高中英语高考复习-短文改错笔记+练习

二轮复习-短文改错

必须烂熟于心的做题技巧！！！

标准流程：

1.一遍粗读看“意思”，意思不对一定错；

2.一遍精读看“形式”，形式用错一定错；

3.一遍用来数（最后几个）

①数个数：一删、一添、八改

②数句子：一句一错，长句两错（主从复合句）

③数考点：名动形副，介冠连代，并列逻辑，固定搭配

4.掌握规律：

1）名词+谓语动词+非谓语动词：4-5个

2）其余考点总共5-6个，且考点不重复

做题步骤：

①第一步和第二步往往合成一步--第一遍拼尽全力改出明显的意思错误

和形式错误；

②第一遍，一个句子一个错，就心满意足！！

③第一遍，介词和冠词可以不着急改！！

重中之重：：：做短文改错不要傻吧拉吉的念英语，一定要中文翻译！！！！

【2014全国卷1】

NearlyEveyearsbefore(ago),andwiththehelpby(of)ourfather,mysister

andIplantedsomecherrytomatoes【圣女果】inourbackgarden,sincethen-forall

theseyear(years)---wehad(have)beenallowingtomatoestoselfseedwherethey

please.As(a)result,theplantsaregrowingsomewhere(everywhere).Thefruits

aresmallinsize,butjuicyandtaste(tasty).Therearesomuch(many)thatweoften

sharethemwithourneighbors.Althoughweallowtomatoplantstogrowinthesame

placeyearafteryear,butwehaveneverhadanydiseaseorinsectattackproblems.We

aregrowingwonderfully(wonderful)tomatoesatnocost!

介代星耀题：

【2014全国卷2】

Mydreamschoolstartsat8:30a.m.andendsat3:30p.m.They意思不对

Therearethreelessonsinthemorningandtwointheafternoon.Wedidn,tdon't

needtodosomanymuchhomework.Therefore,wehavemoretime(with)for

星耀题after-schoolactivities.Forexample,wecandoreadingforoneanda

halfhourhoursandplaysportsforonehoureveryday.

Mydreamschoollooklookslikeabiggarden.Thereareallkindsofthe

flowersandtreesaroundtheclassroombuildings.Wecanlieonthegrassfora

rest,orsatsitbythelakelisteningtomusic.Theteachersherearekindand

helpfully.Theyarenotonlyourteachersbutalsoourfriends.

脑子里面时十分清楚的，做题做的非常多了的同学

【2015全国卷1】

WhenIwasachild,Ihopedtoliveinthecity.Ithink(thought)Iwouldbe

happythere.NowIamlivinginacity,butImissmyhomeinthecountryside.

Theretheairiscleanorandthemountainsaregreen.Unfortunately,onwiththe

developmentofindustrialization,theenvironmenthasbeenpolluted.Lotsof

studieshavebeenshownthatglobalwarminghasalreadybecomeavery

seriouslyseriousproblem.Theairsairwebreatheinisgettingdirtieranddirtier.

MuchManyrareanimalsaredyingout.Wemustfoundfindwaystoprotect

yourourenvironment.Ifwefailtodoso,we511livetoregretit.

【2015全国卷2】

Oneday,littleTonywenttoashoppingcenterwithhisparent

parents.Itwasverycrowded.Tonysawatoyoninashopwindow.He

likeditsoverymuchthathequicklywalkedintotheshop.After

lookingatthetoyforsometime,heturnedaroundandfoundwhere

thathisparentsweremissing.Tonywasscaredandbegantocry.A

womansawhimcryingandtellingtoldhimtowaitoutsideatheshop.

Fiveminuteslater,Tonysawhisparents.Momsaid,“Hownicetosee

youagain!DadandIwereterribleterriblyworried.^^Tonypromised

herthatthiswouldneverhappenagain.

