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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Afterseeingaprogramontelevisionaboutareporterwhohadhitchhiked(搭顺风车)acrossAmerica.Myten-year-olddaughter,Ashleysaid,“IwishIcoulddothat!”Ashleywasdiagnosedwithcancerthreeyearsearlier.Althoughsheiscancer-freenowafterasurgery,numeroustestsandthescaryprocedureoftreatmentshadmadeherunwillingtoriskoutsideherknownworld.SoIwantedtoencouragethatspiritofadventureinher.Ibegantryingtothinkofawayforherto“hitchhike”acrossthecountrywithoutleavinghome.That’showCarmenwasborn.CarmenisateddybearAshleyhadreceivedwhileshewasinthehospital.WedecidedtosendCarmeninAshley’splace.SowepurchasedanotebookasatraveljournalandabagforCarmentotravelin,togetherwithaletterwrittenbyAshley:MynameisAshleyandIamtenyearsold.

Thisismybear,Carmen.I

gotherwhenIwasinthe

hospital.ShewantstogotoallfiftystatesjustlikethereporterguyonTVwhohitchhikedacrossAmerica.Butshecan’twalk,sowillyoupleasehelpher?Couldyouletherridewithyouandkeepher

safe,aswellastellheraboutyourselfsoshewon’tbelonely?Pleasewritealittleaboutyourselfinthejournalandthenintroducehertosomeonenew.She

wantstomeetasmanynewpeopleasshecan.IthinkbyaboutSeptembershewillbereadytocome

home.Inhercoinpurseis$5.00.

PleaseputherinaboxwithherjournalandsendhertoSacCityState

Bank.

Attention:CaretakerofCarmenBear.IfyouwouldliketohearfromCarmenaftershegetshome,pleaseleaveyouraddressinhernotebookandwewillsendyouanoteandletyouknowwhenshegets

homesafely.ThankyoufortakingcareofCarmen,andthankyoufortakingthetimetowriteinhernotebook.Yournewfriends,CarmenandAshley注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。WethentookCarmentoourfamilyfriendPhil,ahighwaypatrolofficer(巡警).__________________________________________________▲____________________________________________________________________________▲____________________________________________________________________________▲____________________________________________________________________________▲_____________________________________ThenonedayinSeptemberthelong-expectedpackagewithCarmeninsidefinallyarrived._________________________________________▲____________________________________________________________________________▲____________________________________________________________________________▲____________________________________________________________________________▲_____________________________________文章大意这篇文章讲述了一个十岁女孩阿什利,她曾因癌症接受治疗,现在虽然康复但对外界充满戒备。为了鼓励她冒险探索的精神,她的父亲想出了一个计划:让阿什利的泰迪熊卡门代替她进行一次虚拟的全国旅行。他们为卡门准备了旅行日记和背包,并附上阿什利写的信,请求遇到卡门的人帮助她旅行,并在日记中记录下他们的故事。卡门的第一次旅行是由他们的朋友菲尔,一位公路巡警开始的。九月的一天,卡门带着满是故事的日记和照片回到了家,阿什利通过这些记录体验了一次心灵的旅行,感受到了人们的温暖和世界的广阔。这个简单的想法不仅为阿什利带来了快乐,也触动了那些参与其中的人们的心。在原文中,作者设置了几处伏笔,这些伏笔在续写中得到了回应:1.伏笔:阿什利的愿望和她的健康状况。回应:父亲为了鼓励阿什利的冒险精神,设计了卡门熊的旅行计划,这直接回应了阿什利想要冒险的愿望,同时也考虑到了她的健康状况。2.伏笔:卡门熊的旅行日记和背包。回应:在续写中,卡门熊的旅行日记被用来记录她遇到的人们和经历的故事,背包则用于携带她的物品和日记,这些都是原文中提到的物品在故事中的使用。3.伏笔:卡门熊的旅行计划和目标。回应:续写中详细描述了卡门熊的旅行经历,包括她访问的地方和遇到的人,这些都是对原文中提到的旅行计划的具体展开。4.伏笔:阿什利的信中提到的九月回家。回应:续写中提到了卡门熊在九月如期返回,这与阿什利信中的预期相呼应。5.伏笔:卡门熊的旅行对阿什利的意义。回应:续写中强调了卡门熊的旅行如何让阿什利体验到冒险,并通过卡门熊的眼睛看到世界,这回应了原文中提到的阿什利对外界的戒备和对冒险的渴望。6.伏笔:卡门熊旅行的社交互动。回应:续写中描述了卡门熊如何与不同的人互动,包括巡警、消防员、农民等,这些都是对原文中提到的社交互动的进一步发展。7.伏笔:卡门熊旅行的结束和回家。回应:续写中描述了卡门熊的回家,以及阿什利和父亲对旅行日记的反应,这为整个故事提供了一个圆满的结局。这些伏笔和回应共同构成了一个连贯的故事,展示了卡门熊的旅行如何影响了阿什利以及那些参与其中的人们。参考答案WethentookCarmentoourfamilyfriendPhil,ahighwaypatrolofficer(巡警).HeofferedtolaunchCarmenonherjourneybytakingheronhisrouteforaday.Thatafternoon,whenhestoppedadriverwhowasnotusingaseatbelt,heurgedhertowearthebelt.HethenintroducedCarmenandaskedthedriverifshewouldliketotakeCarmenonthenextpartofherjourney.Naturally,sheagreed.ThatkickedoffCarmen’sUSAtour.Meanwhile,forAshley,thefollowingsummerwasamixofanxietyandanticipation,asshecheckeddailyforherpackage,onlytobetold“Nottoday,”eachtime.ThenonedayinSeptember,thelong-expectedpackagewithCarmenfinallyarrived.

