高考英语复习读后续写练习+假发女孩在朋友帮助下重获新生+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习假发女孩在朋友帮助下重获新生1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Donnaismysister,andIhadalwaysconsideredherbeautiful.Ourfathercalledherhisprincess,andinhighschool,shewasknownastheschoolbabe.Ourparentswereprotectiveofus,particularlyourfather,whokeptclosewatchoverthefriendsshemade.OneSaturdayinApril,aboyinvitedDonnatoaparkwithfourotherfriends.Unfortunately,ontheirwaytothepark,theircarcrashedintoaguardrailandflippedoverthreetimesbeforeitcametoastoponitsroof.Donnawaspulledfromthecarandrushedtothehospitalwithoutdelay.Donnawasinthehospitalfortwoweeks.Manyofherfriendswenttoseeher,especiallyClaudia,whowastherealot.However,MomandDadneverlikedClaudia.Idon’treallyknowwhy.Theyjustdidn’tlikeherbeingaround.4续写原文Donnareturnedhomewiththeentiretophalfofherheadshaved.Shehadhundredsof

stitches

(缝线),someofwhichcameacrossherforeheadandbetweenherlefteyeandeyebrow.KnowingDonna’sconcernforherappearance,Momfoundherahumanhairwig(假发)

thatperfectlymatchedherhair.Donnafinallyrecoveredandwentbacktoschool.Butsheneverfeltgoodinschool.Therewasaveryloud-mouthed,self-centeredgirlinDonna’sclasswhotookgreatpleasureinteasingher.Thisgirl,seatedbehindDonna,wouldpullslightlyonDonna’swigandmockinglysaid,“Hey,Wiggy,let’sseeyourscars(伤疤)”.Thenshewouldlaugh.DonnaenduredthismistreatmentinsilenceuntilthedayshetoldClaudia.Fromthenon,Claudiakeptacloseeyeonmysister,preventinganyonefrombotheringher.TherewassomethingaboutClaudiathatwasfrightening,eventotheworstkidsinschool.Nobodymessedwithher.Unfortunately,though,Claudiawasn’talwaysaround,andtheteasingandname-callingcontinued.5段首句Para1：Oneday,Claudiacametoourhome

withaspecialsurprise.

Para2：DonnaandClaudiaworetheirwigsforoverayear.

6Part2题目分析7续写原文分析8文体：记叙文。主题：人与社会——良好的人际关系和社会交往（假发女孩在朋友帮助下重获新生）。所给的阅读语篇材料英文词数308个，所需续写第一段首句词数11个，所需续写第二段首句词数10个。本题聚焦考察考生阅读理解能力、书面表达能力以及创造性思维能力。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析Para1：Oneday,Claudiacametoourhome

withaspecialsurprise.续写第一段首句“克劳迪娅带着特别的惊喜来到我们家”，针对第一段续写情节我们可以提出以下问题：①这惊喜是什么呢？②唐娜和家人对惊喜的反应是怎么样呢？③唐娜被欺凌的问题彻底解决了吗？10续写思路分析Para2：DonnaandClaudiaworetheirwigsforoverayear.①为什么她们带了一年多的假发后就不带了呢？②克劳迪娅所做的事情对她们的友谊带来了什么样的影响？③最后主题升华是什么？11续写思路分析续写线索Friendship（友谊）—Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.(患难见真情）12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现Oneday,Claudiacametoourhome

withaspecialsurprise.

Knowing

howawfulDonnafeltaboutherhair,

shehadshavedoffherownbeautifullongbrownhair

andworeawigidenticaltoDonna’s,showingherunwaveringsupport.DonnaandourfamilyweredeeplymovedandastonishedbywhatClaudia

haddone.WithClaudia's

support,noonedaredtobullyDonnaanymore,especiallythegirlwhohadmockedher

before

.14范文呈现DonnaandClaudiaworetheirwigsforoverayear.

Theyfelttheirhairhadgrownoutenoughtotakethemoff.

Notuntil

Donnawasreadydidtheygotoschoolwithoutthem.Bythen,shehaddevelopedastrongerself-confidenceandacceptance.InthecompanyofClaudia,Donnagotthroughthetoughestmomentinschool.

Theybecame

thebest

friends,sharinghappinessandfacingthestormsinlifetogether.

Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.It'sduringthedarkesttimesthatgenuinebondsareestablished.

15范文译文一天，克劳迪娅带着一个特别的惊喜来到我们家。知道唐娜对自己的头发有多糟糕，她剃掉了自己美丽的棕色长发，戴了一顶和唐娜一模一样的假发，以示她坚定不移的支持。唐娜和我们的家人对克劳迪娅的所作所为深感感动和惊讶。在克劳迪娅的支持下，没有人再敢欺负唐娜了，尤其是那个以前嘲笑过她的女孩。唐娜和克劳迪娅戴假发一年多了。他们觉得自己的头发已经长得足够长，可以脱掉了。直到唐娜准备好了，他们才没有头发去上学。到那时，她已经建立了更强的