善举类-父亲为女儿买二手车作为生日礼物并全心全意帮助二手车车主课件-2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习

高考英语读后续写语篇练习善举类父亲为女儿买二手车作为生日礼物，并全心全意帮助二手车车主1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Inearly2017,KevinDukestartedthinkingabouthisbeloveddaughter’sveryspecialupcomingbirthday.Likeeveryparent,hewantedtogifthisdaughterwithatrulyperfectpresent,onethatshewouldreallyappreciateandcouldenjoyforalongtime.Heeventuallysettledonasecondhandcar.ThisDukepurchasedthecarafewweeksaheadofhislittlegirl’s16thbirthday.Thismeanthehadplentyoftimetogiveitagoodthoroughcleaningandfix-up,andmakesureitworkedperfectly.Butwhenhedidclean-up,hesuddenlynoticedsomethingthatgrabbedhisattentionimmediately.4续写原文Itwasasmallenvelopewhichsaid“NewCarOwner:ImportantInfoInside”letterwasfromArcheyanditbegansimplyenough:“Tothepersonthatgetsthiscar,”“Ijustwantedtoletyouknowwhataspecialvehicleyou’vebought.”Astheletterwenton,thetragiccircumstancesaroundthecar’spreviousownerbegantounfold.“Thiscarbelongedtomymom,butshepassedawayinahousefirealongwithmy6-year-olddaughter.”“Wetookroadtripsandlistenedtocountrymusicwiththewindowsopen,”sherecalledintheheartfeltletter.“Love,joy,andadventureswereallwehadinthiscar,”shewrote.“Nowthatit’syours,pleaserememberitisn’tjustacar.It’samemory.It’sreallyheartbreakingtopartwithit,butIhaveto.Financepermitting,Idreamonedayofbeingabletobuyitback.Sopleasebenicetoit…”5续写原文“Wetookroadtripsandlistenedtocountrymusicwiththewindowsopen,”sherecalledintheheartfeltletter.“Love,joy,andadventureswereallwehadinthiscar,”shewrote.“Nowthatit’syours,pleaserememberitisn’tjustacar.It’samemory.It’sreallyheartbreakingtopartwithit,butIhaveto.Financepermitting,Idreamonedayofbeingabletobuyitback.Sopleasebenicetoit…”Despitethegreattragedyshehadbeenthrough,allArcheywanted,astheletterreveals,wasforthenewownertoexperiencethesamehappinessthatshehadsocherishedinthepast.AsDukesatinthecarreadingthismysteriousletter,hiseyesbegantofillwithtears.Itsoonbecameclearthatitwouldn’tbeenoughsimplytotreatthiscarwithlove.6段首句Para1:Hehadtodosomething—andheknewexactlywhat.

Para2：Quickly,thepostonlinespreadwidely.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9本文是一篇记叙文。讲述了Duke在为女儿准备16岁生日礼物的时候购买了一辆二手车。当他看到车上的留言时被深深打动了，于是帮助原车主度过难关。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1：Hehadtodosomething—andheknewexactlywhat.由第一段首句内容“他必须做点什么——他清楚地知道该做什么”可知，第一段可具体描写Duke的内心活动，然后写了一篇帖子并希望能够帮助原车主。11续写思路分析Para2：Quickly,thepostonlinespreadwidely.由第二段首句内容“很快，这篇帖子在网上广泛传播。”可知，第二段可描写读者在阅读完这个帖子之后深受感动纷纷为原车主伸出援手，在筹集到足够的金额之后，Duke将车和前都给了原车主，并且成为了朋友。12续写思路分析续写线索做点什么——陷入思考——提笔写文——被广泛阅读——筹集资金——成为朋友13续写素材可用词汇：行为类①写下：writedown/takedown②希望：hope/expect③联系：contact/getintouchwith情绪类①使人悲痛的：heartbreaking/grievous②高兴地：happily/gladly14续写素材[高分句型1]Heknewthecarisapricelesstreasurewhichcontainedsuchsincereemotions.(运用了which引导的限制性定语从句)[高分句型2]HardlyhadDukecollectedenoughmoneywhenhecontactedthelady.(运用了部分倒装结构)15Part3范文呈现16范文呈现Hehadtodosomething—andheknewexactlywhat.Staringatthiscarcarefully,KevinDukelostinmind.Heknewthecarisapricelesstreasurewhichcontainedsuchsincereemotions.Hewenttothecar,tookoutatowelandsweptitwithheart.Aftercleaning,hecamebacktohiscomputerandwrotedownapostrelatedtothisheartbreakingstory.Hehopedthathecouldraiseenoughmoneytohelpthispoorowner.Eachwordwasfilledwithhisbestwishes.17范文呈现Quickly,thepostonlinespreadwidely.Whenfinishingreadingthispost,everyonewastouchedbythemovingstoryandallcouldexperiencethesamehappiness.Alargequantityofmoneywasdonatedbythesereaders.HardlyhadDukecollectedenoughmoneywhenhecontactedthelady.Dukehappilygaveherallmoneyandthecar.Fromthenon,makingfriendswithher,Dukealsocouldexperiencethesamehappiness.18范文译文他必须做点什么，他确切地知道是什么。凯文·杜克仔细地盯着这辆车，脑子里一片空白。他知道这辆车是无价之宝，蕴含着如此真挚的情感。他走到车前，拿出一条毛巾，用心地扫了扫。打扫完之后，他回到电脑前，写下了一篇与这个令人心碎的故事相关的帖子。他希望他能筹集到足够的钱来帮助这个可怜的主人。每个字都充满了他最美好的祝愿。很快，这