BEC商务英语（中级）写作模拟试卷11（共18题）

BEC商务英语（中级）写作模拟试卷11（共9套）（共18题）BEC商务英语（中级）写作模拟试卷第1套一、小作文(本题共1题，每题1.0分，共1分。)1、•YouaretheManagerofMarketDevelopmentDivision,andareabouttoholdamonthlymeetingtodiscussateamworkapproachtosecurealargermarketshare.•WriteamemotoallMarketingDivisionpersonnel:•givingthetimeandplaceforthemeeting•statingthepurposeofthemeeting•askingfortheirideasaboutbusinessdevelopment.•Write40-50words.•Writeontheseparateanswerpaperprovided.标准答案：MemorandumTo:From:Date:Subject:To:AllMarketingDivisionPersonnelFrom:AnnFaught,MarketDevelopmentDivisionDate:March25,2006Subject:Teamwork&’LargerMarketShareOurmonthlymeetingwillbeheldonFriday,9:00a.m.,April7inConferenceRoomB.Themeetingistodiscusshowtosecurealargermarketsharebyteamwork.Pleasegetpreparedandputforwardyourideasabouthowtodevelopourbusiness.知识点解析：暂无解析二、大作文(本题共1题，每题1.0分，共1分。)2、•Youworkforacommunicationapparatuscompany.YouhavebeenaskedtowriteaproposaltotheBoardofDirectorsontheperformanceofyourthreemainproducts(inthousandsets)overthelastfiveyears.•Lookatthegraphsbelow,onwhichyouhavealreadymadesomehandwrittennotes.•Then,usingallthesehandwrittennotes,writeyourproposal.•Write120-140words.•Writeontheseparateanswerpaperprovided.标准答案：Date:January15,2006To:BoardofDirectorsFrom:LiMing,MarketingManagerSubject:PerformanceofOurProductsThisreportistoshowtheperformanceandtendencyoftheaboveproductsoverthepastfiveyears.OurProgramTelephones(Figure1)tendtodeclineaftertheyreachedapeakofabout1,430,000setsin2003.TheremoverofFaxMachines,shownbyFigure2,seemsratherfluctuating.Thesalesrosesteadilyin2001and2002,reaching860,000sets.However,in2003,theydroppedsharplytoabout700,000setsduetoout-of-datedesigns.Fortunately,theyclimbedto1,000,000setsin2004andremainedstableduring2005.Figure3indicatesthatthesalesofourMobilePhoneshavekeptaregularincreasesinceitslaunchin2001andmountedto1,985,000setsin2005thankstoincreasingdemandandeffectivesalespromotion.Therefore,IsuggestweincreasetheproductionofMobilePhonesanddecreasetheproductionofProgramTelephones.知识点解析：暂无解析BEC商务英语（中级）写作模拟试卷第2套一、小作文(本题共1题，每题1.0分，共1分。)1、Youhavelostyourcalculator,andyouwanttoorderanewone.Youneedtomakeawrittenrequesttoyoursupervisor,AnnRay.Writeamemotoher:sayingthatyouneedareplacementexplainingwhathappenedtotheoldoneaskinghertoapprovetherequest.Writeabout40-50words.标准答案：To:Mrs.RayIamwritingtoapplyforareplacementcalculator.Ifoundtheoldonemissingaftertheclientmeetingyesterday.Asacalculatorisessentialformydailywork,couldyoukindlyapprovethisrequest?知识点解析：本文是对便函的考查，是向主管申请一个新的计算器，内容要求是解释就计算器已经丢失，自己需要一个新的，请求主管批准自己的申请。写作时，注意上下级语气及语言措辞，阐述理由应做到言简意赅。二、大作文(本题共1题，每题1.0分，共1分。)2、Youmanagingdirectorhasdecidedthatthecompany’swebsiteshouldbeimprovedandhasaskedyoutoconsiderwaysofgoingaboutthis.Lookattheinformationbelow.Thenusingallyoursurveyresults,writeyourproposal.Write120-140wordsSurveyResultsthestructurehasnotbeenimprovedandaddedforthreeyearsthereisnoroomtopresentthenewproductduetothelimitedwebspacethewebofcompetitorisextremelyattractivethemanagerofADepartmentandBDepartmentarguedatheadofficefortheadvertisingbannerthecomplaintsforlimitedinformationonwebhavebeenthebiggestproblemthisyear…标准答案：ProposalonImprovingCompany’sWebsiteServiceIntroductionTheobjectiveofthisproposalistosummariestheweaknessesofthecurrentwebsiteandrecommendnewservicesandinformationtobeprovidedforthewebsiteFindingsAsthenumberofclientsvisitingourwebhasalmostincreasedbythreetimesin2008thanthosein2007,itsharplydecreasedin2009duetotheinflexiblestructure,whichhasnotbeenrenewedforthreeyears.Theexistingwebsitefailstomeetthedemandofournewinformationissuing.Wefailtosustainthebalanceofwebuseofdifferentdepartments.Thecomplaintofourclientshasreflectedthethreatwemeet.RecommendationsIthinkitisnecessaryforustoimproveourservices.Iwishtorecommendaseriesofonlineservices,mergingonlineinformationwithdatacollectedaboutindividuals’offlinepurchasetobetterpromoteourgoods,thusremakingourwebsiteintoareliableonedepartingfromitsonce-seriousimage.知识点解析：暂无解析BEC商务英语（中级）写作模拟试卷第3套一、小作文(本题共1题，每题1.0分，共1分。)1、Youareamanagerinaninternationalcompany.Youwanttoreducethecompany’sspendingoncourierservices.Writeanemailtothestaffinyourdepartment:explainingthatspendingoncourierserviceshasrisensuggestinghowsavingscouldbemadesayinghowthemoneysavedwillbeused.Write40-50words.To…AllstaffCc…Subject:Courierservices标准答案：Themoneythatspendonourcompany’scourierservicesrisingrapidlythesedays.Adetailedplanshouldbemadebyeachdepartmentonspendingoncourierservices.Certainpeopleshouldbepointedtocheckthemoneyspending.Allthesavedmoneywouldbeusedtobuynewofficeequipment.知识点解析：暂无解析二、大作文(本题共1题，每题1.0分，共1分。)2、•Youworkforacompanythatsellselectricalgoods.YouhaverecentlyvisitedapotentialsupplierinSlovakia.•Readthefollowingmemobelowonwhichyoumadesomehandwrittennotes.•Usetheinformationinthememotowriteashortreportrecommendingwhetheryourcompanyshoulddealwiththesupplierornot•Write120--140wordsonaseparatesheet.标准答案：ReportonLandisTechnologiesThisreportaimstoassesswhethertheLandisTechnologiescompanywouldbeasuitablesupplierofelectricalgoods.Arecentvisittothecompanyshowedthatitsfacilitiesarequiteold.resultinginalimitedproductioncapacity.Despitethis,LandisTechnologiesproducesanextensiverangeofhigh-qualityproductsincludingradios,cassetterecordersandCDplayers.However,out-of-datemachinerymeansdeliverytimesofuptothreemonths.Thismaychangewhentheplannedmodernizationtakesplace.LTwouldnotbesuitableforlargeordersthatrequirequickdelivery.ItisrecommendedthatweremainincontactwithLTandreconsiderasupplycontractoncethefactorymodernizationiscompleted.知识点解析：暂无解析BEC商务英语（中级）写作模拟试卷第4套一、小作文(本题共1题，每题1.0分，共1分。)1、YouareaProjectTeamLeader.Youhavehadtopostponeyournextprojectmeetingbecausesomeofthemembersofyourteamwillbeabroadonbusiness.Writeamemoof40-50wordstoyourprojectteam:informingthemofthepostponingandgivingthereasonstatinganewdateandtimeforthemeetingrequestingsuggestionsfortheagenda.标准答案：MemorandumTo:themembersoftheprojectteamDate:1March2011From:KingClicks,theleaderoftheprojectleaderSubject:postponethenextprojectmeetingIamwritingtoinformyouthatthenextprojectmeetingwillbepostponed.Becauseseveralteammemberswillbeabroadforanotherproject,wewillholdournextmeetingon1August,startingfrom9am.Pleaseletmeknowifyouhaveanysuggestionsastotheagendaofthemeeting.知识点解析：暂无解析二、大作文(本题共1题，每题1.0分，共1分。)