Unit5IntothewildWriting课件高中英语

Unit

5

Into

the

wild

Writing写作技法写一篇动物简介Ⅰ.技能指导1.写作指南：

此类文章以说明为主要表达方式，用来介绍动物的类属、生活习性、生存状态、外貌特征等，也可以是某种动物的生存现状或者历史的描述。2.常用表达：（1）开头One

of

my

favourite

wild

animals

is...They

live

in...我最喜欢的野生动物之一是……它们生活在……Because

of...,

the

number

of...

is

on

the

decline.由于……，……的数量在下降。We

have

realized

that

the

habitats

of

wild

animals...They

are

in

great

danger.我们已经意识到野生动物的栖息地……它们处于极大的危险之中。A

variety

of

animals

have

been

killed

for

their

meat,

skins

and

fur.为了获得肉、皮和毛，人们杀害了各种各样的动物。（2）主体...are

very

cute

animals,

whose

fur

is...……是非常可爱的动物，它们的毛是……Their

tails

are

as

long

as

their

body.它们的尾巴和身子一样长。They

mainly

feed

on...它们主要以……为食。（3）结尾Protecting...can

not

only...，

but

also...保护……不但能……，而且能……As

for

me,

I

have

volunteered

to...Meanwhile,

the

government

should

take

effective

measures

to

protect

endangered

animals.对我来说，我已经志愿做……同时，政府应该采取有效的措施来保护濒危动物。Therefore,

we

should

seek

for

solutions

to

protecting

wild

animals.因此，我们应该寻求保护野生动物的解决方案。Ⅱ.情景再现

写一篇关于濒危动物——金丝猴（golden

monkey）的短文。要点如下：

1.栖息地：主要在中国；

2.外貌：金黄色，有点灰；尾巴和身体一样长；

3.生活环境：海拔1,500—3,000米的森林；

4.生活习性：群居，吃野果、树叶等；

5.它们的数量在减少，呼吁人们停止猎杀金丝猴。

注意：1.词数80左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。___【审题谋篇】【词汇储备】1.

____n.软毛fur2.

_____adj.灰色的grey3.

____n.尾巴tail4.

_____v.猎取hunt5.

________以……为食feed

on【句型运用】1.

金丝猴主要生活在中国。___________________________________Golden

monkeys

mainly

live

in

China.2.

金丝猴受到中国政府的保护。_____________________________________________________Golden

monkeys

are

protected

by

the

Chinese

government.3.

它们的毛是金黄色的，略带灰色。________________________________Their

fur

is

golden

and

a

bit

grey.4.

它们的尾巴和身体一样长。___________________________________Their

tails

are

as

long

as

their

bodies.5.

雄性金丝猴又大又壮。__________________________________________The

male

golden

monkeys

are

big

and

strong.6.

雌性的要小得多。________________________________The

female

ones

are

much

smaller.7.

金丝猴生活在海拔1,500—3,000米的森林中。______________________________________________________________________Golden

monkeys

live

in

forests

which

are

1,500-3,000

meters

above

sea

level.8.

它们喜欢群居生活。_______________________________They

like

living

in

family

groups.9.

它们以野果、树叶等为食。____________________________________________They

feed

on

wild

fruits,

tree

leaves

and

so

on.10.

但是现在它们的数目越来越少。________________________________________________But

now

their

number

is

getting

smaller

and

smaller.11.

我们希望人们停止猎杀金丝猴。__________________________________________________We

hope

that

people

will

stop

hunting

golden

monkeys.【句式升级】1.

用现在分词短语作状语合并句1和句2。_________________________________________________________________________________Mainly

living

in

China,

golden

monkeys

are

protected

by

the

Chinese

government.2.

用while合并句5和句6。______________________________________________________________________________The

male

golden

monkeys

are

big

and

strong

while

the

female

ones

are

much

smaller.3.

用and合并句8和句9。_______________________________________________________________________They

like

living

in

family

groups

and

feed

on

wild

fruits,

tree

leaves

and

so

on.【连句成篇】

将以上句子连成一篇语言流畅、用词准确、逻辑严密的短文。The

golden

monkeys

Mainly

living

in

China,

golden

monkeys

are

protected

by

the

Chinese

government.

Their

fur

is

golden

and

a

bit

grey.

Their

tails

are

as

long

as

their

bodies.

The

male

golden

monkeys

are

big

and

strong

while

the

female

ones

are

much

smaller.

Golden

monkeys

live

in

forests

which

are

1,500-3,000

meters

above

sea

level.

They

like

living

in

family

groups

and