Unit3单元主题写作课件人教版七年级英语上册

Unit

3

My

School学以致用·主题写作实战演练

假设你是李华，下面是你的美国笔友Tom发来的电子邮件，请你仔细阅读邮件并回复他。Dear

Li

Hua,

How

are

you

doing?

I

want

to

know

about

your

new

school

and

your

school

life.

Here

are

some

questions.

What's

your

school

like?

What

is

your

favourite

place

and

why?

Could

you

please

tell

me

about

them?

Write

to

me.Yours,Tom要求：

1.词数70左右，邮件开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数;

2.文中不能出现真实的姓名及校名；

3.内容包含所有要点，语句通顺，书写规范，可适当发挥。Dear

Tom,

I

am

happy

to

get

your

email.

Let

me

tell

you

about

my

new

school

and

my

school

life.

My

school

is

very

big

and

clean.

The

classroom

building

is

in

the

middle

of

the

school

with

four

floors.

There

is

a

large

garden

in

front

of

the

classroom

building.

It's

my

favourite

place

because

there

are

many

beautiful

flowers

in

the

garden.

On

the

left

of

the

classroom

building

is

the

sports

field.

My

classmates

and

I

often

do

exercises

together

on

the

sports

field.

There

are

many

trees

around

my

school.

It

is

really

beautiful.

I

like

my

school

very

much.

How

about

yours?

Please

write

to

me

soon.Yours

truly,Li

Hua单元主题写作

写作能力拓展导练一、单元主题词汇·高频词汇梳理二、教材佳句仿写·高分句式训练1.教材原句：What's

your

new

classroom

like,

Peter?仿写：你的房间是什么样的？_______________________What's

your

room

like?2.教材原句：There

are

40

student

desks

in

the

room.仿写：运动场上有10名教师。_________________________________________There

are

ten

teachers

on

the

sports

field.3.教材原句：It's

my

favourite

place

because

there

are

many

kinds

of

food.仿写：我最喜欢刘老师，因为她很友善。____________________________________________I

like

Mrs

Liu

best

because

she

is

very

kind.4.教材原句：How

about

your

school?仿写：你的新朋友怎么样？_____________________________How

about

your

new

friends?5.教材原句：Your

school

sounds

fun!仿写：这个主意听起来很棒！_______________________The

idea

sounds

great!三、以读促写·主题写作典例剖析

参考词汇：示意图

diagram；实验室lab

要求：1.语言通顺、准确；

2.要点齐全，可适当发挥；

3.词数不少于70。_________________Step

1

谋篇布局指导第一段：学校概貌①

This

is

a

diagram

of

our

school.②

Our

school

is...第二段：校园布局①

...

is

in

the

middle

of

...②

There

is

...

in

front

of

...③

On

the

left

of

...

is

...

and

...

is

on

the

right

of

...第三段：学校师生①

Our

teachers

are

...②

Our

classmates

are...第四段：对学校的评价Our

school

is

a

good

place

to

study.续表Step

2

高阶词句应用1.Our

school

has

many

trees.（用存现句升格）___________________________________2.Our

classmates

are

friendly.（增加细节，扩写句子）_______________________________________________________There

are

many

trees

in

our

school.Our

classmates

are

friendly

and

we

often

help

each

other.Step

3

佳作展示评析This

is

a

diagram

of

our

school.

Our

school

is

big

and

clean.

Our

classroom

building

is

in

the

middle

of

our

school.

There

is

a

garden

in

front

of

the

classroom

building.

On

the

left

of

the

garden

is

our

library

and

our

lab

is

on

the

right

of

the

garden.

There

is

a

large

playground

behind

①②③④⑤这些介词（短语）的使用，清晰准确地描述了学校的布局，更有空间感。the

classroom

building.

There

are

many

trees

in

our

school.

Our

teachers

are

very

kind

and

we

all

like

them.

Our

classmates

are

friendly

and

we

often

help

each

other.

Our

school

is

a

good

place

to

study.

We

all

like

it.⑥存现句是本单元的重点语法，文中正确使用了存现句，体现了学以致用。

本篇文章根据图片提示，准确描写了学校的情况，思路清晰，层次感强。续表学以致用·主题写作实战演练

假设你是李华，下面是你的美国笔友Tom发来的电子邮件，请你仔细阅读邮件并回复他。Dear

Li

Hua,

How

are

you

doing?

I

want

to

know

about

your

new

school

and

your

school

life.

Here

are

some

questions.

What's

your

school

like?

What

is

your

favourite

place

and

why?

Could

you

please

tell

me

about

them?

Write

to

me.Yours,Tom要求：

1.词数70左右，邮件开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数;

2.文中不能出现真实的姓名及校名；

3.内容包含所有要点，语句通顺，书写规范，可适当发挥。Dear

Tom,

I

am

happy

to

get

your

email.

Let

me

tell

you

about

my

new

school

and

my

school

life.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

My

school

is

very

big

and

clean.

The

classroom

building

is

in

the

middle

of

the

school

with

four

floors.

There

is

a

large

garden

in

front

of

the

classroom

building.

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

How

about

yours?

Please

write

to

me

soon.Yours

truly,Li

Hua

It's

my

favourite

place

because

there

are

many

beautiful

flowers

in

the

garden.

On

the

left