2024年高考英语易错题：读后续写5大陷阱（学生版）（新高考专用）

易错点27读后续写

易错陷阱1：审题不清、文本内容易混易错点.

【分析】

只有把材料读透，才能明确故事主线，把握续写方向，为续写奠定基础。很多考生因为词

汇匮乏、时间不够等种种原因没有读透文本信息，导致续写严重偏离所给素材、跑题等错误。

为了表现角色的成长或事件的发展，文中会出现影响角色成长和事件发展的关键线索，而这些

线索之间的逻辑关系，构成事件发生的经过，就是文章的主线。

易错陷阱2：段首句推理衔接易混易错点.

【分析】

续写部分的内容，无论是时间的先后还是情节的发展，都以第一段和第二段首句这两句话

为内在联系的连接点。它们直接决定了情节的发展方向.考生容易忽略这两句的作用，或是第

二段首句与第一段结尾之间的联系。应当根据第二段首句逆推第一段尾句，即过渡句。

易错陷阱3：情节发展和结局易混易错点.

【分析】

续写必须与原文内容故事衔接自然、连贯。语言风格与所给材料应当保持一致.要紧扣原

文主题、预设核心冲突、推动故事发展。所给材料中可能会有很多伏笔，并且可能较为零星的

分布在所给材料中，考生不必分别进行回应，只选取有助于推动情节发展或凸显故事主线的伏

笔来设置情节.

一般来说，文章的第一段会介绍故事发生的背景、人物的性格特点等，为可能出现的矛盾冲

突做好铺垫，考生应当善于发现和利用这些伏笔。

结局设置巧妙，可以对续写起到画龙点睛的作用。一般选择“首尾呼应”或“情感升华”来

传递作者的思想感情和感悟，凸显作者的变化.

具体读后续写升华句和写作要领详见本作者编撰的专辑《2023年新高考英语满分作文读

后续写高分突破+万能金句》。

易错陷阱4：词句易混易错点.

【分析】

为丰富故事的情节，充实续写的内容和升级语言，考生会用到多样化的词汇或句型。而匮

乏的词汇量和薄弱的基础知识则会造成高级句型和词汇的错用.

易错陷阱5：卷面易混易错点.

【分析】

整洁优美的卷面会成为加分的一个因素。有点考生不注意规范书写，字母大小随意，字迹潦

草不清，乱涂乱画，书写马虎等都会给阅卷者留下“脏、舌L、差”等印象。读后续写不同于第

一部分写作，其分值更高，故优美的卷面留下的印象分占比更大。

三

【易错点提醒一】词句（笼统词与高级词）易混易错点

【例1】一天晚上，一个小偷走进了她家。

【变式1］当我们要离开时，他哭起来。

【变式2］他笑得合不拢嘴。

【变式3］她不敢一个人外出.

【易错点提醒二】句式结构之非谓语动词易混易错点

［例2］Seeingfromthetopofthemountain,thevillagelooksmorebeautiful.

【正确】

【变式1】Havingexperiencedsomanyfailuresoneafteranother,shefinallypickedherselfup.

【易错】

【变式2】Devotedtohisresearchwork,theprofessorcaredlittleaboutanyotherthings.

【易错】

【变式3】Shewasterrifiedatthethoughtofbeingalone.

【易错】

【易错点提醒三】句式结构之独立主格易混易错点

【例3】Shelaughed,hereyesshining.

【易错】

【变式1】Shefroze,hermouthhangingopen.

【易错】

【变式2】Jessicasighingwithrelief,thepairhuggedeachotherandshedtearsofexcitement.

【易错】

【变式3】shesattherestill,tearsrollingdownhercheeks.

【易错】

【易错点提醒四】句式结构之形容词与副词易混易错点

【例4】Mickfrozewithterror,tooscaredtomoveaninch.

【易错】

【变式1】Herheartleapedwithjoy.

【易错】

【变式2】Thedaywascoldbutclear.

