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应用文写作假定你是李华,你班计划与新西兰姊妹学校某班级在线共上一堂介绍“传统体育项目”的交流课。请你代表班级写到邮件给对方学生负责人Hans,内容包括:1.告知相关事宜;2.征求意见。注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearHans,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearHans,I’mLiHua.I’msoexcitedaboutourupcomingvirtuallessontointroduce“TraditionalSportsEvents”.Onbehalfofmyclass,I’mwritingtoproposesomeideasandconfirmrelateddetailsaboutit.Thelessonwillserveasachannelforstudentstorealizetraditionalsportsarenotonlytheessenceofaculture,butalsotheprideofacountry.Soforourpart,weareconsideringintroducingseveraltypicalsportsactivities,includingmartialarts,dragonboatraceandsoon.Toachievethebesteffect,interactiveforms,suchaspresentationsandliveshows,willbeadopted.Asforthetimeandway,we’dliketohavethelessonscheduledbetweenApril3andApril7,lasting3hoursthroughanonlineconferenceapplication.Doesourproposalworkwellonyourside?Lookingforwardtoyourearliestreply.Yours,LiHua点评
从内容上:衔接自然
Para1:表达了信件背景信息内容(假定你是李华,你班计划与新西兰姊妹学校某班级在线共上一堂介绍“传统体育项目”的交流课。请你代表班级写封邮件给对方班长Hans)
Para2:表达了活动目的和活动内容形式和活动时间(交流的目的;2.告知相关事宜;)
para3:征求意见
从结构上:完整表述了写作要求
Para1:引出话题+点明写作目的
Para2:内容上排列有序,且注意衔接,比如,Soforourpart,Toachievethebesteffect,Asforthetimeandway
para3:礼貌结束信件从写作技巧上:
长短句错落,多使用插入结构,使得信息紧凑且可读性较高。
如例子的使用suchas,including,非谓语的使用
适当运用句型(notonly...butalso)
时态的巧妙运用,现在进行时的使用丰富了信件的情境性,加强了对话感。weareconsideringintroducing...
例证增加了内容的丰富性:
weareconsideringintroducingseveraltypicalsportsactivities,includingmartialarts,dragonboatraceandsoon.
Toachievethebesteffect,interactiveforms,suchas
presentationsandliveshows,willbeadopted.
礼貌用语:
Asforthetimeandway,we’dliketo...
Doesourproposalworkwellonyourside?语料积累我们来看看一些高分作文的案例,学习一下如何拓展充实内容吧。
时间:Letmeelaborateontheproject.TheactivitywilltakeplacenextMondayat9am,Beijingtime.
地点:April1stwillwitnessthisinterestingcourse.StudentsfrombothclassshouldlogintheAPP“DingDing”earlyinthemorningtoparticipateinthecourse.Somedetailsofthiscoursearelistedasfollows.
课堂安排:Lastbutnotleast,therewillbeaninterestingpart.Weneedtointeractwiththeaudienceonline,andanswertheirquestions.Concerningthepresentation,IsuggestlivelyvideosandcolorfulPPT.
Besides,theintroductionofthetraditionalsporteventwhichisrequiredtobelimitedin3minutesneedstobepreparedinadvance.Moreover,nothingcouldbebetterifyouinviteyourheadmastertoattend.Therewillbeashortmomenttoexpresshisanticipationtobothofus.Iholdanunshakablefaiththatthisexchangeclasswillbeanultimatesuccess!Thelessonwillconsistoftwoparts:lecturesgivenbyexperiencedteachersandagroupdiscussion.Notonlycanwegainthesparkofwisdom,butalsoyoucangettoknowmoreaboutChineseculture.Lastly,I’dliketoinformyouthatthelessonwilllasttwohours.
注意事项:Inabidtoleteveryoneenjoythislesson,youaresupposedtomakeeverythingfullyprepared,suchastheWIFIconnection,thecomputersettingandsoon.What’smore,checkyourdevicecarefullybeforetheclassandmakesurethemicro-phoneandthecamerawillbeon.体育项目介绍:Asfarasweareconcerned,thecourseconsistsofanintroductionofsometypicalPEprojects,suchassoccerandtabletennis,andacomparisonbetweenChineseandNewZealand’ssports.
TheonlinelessonwillcontainavarietyofcommunicationsconcerningtraditionalsportssuchasCuju,Taichi,rugbyandsailing.询问意见的表达:Lookingforwardtoyourpromptreply!Itwouldbefantasticifyoucanaddsomeadviceinyourearlyreply.Withourjointefforts,Ifirmlybelievethatthiscoursewillbeagreatexperienceforallstudents.
2.Shouldyouhavefurtherquestions,pleasefeelfreetocontactme.Anyconsultationwillbegreetedwithwarmwelcome.Yourpromptreplywillbeappreciated!
3.Lastbutnotleast,Iwonderifitisconvenientforyoutooffermesomesuggestions.Pleasereplyatyourearliestconvenienceandyoursincereadvicewillbehighlyappreciated.下水文1DearHans,IamLiHua.Onbehalfofmyclass,Id
’liketo
inform
you
of
ourupcomingonlineexchangecourseonTraditionalSports.Thiscourse
aimsto
promote
the
exchange
on
sports
culture
sbetweenChinaandNewZealand,andhelpstudentsofthetwoschoolslearnmoreaboutthetraditionalsportsofthetwocountries.Ourschool
isintended
to
introduce
Taichi,Chinesechessandtabletennis,which
are
perfectcombinationofmovementandstillnessinsports.
Withthepurposeofimmersing
thestudents
into
the
featured
events,
theonlineexchangecourse,
whichcould
bescheduledat
theendofMarch,
mayaswell
runfor
2hours.We’rewonderingifourproposalispracticable.
Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.(122words)Yours,LiHua本文的亮点:(1)informsbofsth告知某人某事;(2)aimtodosth旨在...;(3)beintendedtodosth打算做某事;(4)withthepurposeofdoingsth为了;(5)immersesbinto使某人沉浸式体验...;(6)featured有特色的;(7)bescheduledat计划定在;(8)mayaswelldosth=hadbetterdosth还是...的好,表示征求意见,语气较委婉。下水文2DearHans,Ourclassesareexcitedtoproposeanengagingonlineexchangeonthethemeof
“CommonPlantsonOurSchoolCampuses.”
Thus,I’
mwritingtoclarifysomeofthearrangementsforallofyou.Thesessionisscheduledfrom2:00pm.to5:00pm.,Chinesetime,whichisdaytimeforbothChinaandNewZealand.So,don'tworryaboutjetlag.Additionally,conductedthroughZoom,ouragendaincludesintroductions,apresentationonprevalentplantsinourschoolareas,andaQ&Asession.Duringtheevent,weaimtomakethisexchangebothinformativeandenjoyable.Inthiscase,yourinsightsandsuggestionsregardingtheagendaoranyspecifictopicsyourclasswouldliketo
cover
areinvaluabletous.Welookforwardtoacollaborativelearningexperiencethatnotonlyenhancesourknowledgeofflorabutalsostrengthensthebondsbetweenourschools.Pleaseshareyourthoughtsatyourearliestconvenience.Bestregards,LiHua高分句子积累
定语从句I’mLiHua.Myclassplanstoholdanonlineclasstogetherwithyou,whosethemeis“TraditionalPEprojects”.AndI’mwriting...
动词-ing作状语Aimingtoexposeustothesplendidtraditionalculturesaswellasraisingourinterestsinsports,wewillholdanexchangeonlineclass.
动词-ed做状语Aimedatlearningtraditiona
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