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期末复习之单元话题满分范文20篇
(上海名校真题)
1.Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“Anunforgettablepoem”,usingthefollowingquestionsforreference.
(请根据提示问题,以“一首难忘的诗”为题,写一篇短文,不少于60个词,标点符号不占格)
Suggestedquestions:
(1)Whichistheunforgettablepoemforyou?
(2)Whyisitunforgettable?
【答案】例文
Anunforgettablepoem
TherearetoomanypoemsinallagesinChina.Butforme,ToWangLunisthemostunforgettableone.Itis
writtenbyLiBai-oneofthemostfamouspoetsinTangDynasty.
Thepoemisaboutfriendship.LiBai'sbestfriendWangLunestoseehimoffwhenLiBaiisreadytoleave.
Thepoemisunforgettableformebecauseitmakesmerealizethatfriendshipisvaluableandweneedtrue
friendship.Ihopeeveryonecanfindtruefriends.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏“要点”中为什么这首诗很难忘,注意要点要齐全。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍对自己来说最难忘的诗是李白的《赠汪伦》;
第二步,简要介绍诗的大意;
第三步,介绍自己认为这首诗很难忘的原因:让自己意识到友谊的珍贵,并且每个人都需要朋友;
第四步,表达祝愿“希望每个人都能找到真正的好朋友”。
[亮点词汇]
①toomany许多
②inallages从古至今
③seesb.off给某人送行
@bereadyto为...做准备
[高分句型]
①TherearetoomanypoemsinallagesinChina.("Therebe”句型)
②Thepoemisunforgettableformebecauseitmakesmerealizethatfriendshipisvaluableandweneedtrue
friendship,(because引导的原因状语从句;that引导的宾语从句)
2.Writeatleast60wordsonthetopicof“Aholidayin",usingthefollowingquestionsfor
reference.(请根据提示问题,以“________的假期”为题,写一篇短文,不少于60个词,标点符号不占格)
Suggestedquestions:
(1)Wheredidyouspendyourlastsummerholiday?
(2)Whatwastheweatherlikethere?
(3)Whatdidyoudothere?
(4)Howdidyoufeelabouttheholiday?
【答案】例文
AholidayinQingdao
Lastsummervacation,myfamilyandIwenttoQingdaobytrain.Therewasalwayssunshineandfreshair,
whichmadeussofortable.Wewenttotheseaside,theseawasasblueasthesky,andbathinginthesunshineon
thebeach,wasreallyanenjoyablething.Ialsopickedupalotofcolorfulshellswithmylittlesister.
IlikeQingdaoverymuch,andifIgotachance,Ihopetoehereagain,itissuchabeautifulandfortable
place.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为话题作文;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”;
③提示:根据提示问题介绍去年暑假,适当增添细节,使得行文连贯,注意要把题目补充完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍去年暑假度假的地方及天气;
第二步,详细介绍在度假地做了什么;
第三步,书写结语,表达对假期的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①pickup捡起,挑选
②hopetodosth希望做某事
③verymuch非常
[高分句型]
①Therewasalwayssunshineandfreshair,whichmadeussofortable.(which引导非限制J性定语从句)
②ifIgotachance,Ihopetoehereagain.(if引导条件状语从句)
3.Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“Wheredoyouliketotravelmost”,usingthefollowingquestionsfor
reference.(请根据提示问题,以“你最喜欢去什么地方旅游”为题,写一篇短文,不少于60个词,标点符号
不占格)
Suggestedquestions:
(l)Wheredoyouliketotravelmost?
(2)Whatcanyouseethere?
【答案】例文:
WhereDoYouL汰etoTravelMost
Theworldissobig,doyouwanttoseeit?Wheredoyouliketotravelmost,Beijing,Shanghaioroneof
citiesintheothercountries?IwouldliketovisitYunnanmost.ThereIwillseebeautifulflowersgreetingtheeyes
everywhere.ThereIwilltouchtheancienttownofLijiangatthefootofYulongSnowMountain.ThereIwillfeel
thepeaceoftheCangshanMountainandErhaiLake.Don'tyouwanttotraveltherewithme?