2、•Thestaffatyourcompanywererecentlyaskedwhattheythoughtaboutworkingconditions.Yourlinemanagerhasaskedyoutowriteareportsummarisingtheiropinionsandsuggestingpossibleimprovements.•Lookattheinformationbelow,onwhichyouhavealreadymadesomehandwrittennotes.•Then,usingallyourhandwrittennotes,writeyourreport.•Write120-140words.标准答案：SampleCReportonsatisfaction-levelofstaffmembersIntroductionThisreportaimstoshowweatherourstaffmembersaresatisfiedwiththeirworkingconditionsornot.Findings?Therecentmeetingshowsclearlythatourstaffisquitesatisfiedwiththeworkingconditions.Especially,alotofthemhavepraisedourpensionschemeandourchildcarevouchers.?Nevertheless,somecomplainedaboutunflexibleworkinghours,astheyhavetotakecareoftheirchildrenathome.?Apartfromthis,thepoorconditionofsomeofficeareaswasmentioned.Alotofthemaredissatisfiedwiththedirtonthefloorsandtheold-fashionedcomputersystems.?Finally,Iwouldsuggesttoincreasethenumberofdaysoff,asmostmembersfeelquiteexaustedafter6monthswithoutholiday.ConclusionInmyopinion,weshouldtrytoimproveworkingconditionsforthiswillleadtomoreproductivityintheend.Band5Allthecontentpointshavebeenaddressedandthetargetreaderwouldbefullyinformed.Thereportiseffectivelyorganised,makinguseofheadingsanddiscoursemarkers.Therangeofvocabularyandgrammarisgood,andwhereerrorsoccurtheyareminor.Theregisterandformatareconsistentlyappropriate.SampleDReporton:StaffopinionaboutworkingconditionsThisreportaimstosummarisetheresultsofthelaststaffmeeting.FindingsFirst,mostoftheemployeesarereallysatisfiedwiththenewsmokingpolicy.Buttherearealsosomeproblems.Duetothefactthatmanyemployeeshavetocareforchildrentheywouldratherpreferflexibleworkinghours.Furthermoresomeofficeareasareinapoorcondition,mostimportantisthatafewofthemdonothavesunlightattheirworkplace.Thereisalsoaproblemwiththepaymentwhengoingonholiday,whichistoolessforourworkers.ConclusionInconclusiontheopinionsaboutthistopicaremuchbettercomparedwithlastyear,butthereisstillalottodo.Recommendation:Itissuggestedtocreateabonussystemforincreasingholidaypaymentandnotofleasttoincreaseproductivity.Band3Allthecontentpointsarecoveredanddespiteanumberorlanguageerrors,themessageisclearlyconveyed.Thereporthasbeenorganisedintosections,althoughattimesparagraphingisinneedofattention.知识点解析：暂无解析BEC商务英语（中级）写作模拟试卷第5套一、小作文(本题共1题，每题1.0分，共1分。)1、YouaretheManagingDirectorofamanufacturingcompany.Yourfactorywillsoonhaveavisitfromhealthandsafetyinspectors.Writeanemailtoyourdepartmentheads:sayinghowlongtheinspectionwilltakeexplainingwhytheinspectionisnecessarytellingthemhowtheyshouldpreparefortheinspection.Write40-50words.标准答案：Dearcolleagues,AsIadvicedyouinourlastmeeting,therewillbeavisitfromhealthandsafetyinspectorsonMonday,1stAprilfrom9a.m.until15p.m.Theinspectionisnecessaryforourqualitymanagementcertificate.Pleasebepreparedfortheinspectionbytellingthestafftotidyuptheirworkplace.Regards知识点解析：暂无解析二、大作文(本题共1题，每题1.0分，共1分。)