13.(2016全国卷I)

MyuncleistheownerofarestaurantclosetothatwhereI

live.Thoughnotverybig,btt^therestaurantispopularinourarea.Itis

alwayscrowdedwithcustomersatmealtimestime.Somepeopleeven

had(have)towaitoutside.Myuncletellsmethatthekeytohis

successishonesthonesty.Everydayhemakessurethatfresh

vegetablesorandhighqualityoilareusingforcooking.Myunclesays

thatheneverdreamsofbecomingrichintheashortperiodoftime.

Instead,hehopesthatourhisbusinesswillgrowsteady.

14.（2016全国卷n）短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

Thesummerholidayiscoming.MyclassmatesandIaretalkingabouthowtodo

duringtheholiday.Wecanchosebetweenstayingathomeandtakeatrip.Ifwestayat

home,itiscomfortablebutthereisnoneedtospendmoney.Butinthatcase,wewill

learnlittleaboutworld.Ifwegoonatripabroad,wecanbroadenyourviewandgain

knowledgeswecannotgetfrombooks.Someclassmatessuggestwecangotoplaces

ofinterestnearby.Ithoughtthatitisagoodidea.Itdoesnotcostmany,yetwecan

stilllearnalot.

15.（2016全国卷ni）短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

Theteenageyearfrom13to19werethemostdifficulttimeforme.Theywere

alsothebestandworseyearsinmylife.Atthefirst,IthoughtIkneweverythingand

couldmakedecisionsbyyourself.However,myparentsdidn'tseemtothinksuch.

Theyalwaystellmewhattodoandhowtodoit.Atonetime,Ievenfeltmyparents

couldn'tunderstandmesoIhopedIcouldbefreelyfromthem.IshowedthemIwas

independentbywearstrangeclothes.NowIamleavinghometocollege.Atlast,Iwill

beonmyown,butIstillwanttohavemyparentstoturntowheneverneedhelp.

10.（2017全国卷I）短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

Inthesummerholidayfollowingmyeighteenbirthday,Itookdrivinglessons.I

stillrememberhowhardfirstdaywas.Beforegettingintothecar,IthoughtIhad

learnedtheinstructor'sorders,soonceIstartedthecar,mymindgoesblank.Iforgot

whathehadsaidtomealtogether.Theinstructorkeptrepeatingtheword,"Speed

up!""Slowdown!""Turningleft!"IwassomuchnervousthatIcouldhardly

tellwhichdirectionwasleft.Afewminuteslate,theinstructoraskedmetostopthecar.

ItwasareliefandIcametoasuddenlystopjustinthemiddleontheroad.

11.（2017全国卷II）短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

Mr.andMrs.Zhangallworkinourschool.Theylivefarfromtheschool,andit

takesthemaboutahourandahalftogotoworkeveryday.Intheirsparetime,they

areinterestinginplantingvegetablesintheirgarden,thatisontherooftopoftheir

house.Theyoftengetupearlierandwaterthevegetablestogether.Theyhavealso

boughtforsomegardeningtools.Beside,theyoftengetsomeusefulinformationsfrom

theInternet.Whensummercame,theywillinvitetheirstudentspickthefresh

vegetables!

12.（2017全国卷IU）短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

WhenIlookatthispictureofmyself,Irealizeofhowfasttimeflies.Ihadgrown

notonlyphysically,andalsomentallyinthepastfewyears.Aboutonemonthafterthis

photowastook,Ienteredmysecondyearofhighschoolandbecomeanewmember

oftheschoolmusicclub.Aroundmeinpicturearethethingstheywereveryimportant

inmylifeatthattime:carmagazinesandmusicalinstruments.Ienjoyedstudying

differencekindsofcarsandplanes,playingpopmusic,andcollectingthelatemusic

albums.Thispictureoftenbringsbacktomemanyhappymemoriesofyourhigh

schooldays.

7.（2018全国卷I）短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

Duringmylastwinterholiday,Iwenttocountrysidewithmyfathertovisitmy

grandparents.Ifindachangethere.ThefirsttimeIwentthere,theywerelivingina

smallhousewithdogs,ducks,andanotheranimals.LastwinterwhenIwenthere

again,theyhadabigseparatehousetoraisedozensofchicken.Theyalsohadasmall

pond,whichtheyraisedfish.Mygrandpasaidlastsummertheyearnedquitealotby

sellthefish.Ifelthappilythattheirlifehadimproved.Attheendofourtrip,Itoldmy

fatherthatIplannedtoreturnforeverytwoyears,butheagreed.

