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ContinuationwritingMicro-skill-----tohighlightthethemeattheendofthestoryLearningaims:Knowwhatisamoralending01Finishastorywithamoralending02Improvestudents’wrtingskills03LessonorMoralEndingThemaincharacterinthestorygrows,changes,orlearnssomethingattheendofthestory,whichwillhighlightthetheme.主题升华式结尾，也称哲理式结尾，即在结尾用富含哲理的语句，总结全文，升华主旨，并给人以启发。同学们平常可以积累一些含哲理的句子，如果引用得当，不仅能深化主题，而且能启人深思，给读者以有益的启迪。Findoutthetheme1.Finditintheoriginaltexttopicsentencekeywords:suchas,love,courage,confidence,smile,challenges,difficulties...2.Concludeitbyyourself谚语通式：Asasaying/proverbgoes,+名言.E.g.Amancanbedestroyedbutnotdefeated.人可以被毁灭，但不能被打败。（面对挫折）Evensmallactsofkindnesscanmakeabigdifference.即使是很小的善意行为也会产生很大的影响。（友善助人）PS.要具体文本具体分析，不要生搬硬套谚语名言。Strategy1.运用谚语名言1.

Itisnevertoooldtolearn.2.Nocross,nocrown.3.Doingisbetterthansaying.4.Anidleyouth,aneedyage.5.Agoodbeginningmakesagoodending.6.Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.7.Nothingisimpossibletothemanwhowilltry.Guessthemeaningofthesayings.

活到老，学到老。不经历风雨，怎么见彩虹。行胜于言。少壮不努力,老大徒伤悲。良好的开端就是成功的一半。患难之交才是真朋友。世上无难事,只怕有心人。Asasayinggoes,“Agoodbeginningmakesagoodending.”Aslongasyoutakecouragetotakethatfirststep,youwillbeonyourhalfwaytosuccess.Afterall,ajourneyofonethousandmilesbeginswithasinglestep.QuoteasayingQuoteasayingUseyourownlanguage句式1：强调句：Itis+被强调部分+that+其他部分1.困难和障碍使我们更强大。Itis

difficultiesandobstaclesthatmakeusstronger.2.爱使世界转动。Itislovethatmakestheworldgoaround.3.冷静和智慧帮助我们脱离危险。Itiscalmnessandwisdomthathelpusgetoutofdanger.Strategy2.Useyouownlanguagetosummarizethetheme句式2：Thisunforgettableexperiencetaughtmeavaluablelessonthat...Fromthenon,Ibecame/grew...1.这段难忘的经历使我学到了一个道理：只要我们不放弃希望，任何困境都有出路。从那天起，我变得更聪明，更自信了。(个人成长类/脱困类)Theunforgettableexperiencetaughtmeavaluablelessonthat

there’salwaysawayoutaslongaswenevergiveupourhope.Fromthatdayon,Igrew

wiserandmoreconfident.2.这段难忘的经历使我学到了一个道理：我们遇到困难时一定要有积极的态度。从那天起，我变得更勇敢，更乐观了。(个人成长类)Thisunforgettableexperiencetaughtmeavaluablelessonthatweshouldhaveapositiveattitudewhenfacingdifficulties.Fromthatdayon,Igrewbraverandmoreoptimistic.句式3：Onlythendidsb.realize...直到那时，他才意识到原谅和爱/善意/友谊的重要性。Onlythendidherealizetheimportanceofforgivenessandlove/kindness/friendship.直到那时我才意识到真诚和诚实在友谊中的价值。Onlythendid