【易错】

【变式3】Jack,sfaceflushed/burnedwithembarrassment.

【易错】

【易错点提醒五】句式结构之从句和特殊句式易混易错点

【例5】Whenfacedwiththegreatchallenge,hehadafrownonhisface.

【易错】

【变式1】Notonlydidweseeitbutalsowetouchedit.

【易错】

【变式2】HonestyisthemostimportantqualitythatIwanthimtopossess.

【易错】

【变式3】Notaworddidhesaythatday.

【易错】

1.（2023•浙江台州-统考一模）

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

GreenThumb

AllIdidwasshowmylittlesisterhowtogrowplants.Digahole.Putinaseed.Coveritwithdirt.

Waterit.Wait."See,Laynie,MIexplained,“awholeplantwillgrowfromthistinyseed.Allwehave

todoiswaterit.w

Layniehadherownwateringcansoshecould“help”meinthegarden.Oneday,aftereverything

waswatered,sherantothefenceandstartedsprinklingwateronanotherspot.Iwalkedoverandsawa

freshpatchofdirtnearthefence.

“Didyouplantsomethingthere?MIasked.

“Yes,"shesaid.“I'mgrowingapencil.Mypurplepencilgottoosmall,soIplantedit.”

“What?But,Laynie—M

Ishouldhaveexplainedthingsrightthen,butIjustmuttered,“Uh…Inevergrewonebefore.w

LaterIgotwhatseemedlikeagreatidea.IdugupLaynie'spencilandaplantedwabrand-new

purplepencil.Layniewasreallyexcitedwhenshesawit."Mypencilgrew!wsheshouted.

Afewdayslater,Layniewaswateringonthesamespot.Twodayslater,newcrayonsstickingtheir

pointylittleheadsout,thankstome.Layniejumpedupanddownandyelled,KTheylooklikeflowers!M

Shewpickedwthemandranintothehouse.

Next,Layniegrewanadultbeardollfromatinyone,asoupspoonfromateaspoon,andahand

mirrorfromapieceofglass.Whensheclaimedthatshehadgrownthesethings,Ijustkeptmymouth

shut!Actually,itwasfuntryingtothinkofwhatshouldgrowfromLaynie'sseeds.Anditwascooltosee

hergetexcited.

OnedayIsawherpattingdownsomedirtnearthefenceagain,soIknewshe,djustplanted

something.Myheartdroppedtomyfeetwhensheasked,“Howlongdoesittaketogrowagoldfish,

Brad?”Icouldn,tspeak.

“Notlong,Ibet!wsaidLaynie.Shekneltdowntowhisper"Grow,Molly.Grow!Mbeforeshe

skippedbacktothehouse.

注意：i.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答.

Isatdownwithmybacktothefenceandthoughtforalongtime.

LaterIfoundLayniesittingbythespotwhereMollywasburied.

2.（2024•浙江杭州-统考一模）

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

MydadandIhadbeenlookingforwardtotheStalecross-countryraceofmysenioryearofhigh

school,whichwouldbetheclimax（顶点）ofmyexistence.

Iwasthefastestrunneronmyteam,andIwassupposedtomakeitintothetopfifteen.Wehadbeen

workingtowardsthisraceforthreeyears.Itwaseverythingtome,anditwaseverythingtomydad.He

wasarunnerandwaswildwithjoybymysuccessinrunning.Hemadeittoeveryrace,evenflyinghome

earlyfrombusinesstripstoseemerun.Ialwayslistenedforhisvoice,whichrangabovethe

crowd-tellingmetorelaxmyarms,callingoutmytime.Hepushedme.Hecheeredforme.Hebelieved

inme.WespentcountlesshoursonthesandycanalsofArizona.Breathinginthedustofthedesert,the

blossomsoftheorangetrees,andtheterriblesmellofthedairyfarm,wemadeourwayacrossthecity.

