广东省深圳高三下学期二模英语应用文解析讲义

24深圳二模应用文解析第四部分写作(共两节，满分40分)第一节(满分15分)假定你是李华，你班在校英语戏剧节中获得一等奖，外教James打算为此庆祝，并委托你调查同学们喜欢的方式。请你根据调查结果，给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：1.表达感谢;2.提出个人建议；3.说明理由。注意：1.词数80左右;2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearJames,Yourssincerely,LiHua审题1.单向的表达感谢及理由；（段一）2.扼要的图表调查结果描述；（段二）3.个人抽取其中一项或多项推荐给外教James;（段二）4.并对推荐项目辅以理由；（段二）5.礼貌性收尾和回扣首段。（段三）句型积累一、表示感谢1.Iamwritingtoexpressourheartfeltgratitudeforyourintentiontocelebrateourclass’sfirstprizewin(n.胜利)attheschool’sEnglishDramaFestival.Itisamomentofprideforallofus,andyoursupportmeansalot.2.Thankyoufortrustingmewiththetaskofsurveyingourclassmates’preferredactivitiestocelebrateoursuccessattheEnglishDramaFestival.Herearethesurveyfindingsalongwithmypersonalopinion.3.It’smyhonortoextendourheartfeltthanksforyourgenerousoffertocelebrateoursuccess.Yoursupportandenthusiasmaretrulyinspiring.二、描述图表1.BasedonthesurveyIconducted,88%ofusareenthusiasticaboutaweekendouting,while59%favouranEnglishmovienight,followedby32%whopreferafoodparty.2.The‘outingatweekends’wasthetopchoiceforcelebration,favoredbyasignificantmajoritywith88%ofthevotes.Sharingfoodanddrinkscameinsecond,preferredby32%,whilewatchingEnglishmoviesattractedtheleastinterestat59%.3.Thesurveyrevealsthat88%ofstudentsarekeenoncelebratingwithaweekendouting.Sharingfoodanddrinksalsofoundfavor,accountingfor59%.Ontheotherhand,watchingEnglishmoviesfellbehind,withonly32%ofthevotes.4.Fromthesurvey,outingsonweekendsandEnglishmovienightsarefavoredby88%and59%ofusrespectively（分别）,with32%keenonsharingfoodanddrinks.三、建议+理由1.Mysuggestionisinlinewith（与……一致)thedesireofmanytoengageinamoreactiveandoutdooractivity,whichwouldserveasarefreshingbreakfromouracademicroutine.Moreover,anoutingallowsustorelaxandcelebrateoursuccessinawaythatisbothhealthyandinclusive(包容性强的;各种人都有的),acmodating(acmodate熟词生义考虑到;顾及)avarietyofinterestsandpreferences.2.Iwouldoptfor(选择)the“outingatweekends”asthecelebrationmethodduetoitsoverwhelmingpopularity(压倒性人气很受欢迎)andtheopportunityitpresentsforfostering(促进，培养)camaraderie(/ˌkæməˈrɑːdəri/友情)andcreatinglastingmemoriesamongstudents.Additionally,itoffersachanceforrelaxationandpersonalinteraction,whichcanbebothrefreshingandeducational.3.Mypreferenceagreeswith(与……一致)themajority,soIsuggestahikingtripalongthenearbygreenway,whichhaslivelyplantsandstunningviews(壮丽的风景).Suchanoutingisperfectforustotakeabreakfromstudyroutines,strengthenfriendshipandmakeoursuccessmorememorable.四、礼貌回扣1.Ieagerlyawaityourthoughtsonthissuggestionandlookforwardtocelebratingourvictorytogether.2.Thanksagainforyourthoughtfulgesture.Lookingforwardtoourexcitingcelebration!3.I’llappreciateitifyoucantakemysuggestionintoaccount.4.Iamconfidentthatanoutingwillnotonlybeadelightfulexperiencebutalsoameaningfulwaytocelebrateoursuccess.Ilookforwardtohearingyourthoughtsonthisproposal.官方范文：DearJames,Ihopethisemailfindsyouwell.WearegratefulforyourenthusiasmincelebratingourclasswinningthefirstprizeattheEnglishDramaFestival.Yoursupportmeansalottous!BasedonthesurveyIconducted,88%ofusareenthusiasticaboutaweekendouting,while59%favouranEnglishmovienight,followedby32%whopreferafoodparty.Mypreferenceisinlinewiththemajority,soIsuggestahikingtripalongthenearbygreenway,whichhaslivelyplantsandstunningviews.Suchanoutingisperfectforustotakeabreakfromstudyroutines,strengthenfriendshipandmakeoursuccessmorememorable.Thanksagainforyourthoughtfulgesture.Lookingforwardtoourexcitingcelebration!Yourssincerely,LiHua我希望这封邮件能让你感觉良好。我们非常感谢您对我们班在英国戏剧节上获得一等奖的热情庆祝。您的支持对我们意义重大！根据我的调查，88%的人热衷于周末出游，59%的人喜欢英国电影之夜，其次是32%的人喜欢美食派对。我的偏好与大多数人一致，所以我建议沿着附近的绿道徒步旅行，那里有活泼的植物和迷人的景色。这样的郊游非常适合我们从日常学习中解脱出来，加强友谊，让我们的成功更加难忘。再次感谢你周到的姿态。期待我们激动人心的庆祝活动！Anothertwoversions.Thankyoufortrustingmetosurveyourclassmates’preferredactivitiesforcelebratingoursuccessattheEnglishDramaFestival.Herearetheresultsandmypersonalopinion.Fromthesurvey,outingsonweekendsandEnglishmovienightsarefavoredby88%and59%ofusrespectively,with32%keenonsharingfoodanddrinks.Tomeetthevariedinterests,Iwouldremendweorganizeanoutdoorgatheringatthecitypark,wherewecanbringalongvariousfoodsanddrinkstoshare.Ibelievethisplanwouldideallysatisfythoseseekinganadventureandthosewhowishtorelaxandenjoygoodpany.Thankyouonceagainforyoursupportandforconsideringmysuggestion!(116词)Yourssincerely,LiHuaHopethisemailfindsyouwell.I’mLiHua,writingtosharesomeconcernsregardingourEnglishdramaelectiveclass.Ithasetomyattentionthatthechoiceofscriptsmaynotbeengagingenoughforallstudents,andthetimingseemstoconflictwithotherimportantschoolactivities.Toaddresstheseissues,Iproposeselectingvari