期末复习写作专训Unit910课件人教版英语八年级下册

写作专训Unit9Haveyoueverbeentoamuseum?

本单元的写作话题是谈论一些有趣的地方或过去的一些经历，写作时应注意havebeento、havebeenin和havegoneto等的正确用法。另外，还要注意和现在完成时连用的ever、never、just等词的用法。短文中通常用第一人称来写，可用一些特殊的句式如条件状语从句让短文更加精彩。

[教材原句]1.HaveyoueverbeentoSingapore？

（开头句）2.ThemostinterestingmuseumI’veeverbeentoistheAmericanComputerMuseum.（开头句）3.Themuseumteachespeopleaboutthehistoryanddevelopmentoftoilets.（中间句）5.I’vefinallyrealizedwhymygrandpalovesdrinkingteaandcollectingteasets.（结尾句）4.Singaporeisalsoanexcellentplacetotrynewfood.（中间句）[课外典句]1.Ijustwanttosharemyuncomfortableexperiencewithyou.（开头句）2.Youcanexperiencealotwhenyougothere.（中间句）3.Theworkertherewilltellyouhowtousethatmachine.（中间句）4.Ihopeyouwillhaveatryyourself.（结尾句）[传世金句]Athousand-lijourneybeginswiththefirststep.千里之行，始于足下。

[经典例题]旅游可以让人放松身心，增长见识，所以很多人都想利用闲暇时间去旅游。请你根据下列要点，写一篇80词左右的文章介绍你最近的一次旅行。提示：1.Whendidyouhavethetrip？2.Wheredidyougoonthetrip？3.Whodidyougoonthetripwith？4.Whatdidyoudoduringthetrip？5.Howdoyoulikethetrip？[思路点拨]1.体裁：记叙文；2.人称：以第一人称为主；3.时态：以一般过去时和现在完成时为主；4.思路：首先点明旅行进行的时间、地点和人物等；然后描写旅游的具体活动；最后表达自己的感受。[写作提纲][妙笔生花]

IliketravelingandIhavebeentomanyplacesofinterestonvacation.Lastsummervacation，IwenttoMountTaiwithmyparentsandmysisterbytrain.Whenweclimbedupthemountain，IwassotiredthatIwantedtogiveup.Butallmyfamilyencouragedmetokeepgoing.Atlast，Ihadthechancetoseethebeautifulsightsfromthetop.Whilewewerewalkingaround，wetooklotsofnicephotos.Itwasanexcitingandwonderfulexperience.Fromthetrip，Ihavelearnedthatwecansucceedonlyifwenevergiveup.

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IliketravelingandIhavebeentomanyplacesofinterestonvacation.Lastsummervacation，IwenttoMountTaiwithmyparentsandmysisterbytrain.Whenweclimbedupthemountain，IwassotiredthatIwantedtogiveup.Butallmyfamilyencouragedmetokeepgoing.Atlast，Ihadthechancetoseethebeautifulsightsfromthetop.Whilewewerewalkingaround，wetooklotsofnicephotos.Itwasanexcitingandwonderfulexperience.Fromthetrip，Ihavelearnedthatwecansucceedonlyifwenevergiveup.

⁠Unit10I'vehadthisbikeforthreeyears.

本单元的写作话题是关于自己拥有的物品，描述物品的特征及来源以及描述自己家乡的变化等。写作的时候要正确使用谓语动词的时态，特别是现在完成时和一般过去时的正确使用。

[教材原句]1.Wehavealreadyclearedoutalotofthingsfromourbedrooms.（开头句）2.Nowadays，moreandmorehometownsarechangingforthebetter.（开头句）3.I’vehadthismagazineforacoupleofmonths.（中间句）4.Wehavedecidedtoeachsellfivethingsthatwenolongeruse.（中间句）5.Andinmanyplaces，thegovernmenthasalsobuiltnewroadsandbridges.（中间句）6.Ourhometownhasgivenussomanygreatmemories.（结尾句）7.Asforme，Ididnotwanttogiveupmyfootballshirts，but，tobehonest，Ihavenotplayedforawhilenow.（结尾句）[课外典句]1.Letmeintroducesomeofmygreatthingstoyou.（开头句）2.Iwanttotellyousomethingaboutthegreatchangesinmyhometown.（开头句）3.Ihavehadthisbikefortwoyears.（中间句）4.Thankstothegovernment，ourlifeconditionhasimprovedalot.（中间句）5.Ilovemyoldmemoriesverymuch.（结尾句）[传世金句]Weshouldplanthefutureaccordingtothepast.我们应该依据过去来策划未来。

[经典例题]假设你是迈克，你有一件很喜欢的物品，而且保存了很久。请根据下列提示，写一篇80词左右的英语短文，介绍这件物品的来历以及你喜欢它的原因。提示：1.Whatisthethingthatyoulikebestandhowlonghaveyoukeptit？2.Whogaveittoyou？3.Doesithavespecialmeaningtoyou？Why？[思路点拨]1.体裁：记叙文；2.人称：以第一人称和第三人称为主；3.时态：以一般过去时和现在完成时为主；4.思路：首先说明这件物品的名称及拥有的时间等；然后对这件物品的来源进行具体的描述；最后表述这件物品对自己的影响。[写作提纲][妙笔生花]

Ihavehadatoycarforabouttenyears.AndIstilllikeitalotalthoughitlooksold.WhenIwasalittlechild，myparentsweresopoorthattheycouldn’tbuyanygiftsforme.Ihadnotoystoplaywith.Oneday，whenIwasaloneathome，myauntsentatoycartome.IwasveryhappytogetitandIloveditverymuch.Andithasbroughtmemuchhappinesssincethen.Ithasbecomemybestfriend.Ilovethetoycar.

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Ihavehadatoycarforabouttenyears.AndIstilllikeitalotalthoughitlooksold.WhenIwasalittlechild，myparentsweresopoorthattheycouldn’tbuyanygiftsforme.Ihadnotoysto