I

realize

thevalueofsincerityandhonesty

infriendship.句式4：感叹句：Whata+adj+experience!Whatanunforgettableexperience!Itturnsoutthatthere’salwaysawayoutofanydilemmaaslongaswestaycalm/nevergiveuphope/unitetogether.多么难忘的经历啊！事实证明，只要我们保持冷静/不放弃希望/团结一致，就总有办法摆脱困境。句式5：典型表达：流泪；心里想①流泪Tearsblurredone'seyes.泪水模糊了某人的双眼。One'seyesmisted/dimmedwithtears.泪水模糊了某人的双眼。Tearsrolldownone'seyes/cheeks/face.泪水顺着某人的眼睛/脸颊/脸流下来。②心里想Aninnervoicetoldsb.that...内心的声音告诉某人……thought/saidtooneself自己盘算；自思自忖3．转折(个人努力或借助外界)典型表达：鼓起勇气(或通过另外一方的鼓励)；毫不犹豫①鼓起勇气pluckup/take/gatherone'scourage(todo...)②毫不犹豫sb.couldhardlywaittodosth.withoutasecondthought/withouteventhinking/withoutdelay/withouthesitation4．事情似乎有了转机，并抱有希望，感到宽慰典型表达：似乎；希望；宽慰①似乎Itwaslikedoingsth.Itseemedthat../asif...②希望Hopingthat......see/feelaglimmerofhope...tryinghardtodosth.③宽慰breatheasighofrelief松了一□气sighwithrelief如释重负Awaveofreliefflooded/washedoversb.一阵如释重负的感觉淹没了某人。toone'srelief令某人宽慰的是……5．但是问题还是没有解决或出现了新问题典型表达：不幸的是；不知道(接下来)做什么①不幸的是Butbadluckforsb.,...但是某人真不走运，……...butinvain......butwithoutsuccess......butnouse...②不知道(接下来)做什么Sb.didsth.,wonderingwhattodonext.Sb.didsth.,notknowingwhattodonext.Sb.didsth.,unsureofwhattodonext.Sb.wasatalosswhattodo.Sb.wasinadilemmaaboutwhethertodoornot.6．突然有了一个想法(一句话说明这个想法)典型表达：某人突然想到/明白……；某人突然有了主意①某人突然想到/明白……Itsuddenlyoccurredtosb.that...＝Ithitsb.that...＝Itstrucksb.that...＝Itdawnedonsb.that...②某人突然有了主意(idea，thought...)occurred/cametosb.＝...came/flashedintoone'smind....crowdedinone'smind.One'smindbegantorace...某人的脑子开始飞快地运转起来……7．过了一段时间，事情有了最后的转折典型表达：过了一段时间；有了结果；皆大欢喜①过了一段时间Notlongafterthat,...＝Shortlyafterwards,...＝Beforelong,...＝Itdidn'ttakelongbefore...＝Ittooksometimebefore...比喻句我明白了一个忠实的朋友抵得上一万个亲戚。Itdawnedonmethatoneloyalfriendisworthtenthousandrelatives.那份亲情像一抹清茶，沁人心脾，温暖人心。Thataffectiontowardsourfamilyislikeatouchofgreentea,refreashingandheartwarming.善良就像一缕阳光，可以照亮我们的生活。Kindnessislikearayofsunlight,whichcanlightupourlife.没有爱的家庭就像没有灵魂的身体。Ahomewithoutloveisnomorethanabodywithoutsoul.开头AfunnythinghappenedtoArthurwhenhewasonthewaytoworkoneday.一天，亚瑟在上班的路上发生了一件有趣的事情。结尾Whatafunnyday.Arthurcouldn'tstoplaughingwheneverhelookedbackonthishilariousexperience.多么有趣的一天啊，每当亚瑟回想起这次欢乐的经历，他就忍不住笑个不停。首尾呼应比喻句我明白了一个忠实的朋友抵得上一万个亲戚。Itdawnedonmethatoneloyalfriendisworthtenthousandrelatives.那份亲情像一抹清茶，沁人心脾，温暖人心。Thataffectiontowardsourfamilyislikeatouchofgreentea,refreashingandheartwarming.善良就像一缕阳光，可以照亮我们的生活。Kindnessislikearayofsunlight,whichcanlightupourlife.没有爱的家庭就像没有灵魂的身体。Ahomewithoutloveisnomorethanabodywithoutsoul.比喻句生活是一盒巧克力，你永远不知道下一步你会得到。