高二上学期英语读后续写之人与动物类课件

读后续写

人与动物类类型一：可爱型动物故事情节人与动物和谐相处，相亲互助类型二：凶猛型动物故事情节人与动物发生冲突，成功脱险类型一：可爱型动物故事情节——人与动物和谐相处，相亲互助可爱型动物，如狗，鸟等，主要构思陪伴、忠诚，或者人救助动物生命，动物（主要是狗）救人的生命等故事情节。日常家养人救动物动物救人人狗和谐：父母决定给Poppy买一条小狗作伴，帮助Poppy摆脱孤独和想念的故事（2020年1月浙江高考）人猫和谐：作者的丈夫从讨厌猫到向猫求助，赶走土拨鼠的故事（2021年3月一模）人狗和谐：作者和作者的丈夫帮助了一条流浪狗的故事（2023年三新联盟高二期末）类型二：凶猛型动物故事情节——人与动物发生冲突，成功脱险凶猛的动物，如狼、熊等，一般会给人造成生命威胁，所以主要是以遇险、脱险的故事情节为主。人狼大战：骑车旅途遭遇狼wolf追赶，脱险经历（2017年6月浙江高考）人熊大战：北极探险者给北极熊拍照，遭遇polarbear追赶的惊险经历（2020年6月浙江高考）人狗和谐：作者和作者的丈夫帮助了一条流浪狗的故事（2023年三新联盟高二期末）1

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liveonafarmwheredogsarepartofthelandscape.YetthedogIspotteddidn’tquitefitin,asImoveddownmydrivewaythatchillylateFebruaryday.AtfirstglanceIthoughtitwasmybrother’sChihuahua.Butasecondglanceraiseddoubts,forIknewmybrother’slittlehousedogwasnocandidateforaswiftrunacrossayard.SoIfiguredthisunknowndogwouldsoonfinditswayhome,andIhadtaskstodo.Who:________Where:_______What:_____________________________________________

读人物读要素I；adogafarm①Ispottedaunknowndogthatlostitswayhome.2

Afewdayslater,whilewalkingpastthedoortothebackofmyhouse,Isawthedeck甲板

swing秋千moving.Clearly,someoneorsomethinghadsetthatswinginmotion.Beinghomeandalonethatevening,thethoughtofanunknownpresencewanderingaboutsetmeonedge.3

Nextmorning,standingdirectlyinmyfrontyard,bitingongrass,wasthattinydogIhadspottedearlier.Icalledmyhusbandtotakealook.Butwhenthedogheardthefrontdooropen,sheranawayforthesafetyofthenearbywoods.Who:__________________________What:_______________________________________________________________________________________________

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①Theunknowndogwanderingnearmyhouse.myhusband②Thedogwastoofeartoranawayforsafety.4

Itwasjustamatteroftimebeforethebadweatherorthewolveswouldbethedeathofsuchasmallanddefenselessdog.Werealizedthepoorthingmusthavebeenwaitingsecretlyaroundourhouseforweeks.MyhusbandandIformulated制定

arescueplan.Weplacedfoodandwaternearthedeckswing.Thenextmorning,thefoodandwaterhadbeenconsumed消耗,soweputoutmore.Ittookseveraldaysofputtingoutfoodandwaterbeforewecaughtthedogintheact,andanothertwoweeksafterthatbeforethedogfeltcomfortableenoughtoapproachoneofus.What:_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

①Thebadweatherorthewolveswouldbethedeathofsuchasmallanddefenselessdog.②MyhusbandandImakearescueplanforthedog.③Finallythedogfeltcomfortableenoughtoapproachoneofus.5

Oneaftemoon,Icamehomeandfoundmyhusbandholdingouthishandwhileleaning倾向forwardinthedeckswing.Iwitnessedahappydogtailwaggingfuriouslyandeatinghot-dogpiesesfrommy

husband'shand.Thestagewassetforthefinalpartofourplan:topersuadethedoginside.What:__________________________________________________________________________________________①Thestagewassetforthefinalpartofourplan:topersuadethedoginside.IntroductionProblemClimaxResolutionConclusionIignoredtheunknowndog.MyhusbandandIformulatedarescueplanforthelittledog.Afterafewweeks,wewantedtopersuadethedoginside.STORYMOUNTAIN