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一项内容,适当添加细节,并突出写作
重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。开门见山抛出问题——世界那么大,你最喜欢去哪旅行;
第二步,具体说明自己最想去的地方及在那能看见什么;
第三步,书写结语,表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①oneof......之一
②flowersgreetingtheeyeseverywhere处处满眼的鲜花
③atthefootof...在...的山脚下
@thepeaceof..........的宁静
[高分句型]
①Wheredoyouliketotravelmost,Beijing,Shanghaioroneofcitiesintheothercountries?(运用选择疑问句)
②Don'tyouwanttotraveltherew汕me?(运用否定疑问句)
4.Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“ThemagazineIlikereadingis...”,usingthefollowingquestionsfor
reference.(请根据提示问题,以“我喜欢的杂志”为题,写一篇短文,不少于60个词,标点符号不占格。)
Suggestedquestions:
(1)Whatmagazinedoyoulikereadinginyourdailylife?
(2)Whydoyouliketoreadit?(Giveatleasttworeasons)
【答案】例文
ThemagazineIlikereadingisReadersDigest.Ioftenreaditinmydailylife.IfsanEnglishlanguage
magazine.Ifsveryhelpful.Ontheonehand,Ihavelearntalotofnewwordsandusefulexpressionsbyreading
thearticlesinthemagazine.Thankstothismagazine,myEnglishreadingandwritingabilityimprovetoagreat
extent.Ontheotherhand,withinformationfromthismagazine,Icankeepupwiththetimes.Itgivesmeachance
toopenmyeyesandseetheworld.
Inaword,ReadersDigestiswellworthreading.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:围绕“ThemagazineIlikereadingis…”这一话题,结合提示问题进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出
写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己喜欢读的杂志是什么;
第二步,介绍喜欢它的原因;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①inmydailylife在我的日常生活中
②thanksto多亏了...
③toagreatextent在很大程度上
④keepupwith跟上(人、潮流、形势等)
⑤openmyeyes打开我的视野
[高分句型]
①Ontheotherhand,withinformationfromthismagazine,Icankeepupwiththetimes,(with的复合结构作状
语)
②Inaword,ReadersDigestiswellworthreading.(固定搭配:bewellworthdoingsth.“很值得做某事")
5.Writeapassageofatleast60wordsaboutthetopic"Readingnewspapers”.(以"读报''为题写一篇不少于
60词的短文,标点符号不占格)
Usethefollowingpointsasareference(以下内容仅供参考)
1.Whatkind(s)ofnewspapersdoyouoftenread?
2.Whafsyourfavouritenewspaper?Why?
【答案】例文
Readingnewspapers
Doyoulikereadingnewspapers?Newspaperisdifferentfrombooks,andIliketoreadit,itmakesmeknow
moreabouttheworld.
Ioftenreadnewspaperswhicharefilledwithmanykindsofnews,suchasinternationalevents,sports,andmusic.
Somyfavoritenewspaperis21stCentury.Ithassectionsofdifferentkinds,includingNewsoftheweek,
LanguageClassandsoon.
Ienjoyreadingnewspaper,IreadittoimprovemyEnglish,andIhavelearntalotofnewwordsanduseful
expressions.Lefsreadnewspapertogether.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇命题作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作的参考要点已给出,写作时应该结合所给问题,适当增加细节,注意要逻辑清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,引出下文;
第二步,具体阐述我喜欢读的哪类报纸,最喜欢的报纸是什么,并且写出原因;
第三步,对全文进行总结,并且呼吁大家一起来读报。
[亮点词汇]
①bedifferentfrom和...不同
②manykindsof很多种类
③andsoon等等
@befilledwith充满,装满
⑤usefillexpressions有用的表达
[高分句型]
①Ioftenreadnewspaperswhicharefilledwithmanykindsofnews,suchasinternationalevents,sports,and
music,(which引导的定语从句)
②itmakesmeknowmoreabouttheworld(makesb.do使某人做某事,make后面动词用原形)
6.Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“MyfavouriteEnglishnewspaper'5,usingthefollowingquestionsfor
reference.(请根据提示问题,以“我最喜爱的英文报纸”为题,写一篇短文,不少于60个词,标点符号不占
格)
Suggestedquestions:
(1)WhatisyourfavouriteEnglishnewspaper?
(2)Whydoyoulikeit?(Giveatleasttworeasons)
【答案】例文
MyfavouriteEnglishnewspaper
ShanghaiStudentsPostismyfavouritenewspaper.Ioftenreaditinmysparetime.