Wepoundedmilesandmilesintoourrunningshoes,markingwitheverystepthepathtogreatness.Itwas

ajourneythatwasjustours.Adreampassedonfromonegenerationtothenext.

Thenthebigdaycame.Itwashotterthannormal-toohot.Mythroatfeltlikeafieldofcotton,

crackedwiththesummerheat,asIwaitedfortheguntofire.Igazedoutatthecrowd；dozensoffamiliar

facesfromchurchandschoolflickeredacrossmyview.Theyhadcomeforme.Theywerecountingonme.

Isawmydadsethiswatch,worryandexcitementetchedacrosshisface.Withthesoundofagunshot,the

racebegan.

Forthefirsttwoandhalfmiles,Ifeltgreat.Ihadneverbeforebeensoreadyforsomething.The

weeksleadinguptotheracewerefilledwithhardpracticesandastrictdiet.Thescorchingsunbeatupon

myback,blindingmewithitsbrilliance.Nothingwasgoingtostopme,though.

注意：

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

However,withoutwarning,mystrengthwasrunningout.

Iwhispered,TmsosorryIdisappointedyou,Dad.”

3.（2023•广西玉林•阶段练习）

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Wesatonthebuswaitingwhileotherpassengerspiledon.Ablond-hairedgirl,aboutnineteen

yearsold,tooktheseatinfrontofus.Thebusdriverfollowedbehindher.Hedemandedherfare.

“Youpay$40orgetoffthebus!”thedriversaid.

“Ipaidalready.Yesterday,online,Mthegirlinsisted.

“No,norecordofit!Mthebusdriverpointedtothepaperinhishandandwaveditinherface.

“See.Nopay!Youpay,oryoumustgetoff."Heangrilypointedtotheexitdoor.

“ButIdon,thavemoney.AndIpaidalready.Please/5

Thebusdriverpickeduphismobilephoneandmadeacalltofindoutiftherehadbeenanerror

withthepaperwork.Afterfailingtogetthrough,hewasgettingangrierwiththegirl.Sohecutthecalland

didn,ttry.

“No,youhavenotpaid.Youmustpay.”

“Butplease,Idon,thaveanymoneyonme.ImustgettoLAtoday.Please.M

Tearsstreameddownherface.

IhadboardedabusheadedtoLosAngeles.IwasveryexcitedaboutexperiencingLA.Mydreamof

visitingDisneyLandwasabouttocometrue.ButwhileIsattherecomfortablyinmyseat,thinkingabout

mynextadventure,thisyounggirlwasintears,withamanstandingoverher,demandingmoney.

Iwasn,tsurewhatIshoulddo.Wasshetellingthetruth?Itwouldn'tbethefirsttimesomeone

hadextractedmoneybytellingasadstorythatturnedoutuntrue.Didshereallynothaveanymoney?

Maybethebusdriverwouldshowsomesympathyandallowhertosortthepaymentoutlater?

Butno,thebusdrivercontinuedtodemandshepay$40orgetoffthebus.Theyounggirlinsisted

thatshedidn,thaveenoughmoneyforthefareandhadnooneshecouldcontactforhelp.Itseemedthe

driverwouldthrowheroffthebus.

注意：

1.续写词数应为150个左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Suddenly,amessygrey-hairedwomanwithaweatheredfacestoodup.

Atthenextreststop,Inoticedthatwomanhadnomoneyforfood.

4.（2023•湖南-湖南师大附中校联考一模）

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

ToactwithintegritywasahabitwithSusanwhoalwaysfollowstheGoldenRule："Donotdoto

otherswhatyoudonotwantotherstodotoyou.wButwhenshethoughtoverherpastconduct,ablushof

shamecrepttohercheeks,asmanylittleactsofselfishnessandunkindnesscamebacktohermemory.

Sheresolvedthatforthefuture,bothingreatthingsandsmall,shewouldrememberandfollowthe

GoldenRule.