Afewnightsafterward,whenitwaspouring,Iopenedthedoorandthedogwasthere.Momentslater,holdingthehotdog,myhusbandannounced,“Thedogisback.”.Love读情节

小狗蜷缩着，冻得瑟瑟发抖。（根据首段第一句定第二句）丈夫手里拿着热狗，期待等着小狗。（根据第二段第一句定首段尾句）（根据首尾句填充情节）动作我打开门吓跑了小狗。心理担心并希望小狗能进屋里。动作我突然想到一个主意。心理从冰箱拿出热狗环境振奋，期待小狗吃了丈夫手上的热狗心理丈夫：高兴（根据故事发展设定结局）现在，小狗和我们一起生活得很安心幸福。小狗漂亮而外向可爱，在充满爱的房子里融化了我们的心。动作小狗进屋后，我关上了门。（根据首尾句填充情节）动作小狗到处打量屋里环境，打量我和丈夫语言建框架雨很大，很冷心理小狗：惊慌；恐惧心理小狗：逐渐平静，不再害怕丈夫轻声安抚小狗动作小狗愿意被抱起，也意味着救援成功完成。Afewnightsafterward,whenitwaspouring,Iopenedthedoorandthedogwasthere.Momentslater,holdingthehotdog,myhusbandannounced,“Thedogisback.”.（根据第二段第一句定第二段第二句）Paragraph1:

Afewnightsafterward,whenitwaspouring,Iopenedthedoorandthedogwasthere.Itcurledup蜷缩inalawnchairoutsideourhouse,trembling发抖becauseofchill寒冷.Istartled惊吓herandsheleaped跳跃fromthechairandvanished消失intothepouringrain.

Icomforted安慰myselfwiththehopethatthestormwouldpersuade说服ourlittlefriendtoreturntoourwarmhouse.Thenanideahitme.Ikeptthedooropenandracedtotherefrigerator冰箱forsomehotdogs.Icutthemupandmadeatrailof一堆hot-dogpiecesfromthedoorintothelivingroom.Myhusband’schairwasattheendofthetrail小径.Hesatandwaited等待withmorehot-dogpiecesinhishand.参考范文Paragraph2:

Momentslater,holdingthehot-dog,myhusbandannounced宣告,“Thedogisback.”

Thelittledogwarily小心翼翼ateherwaytomyhusband’soutstretched展开的hand.Whenshereached走近himIshut关thedoor.Shepanicked惊吓andracedaroundlookingforawayout.Then,shetired累andwewitnessed看到anastonishingtransformation.Shestopped,fixed固定，盯着

hereyesonmyhusband,andthenturnedhergaze目光towardme.Notrembling.Myhusbandspokesoftlyassheallowedhimtolift举起hergingerly小心翼翼tohislap腿.Herfearwasgone.Ifawaggingtailisanyindicator指令,therescuewascomplete.Now,thelittledogsleepsonmyshouldereverynight.Sheisbeautifulandoutgoing,meltingourheartsinahousefilledwithlove.Despitethechillautumnwind,theirhomewasfilledwiththewarmthoflove1.Acatmiaows/mews/purr2.Adogyaps/yelps/barks/snarls.3.Acockcrows.4.Alionroars.5.Awolfhowls.6.Abee/mosquitohums/buzzes.

