高考英语一轮复习+骑车去森林保护区野餐时车坏了幸好好心人及时帮助+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习骑车去森林保护区野餐时车坏了，幸好好心人及时帮助1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文In1995Ibrokemyleftfootonabikeride.Luckily,Icouldstilldrive,soIcontinuedmylifewithcrutches(拐杖).OneSundayIdrovetoapicnicinaforestpreserveanhourfrommyhome,inmycomfortable,butuncertain,whitecar.Thepicnicwasgreat,withgoodfood,goodfriendsandgoodweather.LateintheafternoonIleftthepartyandbeganmydrivehome.ItookthescenicroutethroughWestChicago,asmalltownabout25mileswestofChicagoproper.EverythingcloseddownonSundaythere,soitwashardtofindsomeonedrivingontheroad.4续写原文AsIstartedupabridgemycarstartedtomovewithashortsuddenaction.Theproblemwasthatmycar'salternator(交流发电机)wentwrong,resultinginthecar'sbatterydying.Ithought,notnow,nothere!Finally,thecardied.Irolledbackwardsontoasaferplace,andpulledtheemergencybrake(紧急制动).Ofcourseitwasstartingtogetdark.Ihadtogoouttowalk,butwherewouldIgo?Andoncrutches?Howlongbeforeacarwouldcomeby,andwouldtheybekindenoughtostophelp?Itwouldbeveryexpensivetogetmycartotheautomechanicshop(汽车修理店)ofmyhometown.CouldIgohomesafely?5续写原文ThenIsawahouserightthereatthebottomofthebridge,withafamilyoutsidehavingapicnicwiththeirfriends!Someofthemwerelookinginmydirection;somewomenwereclearingawaythecompletedpicnicmeal.Ihadgreattroublewalkingwithcrutches,soIgotout,leanedonthecarandwavedonecrutchovermyhead.Theirresponsewasimmediate.ThreepeopleranuptothecartoseewhatIneeded.Itoldthemmystoryandtheytookactionatonce.6段首句Para1：Tomygreatjoy,thefamilyownedanautomechanicshop.Para2：Unbelievableluckagain,Ihadaridetomyhome.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9本文以作者去森林保护区野餐为线索展开，讲述了作者在负伤的情况下，驱车去森林保护区野餐，结果在回来的路上，车坏了。幸运的是，遇到一些热心人帮助作者脱离困境的故事。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1:Tomygreatjoy,thefamilyownedanautomechanicshop.由第一段首句内容“令我非常高兴的是，这家人拥有一家汽车修理店。”可知，第一段可描写热心人帮助作者修车，作者表示感激。11续写思路分析Para2：Unbelievableluckagain,Ihadaridetomyhome.由第二段首句内容“又一次令人难以置信的幸运，有人开车送我回家。”可知，第二段可描写作者得到帮助，脱离困境后的感悟，要把爱心传递下去。12续写素材续写素材修车——帮助——感谢——回家——传递爱心——感悟13续写素材续写素材行为类①.修理：fix/repair②.传递：deliver/passon情绪类①.感谢：showingmyappreciation/showmygratitude/begrateful②.开心：feelhappy/bejoyful14续写素材续写素材[高分句型1].IwassogratefulthatIhopedtogivethemsomereward.(运用了so…that句型，that引导结果状语从句)[高分句型2].Ithoughtitwasthesewarm-heartedpeoplewhohadmademenothavetogohungryandspendthiscoldnightinthewild.(强调句型)15Part3范文呈现16范文呈现Tomygreatpleasure,thefamilyownedacarrepairshop.Fortunately,theirrepairshopwasnotfarfromhere.Oneofthemwentbacktogettoolsandhelpedmerepairmycar.Theychangedthebatteryandrestartedthecar.Myworriescompletelydisappeared.IwassogratefulthatIhopedtogivethemsomereward.Buttheysaidtome,“It’sourpleasuretohelppeopleintroubleoutoftrouble.”Theywerereallymytimelyhelp!Becauseitwaslateandtheysawthatitwasnoteasyformetomove,theywereverywillingtocontinuetohelpmeandtakemehome.17范文呈现Unbelievableluckagain,Ihadaridetomyhome.Ifeltveryhappytobetakencareof,especiallyinthisdifficulttime.Myheartwasfullofgratitudeandincomparablewarmth.Inthecarwetalkedhappilyalltheway.Ithoughtitwasthesewarm-heartedpeoplewhohadmademenothavetogohungryandspendthiscoldnightinthewild.Imustpassonthiskindofloveforhelpingothers.Lettheworldbefullofloveforever.18范文译文令我非常高兴的是，这家人开了一家汽车修理店。幸运的是，他们的修理厂离这里不远。其中一个人回去拿工具，帮我修车。他们更换了电池并重新启动了汽车。我的担忧完全消失了。我非常感激，希望给他们一些奖励。但他们对我说：“我们很乐意帮助有困难的人摆脱困境。”他们真的是我及时的帮助！因为时间很晚了，他们看到我搬家不容易，他们非常愿意继续帮助我，带我回家。又是难以置信的幸运，我搭便车回家了。我很高兴能得到照顾，