高考英语复习读后续写练习：女孩全身投入圣诞演出最终大获成功

高考英语读后续写语篇练习女孩全身投入圣诞演出，最终大获成功1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Asthe

Christmas

approached,Ifeltincreasingly

tired.Ads

started

thecountdown

(倒数):sixmore,fivemore,fourmore

shopping

days.ItwasimpossiblethatIwouldevergetthelast

gift

bought,thelastmealcooked.Russ’s

sense

of

tension

equalledmine.EvenBradbegantolookstressedashemovedthrough

countless

festivities.

Ofusall,only

Andrea,who

playsthe

flute

(长笛)

intheschool

orchestra,

remained

relaxed.Unsurprising,Ithought,sinceresponsibilityrestedsolightlyonher.Iwaspuzzled,though,by

asenseofdistance

abouther,andsheseemed

toavoid

whenIquestionedwhyshecamehomelatefromschoolorleftunusuallyearlyinthemorning.4续写原文Ononeofthoselastmornings,Ibakedanddecoratedcookies.Therewereseveralinterruptions,andI

laid

behindschedule.Isetabouttidyingthekitchen.Iopenedthedishwasher,butitwasfull,andnotofcleandishes.Andreahadloadedthemachineafterbreakfastandforgottentostartit.Suddenlyitallseemedtoomuch:thedirtydishes,thetoo-tightschedule,Andrea’s

carelessness.Theholidayseasonwasoverwhelming.Itdidn’tseem

worth

it.Irushedtodothedishesbeforepickingupmydaughteratschooltodrivehertoherflutelesson.Ipulledupoutsideat3p.m.,stillannoyed.Ialmostweakenedatthesightofthefunny,half-skippingrun

ofher.She

jumped

happilyintothecar,

sharing

withschoolnews.Butasshesawmyface,her

happiness

gavewayto

curiosity.5续写原文“What’swrong?”Itoldher:shecouldn’trememberanything;shewasuntidy,inconsiderate.“Idon’tknowwhatyou’rethinking,yougodreamingalong...”Wehadnearlyreachedthe

musicschool

beforeIranoutofthingstosay.Besides

me,Andreasat

quietly.Ididn’tlookather.

WhenIstoppedthecar,shegotoutandwalkedwordlesslyaway.ThenIfeltashamed.Iwaslabouringovereverydetailoftheholiday,tryingtomakesurenothingwasforgotten.Yetsomethingwasmissing.6段首句Para1:Thatevening,werushedthroughourdinner

becauseitwasthenightofthehigh-schoolChristmasconcert.

Para2：Everythingseemedfineuntilthemusicteacherannouncedthefinalsection,

“AndreaHill’ssolo!”7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9本文以时间为线索展开，讲述了作者受到“马甲女士”的影响自己也开始穿着反光黄色安全背心捡垃圾，但是作者很快意识到一个人的力量是不够的，于是作者想到创建网站来号召更多的志愿者加入到清除垃圾的行动中来，获得了巨大的成功。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1：Thatevening,werushedthroughourdinner

becauseitwasthenightofthehigh-schoolChristmasconcert.

由此可知第一段内容应着重描写我们一家人看着管弦乐队表演时的情绪变化，可设想：听着管弦乐队的表演，圣诞节的氛围越发浓烈，疲惫感都消失了，感觉这段时间的一切都很值得。11续写思路分析Para2：Everythingseemedfineuntilthemusicteacherannouncedthefinalsection,

“AndreaHill’ssolo!”第二段段首“一切都很平静直到音乐老师宣布了音乐会的终章，‘安德莉亚的独奏表演’”说明应着重描写我们对安德莉亚的态度转变，可设想：当我们听到这个消息的时候很激动，也终于明白了她早出晚归，在家做事也心不在焉的原因。原来她一直在为我们准备这样一份圣诞礼物，而我也找到了那份缺少了的东西。12续写思路分析续写线索续写部分应为故事的结局，即我们一家人去Andrea的学校听她所在的乐队表演，演出全程，我们都十分享受，沉浸在动听的圣诞乐曲中。终于轮到演奏会的最后一首曲目，没想到竟然是Andrea的独奏曲，我终于明白了Andrea这段时间“早出晚归”的原因。13续写素材可用词汇：1.词汇atmosphere

n.

氛围；presentv.

呈现2.短语fadeaway消散；taketurns轮流；takeone’sposition找到某人的位置；burstout突然爆发14续写素材Mytears

burstout

asAndrearoseand,totheapplauseofthat

hall,tookherpositiononthestage.

[分析]本句是一个主从复合句。主句主语是mytears，谓语动词是burst；as引导的时间状语从句表示伴随，从句主语是Andrea，谓语动词是rose和took，totheapplauseof...为插入语，指“随着……的掌声”。15Part3范文呈现16范文呈现Thatevening,werushedthroughourdinner

becauseit

wasthenightofthehigh-schoolChristmasconcert.

Alongwithotherfamilies,Russ,BradandItookourseatsinthe

hall.Isaw

Andrea,inher

beautiful

dress,sitdownathermusicstand.Asthe

orchestra

started,my

senseof

tension

beganto

fade

away.Ilistened,relaxedandmovedbythespecialatmospherethattheseyoungpeoplecreated.Oldandnewsongsaboutsnowanddeer

tookturns

with

Christmas

music.

Everythingseems

worth

it.17范文呈现Everythingseemedfineuntilthemusicteacherannouncedthefinalsection,

“Andrea

Hill’ssolo!”

Mytears

burstout

asAndrearoseand,totheapplauseofthat

hall,tookherpositiononthestage.Justbeforesheraisedthe

flute

toherlips,shelookedat

Russ,Brad

andme,andgaveusawidesmile.

Irememberedmydaughterpractising,

theextratimespentat

music

school;thedetailsignored,thelittlethingsundone.

Withherlove,shehadpresentedmewiththemusicandthemeaningoftheholidays.ThatwasAndrea’s

gift.18范文译文那天晚上，我们匆匆吃完晚饭，因为那天晚上是高中圣诞音乐会。和其他家庭一起，Russ、Brad和我在大厅里就座。我看见安德烈穿着漂亮的裙子，坐在她的乐谱架旁。随着管弦乐队的开始，我的紧张感开始消退。这些年轻人营造的特殊氛围让我听得很放松，也很感动。关于雪和鹿的新旧歌曲随着圣诞音乐轮流播放。一切似乎都值得。一切似乎都很好，直到音乐老师宣布最后一节“安德里亚·希尔的独