Itwasnotlongafterthisthatanopportunityoccurred,whichtriedSusan'sprinciples.One

Saturdayeveningwhenshewent,asusual,toMr.Thompson'sinn,toreceivethemoneyofher

mother*swashingforhim,whichamountedtofivedollars,shefoundMr.Thompsonapparentlyina

terribleragewithsomehorsedealerswithwhomhehadbeenbargaining.Heheldinhishandanopen

pocketbook（钱袋子），fullofbillsandscarcelynoticingSusanasshemadeherrequest,excepttoswear

atherfortroublinghimwhenhewasbusy,hehandedherabanknote.

Gladtoescapesoeasily,Susanhurriedoutofthegate.Pausingtoputthemoneysafelyinherpurse,

shediscoveredthathehadgivenhertwobillsinsteadofone.Shelookedaround；nobodywasnearand

herfirstimpulsewasjoyattheunexpectedprize.

“Itisallmine,"saidshetoherself."Iwillbuymymotheranewcoatwithit,andshecangive

heroldonetomysisterMary,andthenMarycangototheSundayschoolwithmenextwinter.Iwonderif

IcanbuyapairofshoesformybrotherTom,too.”

Atthatmomentsherememberedthathemusthavegivenittoherbymistake.Butagainthevoiceof

thetempterwhispered,“Hegaveit,andhowdoyouknowthathedidnotintendtomakeyouapresent

ofit?Keepit!Hewillneverknowit,forhehadtoomanysuchbillsinthatgreatpocketbook.w

注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Thisconflictwasgoingoninhermindbetweengoodandevil.

Sir,youpaidmetwobillsinsteadofone,"shehandedhimtheextranote.

5.（2023•安徽•高三校考阶段练习）

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Duringthesummervacation,amotherplannedanexcitingtripwithhertwochildren.Theywereset

toexploreafamoustouristspot,famousforitsbreath-takinglandscapesandattractions.Littledidthey

knowthattheiradventurewouldtakeanunexpectedturn.

Astheyarrivedatthedestination,theyweregreetedbyaseaofpeople.Theplacewasoverflowing

withtouristsfromallovertheglobe.Excitementfilledtheairasfamiliesbegantheirsightseeing

adventures,creatingalivelyandvibrantatmosphere.

Eagertobegintheirownadventure,themother,holdingthehandsofhertwochildren,doveintothe

crowd.However,amongthecrowdedarmyoftourists,fatehaditsownplansinstore.Inthechaosofthe

massivecrowd,theyoungerson,unawareofthechaosunfoldingaroundhim,somehowmanagedto

wanderoff,unknowinglyleavinghisfamilybehind.

Suddenly,themotherrealizedthatheryoungerchildwasnolongerbesideher.Panicseizedher

heart,andasenseofhelplessnessoccupiedher.Shedesperatelycalledoutherson'sname,hervoice

tremblingwithfear.Tearsstreameddownherfaceasshescannedthevastseaofpeopleforherson,but

therewasnosignofhim.

Inastateofdespair,themothersoughtassistancefromfellowtourists.Compassionateminds

instantlyjoinedinthesearch,spreadingwordaboutthelostchildthroughoutthearea.Strangersjoinedin

thesearch,theirheartsfilledwithempathyfortheanxiousmother.

注意：L续写词数应为150个左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Threeagonizing（令人焦虑不安的）hourspassed,eachfeelinglikeyears.

Asthemothertightlyfoldedhersoninherarms,awaveofdelightwashedoverher.

6.（2023•吉林长春-高三东北师大附中练习）

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

TheneighborhoodkidsnicknamedthestrangeoldcoupleCrazyJackandRubyRednose.Rumor

wasthattheysatinsideanddrankteaallday.Theonlywordsweeverheardfromthemwere“Keepout

ofourrosebushes!w

Therosebushesservedasafencebetweenourhouseandtheirs.Iwaselevenatthetimeandthe

oldestofsixactivegirls.Weshouldhaveplayedoursoftballgameselsewheretoavoidhurtingtheroses,

butwesecretlyenjoyedannoyingCrazyJackandRubyRednose.Oneday,wehadaneighborhood

softballgameinouryard.Marywastryingtocatchaflyball.Shestumbled（绊倒）overoneofRuby

Rednose,srosebushesandfellontopofseveralmore.Justatthatmoment,RubyRednosesprangout

andrantowardMary.Shescreamedangrily,“Lookatwhatyou,vedonetoourfamily*sroses!