First,ifsveryinteresting.Therearedifferentcontentsinthepaper,suchasnews,stories,beautifulpictures,
hotwordsandinterestingarticles.Mostofthearticlesarewrittenbystudents.Tmveryinterestedinthem.
Second,it'sgoodformyEnglish.WhenIeacrossagoodarticle,Ioftenreaditaloud.SometimesIwriteit
downinmynotebook,andtrymybesttomemorizeit.IfindIhavemadegreatprogressinEnglish.
ShanghaiStudentsPostisreallyagoodnewspaperandsuitablefbrstudents.Ihopeyouwilllikeittoo.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要求以“MyfavouriteEnglishnewspaper”为题,结合提示问题进行写作,适当添
加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍最喜欢的英语报纸是什么;
第二步,介绍喜欢它的原因;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①inmysparetime在我的空闲时间
②suchas比如
③beinterestedin对...感兴趣
④makegreatprogress取得很大的进步
[高分句型]
①Therearedifferentcontentsinthepaper,suchasnews,stories,beautifulpictures,hotwordsandinteresting
articles.(Therebe句型)
②WhenIeacrossagoodarticle,Ioftenreaditaloud.(when引导的时间状语从句)
7.Writeapassageinatleast50wordsaboutthetopic"Electricity”.(以"电”为题,写一篇不少于50个词
的短文)
Suggestedquestions:
Doyouthinkelectricityisimportantinourdailylife?
Whafstheimportanceofelectricity?
Whatshouldwedotosaveelectricity?
Electricity
【答案】例文:
Electricity
Almosteveryonetodayuseselectricityinonewayoranother.Electricityisveryimportanttous.
Electricitylightsstreetsandbuildings.Italsowarmspeopleandanimals.Weuseelectricityinmanydifferent
ways.Weuseelectricitytoheatfoodincookers,andweuseelectricityforcoolingfoodinrefrigerators.Without
electricity,ourlifewillbeboringandunfbrtable.Itishardtoimaginewhatlifeinourcitieswouldbelikewithout
it.
Soweshouldsaveelectricity.Wemustturnoffallthelightsbeforeweleavethehome.Wemustclosethe
windowswhentheairconditionerison.Howusefultheelectricityis!Letussaveelectricitytogether!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的
逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,总体表明电对我们很重要;
第二步,具体介绍电在生活中不同方面的应用;
第三步,最后提出建议应该节约用电并指出具体的做法。
[亮点词汇]
①beimportantto对...很重要
②turnoff关掉
③belike像
[高分句型]
①Wemustturnoffallthelightsbeforeweleavethehome,(before引导的时间状语从句)
②Howusefultheelectricityis!(感叹句)
8.Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“Useelectricitysafely,9.(你发现你身边的亲朋好友经常有不安全
用电的行为,有很大的危险隐患。请以“安全用电”为题写一篇60—120词的短文,标点符号不占格。)
Usethefollowingpointsasaguide:(写作必须包含以下内容)
1.Howdosomepeopleuseelectricity?
2.Whyshouldweuseelectricitysafely?
3.Whafsyoursuggestiononusingelectricitysafely?
【答案】例文
Useelectricitysafely
Usingelectricitysafelyisaveryimportanttopicinourdailylives.
First,ensureanyelectricalitemsareapprovedstandardwhenpurchasingandkeepthemcorrectlymaintained.
Second,unplugelectricalitemsthatarenotinregularuseand
ensurethatyouunplugandswitchoffelectricalitemswhenyouareawayfromthehouseforanylengthoftime.
Third,don'tuseanyelectricalitemsinthebathroomunlessspecifically
designedforusethere,suchasshaversandelectrictoothbrushes.Butwhenyouusethem,makesurenottoget
themwetandavoidpluggingandunpluggingwithwethands.Thelast,alwaysturn
theelectricsoffatthemainsifcarryingoutanyelectricalrepairsandonlyattemptrepairsifyouknowwhatyou
aredoing.