2、YouworkforNorlec,anelectricalgoodsmanufacturer,andyourcompanydirectorwantstofindoutwhichmethodsofadvertisingarethemosteffective.RecentlythemarketingdepartmenthasaskedcustomershowtheyfirstlearntaboutNorlec.Lookattheinformationbelow,onwhichyouhavealreadymadesomehandwrittennotes.Then,usingallyourhandwrittennotes,writeyourreport.Write120-140words.HowcustomerslearntaboutNorlec标准答案：ReportonefficiencyofdifferentadvertisingmethodIntroductionThisreportaimstoanalyzedifferentadvertisingmethodsNorleciscurrentlyusing.FindingsDirectmailsfailedtogettouchedbyasmuchcustomersasexpected,onlycontributing9%.Websiteencounteredanupwardtrendinlightofthepopularizationofonlineshopping.Traditionaladvertisingalsotookeffect.Magazinesarethemosteffectiveadvertisingmethod,thusmoremagazinesshouldbetriedtopromotesales.ConclusionItwasconcludedthatradioandmagazineadvertisementsarestillthemosttwoeffectiveways.RecommendationsRadiopossessesgreatamountofaudience,bringingmoreprofitsthantheannualcost.Itisofgreatvalueandshouldbepromotedduetoitscost-efficiency.Thecostofbillboardshasincreasedwhilegivenitspoorefficiency,billboardsarerecommendedstopping.Thecompanyshouldturntootheradvertisingmethodsinstead.知识点解析：暂无解析BEC商务英语（中级）写作模拟试卷第6套一、小作文(本题共1题，每题1.0分，共1分。)1、YouworkintheInformationTechnologydepartmentofalargecompany.Therehasbeenadelaysettingupanewcomputersystem.Writeanemailtoallstaff:apologisingforthedelayexplainingwhytherewasaproblemsettingupthenewsystemsayingwhenthenewsystemwillbeready.Write40-50words.To…AllstaffCc…Subject:Newcomputersystem标准答案：Dearall,Asyoualreadyknowwehadsomeproblemswiththenewcomputersystem.Thenewserverbrokedownyesterday.Pleaseacceptoursincereapologies.WenowcanchangetheserveranditwillbepossibletoworkwiththenewsystemfromnextTuesdayon.Kindregards知识点解析：暂无解析二、大作文(本题共1题，每题1.0分，共1分。)2、—MissPetershasplacedanorderwithMr.Frederic.Thisisthefirstorderhiscompanyhasevergotfromhercompany.Mr.Fredericdecidestokeepthisnewcustomerandisthinkingofincreasinghiscompany’ssalestoher.—SupposeyouareasecretaryofMr.Frederic,heasksyoutowritethisletter.—Write120-140wordsonaseparatesheet.标准答案：DearMissPeters:Foryourfirst-timeorder,Iwanttothankyouonbehalfofthecompany.ThisisyourinitialorderandIknowofnogreaterkickasalesmanagercangetthanthebeginningofbusinesswithanewcustomer.Thesigningofanorderisanexpressionofconfidence,andIwantyoutoknowthatwearefullyawareoftheresponsibilitywehaveformaintainingthatconfidence.Themostimportantthingtothebuyerofanyproductisthecharacterofthesupplyingorganization,itsresources,itsfacilities,itsreputation,anditsstandardsofservice.Youhaveatyourdisposaleveryfacilityofourcompany.Wewouldliketobeusefultoyoubeyondthemerenecessitiesofbusinesstransaction.Weappreciateyourbusiness.Wewanttocontinuetodeserveit.Sincerely,AliFredericPresident知识点解析：暂无解析BEC商务英语（中级）写作模拟试卷第7套一、小作文(本题共1题，每题1.0分，共1分。)1、•Youwouldliketogotoacourse,onSmartFinancetraining.•Writeanotetoyourmanagingdirector:•sayingyourwillingnesstogo.•sayingthetimeandcostofthecourse.•explainingWhyyouwanttogo.•Write40—50wordsonaseparatesheet.标准答案：To:TheManagingDirectorFrom:ChiefAccountantDate:12August,2005Subject:SmartFinancetrainingcourseIshouldliketoattendthiscourseaboutanewfinancialmanagementprogram.ThecourseisonImayandcosts$1000.Ithinkthatattendingthiscoursewillhelpmetodemyjobbetterinfuture.知识点解析：暂无解析二、大作文(本题共1题，每题1.0分，共1分。)2、•YourcompanyneedsnewofficeplacesYouhavebeenaskedtolookattwowarehouseproperties,afteradvertsforthesepropertiesweresenttoyoubyacommercialpropertyagent,Duringyourvisit,youmadenotesontheadverts.