully-chosenstops/attractions(featuresofeachplace)PersonalemotionsandthoughtsImpressiveactivities(Intheorderoftime)UseofdiscoursemarkersDescriptivelanguageSequenceGreetingandpurposeOutline短文可以分为三部分：第一部分：第二部分：第三部分：篇章结构：1.时态：正文________,景色，感想________2.旅游进程时要有一个清晰明确的顺序。注意事项：过去时现在时开门见山，旅行概况。重点介绍旅游过程，描述所见所闻。可适当表达自己的内心情感写景+抒情谈此次旅行的感受，总体评价。whowhenwherewhathowAssessmentCriteriaAfterfinishingyourdraft,assessyourworkaccordingtothechecklistUsingthechecklisttohelpyouassessyourpartner’swork.Doesthewriterstarttheemailwithanappropriategreeting?Istheemailwell-organizedandcoherent?Doesthewritermakeuseofdiscoursemarkerstoexpressdifferentrelationships

betweenideas?Arethedescriptionsofpeopleandplacesinteresting?Doesthewriterendtheemailinanaturalway?Presentation诗和

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想THANKYOUDearParents,

Howiseverythinggoing?KnowingthatyouareinterestedinmytravelexperienceinCanada,nowI’dliketoshareitwithyou.Firstofall,weflewtoVancouver,wherewevisitedsomewonderfulshopssellingcraftsandantiques.Afterthat,wewentontoLakeLouise.Itwasitsbluewaterthattookourbreathawaywithitsexceptionalbeauty.WhenwearrivedinMontreal,wewereastonishedtoseesignsandadvertisementswereinFrench.Allinall,exhaustedaswewere,wefeltitwasameaningfulexperience.Ifyouareavailable,IstronglyrecommendthatyoucometovisitCanada.Itisreallyworthit.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiDaiyu1.Knowingthatyou’reinterestedinmytravelplan,nowI’mwritingtotellyouaboutit.2.NowIameagertoinformyouofmytravelplan.3.I’dliketosharemytravelexperiencewithyou.4.Sinceyouaskedmeaboutmytripin...,nowIamwritingtoshareitwithyou.SomeexpressionstoshowyourpurposeHowtoshareyourtravelplan/experience1.Iplanto/intendto/amgoingtovisit....2.Thebluewaterwillsurelytakemybreathawaywithitsexceptionalbeauty.3.I’lltakeataxito...whereIcanenjoypleasanthik