猫“喵喵”叫狗吠公鸡啼狮吼狼嚎蜂/蚊子“嗡嗡”叫描写动物“叫”素材积累1.apairoflargewateryeyes2.twobigroundeyes3.beady/sparkling/twinklingeyes4.anoselikeasmallblackgem5.long/muscular/skinny/spindlylegs6.furisaswhiteassnow

7.alonglittletail两只圆溜溜的大眼睛一颗黑宝石般的鼻子皮毛像雪一样洁白一条长长的小尾巴描写“外貌”素材积累小珠般圆亮的/亮晶晶的/闪闪发亮的眼睛一双水汪汪的大眼睛长的/肌肉发达的/皮包骨的/干瘦的腿1.wagthetail2.smell/sniff3.bark/yap/yelp4.lick5.puttheearsup6.shakethewholebody

摇尾巴嗅狗吠舔把耳朵竖起来抖动全身描写“动作”素材积累1.bitethecornerofthecoat2.holdittightlywiththepaws3.fallonitsback4.runaroundme5.leaptoitsfeet6.restthenoseinitspaws

咬住衣角用爪子紧紧按住摔得四脚朝天围着我跑跳起来把鼻子搁在爪子里描写“动作”素材积累可爱型动物高兴TheyweregladtoseePoppycomingbacktoherusualself（他们很高兴看到Poppy又回到以前的自己）,guidingthelittledogondailywalksandevenintroducingtoitherfavoritetoys.微情节可爱型动物忠诚Smilingeversobright（笑得更加灿烂。）,hecalledouttohisparents,whotuggedhiminforalonghug.微情节可爱型动物陪伴Herparentswatchedthemplayingaroundandsmiledwithrelief（轻松地笑了）–Poppywasbacktoheroldcheerfulself!微情节凶猛型动物害怕Terrified（非常害怕）,ElliandItriedallthebeardefenseactionsweknew.微情节凶猛型动物害怕Seeingtheapproachofthepolarbear,Ifrozewithterror,tooscaredtomoveaninch（被恐惧吓呆，害怕到动也不能动）微情节凶猛型动物害怕MywifeElligraspedmyclothesandtrembled,swallowinghard（抓住我的衣服，颤抖着，使劲吞口水）微情节凶猛型动物害怕Thinkingofthewolf’sbloodymouth,Macwasnearlydeadwithfright（几乎给吓死）微情节凶猛型动物害怕Iwasseizedbyastrongsenseofhorror（被一种强烈的恐惧感所控制）,mypalmssweating.微情节凶猛型动物求助Atthesightofit,Elliwavedherhandswildly（疯狂地挥手）,screaming,“Help!”微情节凶猛型动物获救Whenweweresafeonthehelicopterupintheair,Iwasamazedtospot（惊奇地发现）thatthebearhadfinallytorndownthefenceandrantowardsthefoodweleftbehind.微情节凶猛型动物获救Iwentneartheinnocentoneandhelditinmyhandandwipedthepuppy（擦干小狗）tillhehadbecomedry.微情节主题升华可爱型动物陪伴、珍爱生命、自然和谐、忠诚等凶猛型动物难忘的经历、获得教训、感谢他人救助等主题升华家养动物结局：共同生活小猫默默地陪伴着我。尽管我们生活得很艰难，但这只狗的陪伴让日子过得有了意义。尽管寒风凛冽，他们的家却充满了爱和团聚的温暖Thekittenkeptcompanywithme

inhersilentway.Thoughwe’dhadatoughlife,thedog’scompanymadethedayscount.Despitethechillautumnwind,theirhomewasfilledwiththewarmthofloveandreunion.在挣扎着做出决定后，他最终还是把小鸟放生了。猴子一跳到树顶上就消失在森林中了。当狼朝森林跑去时，他回头看了看，脸上露出了感激的表情。主题升华人救动物结局：依依惜别Afterstruggling

tomakeadecision,heeventuallyletgoofthebird.Nosoonerhadthemonkeyjumpedontothetopofthetreethanitdisappearedintotheforest.Asthewolfranoffintotheforest,

helookedbackwithathankfulexpressiononhisface.主题升华儿子的努力让我感动。我从来没有像现在这样为他感到骄傲。随着我对这些鸡越来越多的关注和照顾，我和它们建立起密切的关系。这些小动物教会我尊重和珍惜生命，感恩节也因此更加有意义。Theeffortsmysonhadmadetouchedmyheart.NeverbeforehadIbeenprouderofhim.Withtheincreasingattentionanddevotiontothechickens,Iformeda

closebondwiththem.Thelittlecreaturestaughtmetorespectandtreasurelife,forwhichThanksgivingmademoresense.