Eagerly,weopenedtheboxtoexplorethetracesofCarmen’sadventures.TherewerepostcardsfromtheGrandCanyon,ashellfromaFloridabeach,andatinyreplicaoftheStatueofLiberty.Forus,eachsouvenirwasasnapshotofthekindnessandgenerosityAshleyhadencounteredthroughCarmen.ThenotesinthejournalpaintedavividpictureofthepeoplewhohadtakenCarmenintotheirhearts.Itwasaheartwarminggiftthatourfamilytreasured,inspiringusasAshleybravelyfacedherpathtohealth.下水文1WethentookCarmentoourfamilyfriendPhil,ahighwaypatrolofficer.HewasthefirsttoembarkonCarmen'sjourney,takingheralonghisdailyroutesandintroducinghertothepeopleheencountered.Phil'scolleagues,intriguedbyCarmen'smission,eagerlywroteinherjournal,sharingtheirstoriesandexperiences.EachentrywasatestamenttothekindnessandcuriosityofthosewhometCarmen,makingherjourneyallthemoreenriching.ThenonedayinSeptember,thepackagecontainingCarmenarrivedaspromised.Ashley'seyessparkledwithexcitementassheunwrappedtheparcel.Inside,Carmenwasnestledwithajournalbrimmingwithtalesfromhertravelsandacollectionofphotosthatcapturedtheessenceofheradventures.ThefinalentrywasfromPhil,whohadseenCarmenoffonherwayhome.HiswordsexpressedthejoyandfulfillmenthefeltfromparticipatinginCarmen'sjourney,andherequestedtobeinformedofhersafereturn.AshleyandIweretouchedbytheheartfeltmessagesandthecommunitythathadformedaroundCarmen'smission,provingthateveninchallengingtimes,thespiritofexplorationandthebondsofhumanitycaninspireandupliftusall.下水文2WethentookCarmentoourfamilyfriendPhil,ahighwaypatrolofficer.HewasmorethanhappytobeCarmen'sfirststoponhercross-countryadventure.PhiltookCarmenonhisdailypatrols,introducinghertothediverseindividualshemetalongtheway.Fromfellowofficerstopassingmotorists,everyonewascharmedbyCarmen'smissionandwillinglycontributedtohertraveljournal.Eachpersontookamomenttoshareabitabouttheirlife,theirdreams,andtheirhopes,creatingarichtapestryofstoriesthatCarmenwouldcarrywithher.ThenonedayinSeptember,thepackagewithCarmeninside

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