•Then,usingallthesehandwrittennotesyouhavemade,writeashortreportforyourManagingDirector,sayingwhichpropertyyouthinkyourcompanyshouldbuy.•Donotincludepostaladdresses.•Write120—140wordsonaseparatesheet.标准答案：ReportonBuyingtheNewOfficeReceivingtheads,Ivisitedtwoplaces,oneinKentCenter,theotherinnewblock,Thefindingsareasfollows:TheplaceinKentCentercontainsmanyemptyunits,butitsofficespaceisnarrower,itsofficebuildingis15years-oldandinbadrepair;whiletheoneinnewblockcansupplywithamodernandfullyair-conditionedofficebuildingwith1000sq.metresmorespace.TheKentCenteristoooldanditscarparkingspaceisn’tenoughforus;whiletheothercanprovideusnarroweryetsufficientwarehousingspace,withmuchlargercarparkingspaces,wherethereisgoodaccesstomotorway,andit’squiteneartothecitycenter(8km).Therefore,Iprefertheonewhichismoreexpensivetheoneinnewblock.Itisreallyworthwhile.知识点解析：暂无解析BEC商务英语（中级）写作模拟试卷第8套一、小作文(本题共1题，每题1.0分，共1分。)1、•Youneedtoinformyourmarketingteamaboutaradioadvertisingcampaignforoneofyourcompany’snewproducts.•Writeanemailtoyourteam:•remindingthemwhichnewproductitis•explainingwhyyou’vechosentoadvertiseonradio•sayingwhatyouexpecttheadvertisingcampaigntoachieve.•Write40-50words.标准答案：SampleATo:AllstaffIbelieveeveryonealreadytoknownaboutournewproductTE-128.Accordingtoourbudget,Idecidedtoadvertiseonradio.Ihopemusingthischannelletthepublicwellknowourthisproductandopeninganewmarket.MarleneBand2Allthecontentpointsareaddressed,andtheformatofthememoisappropriate.However,thereareseverallanguageerrorswhicharedistractingandthesewouldtendtohaveanegativeeffectonthetargetreader.SampleBDearteammembers.Iamwritingtoinformyouthatwearetoldtomakeanadvertisingcampaignforthenewproducts-videoplayers.Takingthecostoftheadvertisementintoaccount.Ihavechosentoadvertisethemonradio.Ibelieveitwouldhaveagreatsuccess.Yourssincerely.Band3Allthecontentpointshavebeenaddressedrelativelyclearly,andanattempthasbeenmadetoexpanduponthepromptsandavoidliftinglanguagefromthequestionpaper.Somelanguageerrorsoccur,butthesearerelativelyminoranddonotobscurethemessage.知识点解析：暂无解析二、大作文(本题共1题，每题1.0分，共1分。)2、•Yourecentlyattendedatwo-daytrainingcourseonfoodandsafety.Youweredisappointedwiththecourseandyouhavedecidedtowritealetterofcomplainttothetrainingcompany.•Readtheadvertisementbelow,whichgivesdetailsofthecourse.Youhavealreadymadesomenotesontheadvertisement.•Then,usingallyourhandwrittennotes,writeyourlettertoPeterClintonatGBGCertificationServices.•Denotincludepostaladdresses.Write120—140wordsonaseparatesheet.标准答案：DearPeterClintonIwriteregardingatrainingcourseonfoodandsafetywhichIattended27November.WhenIbookedthiscourse,Ichoseyourcompanyasitcamehighlyrecommendedandthecoursesseemedtobeofahightstandard.Iwaspromisedanexperiencedtrainerbutunfortunatelyhewassickandthereplacementwasnotasgoodasexpected.Regardingtheinformationpacksthesewereonlyapileofloosephotocopies,whichwasnotpromised.Theclasswassupposedtobeabout10peoplebutinminetherewereabout15.Finally,Ishouldmakeitclearthattheclassstarted1hourDate,andthelunchthatwasserved,wascold.Iamsureyoucanunderstandmydisappointment.Iwouldthereforebegladofyoucouldinvestigatethismatter.Ilookforwardtohearingfromyou.