You,vealwaysbeenatrouble.Youhavenoideawhatthisrosebushmeanstome!M

Hearingthis,mysistersandIranintoourhouse.Breathlessly,wetoldMomwhathadhappened.

“Girls,Ihavetoldyounottoplaysoftballnearthosebushes.Comeoutsiderightnowandhelpmefix

them.w"Mom,wethoughtyoudidn,tlikethecouple,wweprotested."They'remeantous.M

Momjustglaredatus.Wefollowedheroutsidetohelprepairtherosefence.WhileMomwasexamining

thedamagedroses,Rubyslowlywalkedout.Shelookedsad.Anditwasn,thernosethatwasred——it

washereyes.

注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。

Rubywalkedovertomymother,wegirlsholdingourbreath.

Afewweekslater,theplantsallcamebacktolife.

7.（2023•江苏连云港-高三统考期中）

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Imaginesittingatyourbreakfasttablehavingacupofcoffeewhenallofasuddenyouseesomeone

abouttodie.Whatwouldyoudo?LastChristmas,JohnGelinnefoundout.

OnDec.26,Gelinne,60,waswatchingoutthebackwindowsofhishomeinEdgewater,Maryland,

atfrozenBeardsCreek（河流）.Childrenandgrandchildrenwererunningaroundthehouse.That's

whenGelinnelookedupjustintimetoseeasmallplaneafewhundredyardsaway,losingaltitude（海拔

高度）.

Astheplanedisappearedbehindthetrees,Gelinne,aformerNavycommander,realizeditwasgoing

tolandinthecreek.Heflashedonamomentfrommorethan20yearsearlier：Sept.11,2001.Gelinnewas

atworkinthePentagoninWashington,D.C.,whenterrorists（恐怖分子）crashedaplaneintothe

building.Heescapedbuthasalwayswonderedifhecouldhavestayedinsideand

“Totherightwasthecrisis,andtotheleftwasescape.Idon'tevenknowifIcouldhavegone

right,butIwentleft,"herecalled."Ialwayssecond-guessedmyselfaboutthatdecision.M

Onthisday,Gelinnedidn,thesitate.Herandowntothewaterfront.Theplanehadslippedtoa

stoponthebroad,frozencreek,farfromtheshore.Itwasnowsinking.Thepilotwasstandingonthewing.

GelinneknewfromhisNavytrainingthatevenafewminutesintheicywatercouldkillthepilot.

Gelinnetestedtheicewithhisfootanddecidednottotakeanychanceswalkingonit.Soheandhis

son,JohnIr.,37,pulledtwokayaks（皮艇）out.

“Ifigured,ifitcanfloatonthewater,itcanslideontheice,"Gelinnesays.Thekayaks'

paddles（桨）provedeasilybroken,sothepairtriedusingshovels（铁铲）topushtheboatsalong.Their

firstattemptsleftthemmovingincircles.Butwithsomemuscle,theymadeprogress.

注意：

1.词数150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Thetwomensetoff,pushingtheirboatsacrosstheice.

Theyfinallyarrivedattheshorewithgreatefforts.

8.（2023•吉林白城-高三校考期中）

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

PositiveActionFuelsHope

Tmnotgoingbacktogrouptherapy（治疗）.Irefusetobetreatedlikethat.”Thevoicewasso

loudthatIhadtoholdthephoneawayfrommyear.

AliciaGonzalezsufferedfromdepression.Thiswashersecondmonthatthehomelessshelter,where

Iworkasacasemanager.