Weshoulduseelectricitycarefullybecauseitemsleftpluggedincanbeafireriskandwasteenergyiflefton
standby.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“提示信息”中“应该如何用电;安全用电的原因以及安全
用电的建议“,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。借用“安全用电是我们日常生活中非常重要的话题。”来引出重点介绍的内容;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“如何安全用电以及安全用电的建议”重点介绍安全用电的具体情况;
第三步,书写结语。表达“我们应该谨慎用电,因为插上电源的物品如果处于待机状态,则可能会引发火
灾,并浪费能源。”
[亮点词汇]
①switchoff关上
②makesurenottodosth确保不做某事
[高分句型]
①Third,don'tuseanyelectricalitemsinthebathroomunlessspecificallydesignedforusethere,suchasshavers
andelectrictoothbrushes.(don't...祈使句的否定形式,表劝告)
②Weshoulduseelectricitycarefullybecauseitemsleftpluggedincanbeafireriskandwasteenergyiflefton
standby.(because引导的原因状语从句,if引导的条件状语从句)
9.Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“Fightagainstpollution".
Nowadays,theEarthissufferingfromvariouskindsofpollution.
1.Inyourview,what'sthemostseriousone?
2.Whatcausesit?
3.Howtofightagainstit?
【答案】例文:
Fightingagainstairpollution
Inourlifewecanfinddifferentkindsofpollution,suchasairpollution,waterpollution,noisepollutionand
soon.Amongthem,Ithinkairpollutionisthemostserious.
Whatcausesairpollution?Manyfactoriesreleasetoxicsubstancesintotheairduringtheproductionprocess.
Alargenumberofcarsemittailgasduringdriving.Inaddition,insomeruralareas,peoplebumcropsorusecoal
forcooking.Theseareallthereasonsofairpollution.
Inordertofightagainstairpollution,weshouldplantalotoftreestogreentheenvironment.The
governmentshouldintroducemeasurestolimittoxicemissionsfromfactoriesandcars.Finally,weshouldcallon
peopletoprotecttheenvironmentactivelyandsolvetheproblemofairpollution.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为材料作文;
②时态:一般现在时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏信息,可适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己认为最严重的污染是什么;
第二步,介绍导致该污染的原因;
最后一步,阐述解决该污染的措施。
[亮点词汇]
①alargenumberof大量的
②inaddition止匕夕卜
③inorderto为了
©callon号召
[高分句型1
①Ithinkairpollutionisthemostserious.(省略that的宾语从句)
②Inordertofightagainstairpollution,weshouldplantalotoftreestogreentheenvironment.(不定式表目的)
10.Writeapassageofatleast60wordsonthetopic“Wateraroundus”.
Suggestedquestions:
♦Howmuchdoyouknowaboutwater?
♦Whafstheuseofwater?
♦Whatarethethreatstothewater?
♦Whatshouldwedotodealwiththewaterpollution?
【答案】例文
Wateraroundus
Asweallknow,waterisveryimportantinourdailylife.Forexample,wedrinkwatereveryday.Andinour
dailylife,weusewatertowashvegetablesandcook.Wecannotlivewithoutwater.
However,thereislessandlesscleanwaterontheEarth.Manyfactoriesdirectlyputpollutedwaterintothe
riverandpeoplemaythrowlitterintothewater,whichmakesthewaterbepollutedseriously.Allinall,wateris
veryimportanttous.Weshouldtryourbesttoprotectwater..
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不用遗漏写作要点中的信息,并适当添加内容,使文章语句通顺。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍水的重要性以及用途;
第二步,介绍现在水被污染的现状;
第三步,呼吁人们保护水源。
[亮点词汇]
①lessandless越来越少
②allinall总而言之
③tryone飞besttodo竭尽全力做某事
[高分句型]
Manyfactoriesdirectlyputpollutedwaterintotheriverandpeoplemaythrowlitterintothewater,whichmakes
thewaterbepollutedseriously,(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
11.Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic"Let'sBeFriendsoftheEarth”,usingthefollowingquestionsfor
reference.(请根据提示问题,以“我们来做地球的朋友”为题,写一篇短文,不少于60个词,标点符号不占
格)
Suggestedquestions:
(1)Whyshouldwebefriendsoftheearth?
(2)Whatarewedoingtotheearth?
(3)Howcanwebefriendsoftheearth?
【答案】例文
LefsBeFriendsoftheEarth
Theearthistheonlyplaceforpeopletolive.Ifwedon'tprotecttheland,therewillbenolandtogrowcrops.