温馨结局：收获感悟

Itwasahotandwetdayinlatesummer.Iwasayoungdadworkinginalocalwoodfactory.Itwasdangerous,back-breakingworkthatpaidverylittle.

IntheyearIhadworkedthere,onlyfourotherpeoplehadn’tquitandbeenreplacedwithnewfaces.Thoseofuswhostayeddidsoonlybecausetherewasnootherworktofindtosupportourfamilies.

Onedaytheelectricfansweren’tworkingandallofuswerecoveredinsweatandsawdust.WhenIlookedaroundeveryface,theylookedangryandfrustrated.Suddenly,avoicecalledout:“Hey!There’sadeerinhere.Alostlittledeerhadwanderedthroughtheopenloadingbaydoorsandwasnowhidinginfearinbetweenthehugepilesofwood.Allofusstoppedworkingandwentlookingforherassheranaboutcrazilylookingforawayout.

NowmostpeoplewhereIlivehuntdeerformeatinthefallbuttreatthemwithgreatkindnesstherestoftheyear.Manywillevenbuybagsofcorntohelpfeedthemduringthecoldwintermonths.Itwasnosurprisethenthatallofusweresoonquicklyworkingtogethertofreethislittledeer.Byblockingoffalltheotherroutes,wewereabletoguidehercrazysearchbacktotheopenbaydoors.

Wewatchedasshejumpedoutofthebuildingandbackintothewoods.Thenwewalkedbackintowork.Inoticedsomething,though.Oneveryface,therewasajoyfulsmile.Itseemedasifthisonesingleactofkindnesshadenergizedusagainandremindedusofwhatlifewasallabout.原文大意：

作者在一家木材厂辛苦工作，这天来了一只迷路的小鹿，所有人都停下手中的工作去找她，而她则疯狂地四处寻找出路。最后大家很快就一起努力解救这只小鹿，小鹿回到了树林，作者发现每个人的脸上都洋溢着快乐的微笑，最后有人提议每个月的这一天为森林野生动物做一些志愿者工作。线索：作者向树林里望去——发现小鹿快乐玩耍——作者陷入沉思——作者回到屋子——工人提议做志愿者工作——作者感悟PPT模板:///moban/Paragraph1：

Iwentoutofthehouseandlookedintothewoodsagain.看到小鹿在森林里玩耍时的感受和想法。PPT模板:///moban/Paragraph2：

WhenIreturnedtothehouse,theworkerswerelaughingandtalkinghappily.工人提议为森林野生动物做一些志愿者工作，作者也感悟到用善行充实每一天，生活才会更加美好和谐。Onefall,mywifeElliandIhadasinglegoal:tophotographpolarbears.Wewerestayingataresearchcampoutside“thepolarbearcapitaloftheworld”—thetownofChurchillinManitoba,Canada.Takingpicturesofpolarbearsisamazingbutalsodangerous.Polarbears—likeallwildanimals—shouldbephotographedfromasafedistance.WhenI’mfacetofacewithapolarbear,Ilikeittobethroughacamerawithatelephotolens.Butsometimes,thatiseasiersaidthandone.Thiswasoneofthosetimes.

AsElliandIcookeddinner,ayoungmalepolarbearwhowasplayinginanearbylakesniffed,andsmelledourgarlicbread.

Thehungrybearfollowedhisnosetoourcamp,whichwassurroundedbyahighwirefence.Hepulledandbitthewire.Hestoodonhisbacklegsandpushedatthewoodenfenceposts.

Terrified,ElliandItriedallthebeardefenseactionsweknew.Weyelledatthebear,hitpotshard,andfiredblankshotgunshellsintotheair.Sometimesloudnoiseslikethesewillscarebearsoff.Notthispolarbearthough—hejustkepttryingtoteardownthefencewithhismassivepaws(爪子).

Iradioedthecampmanagerforhelp.Hetoldmeahelicopterwasonitsway,butitwouldbe30minutesbeforeita