Aliciahadbeenanursefor10years.Herworkwasintenseanddemanding,andshelovedit.Toher,

thetrauma（精神仓!J伤）she'dsufferedwasthathersonlosthislifeinacarcrash.Withherbrain

overloadedbythetrauma,shecouldn,tfocusonherwork.Finally,shehadtoquitherjob.Withno

income,shecouldn,tpayherrent.Foralmostthreeyears,Alicialivedinhertruck.Aliciatoldmeall

thisatourfirstmeeting.

“Iwanttohelpyou,"Isaid.aTherearelotsofresourceshere.AllIaskisthatyoutellme

what,sgoingonwithyou.ThatwayIcanmakesureyou'regettingtheservicesyouneed.”

“I'11try,wshesaid,"It'sjusthard.IusedtofeelasthoughwhatIdidmattered.Now...MHer

voicebecamequiet.BeforeIcouldsaysomething,shestoodandwalkedoutoftheroom.

Twomonthslater,IstillfeltasifIhadn,tgottenthroughtoAlicia.Sometimesthethingssending

herintoaviolentangerweresominor——apieceofrubbishsomeonehaddroppedonthefloor——itwas

hardformetothinkofcopingskillsthatdidn,tsoundlikeIwascriticizingher.

Maybethislatesttalkingrouptherapywasthelaststraw（稻草）.aFindingsomethingsmallyou

canfeelgoodaboutcanhelpyoucopewithanger,wIsuggested."Itdoesn,tneedtobesomehuge

thing/5EvenasIsaidit,Iwondered,“WasthatreallythebestadviceIcouldcomeupwith?wAlicia

tookalongdeepbreath."Iknow,"shesaid.

注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Afewweekslater,Isawherinthehallwaywitharubbishbag.

InMarch,Aliciawasofferedajobdoinghousekeepingattheshelter.

9.（2023•广东-高三广州市第一中学校联考）

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

EveryJune,werenewanannualtraditionatourhouseinalovelyneighbourhood.Ourchildrenare

givenbowlsandaskedtocollectpiecesofnaturethatremindthemofthesummer.Theyleavethosebowls

onthefrontdoorstepandwegoforawalk.Whenwereturn,wefindfairies（仙子）havetransformedthe

bowls'contentsintoicecreamsundaes（圣代冰淇淋）.

rmnotcertainhowthistraditionevolved.IthinkIwasmakingupsomethingaboutfairiesyears

ago,anditalljustsortofhappened.Buteversince,ithasbeenoneofourfavouriteroutineactivities,

fascinatedwithitsmagic.

“Whenarethefairiescoming?Msix-year-oldAnnahadbeenaskingalllastJune,eagerwith

expectation.Meanwhile,John,nine,wasgettingwisetofairiesandFatherChristmasandsuchsillythings.

Sohewasprettysureabouthowallthe“magic”cameaboutastheeveningapproached."Youknow,I

hadeverythingworkedout!wHesaidhewouldunderstandif,duringourwalk,MumorDadshould

forgetsomethingandreturnhomeorduringthewalkaparentmighthavetofetchsomethinginthecar.

Manytimes,wewereeventhinkingoftellinghimthetruthbutwedidn,t.Annashouldenjoythemagic.

Theeveningarrivedasexpected.Thechildrencollectedleavesandbladesofgrass,pebbles,twigs

（树枝）anddeadinsects.Weputtheirbowlsonthefrontdoorstepandwentoffonourwalkasusual.But

afterawhile,IpretendedtocomplainthatIhadforgottenmykeysandneededtogoback.

Johnsmiledwithaknowingexpression."Ohwait,“Iadded.“I'vefoundthem!Idon,thave

togoback."Aswecontinuedonourway,Johnwasbeginningtogetabitconfused.

Nearourhouse,afterexchangingaglancewithmyhusband,Ianxiouslywarnedthatthefairies

mightnothavearrivedyet-wemightneedtowalkforabitlonger