8.（2018全国卷H）短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

WhenIwaslittle,Friday'snightwasourfamilygamenight.Aftersupper,we

wouldplaycardgamesofallsortinthesittingroom.Asthekid,Ilovedtowatch

cartoons,butnomatterhowmanytimesIaskedtowatchingthem,myparentswould

nottoletme.Theywouldsaytousthatplayingcardgameswouldhelpmybrain.Still

Iunwillingtoplaythegamesforthemsometimes.Ididn'trealizehowrightmy

parentsareuntilIenteredhighschool.ThegamesmyparentstaughtmewhereIwasa

childturnedouttobeveryusefullaterinmylife.

9.（2018全国卷IU）短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

ItwasMondaymorning,andthewritingclasshadjustbegin.Everyonewassilent,

waittoseewhowouldbecalledupontoreadhisandherparagraphaloud.Someofus

wereconfidentandeagertakepartintheclassactivity,otherswerenervousand

anxious.IhaddonemyselfhomeworkbutIwasshy.Iwasafraidthattospeakinfront

ofalargergroupofpeople.Atthatmoment,Irememberedthatmyfatheroncesaid,

"Theclassroomisaplaceforlearningandthatincludelearningfromtextbooks,and

mistakeaswell."Immediate,Iraisedmyhand.

4.（2019全国卷I）短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

Ibecameinterestinginplayingfootballthankstoasmallaccident.Oneafternoon

whereIwasinprimaryschool,Iwaswalkingbytheschoolplayground.Suddenly

footballfeeljustinfrontofmebutalmosthitme.Istoppedtheballandkickedit

hardlybacktotheplayground.Toeveryone'ssurprising,theballwentintothenet.All

thefootballplayerontheplaygroundcheeredloudly,saythatIhadatalentforfootball.

Fromnowon,Istartedtoplaymyfootballwithclassmatesafterschool.Iamagood

playernow.

5.（2019全国卷H）短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

SinceIwasakid,I'veconsidereddifferentjobIwouldliketodo.First,Iwanted

tobeafireman,whoseuniformlookedsocoolly.Then,whenIwasinthefivegrade,I

wantedtobeateacherbecauseIlikedmyEnglishteachertoomuch.WhenIstudied

chemistryhighschool,Ireconsideredmggoalordecidedtobeadoctor.Theywere

tworeasonsforthedecision.OnewasthatIwasamazingatthefactthatasickperson

couldfeelmuchmorebetterafterseeingadoctor.AndtheotheristhatIwantedto

helppeopleinneed.

6.（2019全国卷HD短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

I'vehadmanydreamssinceIwasachild.Nowmydreamistoopensacafe.

Thoughitmayappearsimple,itrequiredalotofideasandefforts.WhatIwantisnot

justanordinarilycafebutaveryspecialone.Iwantmycafehaveaspecialthemesuch

aslike"TangDynasty".Inthecafe,customerswillenjoyyourselvesinthehistorical

environmentwhatiscreatedforthem.IfIsucceedinmanageone,Iwillopenmore.I

wishtohaveachainofcafesinmanydifferentcity.Eachofmycafeswillhavea

differentthemeandanuniquestyle.

1.（2020全国卷I）短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

TodayItriedcookingasimplydishmyself.Ilikeeatingfryingtomatoeswith

eggs,andIthoughtitmusttobeeasytocook.Mymomtoldmehowtopreparingit.

FirstIcutthetomatoesintopiecesbutputthemaside.NextIbroketheeggsintoa

bowlandbeatthemquicklywithchopstick.AfterthatIpouredoilintoapanand

turnedoffthestove.Iwaitedpatientlyunlesstheoilwashot.ThenIputthe

tomatoesandthebeateneggsintopantogether."Notthatway,"mymomtri