Ifwedon'tprotectthesea,we'llgetnothingfromitinthefuture-nofishorotherseafood.Sowemustbe
friendlytotheearth.
Weshouldprotecttheair,thewaterandalltheanimalsandplantsaroundtheearth.Weshouldalsouseless
paperandplasticbags.Besides,weshouldtakepublictransportationinsteadofprivatecars.
Onlywhenwetaketheearthasourfriend,willitprovidegoodconditionsfbrustolive.Solet'sbefriendsof
theearth.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文;
②时态:时态以一般现在时为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意要用第一人称叙述,不要遗漏“提示信息”中为什么我们是地球的朋
友,我们能为地球做什么,怎样才能成为地球的朋友,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。借用“地球是人们生活的唯一地方。”来引出重点介绍的内容;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“我们成为地球朋友的原因;我们能为地球做的事情;要成为地球的朋友
我们要怎样做”几方面重点介绍我们做地球朋友的具体情况;
第三步,书写结语。表达“让我们成为地球朋友吧!”的强烈愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①inthefuture将来
②befriendlyto对...友好
[高分句型]
①Ifwedon'tprotecttheland,therewillbenolandtogrowcrops.(if引导的条件状语从句)
②Besides,weshouldtakepublictransportationinsteadofprivatecars,(besides表示"而且,此外"包含后面的
事物;insteadof表示“而不是,相反的”)
12.Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“Waterisofgreatimportance”,usingthefollowingquestionsfor
reference.(请根据提示问题,以“水很重要”为题,写一篇短文不少于60个词,标点符号不占格)
(1)Doyouthinkwaterisimportant?
(2)Whatcanweusewaterfor?
(3)Howcanwesavewater?
【答案】例文
Waterisofgreatimportance
Asweallknow,waterisofgreatimportancebecausewecanuseittodoalotofthings.Wecan'tlivewithout
water.
Athome,weusewatertowashclothes,cookfood,haveshowersandsoon.Wemustdrinkwatereveryday.
Atwork,peopleusewatertomakethingsinfactories.
However,wedon'thaveenoughdrinkingwaterontheearth.Sohowcanwesavewater?First,weshoulduse
lesswaterwhenwedon'tneedtoomuchwater.Second,trytoreusewater.Whenwefinishwashingtheclothes,
wecanusethewatertocleanthefloor.Atlast,wecantakeashortershower.Ifwecandothesethings,wecan
savealotofwater.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文为一篇说明文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应根据提示问题,以“水很重要”为题,写一篇短文不少于60个词。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题,表明水很重要,强调水的重要性;
第二步,具体阐述水的作用;
第三步,引出水资源缺乏,我们应该节约用水,并具体描述如何节约水。
[亮点词汇]
①alotof许多,大量
②livewithoutwater离开水生存
③atlast最后
[高分句型]
①Asweallknow,waterisofgreatimportancebecausewecanuseittodoalotofthings,(because弓I导的原因
状语从句)
②Whenwefinishwashingtheclothes,wecanusethewatertocleanthefloor,(when引导的时间状语从句)
③及wecandothesethings,wecansavealotofwater,(if引导的条件状语从句)
13.Writeapositioninatleast60wordsaccordingtothegivensituation(根据所给情景写一篇不少于60个
词的作文,标点符号不占格)(注意:短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息,否则不予评分。)
Supposeyouhaveusedonesideofapieceofblankpaper,willyouthrowitormakegooduseoftheother
sideofthepaper?Use"Savepaper,savemoretrees"asatitletowriteashortposition.
1.Whatdoyouusuallyusepapertodo?
2.Whafstheimportanceofsavingpaper?
3.Howdoyougetintothehabitofsavingpaper?
【答案】例文:
Savepaper,savemoretrees
Weusuallyusepapertodomanythings,suchaswritingwords,doingmathproblems,leavingmessagesand
soon.Butweoftenuseonesideofapieceofpaper,thenthrowitaway.Maybeweseldomthinkaboutitand
realizethatisawaste.
Weallknowpaperismadefromtrees.Ifwekeeponthrowingitaway,wewillcutdownmoreandmore
trees.Treescanprotecttheearthandmaketheairfresh.Theycanbemadeintomanyotherusefulthings,suchas
tables,chairs,etc.Sowemustsavepaper.
Fromnowon,weshouldusebothsidesofpapertowritenotesandmessages.Wemustgetintothehabitof
savingpaper.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意围绕“信息提示”陈述“通常用纸做什么;节省纸张的重要性;如何养
成节省纸张的习惯
[写作步骤]
第一步,陈述纸张的用途;
第二步,陈述节省纸张的重要性;
第三步,讲述如何养成节省纸张的习惯。
[亮点词汇]
①suchas例如
②cutdown砍伐
③keepon继续
[高分句型]
①Ifwekeeponthrowingitaway,wewillcutdownmoreandmoretrees.(if弓I导条件状语从句)
14.Writeashortpassageatleast60wordsaboutthetopic"ThepersonIadmireis"(以"我所钦佩的人是
"为题写一篇不少于60字的短文)
(注意:短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息,否则不予评分。)
Writingsuggestions:
1.Whomdoyouadmire?(someonewhoisfamousorordinarypeoplearoundyou)
2.Whydoyouadmirehim/her?
3.Whatcanyoulearnfromhim/her?
【答案】例文
ThepersonIadmiremost
Themostadmirablepersonofmineismydearestmother.Sheisanordinarywoman——notverybeautifuland
alittleheavy.Butsheisverykindandenthusiastic.Althoughshedidn'treceivehigheducation,sheknowsalot
andoftenteachesmetheessenceoflife.Shealwaystellsme“honestyisthebestpolicy^^and"nopain,nogain”.
Mymotherlovesmeandtriestogivemeafortableenvironmenttostudyandlivein.Shealsounderstandsmeand
treatsmeasafriend.Frommymother,Ihavelearnttobeanoptimisticpersonwithastrongmind.Ilovemy
mother.Althoughsheisordinary,sheisthepersonIadmiremost.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,以第三人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步,首句点题,说明最钦佩的人是妈妈;
第二步,具体阐述钦佩妈妈的原因;
第三步,最后讲述从妈妈身上学到的以及表达对妈妈喜爱之情。
[亮点词汇]
①honestyisthebestpolicy诚实为上策
②trytodosth尽量去做某事
③givesbsth给某人某物
[高分句型]
©Althoughshedidn'treceivehigheducation,sheknowsalotandoftenteachesmetheessenceoflife.(although
引导让步状语从句)
②Frommymother,Ihavelearnttobeanoptimisticpersonwithastrongmind,(with复合结构)
15.Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“AGifttoMyMother'5,usingthefollowingquestionsforreference.
(请根据提示问题,以“给我妈妈的一件礼物”为题,写一篇短文,不少于60个词,标点符号不占格)
Suggestedquestions:
(1)Whatareyougoingtogiveyourmother?
(2)Whenareyougoingtogiveittoher?
(3)Isitspecial?Why?
【答案】例文:
AGifttoMyMother
Mother'sDayising.Iwanttogivemymotherasurprise,rilbuyaspecialgiftforher.Iknowshelikes
listeningtomusic.Butsheistoobusyeveryday.Sheisbusyworkingandtakingcareofherfamily,andshehas
notimetodowhatshelikes.SoIwanttobuyanMP4forherwithmyluckymoney.Ihopeshewon'tbesotired.
Shecanlistentomusicafterworktorelaxherself.Ithinkifsthebestgiftforher.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”;
③提示:根据所给提示内容介绍给妈妈的一件礼物。注意不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,说明在即将来临的母亲节要送母亲一份礼物。
第二步,介绍要送的礼物及原因。
第三步,总结母亲一定会喜欢这个礼物的。
[亮点词汇]
①givemymotherasurprise给母亲一个惊喜
②bebusydoing忙于做某事
③takecareof照顾
[高分句型]
①Sheisbusyworkingandtakingcareofherfamily(and并列了两个动名词作宾语)
②Ihopeshewon'tbesotired.(省略that的宾语从句)
16.Writeapassageofatleast60wordsaboutthetopic"Firerulesinourlife".(以''我们生活中的消防守则”
为题写一篇不少于60词的短文,标点符号不占格。)
Usethefollowingpointsasareference(以下内容仅供参考)
1.Whyisfiredangerous?
2.Isitimportanttorememberandobeyfirerules?Why?
3.Whatshouldwedoandshouldn'tdointhefire?(atleast3examples)
【答案】例文
Firerulesinourlife
Fireisdangerousbecauseitcanbumforestsanddestroymanytallbuildings.Ifsomepeoplecan'trunaway
fromfire,itcankillthem.Soitisimportantforustorememberandobeyfirerules.
Therearesomefirerulesforyoutofollowwhenthereisafire.Firstofall,judgeifwecanputoutthefire,if
not,tofindthewaterasyoucan,andmakeyourclothesortowelwet.Thenusethewetclothestocoveryour
mouthandnoseandbendyourbodytoescape.Meanwhile,keepcalmandfindtheSafetyExitassoonaspossible,
ifnot,remainintheplaceandwaitforrescue.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:要求以“Firerulesinourlife”为题,结合提示问题进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍为什么火很危险;
第二步,介绍记住并遵守这些规则是否重要以及原因;
第三步,介绍发生火灾我们应该怎么做。
[亮点词汇]
①runawayfrom逃离
②putoutthefire扑灭火
③assoonaspossible尽快
[高分句型]
©Fireisdangerousbecauseitcanbumforestsanddestroymanytallbuildings,(because弓I导的原因状语从句)
②Meanwhile,keepcalmandfindtheSafetyExitassoonaspossible,ifnot,remainintheplaceandwaitfbr
rescue.(祈使句和省略句)
17.Writeapassageofatleast60wordsaboutthetopic"Proudofmyschool"(以"以我的学校而骄傲”为题
写一篇不少于60词的短文,标点符号不占格)
Usethefollowingpointsasareference(以下内容仅供参考)
1.Whatdoesyourschoollooklike?
2.Whatfundoyouhaveatschool?
3.Whydoyoulikeyourschool?
Proudofmyschool
【答案】例文
Proudofmyschool
IstudyinxxMiddleSchool.Itisinthenorthofmycity.Ithasalonghistoryandisfamousfbrits
highqualityteaching.Teachersworkhardandarestrictwiththeirstudents.Studentsinmyschoolstudyhardand
makerapidprogressintheirstudies.Myschoolisbeautiful.Anewteachingbuildingisbeingbuilt.Thereare
manytreesandallkindsofflowersinit.Andthereisalargeplaygroundinit,too.Wecanhavefunthere.The
studentslikeitverymuch.Fmluckytostudyinsuchagoodschool.IlikeitverymuchandI'mproudofit.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,简单介绍自己的学校;
第二步,介绍学校的一些设施以及喜欢学校的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①inthenorthof在...北边
@befamousfbr因...出名
③bestrictwith对...严厉
[高分句型]
Ithasalonghistoryandisfamousforitshighqualityteaching.(and并歹U句)
18.Writeapassageofatleast60wordsaboutthetopic"Myfamilyrules".(以“家规"为题写一篇不少于60
词的短文,标点符号不占格。)
Usethefollowingpointsasareference.(以下内容仅供参考)
1.Whatmustyoudoathome?
2.Whatmustn'tyoudoathome?
3.Whatdoyouthinkofyourfamilyrules?
Myfamilyrules
【答案】例文
Myfamilyrules
Herearemyfamilyrules.Everyday,Imustgetupat6:30amandgotobedat10pm.Imustdoexercisefbr
halfanhourandtakeabath.Imustkeepadiaryeverydayaswell.Imustn'tgooutafter8pmeverydayandI
mustn'tsurftheInternetfromMondaytoFriday.Ithinktheserulesaregoodforme.Theyhelpmeliveahealthy
life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:要求以“Myfamilyrules”为题,结合提示问题进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍在家你必须要做的事情;
第二步,介绍在家禁止你做的事情;
第三步,表达你对家规的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①getup起床
②gotobed上床睡觉
③keepadiary坚持写日记
④doexercise做锻炼
⑤aswell也
@surftheInternet上网
⑦begoodfbr对...有益
[高分句型]
①Imustn'tgooutafter8pmeverydayandImustn'tsurftheInternetfromMondaytoFriday.(and连接的并歹!J
句)
②Theyhelpmeliveahealthylife,(helpsbdosth句型)
19.Writeat
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